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Suffer Well

By: DarkSkyOmen
folder Naruto AU/AR › General
Rating: Adult ++
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Suffer Well

Disclaimer in case anyone missed it!
I do not own Naruto or ANY of the characters.
Rating is for bad language and semi graphic mature story content.
Also if you have problems with male on male relations this REALLY is'nt the story for you! Oneshot, song inpired fic...

Depeche Mode- Suffer Well

-:Suffer Well:- Something's changing

A lean muscled lithe red haired man was bent over a bloody blonde as the storm reached it's pinnicle. His back carelessly turned to the younger Uchiha brother. While cold rain pelted over them all and lighting split the sky. Small lines of water trailed down the cliffs rock face from them. It became tainted crimson from the blood pooling beneath the fallen blondes body. Unseen tears ran from angry red slitted eyes as seal after seal was quickly formed. Slapping his hands over his own seal Kyuubi felt his soul jerk painfully. His ears were laid back while his whole body shook in agony from what he was doing to them both.

Kyuubi "Fuck! I wanted out but not like this. Don't die on me!"

Clawing open his chest Kyuubi pulled off a piece of his own heart. Then quickly slid it into the gaping wound in his vessals. He began pushing his demonic chakra forcefully through Naruto's limp body to jump start his now mended heart.

Falling to his knees weakly Kyuubi whispered into the now shallowly breathing blondes ear. "You're all I have."

Sasuke Uchiha stared blankly at the blurry outline of the shaking red haired mans back through the pouring rain.
He was'nt at all concerned with what the weird guy was doing or whispering about.

Sasuke "Who are you and where the hell was you hiding at all this time hmmm?"

The red head did'nt bother answering him but kept forming seals that the raven haired sharingan user could'nt fully see. He assumed it was some type of medical jutsus. He had no interest or use in such things. It did'nt really matter what the mystery man tried to do, Naruto was dead by his hand. Sasuke finally had what he wanted, he now had the ultimate sharingan form. He could'nt help but smirk to himself. Sure he felt bad for how he had gotten it. But certain sacrifices had to be made in order to obtain power. And ultimate power, required ultimate sacrifices.

As he walked away he spoke over his shoulder. "He's dead so don't bother with him. I punched my fist through his heart."

Sasuke could swear that he heard an animalistic growl come from the man as he bent over the dead blonde. Shrugging he jumped up and took to the tree tops. He was off to search for his brother as night covered the land. His new sharingan form spinning madly within his insane revenge filled glaring red eyes.

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Naruto woke up in a dark place to the sound of rain. The last thing he could remember was Sasuke punching him and ripping out most of his heart. And Kyuubi yelling at him from inside his mind and the molten hot burning sensation from his seal.

Naruto 'How the fuck am I even alive? Oh god death could'nt hurt this bad.'

His chest felt like a minefield of exploding tags had went off in it. Just breathing hurt. He sat up slowly in agony, bleary eyed. He was in a huge cave from what little he could tell in the darkness. Before he could focus on anything else, or figure out where he was, a deep gruff voice greeted him. And along with it gentle clawed hands that softly pushed him back down.
Down onto something that felt oddly like silk against his naked skin.

Naruto 'Why the hell am I NAKED!'

"Don't try to move around yet kit. You're still not completely done transforming..."

Naruto's eyes widened in the dark, fear suddenly churning in his stomach. His mind not even registering on what was actually said to him but on who had said it. Or better yet what. He knew that voice all too well. He could'nt even stand up, much less try to run away and warn anyone..

Naruto 'The seal must've broken.. He's goinna eat me now like he always threatened to.'

The blonde gave a defeated sigh and slumped bonelessly where he laid.

Naruto 'What's the point in even bothering to resist? I'm so fucked..'

Amused laughter distracted him along with the clawed fingers that began combing softly through his golden red streaked hair.

Kyuubi "You're so funny. I can read you so easily, just by your eyes and scent."

Naruto remained absolutely still as Kyuubi continued to affectionately pet him. His clawed human form hand sliding through Naruto's hair and over his ears. Ears which felt oddly different to him now but he shrugged it off as a mind trick. It preturbed and scared him to be so close to the demon fox so much so, that he was afraid to move. But the petting was soft and it felt incredibally good. He started to lean into the slow gentle strokes without realising it.

Kyuubi's voice was gruff but soft when he spoke again. "Do you remember what happened?"

As his mind drifted Naruto began to shake in rage as he thought about what had happened. He was shocked upon realising that the deep and menacing growl echoing inside the cave was coming from him. And at how gruff his own voice was with the one word that he had snarled out. "Uchiha."

Naruto 'That filthy fucking bastard traitor! What a bullshit and dishonerable way to kill someone!'

He was torn from his thoughts when he felt something slapping at his ankles. He stilled trying to figure out what it was.

Kyuubi "Quit smacking me with your tail kit, it's getting annoying.."

Naruto relaxed and laughed then shaking his head. "Tail? I don't have a tail. That's just silly!"

Kyuubi chuckled. "Oh?"

Naruto quirked a eyebrow "What are you getting at?"

Kyuubi grabbed the furry gold and red tipped appendage as it smacked across his stomach yanking on it slightly.
An action which earned a short yelp from the blonde who was laying over five of his own dark red, black tipped tails.

Naruto yelped trying to jerk his hips away and growled out before he realised what he was saying. "THAT HURT YOU BASTARD!"

Horrifed he froze and realised that he could see perfectly now in the pitch black cave. Holding his clawed hands up in front of his face he began to shake violently. Then he turned his head to stare up into Kyuubi's face. He was surprised to see the fox earred man he was half laying on. And by how the mans whiskered face and exotically tilted cat like red slitted eyes suited him perfectly.

Naruto 'He's really... Pretty? What the hell is wrong with me! He's a HE, and a freakin demon! Argh!'

Kyuubi "You are'nt really human anymore kid.. I'm not sorry about it though"

Leaning foward he hugged the small shaking blonde to his chest stroking his card shaped ears gentley.

Kyuubi "Get some sleep kit I'm here so you're safe. I'll explain everything to you later I promise."

Naruto allowed the fox demon to pull him close against his chest and wrap his tails around them both his mind numb. Slowly he relaxed. And for the first time in his life he felt the warmth of another being. Pale arms were possesively wrapped around his slender body drawing him as close as possible. His body was sore and ached. Demon or not he felt safe as he drifted off dreamlessly curled up against Kyuubi. Kyuubi's eyes reflected inside the dark cave lit with rage. He held Naruto even closer while he stared out at the rain as it fell cascading down outside.

Kyuubi "Never again kit, never again will someone hurt you like that. Not if I can help it.."


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Itachi Uchiha was angry. No enraged was the better word to suit his current mood. His little brother stood in front of him defiantely his eyes spinning madly, smirking as he repeated his question.
Sasuke "Did you want to fuck him or something big brother?"

Itachi's anger had hit it's summit. "Where is Naruto? I will not ask you again foolish little brother."

Sasuke's eyes shifted to the final form. Itachi words were icey making the hair on the back of Sasuke's neck raise up.

Itachi "You killed my demons vessal for that? I hope you had the intelligence to bind his demon inside of something?"

Sasuke began to back up slowly all of his earlier confidence suddenly long gone.

Itachi "You did'nt did you? You really ARE foolish. That power could have made you immortal!"

Sasuke "You was going to kill him anyway!"

Itachi was on him instantly and had him by the throat before he could react.

His words were bit out between his teeth in rage. "No foolish little brother. I was going to try and win him over."

Itachi shook him like a rag doll. "I wanted to be his most important person so he would turn me once his seal had matured."

He Tossed Sasuke against a nearby tree snapping it and few others before he grabbed him up once again shaking him.

Itachi "I was going to be powerful! Immortal! By becoming a demon like he was changing into!"

Sasuke swallowed his fear and stared wide eyed at his brother in shock. "W-what?"

Itachi slapped him harshly, dropping him sneering. "You had the most powerful thing in existence and threw it away twice!"

The next thing Sasuke knew he was reliving the massacre, the battle at valleys end, his murder of the blonde outside sound.
The blonde's words haunting him, making him scream insanely as his brother looked into his mind for the truth.

Naruto looked at him with sad blue eyes. "Please Sasuke, come back with me. I'll do whatever you want, let me help you!"

Sasuke watched himself viciously slam the smaller effeminate blonde man down at the cliffs edge straddling him as he spoke.

Sasuke "You're are'nt worth the air you breathe dobe."

And without warning he punched a sudden chidori through the pinned blondes chest. His bright blue eyes were wide in shock and utter disbelief. Blood slipping from the sides of his now sad smiling lips.

Naruto "W-why Sasuke? I l-loved you enough to g-give up my dreams and everything..."

Sasuke watched himself lean foward and smirk into the blondes face. "You're such a loser fag Naruto."

Naruto choked on his own blood with tears streaming down his now pale cheeks. He struggled to gasp out his dying words. "I just w-wanted you to be my b-brother."

Raising his fist again Sasuke punched twice more with chidori, leaving the blonde laying still beneath him. It started to rain as if the sky was crying for the fallen fool as well. That thought soured Sasuke's mood. As he walked away he noticed a red haired man bent over the still form of the blonde. He did'nt see the guy approach or even sense his presence, but he did'nt care. With his snide parting words he left.

With a choked scream Sasuke fell over his eyes empty and unfocused. His entire body shaking. Itachi stared at him blankly. "You really ARE foolish little brother. Only a weak coward would kill someone that way."

Itachi 'Hmmm.. Something was'nt right with that red headed guy. I need to see a body for proof.'

Itachi "You better hope that I'm right or you'll wish I'd hurry up and just kill you little brother."

The wind caught the edges of his hair and cloak as the older Uchiha began to walk away.
Going in the same direction that his fool brother had came from shaking his head in discust.

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This story type is highly experimental for me. I don't know if it works or not. But feedback and Reviews on if I should try to keep with it and this writing/story style will be very much appreciated 'nods'
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