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Do Over

By: KitsuneFun
folder Naruto › Yaoi - Male/Male
Rating: Adult ++
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Chapter 11

I know I know... nothing for months and then suddenly two updates so quickly well basically I have been feeling like a bitch who should know better and be nice to the fans she has by continuing this story... that and despite appearances I still love how this story is going even though I have kind of sidetracked. Also I know I said this in the last chapter but I do still need an Editor (Beta) if anyone is interested. Without further ado, Chapter 11.

Chapter 11-Do Over by KitsuneFun

Disclaimer: I don’t own Naruto that honor is held by Masashi Kishimoto I am just a fan writer doing this for fun.

Haku paused, his hand trembling as he raised it halfway towards the doorknob to Gaara's apartment door in trepidation. It was his fault for not learning to never bet against the likes of Zabuza, Chiyo, Shikamaru and Temari in a card game. He bit his lip in worry over what the other two boys were doing in there by themselves. During the Sandpiper's weekly staff meeting a.k.a. the 'Weekly Card Game/Gossip Session', the discussion had been about Gaara and Naruto's first time together being that exact night. Zabuza had smiled at him knowingly during the discussion, making Haku blush. It wasn't a secret that he had a crush on the older man, but as far as Zabuza was concerned, until he was of legal age, sex-wise, Haku was off limits. But teasing wasn't and the older man used it to his full advantage against Haku.

Without Gaara or Naruto's knowledge, the card group, among other select people, had started a bet on how long it would take before the two would do it. As of last night, to everyone's shock, Tsunade had been labeled the winner of the card game. Haku felt it didn't bode well for the two lovers that the infamous woman with a losing streak had won, because according to her and other witnesses like Shizune, a teacher at Konoha High where Tsunade was the principal and the older woman's best friend, it always meant something bad would happen soon.

On record, it usually took up to 7 days for that 'something bad' to happen. Only once had it ever gone past the seventh day, and that, in Tsunade's opinion, had been the worst day/mistake ever. That day, she had gotten drunk at the Konoha High's Staff Christmas party, so drunk in fact, that she had ended up sleeping with Orochimaru in the school's utility closet.

From that day, 6 years ago, it was considered so horrible because the sick perverted bastard who just that year had gotten kicked out of Konoha High had decided to officially come out of the closet after having sex with Tsunade. It wasn't the fact that she had liked the sex, which Tsunade had confessed, "was the worst she ever had", but it had hurt her pride as a woman that he had decided to pursue the same sex from that point on, especially, "the younger" in Orochimaru's opinion, "the better."

Haku shook his head in disbelief at the thought as he eyed the door in front of him for the last 5 minutes. "Maybe..." he grimaced to himself, "I can just call Gaara's cell phone, and avoid being the in-person alarm clock..." It was no sooner that he thought this that he heard his cell phone start playing 'Brace Yourself' by Howie Day and grimaced. 'No doubt its Zabuza...' His thoughts were confirmed by the unmistakably husky voice that greeted him on the other end.

"Hey kid..." Zabuza started.

"Er... hello, Zabuza-san." Was it his imagination or did he feel like the other man was smirking at him?

"How are the love-birds?" Haku gulped at hearing the other man's question.

"Er..." he managed to say, only to be interrupted by Zabuza.

"Remember Haku, you lost the bet last night during 'Rich-Man, Poor-Man' so that means you have to do what the Rich-Man says."

Haku sighed and nodded his head. "I know Zabuza-san, but what if they're... you know..." He heard the other's deep laugh on the other line at Haku's innuendo.

Zabuza was enjoying the younger boy's embarrassment immensely, but he wasn't going to allow the other off, since fulfilling bets (in Zabuza's opinion) built character. "No ifs, ands, or buts, kid. You have to do it in person, or no dice. And..." he grinned at hearing the other's sigh of defeat, "If you could get pictures on your cell phone, even better!"

Haku decided at that point the universe truly hated him, but with no other choice, he gave his acquisition. "I'll see what I can do Zabuza-san." The younger boy wondered briefly if it was too late to fall in love with someone else less perverted.

Zabuza smiled. "I know you will." And with that the phone clicked off.

Clicking the cell phone closed, Haku faced the door again, and with a new found resolve, he opened it only to be assaulted by the heavenly smells of breakfast. There was no doubt in Haku's mind that it had been Gaara who had made the breakfast, since he knew from past experience, being in Naruto's Home Ec class last year that the blond couldn't cook to save his life. He sighed in relief, since if breakfast was made, it meant that the other two were up and no doubt eating. 'It was a good thing his boyfriend was nice enough to cook for him everyday, otherwise the boy might have starved by now!' he thought chuckling to himself as he moved towards the kitchen, expecting Gaara to be there only to notice it was empty. "Hmm... I wonder if they're eating breakfast in bed." He mumbled offhandedly, before wandering off towards the bedroom. It was only as he opened the door with an, "Ohayo Naru-chan, Gaara-kun!" that he realized how horribly wrong his assumption about the other two both doing nothing was.

The first thing the brunette noticed was a very naked and loud Naruto straddled across Gaara's hips moaning and gasping as he moved up and down on top of the redhead's erection. Gaara, for his part, moved to pull the blond down by the back of his blond head and began kissing Naruto deeply as he slowly thrust up into the blond causing the other, if possible, to moan louder, "Kami Gaara!"

Haku, never having faced something like this before, flushed a deep red and with at rather loud and uncharacteristically girly, "Eep!!" he slammed the door closed again. Sliding down till his butt hit the floor he wondered again at the sanity of listening to Zabuza. However thinking about the older man and him in such a similar position caused his stomach to flutter pleasantly then with a heave Haku got back upon his feet and left before the other two boys could catch him.

The two on the bed stopped in shock to stare at the door as it slammed close. Naruto was the first to speak. "Did you hear something?" he gasped.

Gaara sighed having caught a glimpse of the door as it was closing, and with thoughts of retribution towards the person on the other side, he decided the best course of action at that point was to lie. "No." he leaned in to kiss along the line of Naruto's throat trying to get the other's thoughts back to what they were doing.

The blond leaned his head back and sighed into the caress, "yeah... probably just was imaging things. So..." he smiled slowly while looking down at an equally naked and sexy as hell Gaara beneath him, "I believe I have to finish thanking the chef for such lovely pancakes."

Gaara grinned back, the intruder forgotten for the heat of the moment. "Do tell."

If possible Naruto's smile got wider at that, "Oh I believe it's better if I show you..." he winked.

An hour and a half later, a much sated and fully clothed Gaara with Naruto faced the gates of Konoha. Gaara stopped suddenly and grabbed a hold of the blonde's sleeve, making the smaller boy turn towards him with a questioning glance. "Why did you stop?" Naruto asked, tilting his head to look up at his boyfriend with a cute expression on his face that the redhead couldn't resist.

With a seductive smirk on his face, Gaara grabbed the blond close and pushed him against the gate wall pressing his body full length against the blond's own. "For this..." Gaara mumbled against Naruto's soft lips before proceeding to kiss the other breathless. The redhead gave special attention to exploring his boyfriend's mouth and tongue making the other moan in delight into the kiss. What they had done that morning had only wetted Gaara's appetite for even more of the same special attention from Naruto. It was while Gaara moved to place another prominent hickey onto his boyfriend's throat that out of nowhere they heard a voice chuckling nearby.

"Damn, I'm sick in bed for two weeks of school, and you both start going at it like rabid sex-deprived Easter bunnies... does the genius and his cosplaying boyfriend know your up to breaking their title," Naruto pulled away from Gaara to stare with widened eyes towards the source of the voice.

"SHINO!!!" The blond squealed in delight, causing his boyfriend to wince at the tone when the blond pulled away. Shino was Gaara's former second-in-command of his ex gang 'Shuzaku' and now was just Gaara's best friend, as well as Naruto's other half in basketball (since Gaara can't play the sport to save his life) and new live-in foster brother. "So Baa-chan finally let you out?" Naruto asked as he grinned while hopping from foot to foot in his excitement in front of the brunet.

The spiky afro-haired boy nodded while adjusting the medical mask he wore, along with dark and round glasses that he also wore with Konoha High's required uniform. "Yes," Shino grinned. "Did you miss me, Goldilocks?" he leaned down to open his arms as Naruto, the blond in question, rushed into his arms in delight and gave him a hearty kiss on the lips.

Gaara raised a hairless brow at the open display of affection between the two. "Already trying to make me jealous, Shino?" he looked down at his watch. "It's not even 8:00 o'clock yet..."

Shino smiled behind his mask and leaned down to give a playful bow. "All in a day's work, my stalwart leader... and the much pleasure that can be had," he winked at Naruto, making him laugh.

"Oh what shall become of me...?" The blond, getting into the game sighed dramatically, pulling the back of his hand up to his forehead. "Oh what shall I do... who will save me?"

Shino clasped his hands together with Naruto's hands and sighed, if possible, more dramatically. "I shall save you my dear, from yourself..."

Naruto batted his lashes some more. "But kind Sir, I already have a Smexy Goth Knight..." he leered out of the corner of his eye at Gaara.

It was at that point in the fake play between the two that Gaara decided to leave for his first class. "...You're both idiots!" he snorted in annoyance, which caused the other two to stop and grin widely while giving each other a 'thumbs up'.

"Bravo... Encore..." Shino and Naruto turned to see the acting studies teacher, Kakashi, grinning at them good naturedly. "Yo!" he said, raising a single hand in greeting. As always, he wore a long scarf covering the lower half of his face and a 1950's pilot cap which was so big, it tilted to the side, covering one of the sensei's eyes. Kakashi only admitted once to Naruto and his fellow classmates at the time why he wore the scarf: "It's because its too cold out and I don't want to ruin my voice!" It still didn't explain why the teacher continued to wear it inside the school, or how wearing such a beat up and overly large pilot's cap helped. Others suspected that Kakashi wore the odd items because he liked to keep an aura of secretivity about him, and that not even his current boyfriend, Iruka, knew his identity.

"Oh, hello Kakashi-sensei..." Naruto smiled slightly, not liking the appearance of the teacher, since it meant they were late and Kakashi, being also the one who guarded the gate at opening for stragglers to hand out detention to, didn't bode well. Naruto noticed his boyfriend had already left and pouted. 'Damn that means no hanky-panky during detention!' he thought, turning to look at Shino out of the corner of his eye. At least he wasn't alone. "So I guess you're on time today, Sensei...?" he asked hopefully.

Kakashi's one visible eye squinted in happiness as he nodded in the negative. "Nope... but don't fret Naru-chan..." Naruto flinched at the girlish nickname, to which the teacher ignored his reaction as he waved at two boys behind him whom he hadn't noticed till then. "C'mon boys, come meet your fellow detentionees..."

Naruto ignored the other boy that wore his hair in a bowl-cut shape with overly large and bushy eyebrows to stare in horror at his ex-boyfriend who walked up, his once perfect day had turned to shit with the appearance of him. "Dammit, bastard, what are you doing here...!?" he managed to grit out between his clenched teeth.

The raven-haired boy turned to smirk in his direction, like the two of them getting detention together had been his idea. "Same as you, dobe..." he said, causing the other's fists to clench in annoyance at Sasuke's attitude.

"Your lucky we're on school grounds, Teme... otherwise I wouldn't hesitate to kick your ass right now!!" Naruto growled.

Sasuke's smirk enlarged at the threat, and he moved to face the smaller boy till their noses almost touched. "I am up for anything you are Dobe..." The threat caused the desired effect.

Naruto's blue eyes seemed to sparkle at the challenge as he got ready to punch Sasuke, unknowingly getting caught into his ex-boyfriend's trap, only to have Kakashi move between them and place an arm on each of the boy's shoulders. "Maa, maa... save it for detention, boys. I promise by the end of the day you'll be friends." The glare that Naruto focused at Sasuke despite the teacher's words promised anything but forgiveness.

Sasuke slightly grinned at the reaction, thinking, 'I'll make you believe me if it's the last thing I do'. Phase one of 'The Get My Dobe Back' plan had started.


Well thats it for chapter 11, I hope you liked it as much as I enjoyed writing it. I am not sure when the next chapter will be out but I will try to have it out in the next few weeks or less, if possible with my horrible schedule at work. Also their has been hints in the previous chapter and this one that something along the lines of a turning point in the story are coming up so I hope you look forward to it. Also many thanks as always for Escachick's lovely help in editing this chapter it is always appreciated. Also if anyone is still wondering looking for a Beta for the new chapter so please email me if your interested. Ja Ne XD
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