Everything He Ever Wanted (naruto version)

Sango: I'm alive!!
>_>
but yes. i know i promised a new chapter. as in only shikamaru/gaara (seme/uke) but!
this is much better.
i was looking through old stuff i'd written and guess what IIII found.
i found the following.
i had completely forgotten i had written this, but i recognize my chicken scratch (and it was at the bottom of my drawer. and i know why. all that smut would make my mom disown me)
this IS shikamaru/gaara --look tachimaru-san look!!!-- but theres more to it.
at first i thought this was an alternate version to chapter 9 (beautiful, cute, sexy hot...adorable) but this is WAY different.
so i hope you guys enjoy

as they say in spanish: "lo debido es deuda"

now on with the fic

oh, btw. get towels. multiple body fluids will escape you...if you know what i mean...
*cackles maniacally*

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ok, so this is about 1/4 of the way through the original chapter 9, so i'll refresh your memories:


Not long after, Sasuke slipped out of the still incredibly tight body, making the guitarist groan at the slight sting and the suddenly empty feeling. He lay panting on his back as he listened to the sounds of Neji being ravaged by Naruto, the vocalist keeping true on his word that he would fuck the older guitarist. Shikamaru was being given special attention by Sasuke, the bassist’s insatiable lust only curbed by the fact that Shikamaru wasn’t uke and therefore wouldn’t bottom for him, and Neji was already being taken by Naruto.

Sasuke was too caring of the older guitarist and the idea of double penetration on Sakito was quickly tossed away. Even though they did do slightly kinky things when it was just the two of them, it was nothing like what Shikamaru had said of BDSM. He didn’t want the guitarist in any kind of pain, sexual or otherwise. So he had to satisfy (for now) his lust by blowing Shikamaru. He wasn’t too keen on swallowing sperm, but he did love to make his partners happy, and, although he wasn’t a cock-hungry uke, he did enjoy bringing another man to his peak with his mouth.

Neji growled. Naruto was taking his sweet time, bringing Neji to the edge only to leave him there and not let him tumble into bliss. But Neji realized that this wasn’t all that bad.

“Stop.” Neji gasped next to him. Gaara felt the other guitarist’s long fingers touch his nipple and he whimpered at the feel.

“No, stop. I don’t want to cum yet.” Neji said, though his moans said otherwise.

“Let me...I want to be inside him when I do.” Gaara looked at Neji, the lean man on his knees beside him, his long arms reaching out to touch Gaara yet somehow able to keep him balanced as Naruto slowed his hips with a pout, moving shallowly inside the guitarist, giving him time to cool off before completely pulling out—he himself hated when, lets say Shikamaru for example, pulled out of him without preamble, not letting him cool off or cum.

Just hearing the wanton moans from Neji set Gaara's blood boiling and Shikamaru’s sexy groans weren’t helping matters so it wasn’t long before the redhead was aroused again. Gaara’s hole clenched and he ached to be filled again. He could still feel Sasuke’s seed inside him, had felt it trickle out of him and knew there must be a big wet spot where his butt is on the sheets, but it had already cooled and the sticky feeling wasn’t all too comfortable. He wanted to feel Neji inside him, he wanted it so bad. Unable to wait, he reached down, teasing himself with his hands, passing his half hard cock to fondle his own balls before circling around his still wet hole. He squeezed his eyes shut as he eased a finger in, his cheeks flushing slightly, not wanting to believe that he was masturbating when they could all see, but not caring. He inserted his longest finger as far as it would go but it wasn’t enough; he still felt empty.


SMUT*SMUT*SMUT*SMUT*SMUT*SMUT*SMUT*SMUT*SMUT*SMUT*SMUT*SMUT*SMUT*SMUT


Gaara lay panting, his cheeks burning, not wanting to believe that he was fingering himself where they could all see, but not really caring; only knowing that he felt so empty without Sasuke inside him and he wanted to be filled again. Neji's mewls and Shikamaru's groans weren’t helping; only adding fuel to the fire, making him feel like he was burning.

"No...stop." Neji panted next to him, gasping as Naruto pounded into him, keeping his promise that he would fuck the older guitarist.

"Wait. I don't want to cum yet...let me...I want to be inside him when I cum."

The vocalist slowed his pace until he slid out completely from the brunette.

"But I wanna cum too, dammit!" Naruto pouted, slowly rubbing his erection, wanting to cum so badly, wanting to be inside Gaara so bad he could hardly wait his turn.

“Here, sit on this.” Sasuke said, wiping his mouth of the drummer’s seed as the elder lay on his back panting harshly. Sasuke pushed Shikamaru aside and grabbed Naruto by the waist guiding the vocalist to sit on his erection. The vocalist was a little loose from the double penetration and knew that he needed more time to return to normal, but in the mean time he contracted his muscles, pulling the bassist deep into his body, his muscles squeezing and fluttering expertly around the raven’s erection.

“Oh fuck, Naruto.” The bassist gasped and groaned, his hips swiveling and thrusting eagerly into the vocalist.

“Where the hell did you learn that?”

Naruto was too far gone to answer. The raven was thrusting forcefully, hitting the blonde’s prostate directly every other thrust, and Gaara’s moans next to him were drawing Naruto closer to the edge. The blonde was spiraling out of control, so close to the edge he could feel his balls drawing tight, full of pressure but he crashed to reality when Sasuke pulled out of him.

“WHAT” he shrieked, his hole clenching around nothing, the muscles fluttering, needing to feel that hard cock pulsing and pounding inside him. His eyes flashed as he glared down at the bassist, but Sasuke just smirked and with the help of Shikamaru turned to blonde over to lie with his back on the raven’s chest, legs spread wide in the air, staring up at the smug look on the drummer’s face. Shikamaru pulled his legs higher, so that his knees were close to his head, completely open to the tall brunette. Naruto became excited. Ruka was gonna fuck him with Sasuke this time. His anus fluttered wildly and his cock dripped precum.

“Aw, look. Naruto’s really happy to see me.” He grabbed both of Naruto’s ankles in one hand, lightly running a finger around the fluttering hole, only dipping his finger up to the first knuckle before pulling away. Naruto whined at the teasing fingers. Shikamaru scoffed.

“You’re such a slut, Naruto. Look how your greedy hole is winking at me.” He let go of the vocalist’s legs, but they were brought up even closer to his body by Sasuke, who grabbed him by the back of his knees. Naruto whined legs flexing uselessly as he tried to thrust his hips against Shikamaru’s teasing fingers.

“Fuck me.” Naruto moaned. He thrust two fingers in without warning making the tiny vocalist scream in pleasure.

“Slut.” Shikamaru whispered with a smile, fingers slipping out of Naruto to reach down to grab Sasuke’s erection. The bassist gave a moan of appreciation as the drummer fisted him, pumping him slowly, leading his pulsing member to Naruto’s needy hole. Sasuke dropped Naruto’s legs, forcing the vocalist further down on his straining erection. Sasuke groaned, pressing his face into Naruto’s neck, nipping the damp skin as he pumped harder into the blonde, loving how Naruto’s muscles fluttered around him. Naruto’s moan became a whine as Shikamaru began to suck his cock, immediately starting a hard suction.

Just as he was about to climax, Shikamaru pulled away from him and Sasuke stopped thrusting. Once he calmed down they continued their onslaught.

Naruto was close to tears the second time he was deprived of his orgasm. By the third time his face was tear streaked and he was begging. One more thrust, one more such, the lightest touch, and he would be falling over the edge of oblivion.

They ignored his pleas.


Neji was going insane beside the guitarist.

Gaara was so tight it was ridiculous and a little painful if not for how heavily coated with seed his insides were. And the redhead was experimentally squeezing his muscles, driving Neji to the edge though the brunette wanted it to last. Gaara had a look of awe and wonder as he swiveled his hips, his face contorting in pleasure, amazed at the power he had over Neji, giving and taking pleasure as he wanted, loving how the older guitarist looked tortured as his hips thrust harder and faster into the redhead’s smaller body.

Neji felt Shikamaru’s calloused fingers teasing his hole and he immediately lost his rhythm, thrusting his hips into the drummer’s hand. Gaara squeezed around him at the same time that Shikamaru thrust two saliva wet fingers into his hole. And Neji was cumming, hips jerking gracelessly as he moaned, gasping as he trembled, shooting his seed into the younger guitarist, pulling out so his seed also shot out around the red hole that fluttered heavily, contracting hungrily, the redhead still not reaching his own orgasm.


Shikamaru pulled his mouth away from Naruto’s now purple cock, about to deny him completion once again, but he pulled away too late. With a loud wail Naruto sobbed his orgasm, his cum shooting out in thick streams, his cock jerking wildly under the force and pressure of his balls, seed splattering Shikamaru in the face and chest. Naruto’s intense orgasm triggered Sasuke’s own.

With one last powerful thrust the bassist spilled himself deep into the tiny man, making him scream and jerk violently, shuddering uncontrollably above the raven. The excess cum gushed out of the vocalist overstretched and overused hole, spilling onto Sasuke’s still hard cock.

And Naruto was still cumming.

Shikamaru grabbed a hold of the vocalist’s spurting member, jerking the engorged length, helping to milk him of his release. Naruto’s voice gave out, his orgasm tearing through him unlike anything he’d felt before. His balls hurt, his dick, still shooting cum, hurt. His abused and over stretched hole ached and burned with too much cum. It was all too much for him.

It was anticlimactic when, with a last whimper, Naruto fell back against Sasuke heavily, losing consciousness as his dick finally went limp. Shikamaru took pity on the vocalist and gently carried him to lay down in a comfortable position in the corner of the bed, away from the others.


“I think we might’ve overdone it on poor Naruto.” Shikamaru said, wiping sweat and tears from the vocalist’s face. He slowly stroked his own hard cock as he admired the way Naruto’s anus contracted, Sasuke’s seed trickling out in a steady stream as the hole returned to its normal size.

“He passed out?” Gaara asked shocked, completely forgetting that he still hadn’t climaxed. He was too surprised by the fact that Naruto had been so overwhelmed with pleasure that he blacked out.

“Man is he gonna be pissed when he wakes up.” Sasuke said, still trying to get his breathing under control, a smirk dancing on his lips.

“Why?” Gaara asked, head cocked to the side, eyes wide—the perfect picture of innocence once more, stealing Shikamaru’s breath away as the drummer turned to look at Gaara, also curious as to Sasuke’s answer.

“Well, now that he’s passed out, he won’t be able to fuck you.” Sasuke said as though it were the most obvious thing in the world.

Shikamaru snorted.

“Yeah. Ever since you fucked him, he’s been wanting to get inside you. Literally.”

And just like that the innocence was gone. It was like ‘inside you’ triggered his inner slut and his hole contracted, reminding him of just how empty he was. He moaned, hips swiveling as he clenched his inner muscles, thighs flexing helplessly, not knowing whether to close his legs or keep them open.

Shikamaru moved over to the redhead, and Gaara immediately opened his legs widely, having Shikamaru kneel between his thighs.

“Show me that pretty greedy hole.” Shikamaru murmured, his voice deep like thunder, the vibrations running through Gaara’s chest, where their bodies connected, making the redhead mewl and arch up to the drummer. Gaara licked his lips, eyes heavy lidded with lust, looking like a wanton slut as his eyes begged Shikamaru to take him.

“Hmmm.” Shikamaru hummed contemplatively, “Who ever would’ve thought that sweet, innocent, virgin Gaara is actually an insatiable uke slut.” Shikamaru said, running his fingers teasingly over the guitarist’s body, lightly tweaking a nipple, the other hand running up and down his thigh, the light touch creating goosebumps in its wake. With a sudden, unexpected jerk to the redhead’s cock, Shikamaru pulled away.

“On your knees slut. Show me my slutty hole.” His commanding voice made Gaara tremble, his knees turning to jelly as he tried to scramble to do as the drummer said.

Once he was on his hands and knees he began thrusting his hips back, showing the drummer just how eager he was. Shikamaru slapped him hard across the ass. Gaara’s body jerked and he cried out. It hurt but his cock pulsed, seeking attention and release as Shikamaru spanked him again and again. Shikamaru spanked the round cheeks until they turned cherry pink, a white hand print visible on the guitarist’s now overly sensitive flesh.

The lightest touch had Gaara keening like a bitch in heat and he begged for Shikamaru to take him when the drummer started fingering him. Shikamaru started spanking him again, calling him a slut and Gaara loved it, wanting Shikamaru to give him more pleasure.

His ass was on fire and he only wanted more as Shikamaru continued to spank and finger him at odd intervals with no apparent pattern. When he least expected it, the drummer pushed inside him in one thrust, the engorged head spearing through the tight opening, making Gaara jerk and cry out, his orgasm tearing through him as Shikamaru hit his prostate directly. Never in his life had he felt so needy and helpless at the same time.

And it didn’t stop there.

Shikamaru kept thrusting into him, pounding him through his orgasm, the oversensitive nerves getting no reprieve as the drummer just kept fucking him raw, seeking his own release. Gaara’s arms gave out and he fell forward, face pressed tight against the cum and sweat stained sheets of his bed as Shikamaru kept his hips in a tight grip. He cried out, begging the drummer to stop, needing to catch his breath, the harsh in/out motions of the drummer’s rock hard cock beginning to hurt as the tall man’s hips hit the tender flesh of his ass cheeks painfully.

“Shut up.” Shikamaru growled, spanking the still red ass, making Gaara cry out, his cock hard again. Shikamaru reached around Gaara’s small body and grabbed the redhead’s cock, jerking wildly and with a shriek Gaara came.

His seed shot out of him in torrents, seven years worth of seed, it seemed, erupting from him in a continuous stream. He came so much that his semen came out clear rather than the thick creamy it was. His muscles clamped down around Shikamaru’s mercilessly thrusting cock in a vice like grip, the grip making Shikamaru feel like Gaara was trying to rip his dick off, the tightness bringing the drummer over the egde of oblivion. The redhead felt Shikamaru’s seed hitting his insides for only a second before his senses exploded and his vision darkened.

Sasuke’s gaze flickered from Shikamaru and Gaara to his own cock disappearing in Neji’s tight hole. He growled when he saw and heard Gaara scream and pass out.


“Damn it, Shikamaru! Stop doing that!” Sasuke berated, slipping out of Neji and making his way to an unconscious Gaara.

“What the hell are we going to do now?! We agreed that since this was for him that we’d all do him. Now Naruto and Gaara are passed out and I—”

“And you what? You’re fucking Neji you insatiable whore. Maybe I should fuck you to see if you get enough.”

“Come near my ass and I’ll kill you.” Sasuke sneered, narrowing his eyes at the drummer, knowing he was one to try funny stuff like that.

“Hello!!” Neji called, trying to get their attention, fingering himself as he slowly rubbed his cock.

“I wanna get off too you know.”

Shikamaru and Sasuke looked at each other.

They smirked.

“Thinking what I’m thinking?”

“We are geniuses after all.”

And without further talking, Sasuke grabbed Neji by the waist forcing the thin guitarist on his knees, immediately thrusting his dick inside as Shikamaru grabbed his long hair, leading his mouth to his own erection.

Well...there was only one uke available. And if Neji passed out, they were in for hand jobs and head until one of the three woke up. Neji just hoped he didn’t pass out too soon.

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soo.....am i forgiven for not posting sooner?
can CHIBI Sango maybe get cookies?

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