AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Incubus

by KitsuneNoir

person Rockie
schedule December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Squee! rockie's lovin' this fic ^_^
person Anon
schedule December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sequel, sequel! So bittersweet! Poor Naruto! @_@
person KARINA
schedule December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
................................WOW................. You left me speachless.................. I love this story................. Its one of the best stories I read so far.
OH MY GOD!! IT MADE ME CRY!!!! I don't usually cry but your story is sooo cool and sad to.
I think you should do another partr thr this story. It doesn't sound complete.
Unfortunately I don't have any ideas right now to give you but I'll try to thimk of some!
BEAUTIFUL STORY!!!!
I still can't find the right words to express my self about the story.
Its undiscribable!!
But its beautiful!! ~_~
person Random Reader
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love love love this fic. Of all the Naruto fics I have read since getting into Naruto... I have to say that this is my fave of all.
person SpiritFighter
schedule October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow....... very, very, very good! OMG! your such an excellent writer! *is still amazed* im not too sure if you should do a sequal or not yet.... do what you like! Either way its still an excellant story!!
person swsan
schedule September 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad it all worked out! Poor boys... You put a real intreasting twist on the whole thing! XD
person rune
schedule September 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Super ooc, but then....ok, it was super ooc. But yet, tons of fun to read. I'd love to see a sequel sometime. I really liked the plot line. I feel that, if the stories focus was not on sex (don't deny it) then it could have been really pretty credible with just a little more explaination. Yet still...wow. That was a really hot story.
person myth
schedule September 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
truthfully i prefer SasuNaru (or NaruSasu)... so my vote would be a no ;p
great chapter! loved the teasing, very cute ^^ i love a jealuos Sasuke... mmmmmmmmmm Naruto better keep his promise, he's not the type that backs away from his words, thats his ninja way! ^_~
person Callisto
schedule September 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WHATEVER YOU DO, DON'T KILL HAKU AND SASUKE!
please don't do it! I already hated it, seeing Haku die in the anime, so let
him live here!
Let him become a lover of Naruto AND sasukbut but DON"T kill him! Please! I beg of you
DONT!!!!!!!!!!!!
person emily
schedule September 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very much pleased now...