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for Incubus

by KitsuneNoir

person Mina
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!

HAKU!

I miss him and I love you for writing this fic!


Sequel??


PLEASE!
person Erika
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting...so haku just took advatage of naru
person Erika
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OKAY! now he's being all possessive??? LOL>.I LOVED that LINE I saw him 1st...LOL...that was great"D
person MultifacetedTune
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! That was really good...... very kewl idea, and well done, too -- keep up the good work!!!
person The Dragon
schedule August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was absolutely beautiful in every sense of the word. Have you thought of sequeling this? Like, when they are older, and Naruto finds out about everything? If you don't I'd do it! ((Really, I would. ;) )) But besides that, I just needed to say that I loved it, really. Every single bit of it. =D

((PS- That was just the kind of ending I was hoping for. Zabuza and Haku NEVER died! Ever! I was all a trick, just like what happened in this wonderful fic!))
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh that was such a sad and beautiful fic , please if you have the time write more!
person Polka Dot
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was very clever the way it rewrote the story.
person Naru-kun
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Waiii! I really really liked it! I want a sequel!! *pleads and offers to try and bribe you* Maybe where Naruto finally gets that letter... and then meets Haku again.... *blinks and pleads* I'll write you a ficcie if that'll work for bribery! *giggles, grins*
person Midnight Fairy
schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was great !
i just love angsty stories
person Ookima
schedule January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
love the story, very funny and intriguing. first fan fic concerning haku and naruto I read. you also have a great way of explaning things. keep up the good work