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Sensual Flame

By: feisu
folder Naruto › Yaoi - Male/Male
Rating: Adult ++
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Accident or not? Huh?

Sensual Flame

~*Chapter 12*~


As the water ran down Sasuke’s slim, lithe, pale body, he smiled at the thought of having Naruto back soon. The weekend was almost here and he couldn’t wait to be with Naruto all day and night long. Even if he wouldn’t be alone with him, it was perfect the way it was right now. The soft music that was playing on the radio which was on the counter not far from him, was making his body sway to the music. Slowly he shook his ass and giggled a little while starting to wash his hair. He felt so giddy that he almost slipped on the soap that flew off the holder when he turned around with the sponge in his hands. He started to sing the song that was now playing in the radio while washing him thoroughly. He knew this song pretty well, he did not favoured it but somehow stuck in his head and the rhythm was quite jumpy fast like dance music. He recognizes the song as “Everybody dance by Hinoi Team”.

“Everybody Dance…. Are you ready? Baby! Everybody Dance…Yeah,Yeah!” He sang the chorus and closed his eyes, he shook his ass while smiling and humming the rest of the song.

He wanted to smell good for Naruto, since tomorrow was Friday and he could spend more time with him in the morning than usual. On Fridays Naruto didn’t have to go to work until 1 pm. He dried himself off and put on some clothes. He was happier today and he had started to feel a lot better, especially because he wasn’t that jumpy around Akira or Alia anymore, or at least he tried not to be. Sasuke tensed as something flashed out of the corner of his eye, but quickly relaxed when the rational part of his brain realized that it must have just been the bathroom light reflecting off the faux silver faucet or something like that. ‘Che, you’re an Uchiha, stop acting so paranoid’, Sasuke thought to himself disdainfully.

“Finally you’re done, now it’s my turn!” Akira ran passed him into the bathroom with his baby blue towel and fluffy slippers. Sasuke laughed lightly and walked into the living room where Alia was playing a video game with Nao sitting next to her.

“Oh, Sasuke, wanna play with me?” Alia asked while watching the TV screen with big green eyes, her face scrunched in concentration.

“Sure, but don’t cry when I beat you.” Sasuke said smiling and sitting down next to her.

“Like you can beat me! I already beat up Akira while you showered.” Alia said.

Sasuke picked up the other controller and they started a new game. The dinner was ready and they were waiting for Naruto to come home. The trio played for a few hours with games that they liked while talking, yelling and laughing at each other. None of them heard the door open or they saw anything. Akira heard Nao yipping and bouncing towards the door; they all looked over and saw the tall blond man sigh with slumped shoulders.

“Naru~” Sasuke stopped as soon as he realized that this was not Naruto but his father, Arashi.

“Dad!” Akira bounced over and hugged the man who suddenly grabbed his son and hugged him to him really hard.

“Dad?” Akira asked quietly as he was squeezed to almost death.

Arashi did not say anything and let his son go slowly. He touched the young blonde’s face and sighed, then turned to Sasuke, who was staring at him.

Sasuke could feel it as soon as Arashi’s gaze had fallen on him that something bad had happened. He stood up shakily and walked very slowly towards the man while staring in his eyes.

As soon as Sasuke was in reach he grabbed him and hugged the young raven to him as well. After a few minutes he let them go, but he walked to the couch and made them sit around him. He sighed once again and looked into their eyes one by one. His focus stayed on Nao.

“Naruto had an accident … ” He couldn’t finish his sentence as Sasuke stood up his whole body shaking.

“Sasuke…” Arashi said while he touched the boy’s shoulder which stiffened, he turned him around to see the boy crying.

“Sasu..” He couldn’t finish his sentence again and felt annoyed but did not show it much. The raven had started to wail and thrash while Arashi hugged him to his body. He shook the boy so he could get his attention but it didn’t work. He couldn’t do anything but to slap the boy, who fell on the floor with a small thump.

“Now listen to me! He’ll be fine; he had only miner injuries which will heal in a week. He has a small scratch on his forehead and his left arm is broken, that’s all the injuries. He was already awake when I left him, so I came here to ask you if you wanted to see him. The doctors and nurses are being nice enough to allow you three to see him, regardless of how late it is. Now do you want to see him or are you going to stay here?” Arashi had said it to all of them, but he had meant it mostly towards Sasuke, who was sitting on the floor and bowing his head in shame at his stupidity.

They all understood Sasuke’s feelings and did not blame him for acting the way he did. Akira helped him up and gave him a few tissues, while Alia turned off the games and TV.

“Yes we’ll go. Sorry for acting like that.” Sasuke mumbled and blushed. Arashi grabbed him and hugged him again.

“I don’t blame you, sorry for hitting you, I am just as tired as Naruto is, so don’t blame him for the accident, it was not his fault that a car run into him when it had red light.” Arashi mumbled and felt the boy relax in his arms and hug him back.

Sasuke smiled a little, he liked Naruto’s family and couldn’t help but wonder what the rest of his family was like.

“Now go get ready, Kazuki and Miko are already there. Oh and we need to bring him some dinner, he won’t eat hospital food.” Arashi smiled when he saw a little smile on Sasuke lips when he turned around to walk into his and Naruto’s bedroom to change.

Soon everyone and everything was ready and they took off to the hospital. The ride to the hospital was really long and quiet. Even Nao was with them and hissing, sometimes at nothing at all. Maybe he could feel it as well. Something was wrong with his master”. It didn’t take them long but it seemed like hours before they got to the hospital. Everyone was quiet and just followed Arashi in the elevator. When it stopped on the right floor they all got out and walked slowly after the father of Naruto.

When they got to the right door they all stopped. Arashi knocked once and opened the door smiling slightly when he saw Naruto was still awake.

Sasuke just wanted to shove everyone out of his way so he could see Naruto, but the first thing he saw was not Naruto but two girls. One of them was smaller, obviously younger than Sasuke was, wearing blue jeans with a nice white skin-tight button-up shirt; she looked just like Akira and Naruto. Her long blonde hair was tied up in a pony-tail with bangs framing her brown eyes. She was really beautiful for what Sasuke estimated was only an 11 year old little girl.

He looked at the other girl who had her back facing them, and when she turned around and smiled at them, he knew something was off with her. He couldn’t put his finger on it, but somehow he knew she was really different, and it wasn’t just because of the way she was dressed. She wore a gothic style black dress. It was layered and had frills. She wore black wedge boots, a few black leather spiked bracelets and a collar which also was silver spiked. Her hair was paler blond and her eyes were huge thanks to the black eyeliner as well, but even without that he could tell she had beautiful blue eyes. She was paler then the rest of the family. She had nice curves and her eyes shone with amusement, like she knew something that he didn’t. He wasn’t sure if she was family or not anymore. Arashi said the other two kids of his were there as well.

“Well, it’s good to see you’re up and doing well Naruto.” Arashi said as he walked over to the bed and checked his file which was left in the room.

“Yeah, though I am really hungry.” Naruto said in a raspy voice, it sounded arousing and tired in the same time. He was a little paler but he did feel much better after seeing Sasuke and the rest of the guys.

Finally Sasuke snapped out of it and walked towards Naruto and hugged him gently but urgently. Sasuke had been so scared when Arashi had said that Naruto had been in an accident, even after he had told them that the blonds injuries weren’t’ that serious. Sasuke just needed to make sure that his beloved blond was still with him. Naruto, for his part, hugged him back as much as he could and gave a small kiss on Sasuke’s temple.

“Missed you so much.” Murmured Sasuke as he let him go. He smiled when he received a small kiss to his temple.

“How you doing?” The raven asked while he sat on the side of the bed, which was not occupied by others.

“Better now that you guys have brought me food” Smirked the blond, obviously knowing this is not what the raven had meant when he asked the question.

The others laughed lightly, and got him his food. They all ate in silence. Naruto was slower as he checked his family out. He knew he had to introduce Sasuke to the rest of the family, but he wanted to eat first and he already asked his family not to introduce themselves to him. When they were done, Naruto couldn’t bare it anymore, he wanted to see Sasuke’s expression of the news.

“Sorry, didn’t introduce them to you yet Sasu, but I was way too hungry to do anything like that.” He said holding Sasuke’s hand, who only nodded and smiled a little at him.

“Sasuke this is Miko and Kazuki, guys this is Sasuke my boyfriend” Naruto said as he pointed at the young people he was calling.

‘Kazuki? He said he has one more brother and a younger sister’ Thought Sasuke with widened eyes, still staring at Naruto, who was really serious. Sasuke was slow, he couldn’t understand and he hated himself for it.


He looked at Kazuki, who was wearing a dress and smiled prettily at him then it turned into a smirk. Miko, Akira and Arashi were grinning from ear to ear, and Alia was just biting her lip to keep from laughing.

‘Kazuki, h-he… he’s a cro-cross-dresser!’ His mouth fell to the floor and he made a really stupid face while it was so red that even the most beautifully red strawberry would be jealous of it as he realized it was a boy in that dress. He had never seen a cross-dresser before, but damn Kazuki looked really good.

Alia couldn’t help it anymore she burst out and started to laugh, which made everyone else crack up as well.

Sasuke was so embarrassed that he just lunged forward and hugged Naruto, burrying his face into the tan neck of his love and stayed there for a long time.

Naruto grinned and hugged the boy to him as he watched amusedly as Miko’s face turned really red and choked on her saliva. Akira started to hit her back to keep her from choking even more.

Finally everyone started to calm down, with an occasional little giggle coming from the two girls that couldn’t help but ‘aww’ at the sight of Sasuke blushing and hugging Naruto.

“Well that was funny.” Akira said as he sat down on the side of the bed, while holding Miko’s little hand and playing with her fingers.

“Amusing really.” Kazuki said as he smiled at them then at Naruto and his boyfriend.

“Can’t blame him though, you do look like a girl Kazu-chan.” Naruto said as he gently rubbed Sasuke’s back.

“Sorry” Mumbled Sasuke and let go of Naruto’s neck and sat up straight.

“Don’t worry about it Sasu-chan.” Kazuki smiled at him and looked at his father who was smiling at the family.

“It is nice to meet all of you.” Sasuke said finally and held Naruto’s hand that was not in the cast.

“Same here Sasuke.” Miko chirped in a cute voice and smiled at them.

“Aniki has good taste.” Giggled the little girl and Alia nodded her head in affirmation.

“So, since we are finished with dinner, shall we talk about business?” Arashi asked seriously, but his eyes shone in amusement especially after hearing groans from his kids, he laughed and waved it off.

“Alright, alright.” He said smiling, getting a chair for himself and sitting next to Naruto’s bed.

“The doc said you can go home tomorrow, but you have to rest for a few days before you can leave the house or the bed.” Arashi said again, now no amusement in his eyes only a serious expression.

“Alright, we can do that; just don’t go around telling everyone what happened to me.” Naruto said while he nodded at his father.

Sasuke leaned his head on Naruto’s shoulder and yawned a little. He wasn’t tired much; he just liked this loving atmosphere.

They started to talk about everything and anything; Sasuke was silent and just observed them. ‘Naruto is so happy with his family’ thought the raven haired male who was now looking up at the smiling tan face of his love.

‘I can’t do this to him, he needs to be with his family, and I won’t take him away from this happiness. Finally he has a family after so many long and lonely years. As much as I love him, I am not going to be in the way of his happiness.’ Sasuke thought while staring at the family members, all of them were happy with beautiful smiles on their beautiful faces. He had to admit it, the Uzumaki family was beautiful.

Suddenly everyone heard ringing. They looked at each other to see whose cell phone it was. Arashi just smiled and walked out of the room.

“Sneaky aniki, what you had done just to be with him Tsk tsk.” Kazuki said smiling then grinned when he saw the smirk on the oldest Uzumaki’s face.

Alia, Akira, Miko and Sasuke scowled and not understanding,

‘What he done? To whom? What are they talking about?' Thought Sasuke as he scowled even more at the Uzumaki’s cryptic messages.

Akira was about to ask them but Arashi came back smiling and picking up Miko and starting to spin her around the room.

Miko was giggling and enjoying it very much. She loved her father and brother’s who always played with her. She was the only girl in the family, and she loved that, though she wanted to have a little sister, but then thinking of sharing her father changed her mind. She was daddy’s little girl and Arashi made sure to let everyone know about it, even if it made them looks very childish sometimes.

After a while slowly everyone went home, until it was only Sasuke with Naruto. Naruto fell asleep after a while and slowly Sasuke got off the bed with a sad expression. He was going to leave Naruto. He would be happier that way. Sasuke was a burden to Naruto. He took up a lot of the blond’s time which also annoyed Sasuke. The raven could remember a time when he never relied so heavily on anyone. He didn’t need anyone as much as he needed Naruto and that in itself was terrifying to Sasuke. He felt needy and weak, and his weaknesses were just weighing the buoyant blond down. He was separating Naruto from his family and after seeing them so happy together he did not want to do that. Besides, Naruto could have had anyone he wanted. He was probably just with Sasuke because he felt sorry for…for what had happened to the raven. Sasuke smiled bitterly as he remembered something he had said to Naruto during a fight they had had the first time they had been together. The words echoed through his mind:

‘You’re lucky to be with me! Have you forgotten who you’re dating? I’m Sasuke Uchiha, I could have someone else in less than five minutes if I wanted to and you better damn remember that!’

God, he had been such an idiot back then. He really had been a bastard. He knew now that it was he who was lucky to be with Naruto, his ray of sunshine in an ever darkening room.

Sasuke closed the door to Naruto’s room, the sound of it thundering through his ears, making the decision to leave the blond seem final, and irreversible. The raven leaned against the door and covered his face with his hands, partially from exhaustion and partially from the decision he had just made. Sasuke’s muffled, mocking voice drifted from behind his hands.

“Leaving him…no, that sounds like...like a lie. I’m not good enough to leave him. What I’m doing is releasing him from his bonds.”

“Who are we releasing from what?”

Sasuke jumped from the surprise that he wasn’t as alone as he had thought. Looking to his left he discovered that Arashi was sitting in one of the many chairs that littered the hallway, casually reading a newspaper.
Sasuke felt irrationally angry, and exposed. As much as he was improving in the way of not being totally anti-social, he still hated it when anyone (other than Naruto) witnessed his moments when his guard was completely down. He felt weak enough as it already was, he didn’t need anyone else to witness it as well. So he did what he always did, he got pissed and picked a fight.

“What the hell are you still doing here?! You left over a half hour ago. Did you suddenly forget how to leave a building, or did you just not feel you could trust Naruto with me?”

By this time Sasuke was breathing harshly, as if he had just ran a marathon, and all Arashi had done was turn the pages of his newspaper. This of course only made the raven even angrier because now he felt like Arashi was ignoring him.

“I’m not even sure why you would be so concerned about your son anyway. I’ve known him longer than you have, you pathetic excuse for a loving father!”
Sasuke expected Arashi to stand up and tear him to pieces for making such a comment, but instead he closed his newspaper, folded it neatly, placed it on the table next to him and said:

“What was that I heard about you leaving someone?”

To say the raven was surprised at the older mans response was an understatement. It was as if he hadn’t heard a thing Sasuke had said to the man. Apparently Naruto hadn’t inherited his temper from his father, or the father was much better at controlling said temper than the son. Either that or Arashi had selective hearing.

What Sasuke didn’t know though was that Arashi had heard every word Sasuke had said and was willing to overlook everything the raven had said, even the more painful comments, in light of the more important statement Sasuke had made such as him leaving someone…
Sasuke on the other hand was having a really difficult time. His ‘fight or flight’ reflex was going nuts. He had already tried the ‘fight’ part and that hadn’t worked well so the only thing left for him to do was try the ‘flight’ part. He turned around and attempted to leave in the opposite direction of Arashi but was stopped by a forceful hand on his wrist. He turned around to glare into eyes that so closely resembled those of the man he loved so much.

“Why are you leaving Naruto?”

“Because I don’t love him and I’m not happy with him anymore.”

Saying those words were like individual shards of ice embedding themselves into Sasuke’s heart, freezing it from the inside out. Sasuke was going to spend the rest of his life in sweet torture, sweet because Naruto would be happy, torture because that happiness didn’t include the raven. And all Arashi could do was smile as Sasuke’s heart was shattering.

“Sasuke, everyone knows that isn’t true. I can see just as well as anyone that you love him with your whole being…so why would you leave him?”

Sasuke wanted to tear the mans hand off of him because with each word he said, he made it harder for the raven to find the resolve to leave Naruto in order to insure the blonds happiness. He was doing what was best for Naruto. So why was he fighting the raven about it.

Arashi could see how much Sasuke was struggling with himself. Arashi slowly stood up and put his hands on Sasuke’s shoulders. The raven looked startled when the older man touched him, as if he had forgotten that the older man was still with him. Arashi spoke slowly and soothingly.

“Sasuke, why are you leaving Naruto?”

Sasuke, for his part, looked at Arashi confusedly. He wanted to tell the older man so badly… but if he did he might not be able to leave his beloved blond. Arashi speaking so calmly and kindly to him served to be the last straw.

“I want him to be happy” Sobbed the raven as he threw himself at Arashi, burying his face into his chest. Arashi merely smiled and wrapped his arms around the poor raven.

“He is happy, you can see it in his eyes, when he talks that he is happy and he is not missing anything from his life. He has everything he wants. He has you, he has us, and I know that is the most important thing for him.” Arashi said as he looked at the young Uchiha.

“I’m sure if you would leave him Sasuke, he wouldn’t be happy. It’s been so long since he smiled, laugh, even his smirks are good-natured since you came back into his life. You made that happen. I just hope, you won’t leave him because I know that would break his heart.” Arashi said as he smiled.
Sasuke was surprised, to say the least. ‘I guess I would have made the biggest mistake in my life leaving him’ thought the raven as he looked at the now smirking Arashi who suddenly hugged him.

“My son is a really good driver, he would never have an accident, but he wanted to be with you, so I guess he broke his arm for that reason. I know this, because I would have done the same thing. I just needed him in the office for a few days, but I guess he can’t stay away from you that long.” Arashi smiled while rubbing Sasuke’s back.

Sasuke looked up at Arashi and remembered Kazuki’s words. “Sneaky aniki, what you had done just to be with him Tsk tsk.” Sasuke smiled but growled at the thought of Naruto putting his life in danger because of him; then again it was kind of cool if you thought about it in the right way.

’Like a beautiful prince on a white horse, saving my ass or something.’ Sasuke thought and laughed lightly at it.

Arashi smiled when he heard Sasuke laugh. He grabbed him gently by the upper arm and stood up, pulling the raven up with him.

“Now go wash your face. You can stay with Naruto tonight but I want you to get some sleep. Understood?” Arashi asked seriously.

“Hai!” Sasuke gently smiled and with quick steps he made his way to the washroom, freshened up a little and walked back to Naruto’s room.

As soon as he closed the door and turned around he saw that Naruto was awake, petting the bed beside him. Sasuke smiled and walked there but took off his shoes and pant and slid in beside Naruto, where his unbroken arm was. He snuggled up close to the blond and sighed.

“Sasuke, I’m glad you are here. I missed you a lot” Naruto murmured to the raven and held him against himself tightly.

Sasuke’s eyes widened and a small tear slipped down his face onto Naruto’s chest. He looked up and smiled a sad smile.

“I’m sorry. I want to make you happy.” Sasuke murmured and looked away from those eyes he loved so much.

“You are making me happy. You have no idea how happy I am now that we’re back together.” Naruto said as he moved in and kissed him.

Sasuke gasped at the sudden kiss and Naruto slid his tongue into the raven’s mouth and slowly started to kiss the Uchiha. Sasuke started to kiss back slowly enjoying the touch of their tongues. He wanted a little more, he wanted to do more with Naruto, but wasn’t sure if he could.

Slowly Sasuke sat up, not breaking the kiss and sat on Naruto’s lap. The blond was surprised but did not push him away. He slid one tanned hand into the shirt Sasuke was wearing, fondling the flat stomach, and then little by little slid up to the pinkish little nubs.

Sasuke moaned when Naruto’s hand started to rub gently at his nipples. The kiss started to get hotter, he could feel it and he was not scared, so he made a small move with his hips. He moaned and so did Naruto, when their half hard erections rubbed together. Sasuke’s hands were everywhere on the tan muscled chest, stomach, he wanted to feel everything he could. He wanted to do more, as much as he could.

Naruto broke the kiss and started to nibble his way to Sasuke’s earlobe, sucking on it while his hand tweaked the nipple a little harder. He did not push his groin upwards hard, just slightly. He didn’t want to scare Sasuke by being a little rougher.

Sasuke’s grinding started to get stronger and faster, now both of them were really hard and Sasuke couldn’t stop gasping, moaning at the feel of Naruto’s loving touches, kisses, and gentle bites. Suddenly he pushed Naruto away and took off his boxers and pulled down Naruto’s as well.

“Sasuke? What are you doing?” Naruto asked, he did not mind, but he didn’t want to push.

“Let me, please Naruto.” Sasuke begged his lover, he wanted to see if he could take it to the next step or not.

“Alright, but stop as soon as you don’t feel so comfortable.” Naruto said and smiled at the raven that smiled back at him.

Sasuke kissed Naruto and slid closer so their erections were touching, both of them moaned at the feeling of bare flesh. The raven grabbed the blonds hand and put it on his ass so he could grind harder onto him.

Naruto took the chance and started to knead the globe with his hand which made Sasuke grind even harder. Both panting, moaning they did not notice that someone opened the door for a few seconds and then quickly closed it.

One of Sasuke’s hands was in the blonde’s hair while the other was on the tan chest, sliding all over the place. Then he started to kiss Naruto’s neck, all the while not noticing that Naruto had taken his hand off of Sasuke’s pale, nicely formed ass.

Naruto sucked on his index finger and trailed it down the raven’s back, causing the paler man to arch into the touch, then he slightly, gently, slide his wet index finger over Sasuke’s puckered hole, which earned him a loud moan and he felt the raven push on the finger, but he did not slide it in, instead choosing to just slide it over and over while kissing Sasuke’s neck, shoulder, face and those really red lips.

Naruto helped Sasuke to grind him. His hand was on the lower back of the pale body, his index finger sliding over and over the puckered hole in the same time as he moved Sasuke against him.

Sasuke moaned and groaned, and then he couldn’t take it anymore. He kissed Naruto hard and with a loud moan he came, Naruto coming as well. He fell forward on Naruto who was panting just like Sasuke was.

Sasuke felt so proud of himself, he knew he could take it longer, do more sexual things with Naruto, but he couldn’t hold back. He took what he wanted, needed and he was sure Naruto wanted it just as much as he wanted and needed.

“Are you okay?” Came a worried murmured voice from underneath him. He looked at the blond and smiled and nodded his head. He was so happy; he was getting much better thanks to Naruto and his family.

“You’re getting better Sasu, I’m proud of you. You’re strong underneath those lovely features of yours.” Naruto said smiling and then grinned at the huge blush that blossomed all over Sasuke’s face.

Slowly Sasuke got off of Naruto and got some napkins; wet them in the little sink that was on the wall almost next to the door, and cleaned himself and Naruto off and put their boxers back on. He was really tired, and just bounced into the bed and slipped in next to his love and smiled contently as he snuggled closer to the warmth.

Naruto smiled and kissed the top of Sasuke’s head and smiled as he hugged him with his unbroken arm. He averted his eyes from Sasuke, and then he saw something shiny on the little cabinet that was beside his bed. He picked it up, making sure not to wake Sasuke.

As soon as he picked it up a smirk spread across his face, it was a little envelope which had a fox sticker on it, that was shiny as the light hit it. There were few words written on the envelope. ‘To Aniki from otooto’ He opened the envelope and took out a picture. He grinned suddenly at the picture.

“Well what do you know?” Naruto said as he looked down at Sasuke’s sleeping face.

On the picture was the raven haired male, in the shower, singing and shaking his bum. His hands were in his hair as he washed suds all over his body. You could tell he was dancing from the way his knees were bent a little and his hip was thrust to the side. He had such a happy face that made Naruto even happier then he was already. He gave Sasuke a kiss on the forehead again then on his soft pink lips.

“God, you’re so sexy.” Naruto whispered as he put the picture back in the envelope and put it in the cabinet. He sighed and smiled, shook his head a little.

“Thank you otooto.” He whispered softly and fell asleep soon after.

Outside the room stood Arashi with a smile on his handsome face. He never thought of gay couples as disgusting like some people did. You’re still a human being, you can not control who you love. His son loved a man, so what? His other sons were gay as well. Miko, well he was hoping to get some grandchildren in the family. He laughed lightly, and a nurse looked at him oddly. That only made Arashi laugh more.

End Chapter

Review or else.. lol though this doesn’t work, you guys wont review which makes us less enthuiastic about the story and takes us longer to write/beta the story…. Make me feel good and review! Damn ppl :D Again, I was not ignored, woot! Thank you for the BETA version of the 12th chapter Luthien. You’re the best and gimme the pic already! :P :D

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