Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto or anything related to the manga, anime, or show. I'm not profiting from this so leave me alone.
Authors Note: Ok so it took so long to update but these last few weeks but college classes, projects, and finals have been keeping me busy. First I would like answer some guest reviews
Guest Ch. 5: Thank you for correcting me on Kushina’s eye color as no one else had caught that.
S-Wanderer999 Ch. 5: No one has noticed that Naruto took everything out of his parent’s estate yet because no one else can get in.
Sky92 Ch. 7: I’m happy you like my story. But did you mean best of all of them? You put beast
Lid Ch. 7: With permission the first chapter of my story was taken from another author but I changed it a little considering in his Naruto gets sent to the “PokeGirl” world trying to kill himself instead of just leaving Konoha. I might make an AU of this one with Ayame, Anko, and Hinata leaving with Naruto as well since I really can’t see them cheating on him. Also replace some of the cheating girls with more realistic ones (dating wise) for example replace Tsunade with Hanabi or Moegi (older legal versions not loli).
wdxiii20 Ch. 7: No one will be redeemed
Unknown Kitsune: Sorry about the long waits. Between classes, work, and family I try to update when I can
Slammin-Sam CH. 8 Sorry no one will be redeemed. Not even Hinata
Guest Ch. 8: Iruka betrayed Naruto just like the others
wdxiii20: Ch. 9: Yes Mei is going to be in the harem. And I’m still trying to think of a reason for Kushina still being alive that isn’t overused and that Naruto will believe
kid-kaos295 Ch. 9 Pretty much same answer as Lid from Ch. 7. I did a poll back when I first started this story for if anyone should be redeemed and if so who? The one with the most votes was for no one to be redeemed. But the one with the second most votes was Hinata. I do love Hinata especially since she’s sort of come out of her shell for the war (I mean she slapped Naruto! Come on people! Stop Hating!)
Ok those are guest reviews I thought needed answers. Now on with the story! "
Flashback"
'Huh?'- thinking
"What?"- talking
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RASENGAN" -Jutsu "
What do you want brat?" -Demon speaking
Chapter 10: Revelations
In Konoha
Tsunade was currently in the hospital pacing back and forth trying to figure out what she could do to help her teammate ‘I don’t know what Naruto did to Jiraiya but it’s killing him and if I can’t help him I don’t think he will last much longer’ she thought worried. She was surprised because he had seemed fine when he got back; it even looked like he had been healed despite the gashes over his stomach. She still couldn’t forget how scared she had been when he started screaming. It was still on her mind and she still couldn’t think of what she could do to help him get better when she found out what exactly Naruto had done to him.
Flashback
Tsunade had just gotten over her shock of what Gamakichi had said to her before he left and ran up to check on him. He seemed fine until he suddenly started screaming as if he was in unbearable pain. She did another check on him and still couldn’t find anything wrong “SHIZUNE! I NEED A STRETCHER AND A ROOM IMMIDIETLY!” she screamed out while she was trying everything she knew to try and help ease her teammates pain. She was starting to get tears in her eyes up when she couldn’t find anything and his pain seemed to be getting worse with every passing second. Shizune rushed into Tsunade’s office with three other medics they put Jiraiya on the stretcher and they all stopped when Jiraiya suddenly stopped screaming. They all waited in silence to see what would happen next when he slowly came to, he looked around weakly stopping when he saw Tsunade “Tsu-hime why you crying?” Tsunade looked down and got ready to punch Jiraiya to the floor but stopped when he started hacking and coughing. She stopped her punch inches away from his face and sighs “Jiraiya what happened? Do you remember anything that happened after you went to speak to the toads? Gamakichi said that the Toads are no longer loyal to Konoha and that the slugs and snakes would hear about what we did along with every other summon in this village besides Kakashi’s dogs and Gai’s turtles. What did you do?” She asked him concerned and confused. Jiraiya shot up at this when he recalled what happened to him with the toads and his fight with Naruto “It was Naruto Tsunade, I went to go talk to the toads to see if they would help us find him but while I was on Gamabunta he was summoned. I sat there confused when I heard Naruto yell out to Gamabunta. I tried talking to him and he became unstable and started yelling at me then when Gamabunta found out about why Naruto left the village and how he grew up Bunta became cold and told me I was no longer allowed to summon the toads.” Jiraiya took a breath and continued “Then I was shocked to find out Naruto had released the Kyuubi! I tried to convince him to let me re-seal her but he became enraged and brutally attacked me without mercy!” He then thought for a second and looked at her “I think she might have started controlling him while he was here in the village and that’s why he left and it’s gotten worse since he released her” he told her but then grabbed a bowel that was next to his bed and threw up noticing some blood in the bowel he looked over to Tsunade “What’s wrong with me Tsunade? I feel like shit and I don’t know why but I think Naruto did something to me.” She looked away and thought for a moment “I’ve been trying to figure that out since you were brought back Jiraiya. Think hard what’s the last thing you remember before passing out is?” He closed his eyes and felt a huge surge of pain in his chakra coils and gasped in pain “I…I think he might have poisoned my chakra coils” Finally spent of the energy he had at the moment, Jiraiya passed out, little did they know someone had been listening in on their conversation and ran to tell the others what she had heard.
Flashback End
Everyone who had been denounced by Naruto had been called to Tenten’s house telling them she had to talk to them and all had arrived except Sasuke. Kiba was finally fed up of waiting and got up “Are we actually going to do anything here!?” Hinata grabbed his leg and pulled him down as Tenten walked into the room. She gave Kiba a little glare and took a sigh “Ok guys I already talked to Neji and we have come to a conclusion but first we want to see if anyone else has too.” She took a quick look at everyone “Who else thinks that they know why the village has gone to shit as well as our lives?”
As she expected Tenten sighed when everyone raised their hands and even saw what looked like tears coming from a few of the girls but mostly from Ayame and Hinata “How many of you think any of it has to do with our choices and what we did?” She was a little surprised to see a couple of hands still up. The ones who still had their hands up were Hinata, Ayame, Chouji, Anko, Iruka, and Shikamaru. Tenten was now a little relieved to see not everyone in the group was completely ignorant or heartless. She looked at Kurenai, Asuma, Yamato, Shizune, Ino, Kiba, Hana, and Kakashi “Why do you seven think your actions had nothing to do with the way the village is now?” She asked annoyed
Kakashi was the first to speak even though he was still reading his book, something the group taking responsibility for their actions couldn’t believe especially after Naruto had ripped out the Sharingan that Kakashi had been with for years. And even though he didn’t show it Kakashi was still furious at Naruto for what he did and that after Tsunade was not able to give Kakashi a new eye as it never work. “Because we have no reason to believe it’s our fault, it’s obvious how unstable he is after the actions he took against us. And those girls he was with don’t seem to be helping him, in fact they seem to making him worse” he replied in a bored tone still reading his book but was surprised when Neji appeared behind him and grabbed his book, then tossed it to Tenten who started ripping the book to pieces and was enjoying the view of Kakashi crying over his beloved book.
After she was done, she took a deep breath as she rubbed her eyes “Well maybe you’ll change your minds once you hear what happened to Jiraiya” Everyone tensed up at this and remained silent “Jiraiya had gone to the toads to talk to them and see if they could help when Gamabunta was summoned while Jiraiya was on him, they were both surprised to find Naruto in front of them. So Jiraiya tried talking to him and when he pissed Naruto off he told Gamabunta about his childhood and how he was raised. Gamabunta became very upset with Jiraiya and said he was no longer allowed to summon the toads and when Jiraiya still wouldn’t leave Naruto alone he was nearly beaten to death and had his chakra coils poisoned” She stopped and let everything sink in.
She looked everyone over and was about to continue when Kiba spoke up “Well what the hell did he do or say to Naruto that got him so pissed off?”
Tenten remained quiet at this and lied “That I don’t know” Shikamaru looked at Tenten suspiciously “All I know is that at the moment I don’t think even Tsunade will be able to heal Jiraiya. And that’s not all the village has lost the Toads and Tsunade was told that the Slugs and snakes were next, and that pretty much every summon in this village would be gone except Gai’s turtles” Everyone was shocked at the news, and Tenten looks over to see Anko looking worried. Tenten then looked at group that believed they had nothing to do with the state of the village “So what do you think now? Still think Naruto’s current state has nothing to do with the way he was treated here?”
Yamato spoke up this time “I’m not sure about you guys but I think this proves he has become even more dangerous than he was before he left and it wouldn’t surprise me if the council decides to put a bounty on his head” Asuma, Kakashi and Kurenai all nodded their heads in agreement while Shizune, Ino, Kiba, and Hana looked to be deep in thought.
Hinata, Ayame, & Anko looked to be in tears while Iruka and Shikamaru looked ashamed. Chouji on the other hand became furious at the four adults, stomped over to Yamato and grabbed him by his collar “ARE YOU THAT FUCKING HEARTLESS?! OR ARE YOU COMEPLETELY BLIND?” His hand became bigger and as he was about to launch Yamato out of the building he stopped himself “No…I’ll let you see for yourself how things are only going to get worse. But I hope by the end of it you’ve seen what you did and how the Villages’ state is also the result of your actions… as well as all of ours.” Chouji let Yamato go and walked out, Ayame was right behind him. Then everyone else left some thinking of how they could Naruto to forgive them even a little, some thinking of what they should do, and some thinking what was the point of the meeting anyways.
With Naruto’s Group
Naruto, Lee, and Shino were all sitting it being their turn to watch for enemies while the girls were getting some rest “So I was wondering what exactly made you two want to leave Konoha?” Naruto asked starting up conversation. The two simple looked at each other and Shino was the first to speak “We had noticed your change almost immediately after Sakura and once we saw and found out why you had changed we were shocked that our “
friends” had stooped so low and completely disregarded your feelings and had talked to the Hokage shortly after to see about switching teams.” He then sighed in annoyance at the memory
“But at the beginning she was ignorant and told us we were worrying about nothing and that you would get over it. We kept trying as things got worse and once when we both had seen enough we threatened to quit being Shinobi if she didn’t let us switch teams. She gave in once she realized we were serious but when it was all over and done with you had already left and we became so disgusted with the village we just decided to leave” Shino sighed and finished.
Naruto thought even less of Konoha or at least its Hokage now as he heard their story and looked over at where the girls were sleeping. Lee broke the silence this time “So Naruto-san what do you plan on doing now?” Naruto looked at the two guys and gave them a real foxy grin “Well first I have to search for the rest of my mates and then if things go as planned I’ll have my own village” Lee and Shino looked at each other “Well how many are left?” Naruto reached into his pocket to check the rings when he realized something and face palmed himself “I’m such an idiot”
Lee and Shino were confused “What? What’s wrong?”
Naruto sighed and looked at the rings in his hand “I’ve been forgetting to give my girls their rings” He quietly walked over to the sleeping girls and slipped a ring onto each of the girls who hadn’t yet received one.
Pink for Tsunami, Yellow for Temari, Brown for Yugito, and Green for Fu. He gave each of them a kiss on their cheek and walked back over to the guys “Well it looks like I’m halfway done and if I’m correct we’re not very far from the next two.” He said smiling
Chapter End
Thanks to all of you who are being patient with me and I already have some ideas for the next chapter. The main one being Tsunami’s training. Also I had an idea today for a Rosario Vampire story and will probably at least start it tonight before I lose the idea. Anyone interested in helping me with any of my stories feel free to PM me, whether it’s looking over or pointing out mistakes or just sharing ideas just hit me up.
