Do Over

Ok I know I havent updated this in like forever but I was seriously pissed off when I couldnt even access AFF for the longest time then I have to find a new Beta as well as try to get over how to update chapters on FF since all my new ones are becomeing a little more riske'that and I had to rewrite alot of it because I wasnt satisfied with the direction it was taking. So I do apologize to all who may have been waiting for this chapter to show... I really appreciate your patience and hope that you continue reading my stories cause I really wanna try to make them the best I can. Also if anyone is interested in Beta'ing that also has MSN please email me, I could really use the help. So without further ado here is chapter 10 and yes there is sex so don't say I didnt update for anything their is also a hint about something happening at the end. Hope you like and thankyou again for all the patience.

Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto that privilege is Masashi Kishimoto, I'm just a writer doing this for Fun.



Do Over - Chapter 10 by KitsuneFun


A steady drizzle of rain had forced both Gaara and Naruto to race the rest of the way to his apartment. The apartment was a simple one-bedroom place situated inside the 'Sandpiper' hotel next to the restaurant of the same name where Gaara worked. The redhead had made the choice to live there instead of the mansion that Korasu Suna, his father and the President of Sunagakure International, owned primarily due to the many fights that happened between the two over Gaara's lifestyle choices. So when Chiyo, his grandmother on his mother's side offered residence inside the
hotel, Gaara jumped at the chance to move there.

This is where (soaked and chilled to the bone) the two boys decided to go. It wasn't that Gaara hadn't taken Naruto there before, but this would be the first time either had decided to consensually have sex together. Not that the subject of sex hadn't come up before, but with the appearance of the Uchiha and the threat of returning feelings, Gaara needed to be sure not only of his feelings, but Naruto's own when they finally made the decision to be together physically. It also didn't help matters that Tsunade was over-protective of the blond and had made sure they never slept over at each other's houses without supervision. So it surprised them both, when after seeing the ring Gaara had given Naruto, that she had given
her consent. The blond told him later that it had actually been Jiraiya, his perverted foster father's intervention on their part that sealed the deal, because the older man had all but hinted that if she didn't eventually give her consent to the two lovers, that they might actually decide to run off together to some cheap-themed sex hotel and have their wicked way with one another. So after this apparent talking to, between Baa-chan and 'The Pervert', Tsunade had given her consent on the condition that as long as Naruto kept up his part of the deal with his schoolwork and it didn't affect his life more than it already had, then she was fine with it. She also mentioned that she was glad Naruto was going out with Gaara, not someone else (namely one 'cold-hearted' bastard), since she liked how he treated the blond like a person, not an object. She felt secure in knowing Gaara wouldn't break his heart like his previous boyfriend.

Naruto laughed, easily gaining Gaara's attention back on him, as the blond shook what rain he could off himself playfully like a dog, accidentally hitting the redhead in the face with the splatters of water, "Heh... sorry Smexy," he grinned, hearing his boyfriend's playful growl of disapproval at the water. "Do you have anything I can slip into that's dry?" he batted his eyelashes coyly in Gaara's direction.

The redhead sighed, rolling his eyes at the performance by his boyfriend, "Sure, but you're taking a shower first... you look like you're freezing," he pointed out to Naruto, whom despite his playful attitude at being drenched in rain, was shivering. Gaara knew the blond must be just as cold (if not colder), than he was feeling himself.

Naruto smiled at hearing the protective tone in his boyfriend's voice, "I am... but..." he walked over to the taller boy and brushed his chilled lips against Gaara's own briefly, "...will you be joining me?"

"Uzumaki...." he growled in annoyance, since there was no point in enjoying each others' company if both were too cold to enjoy it. "March your ass inside..." he pointed towards the bathroom, "... and get yourself warmed up... I'll join you later."

Naruto huffed in disappointment. "Fine..." he kissed his boyfriend quickly on the cheek, and then moved off towards the direction of Gaara's bathroom while taking off his clothes slowly, giving his boyfriend an impromptu striptease, starting first with the leather jacket Gaara had given him when they first met, followed by the blue tee shirt with white stripes running down the side that he wore beneath it. He slowly removed it, exposing his long and lithely tanned chest, then he kicked off his shoes and socks that were almost thoroughly soaked before undoing his low cut jeans, button by button, then removing his legs one at a time before throwing them to the side with the rest of the wet clothing, leaving him with only a pair of orange bikini bottoms on.

Gaara eyed the bikinis thoughtfully as Naruto entered the bathroom. It was then, after entering the bathroom that the blond turned to smirk in Gaara's direction, as if knowing his trail of thoughts. Taking off the bikinis, he threw them in the redhead's direction, almost hitting the other's face.

Gaara grabbed the underwear thrown at him almost in reflex; he could still feeling the warmth exuding from them along with the sweet musky smell that was all Naruto. He took a deep, shuddering breath, and watched as the blond then blew him a teasing kiss, "See you inside then, Smexy..." before closing the door. Ignorant (or maybe not) of the growing problem that had solidified inside the redhead's pants due to the show the smaller boy had put on, 'His ass is so mine' Gaara thought, before quickly taking off his own clothes and jacket, placing them in the dryer along with Naruto's clothes that he'd picked up from their scattered placement on the floor of his apartment.

Taken a breath to calm his steadily heated thoughts, he entered the bathroom, only to hear the sound of the shower running and Naruto singing 'Express Yourself' by Madonna. Naruto's surprisingly husky tenor, along with the combination of Madonna's sexy lyrics and the showing of exposed skin beyond the shower curtain was almost too much for the redhead. Gaara could feel himself becoming hard at the sight of his boyfriend's naked body as it glistened beneath the spray of water from the shower. He gingerly and silently stepped in behind the blond as he focused on singing the next line of the chorus: "Express yourself... Hey... If you want it right now... Baby show me how..." Gaara smirked at the sight of Naruto moving his hands to mimic the motions. 'But did Naruto have to do that little wiggle of his hips?' Gaara groaned to himself, eyeing his boyfriend as he did a little impromptu dance in the shower. It was starting to become more and more than a mere distraction to the redhead, who's increasingly horny-habited mind was beginning to overload by this point. In self-preservation, he grabbed the blond's hips, pinning them in place. Naruto paused in his dancing and turned to look over his shoulder at Gaara in surprise, not having heard the redhead approaching him till then, "Huh... Gaara?" he asked questioningly. Noticing the heated look in the other's turquoise eyes made him shiver pleasantly, "Oh I see..." Naruto turned around to place his hands behind the redhead's neck pulling him down so that he could nibble slowly along Gaara's lower lip thoughtfully.

Gaara was drawn in by the movement, but the small gesture from Naruto wasn't enough; he needed to feel more of the blond. Gaara pulled Naruto's lower half closer to his own and began to rub their lower bodies together before leaning down to kiss the blond, allowing their tongues to come into contact, "I think we can make better use of our time... don't you?" the redhead whispered into Naruto's ear before nipping along the length of the cartilage, causing Naruto to shiver further under the delightful onslaught.

"Ah... Do tell... Smexy," Naruto managed to gasp out before forcing Gaara to face him again so that he could kiss along the redhead's jaw line in retaliation. "And what... do you plan on doing about it?" he mumbled against the pale skin near his boyfriend's throat.

Gaara's smirk became almost animalistic at the query. "Well those books of Jiraiya's gave me a few ideas...” he stated cryptically.

Naruto stopped kissing along Gaara's neck to look at him in horror. "...You didn't actually read those perverted things.... did you?" he managed to squeak out. It wasn't a question, if Gaara's increasingly perverted look had anything to say about it. "Now Gaara... Jiraiya is..." he began only to be interrupted by the redhead.

"Oh Jiraiya is a genius... and I plan to thank him later for all his G-R-E-A-T advice..." Gaara grinned wickedly into shocked blue eyes before resuming his attention to Naruto's ear by gently sucking and licking at the appendage, causing the blond to moan before Gaara continued by kissing a trail down the other's tan throat.

"Kami... Who are you? And what'd you do with Gaara?" Naruto whimpered, secretly liking the new, improved, and more sexually aggressive Gaara.

The redhead eyed him oddly. "I've been here the whole time Koi... just waiting for the 'ripe' moment."

"Don't you mean right?..." At Gaara's slow grin in answer to his question, Naruto laughed. "Aw Yes... 'ripe' it is," he mumbled, leaning in to kiss his boyfriend heatedly. "I think I'll thank Jiraiya myself... later..."

"Koi..." the redhead growled in warning, since he didn't like being interrupted while he was seducing his Naruto --- even if it was by the same boy: himself.

"I mean WOW..." Naruto pretended not to hear Gaara's warning; "If I'd only known...” he joked

"N-A-R-U-T-O!!" his boyfriend glared.

"Yes?" the blond chirped, enjoying his boyfriend's frustration.

"Will you shut up..? I am trying to seduce my 'boyfriend' and you're distracting me..."

Naruto laughed at the comment, "But Gaara, aren't I your boy-" he was interrupted quickly in midsentence by Gaara's mouth covering his own, reminding him why they were at the redhead's apartment in the first place.

The kiss effectively shut up the blond for the moment, and Gaara decided to resume his exploration of the smaller boy's body. He moved his hands down to lift Naruto up against the shower wall for better leverage as the blond lifted his legs to loosely encircle Gaara's waist to accommodate him by bringing their lower halves together.

Gaara broke the kiss to stare in amusement at Naruto's dazed look. 'I could get used to this' he thought, kissing a haphazard trail down the blond's chest, leaning in to lick and suckle at Naruto's nipple with his mouth as he used his left hand to massage the other.

The pleasurable tingle of having Gaara's talented mouth on him, brought Naruto easily out of his stupor by moaning Gaara's nickname, "Smexy..." he moaned, threading his tan fingers through the redhead's short (yet soft) hair, bringing his boyfriend's head closer.

Gaara grunted his approval while moving his left hand down to cup Naruto's arousal, gently rubbing the length, causing Naruto's voice to hitch in delight, as he moved his mouth to give equal attention to the blond's other nipple.

Naruto unconsciously bucked his hips against Gaara's searching hand. Not wanting to be outdone in the seducing department, he grabbed the redhead's right hand, and brought the digits to his mouth and began to suck on them one by one suggestively, making Gaara pause to stare up at him in surprise.

"If I didn't know any better... I'd swear you were reading some of what was in Jiraiya's books yourself..." Gaara licked his lips at the feel of that gentle suction on his digits.

Naruto grinned popping the digits out his mouth before he spoke. "Actually learned this from Shika..."

"Shika..." Gaara's eyes narrowed at the mention of the genius' name, "I hope for his sake that's all he taught you..." he fairly growled, remembering Naruto mentioning the two briefly going out before him and Naruto had got together. Gaara secretly wondered how far the two had gone together sexually.

Naruto smiled in understanding, "Don't worry me about Shika... we never had sex together... It wasn't like what you and I have... it was always friendship between us."

Bring up Naruto's past relationships reminded Gaara again of his most obvious rival for the blond's affections: Sasuke. "And the Uchiha?" he asked with narrowed eyes.

"Sasuke?!" Naruto blinked in surprise at the name before laughing, "No... We never got that far," Naruto eyed Gaara's glowering look and smiled. "You know... Gaara..." he started.

"What?" the redhead grumbled.

"I wasn't ready to go that far with Sasuke... no matter how much he protested..." Naruto eyed Gaara slowly for his reaction.

Gaara looked at Naruto in surprise. "Really? That doesn't sound like you... I mean you're usually the one always initiating it with me..." As though a light bulb popped above his head, Gaara turned shocked eyes upon Naruto.

"I guess you just answered your own question... huh?" the smaller boy waggled his brows affectionately towards his boyfriend.

Gaara's turquoise eyes brightened at the suggestion. "Oh it does more than that, Koibito..." he leaned in to suck at Naruto's plump lower lip, quickly relishing the idea of finishing off what they had started.

Naruto silently agreed, allowing his boyfriend to rub against him. The pleasure rapidly rebuilt between them at the heightened touches they gave each other, as though the delay in their lovemaking hadn't existed.

Grabbing some baby oil from off to the side of the shower, that Temari had left in the shower when she had last used it, the redhead thoroughly coated his fingers. He then moved to rub at the outside of Naruto's anus before penetrating it first with one finger and gently sliding it inside starting a slow motion of entering and withdrawing.

"...Damn..." Naruto mumbled in pain into Gaara's shoulder, "Shika said it would hurt at first but... shit...!"

Gaara kissed him on the forehead as he pulled out the digit. "Can we try not mentioning the genius now...?"

Naruto chuckled. " Sure. Besides..." he grinned, "I heard it gets better... I mean, the genius and Chouji wouldn't be at it like rabid anime bunnies unless it was."

The redhead laughed at that. "True..." he kissed Naruto along his shoulder blade while continuing his movements from earlier. After a few strokes within Naruto, the blond began to respond, slowly at first, by moving his hips against the intruding finger. Gaara continued these movements with both the second and third finger. It was while Gaara added the third finger that he accidentally brushed against the blond's prostate with his finger, making Naruto jump in surprise at the pleasurable feeling. "Ah... do that again..." Gaara repeated the motion and was rewarded by Naruto's load moan of pleasure. "AH...! Kami, Gaara...!"

Satisfied that his boyfriend was sufficiently prepared, Gaara coated his penis with a layer of the same oil he'd used earlier and pressed himself against Naruto's opening, pausing at the feeling of the tight warmth as it encircled him.

The blond grimaced at the feel of a length entering him that was bigger than all three of redhead's fingers combined had been. Opening confused blue eyes, he looked up at Gaara to see that his own eyes had closed in concentration. "Gaara..." he gasped, gaining the other's attention again.

Gaara opened turquoise eyes to stare down into the blond's eyes reassuringly. "I love you, Naruto..." Gaara gasped as he moved to penetrate Naruto to the hilt, seeing the other's eyes widen in surprise at the full feeling. Naruto quickly relaxed at the reassurance in his boyfriend's eyes. Taking this as encouragement, the redhead began to move inside of Naruto.

Enjoying the movements of his boyfriend inside him, Naruto leaned up to kiss the other softly as he pulled him down slightly to hug him. "I love you too, Gaara..." he started to move his hips in time with Gaara's thrusts. The movements were slow at first, but quickly gained in momentum as the pleasure heightened between them. Before either could take the pressure anymore, it erupted along with their orgasms, making them cry out one final time in unison before they both spilled their seed.

Both had forgotten long ago about being in a shower, but with the final tremors shaking through their systems, and the knowledge that the hot water had all but stopped a few minutes ago (and that they were both starting to feel the chill), they decided to leave the shower in favor of finishing the evening off in bed.

Gaara stared in surprise, seeing the bedroom had been decorated while both him and Naruto had been gone on their date by Temari. His sister had placed lit peppermint (Naruto's favorite) scented candles throughout the small apartment, giving it a rich glow that dimmed lights alone couldn't produce. She had then thrown a sporadic trail of blood red rose petals leading from the living room/kitchen area towards the bedroom, and then onto the bed, which she had covered in a soft caramel colored suede comforter with matching pillows, and soft vanilla-scented white sheets. Finishing off the effect of the room, his sister had placed off by the side of the bed a glass jar filled halfway with heated massage oil. 'It smells ironically like raspberries', he thought briefly, taking a ginger sniff.

Gaara stiffened in surprise a few seconds later, when (as he was looking at the bed) a smaller and slightly damp body encircled him from behind. The redhead turned his head slightly to look at the form of his boyfriend only covered from the waist down by a green towel, which caused the redhead to grin in delight at the welcoming sight. "Looks good," Naruto mumbled offhandedly into Gaara's back, hugging him closer.

"Yeah..." Gaara smiled slightly in agreement at Naruto's comment, looking again at the room. "Temari did a good job decorating the place..."

The redhead heard Naruto chuckle from behind him and turned to look down in surprise at his grinning face. "I wasn't talking about the apartment..." the blond winked at Gaara before grabbing his head from behind so he could pull it down and capture Gaara's mouth with his own. The kiss, only meant to be simple and sweet at first, reminded the redhead of what they had done earlier in the shower, bringing out a deep yearning within Gaara's gut for more of the same closeness. But he knew Naruto wouldn't be ready for more yet, and instead decided to lay with Naruto between the covers and sheets.

"You know Smexy... I think I'll like taking showers with you if they all end like this..." Naruto smiled, hearing Gaara's unusual bark of laughter at the comment before snuggling close under the covers against Gaara as the other spooned his body from behind.

"I'll take that into consideration, Koi... but I think next time we should try using a bed..." Gaara commented back while hugging the blond as close as possible. 'It was nice to lay with Naruto like this' he thought, leaning down to breath in the clean scent from Naruto's damp hair. "Hmm... you smell good..." he mumbled more to himself, since he wouldn't get a response from the blond, as the other boy had already fallen asleep and was gently snoring next to him. Gaara found himself falling asleep, content with the knowledge that Naruto was finally his and nothing could change that, not even that bastard Uchiha.

Elsewhere, oblivious to the two lovers sleeping away, a girl slightly older than the two lovers sat next to her mother's hospital bed in worry, knowing her mother was dying, but their was nothing either them or the doctors who had started chemotherapy 2 months ago could do about the inevitable cancerous tumor destroying her mother as it resided in her brain. She leaned over her mother to whisper in her ear: "I'm here now mom... it's Tenten." No response. But, then again, she hadn't expected one since her mother, Shuhui, was too tired to do anything other than sleep nowadays. It was a far cry from the person she used to be. Tenten tried to not cry at the thoughts of seeing her mother affected this way. 'Oh Kami... why can't anything be done?' she thought, holding her head within her hand in grief, and not realizing that her mother had woken up by that time, and was eyeing her in thought.

"...Tenten..." she managed to squeak out as she attempted to sit up. "I am so glad you're here..." she started, only to be interrupted by Tenten.

"Mom!!" the younger girl rushed over to help her up. "You really shouldn't try to move so much...!"

Shuhui snorted at the comment. "I'm not dead yet... besides, I need for you to do me a favor."

Tenten eyed her curiously. "What is it?"

"Do you remember Kisame? My old boss?" her mother asked.

Tenten sneered at the name. "Yes. That bastard.... I hope he rots for all the help he's given us..." she noted sarcastically.

Shuhui smiled at the comment. "He does need to be punished, but it's not my place to do it.... I am not proud of what I did under his employ..."

Her daughter leaned in close in interest. "I don't understand what could you have done..."

Her mother blushed, turning her head away in embarrassment, remembering the past and her part in it. " I... I helped him to break up two people who were really in love... and I want to atone for it..."

Tenten looked at her mother in surprise. "Why... why did you help him? I don't understand...!"

Shuhui blushed again. "It's not something I am proud of... It was for the money," she laughed dryly, "A lot good that does me now... but, Tenten, I want to you talk to Sasuke's love."

Tenten's eyes widened at the name, "Sasuke.... you did this to him? But I thought you loved him like a son!"

Her mother nodded brokenly. "Yes... I regret everything, and I want you to talk to his love, an Uzumaki Naruto. He deserves to know what both Kisame and I did to break them up."

"But... why me? Can't you write to this Uzumaki...?" Tenten started, only seeing her mother shake her head in the negative.

"I have tried, but he hasn't read them..." Shuhui looked pleadingly into her daughter's eyes. "Please, before I die... I want you to show him everything... everything I took from Kisame before I was fired. Will you promise me that?"

Tenten nodded grudgingly. "I will... though I don't know what that will do for Sasuke now..."


Well That's it for Chapter 10... I am so happy with how the story is turning out while I have to thank Escachick for all her Help... it may unfortunately take a while to upload a new chapter since I only have up to chapter 12 edited so if anyone is interested please email me and if you have a msn account all the better cause I like to chat about my chapters to my editors, thanks again for your patience. Ja Ne XD