I Want to Know More About You
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Category:
Naruto › General
Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
6
Views:
1,021
Reviews:
33
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
Disclaimer:
I do not own Naruto, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
Stalker
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto, (wish i did though, i'd have so much fun... ;_;)
[1]Okawari- asking for seconds or in Naruto’s case, fourths, fifths and more(of ramen of course)
[2]Oyasumi- good night
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“Okawari!!!!”[1]
This was Naruto’s fourth bowl of ramen. Sasuke was hoping that he wouldn’t have to stay behind to wash the dishes for not being able to pay if Naruto ate too many bowls of ram….
“Okawari!!!!”
‘What the…?! How does Naruto stuff all that ramen down into his stomach?!’
“Hey, usuratonkachi, how many more bowls are you going to have?!” Sasuke said trying to not lose his composure.
“MANY MORE AFTER YOU CALLING ME THAT NAME!!!” shouted a furious Naruto.
“OKAWARI!!!!” Naruto said this with more vigor then the other times because of the insult said by Sasuke.
Sasuke kinda regretted calling Naruto usuratonkachi after that remark. He looked at his wallet again. He was still in the “okay” zone about letting Naruto eat ramen.
‘Well, now I can have some of my quiet time in my head again…’ Sasuke thought. He thought about what he wanted to know about Naruto. Even though Naruto was known all over Konoha, there was actually nothing known to the public about him. Sasuke started to list the things he knew about Naruto.
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Naruto liked ramen, he was loud, obnoxious, he knew where the dobe lived, Naruto was an orphan, he liked ramen……. Sasuke frowned when he couldn’t get past the ramen because that’s the only major thing he really knew about the blonde boy. Maybe the reason why he couldn’t get past the ramen was because at the moment, Naruto was ordering another bowl of ramen to Sasuke’s dismay….
The things Sasuke knew about Naruto didn’t answer why people hated him. But, how would Sasuke find out the answer to this question? ’Damn’ was all Sasuke could think of when he couldn’t solve this problem.
Well, besides wanting to know why people hated Naruto, the blonde boy just seemed amusing to Sasuke. No one really treated Sasuke the way Naruto did. People saw Sasuke as the last of the Uchiha clan, unless you counted Itachi. But he was now dead and even if he still was alive, what right minded rabid fan girl would approach him? (Even if the fan girls were already crazy.)
Not knowing made Sasuke angry that he was lacking in information. He had too much pride to not be able to know about one person in the village he has lived in for his whole life. He told himself he’d do anything to know more about the blonde boy.
“Phew! I’m full!” Naruto shouted. Sasuke was relieved that Naruto was finally finished eating the bowls of ramen. He had eaten… seven bowls of ramen! Sasuke had to make sure he had enough money on him to pay for this… damn Kakashi….
Good, he had barely enough money to pay for the meal…..
“Young man, you don’t have enough for the meal” said the ramen stand owner. “You have to pay for eight bowls of ramen.”
“What are you talking abo…..” ‘Shit, I had my own bowl of ramen too….’ Sasuke had remembered he had eaten one long ago while Naruto was eating his second bowl of ramen. Now he would have to stay to do the dishes to pay for that last bowl of ramen.
“Oji-san! Oji-san, I’ll pay for him!”
This surprised Sasuke until…
“Sasuke, you owe me for this!” Naruto said while paying for the eighth bowl of ramen. Sasuke was irritated with this. He had just paid for seven bowls, while Naruto paid for one bowl! His lip twitched. Sasuke tried to hold back on all the thoughts of hurting Naruto.
“Well, thanks for the meal, Sasuke!! Next time I’ll make sure to beat you again for another night of free meals!’ Naruto smiled. He was really happy to have a full night of free ramen.
The smile made Sasuke forget about hurting Naruto. ‘Money wasn’t of any importance anyways…’ Sasuke thought.
While leaving, Sasuke thought about knowing more about Naruto again. It just bugged him so much! Before he knew it, he was following Naruto back to his apartment without him knowing it.
“Why am I following him?” Sasuke whispered to himself while jumping through the trees and top of houses. ‘Well, since I’m following him and I have nothing else to do……. might as well..’
Sasuke watched Naruto walk into a market from a rooftop of a house.
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Naruto looked through the shelves for more cups of instant ramen. Although he had just had seven bowls of ramen, it didn’t mean he couldn’t buy some for a midnight snack for later on. “Alright!!” There were new flavors of ramen! Naruto loved to try new flavors of ramen.
‘Typical’ Sasuke thought. He ACTUALLY follows the dobe to know more about him and now he just gets to see Naruto buy new flavors of ramen…
Naruto bought some milk and other groceries and went to the register.
“Is that all…?” asked the woman sourly. “It is!” said Naruto enthusiastically. He had gotten use to all the sourness this woman gave him. Every time he went here, she would act the same. He didn’t mind anymore. He thought that if he were to become Hokage, he would have to be nicer to people around him even if they weren’t to him.
“That’ll be $18.23 brat…” said the woman at the register. She smiled sweetly to Naruto this time and it wasn’t because she had a change of heart…
“$18.23?!” Naruto was outraged. Who cares if he was mean now. That was over pricing. ‘It was supposed to be $13.23!!!’ “Why is it so expensive?!”
“Tax! Pay for it or leave without it, I don’t really care which you choose!” said the woman. She was probably enjoying this knowing he’d either starve or she’d be cheating him out of money….
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Sasuke watched outside while listening to bits of the shouts he could hear. This was what he always wondered about. Why did the villagers not like Naruto, he was like every other boy in Konoha. And… the bill was actually supposed to be $12.30…….
Sasuke watched as Naruto just paid the lady for the items purchased and left stomping all the way to his apartment.
Naruto lived in a dingy part of the town. It was still an alright area but, it could have been a little better. Naruto fumbled for his keys and unlocked the door to go inside.
Sasuke leapt onto Naruto’s neighbor’s rooftop to stare into the blonde’s apartment. Naruto’s apartment wasn’t messy like how Sasuke had imagined it. It was actually clean and tidy. ‘Maybe another change over the years?’ It wasn’t decorated at all. It was quite empty... ‘Some people did say that a person’s living quarters showed a person’s personality, but that must have been wrong since Naruto was so enthusiastic about everything.’ Sasuke thought.
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Naruto was exhausted from training today. He was satisfied about the day though. He had beaten Sasuke in a match, gotten a free meal of ramen, AND Sasuke owed him another free meal for him paying for Sasuke’s bowl of ramen. ‘Today was a good day.’ Naruto thought. ‘If more days like these occurred, I’d be even happier about life ahead. Maybe I should tell Sakura about this tomorrow!’
Naruto still held a small spot in his heart for the pink haired girl, though not as strongly in his younger teen years. Maybe a sisterly kinda spot in his heart since he had never had another family member to fill this spot. She was more like a friend now. She had calmed down about being mean to him whenever he was around and his crush on her had died down as well.
---------------Flashback (I hate ‘em)------------------------
Naruto and Sakura talked to each other whenever they had breaks during training. She’d ask him about how he was going to become Hokage one day. This surprised Naruto that she had asked. He didn’t really expect that from her because she didn’t seem too interested in his goals. He guessed they were now friends and smiled widely at this.
“I’ll make everyone acknowledge me!!’ Naruto shouted. That was the only plan he could think of.
Sakura was interested on how the boy could be so enthusiastic about his goals. They seemed impossible for him. Not that he wasn’t strong, she knew he was going to become stronger but everyone in the village hated him except for a select few. Did he have some secret way to push himself to these goals? She was curious.
“Is that all? Do you do anything to push yourself to these goals? Like talk to yourself about them? Write it down in a dia-“
“DIARIES ARE FOR GIRLS!!” Naruto exclaimed. Like hell he would ever be caught writing in a diary. Diaries were for girl secrets, girl thoughts, and girl crushes.
“Fine fine, do you write in a JOURNAL? Shout your goals out to yourself at nights? Anything?”
“Nope! I don’t need to do any of those silly things because I know I will become Hokage without having to do that stuff.” Naruto smiled.
“Well you should try doing some of that sometimes, I think it’d help you even more in your goals!” Sakura said. She genuinely meant it. She had found being friends with the blonde boy was like having a little brother.
--------------End of Flashback (Finally!!)--------
Naruto thought back at these thoughts. He should maybe get a little more serious about becoming Hokage. Maybe tonight he should try one of the things she listed out and if it worked, he’d maybe do one of the other things she had listed. They weren’t so bad to do if he thought about it… just a bit embarrassing. He was alone though, so… ‘What the hey!’ Naruto thought.
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Sasuke watched as the blonde boy walked around in his apartment. Naruto headed for his room and started taking off his clothing and was left with only his black shirt and boxers. It was nothing new to Sasuke after today but, he couldn’t help but blush. ‘Bathrooms are made for a reason, dobe.’ Sasuke said in his head directing it towards the blonde boy. Sasuke just couldn’t stop from making insults, though, most were just to joke, tease, and provoke Naruto for the hell of it.
Sasuke saw Naruto grab for a towel and headed towards another room. ‘Guess that’s his bathroom.’
Sasuke had never really been inside Naruto’s apartment before. Just into the living room or just his doorway was as far as Sasuke had gotten to. ’Maybe I should go inside into Naruto’s apartment for once, I could get to know more about him if we got to sit down and be civil towards each other…..’
Sasuke was now unconsciously staring into Naruto’s bathroom. ‘How’d that happen..?!’ Sasuke was surprised with where he was staring now. ‘Apartments and houses were made for a reason Sasuke, for privacy!’ Sasuke shouted to himself in his head. ‘Whatever, Naruto’s a boy like you are, Sasuke!’ That’s right, Naruto was a boy….so staring wasn’t really anything to worry about, he had the same things Naruto had, so whatever…..
Naruto started taking off his articles of clothing for his shower. ‘Why can’t you keep your clothes on for your shower..?’ Sasuke thought, though his eyes were following the small blonde boy’s movements. They seemed graceful to Sasuke…
“Damn it, why do I always have to have trouble with my clothing!!” shouted Naruto while tumbling around in the bathroom. Guess that’s what you call graceful…
Sasuke stared intently at Naruto taking off his clothes, one by one (which made two, so now Naruto was naked. XD) Sasuke compared many things from him and the blonde boy. His pride and rivalry didn’t stop at just strength.
Sasuke was better built then Naruto but, not to the extremes of being bulky. They both had lean bodies but, if someone were to compare the two, they’d agree Sasuke had a more mature body then Naruto. This made Sasuke smirk that he had beat the blonde boy.
Next, Naruto’s skin color was a bit more tanned compared to Sasuke’s. But it matched Naruto well. Sasuke had tried to maybe not look so pale, even though it looked alright on him, but he could never get a slight tan. He’d never tell anyone he had failed in such a petty little thing though….
Now, for the last part that was important to every man…… Sasuke started to stare downwards hesitantly to compare the last important part of a boy’s body….. *drip drip drip*
‘Hmmm?’ Sasuke felt something warm drip onto his hand. Sasuke panicked and reached his face to feel he had a bloody nose. ‘What the hell?! Where’d this come from?!’ Guess The Great Sasuke was ignorant about some things too, or chose to ignore the reasons… At least the warm liquid wasn’t from somewhere else.
Sasuke cleaned his nose with some of the clothe he had in his back pouch for emergency injuries. ‘Well, it was a hot day today.’ Sasuke thought. But, he had beaten Naruto, again, in the manhood department… but not by too much.
By this time, Naruto was done with his shower and was dressed again for bed. As Naruto sat down on his bed, he wondered what he would do from the list of things Sakura had mentioned before. He didn’t want to do anything too girly so he decided on…
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Sasuke was outside now, wondering again why he was here. He was acting too strange today that he noticed this long ago. What was he doing? He had watched the blonde boy go shopping for groceries, take off his clothing, Sasuke compared each boy’s body, and now he was staring at the blonde boy sit on his bed to get ready for bed...
‘What was this called?’ Sasuke thought. He pondered about this until he reached the conclusion that he was, sadly, a stalker….
“FIRST GOAL: I HAVE TO GET STRONGER!!! SECOND GOAL: GET EVERYONE IN KONOHA TO ACKKOWLEDGE ME!! THIRD: RAMEN!!! FOURTH: GET THAT BASTARD SASUKE TO ACKNOWLEDGE ME!!! AND LASTLY, BECOME HOKAGE!!!!”
Sasuke smirked at this then the smirk turned into Sasuke laughing. He couldn’t hold in his amusement at the blonde dobe shouting out his goals, and he was one of the goals too! Guess being Naruto’s stalker wasn’t such a bad thing today. He just had to chuckle again…
Naruto shivered in his bed. ‘What was that? That was eerie, I have this odd feeling...’
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Sasuke decided to leave after seeing Naruto sleeping. He had thought about staying to look at the dobe sleep since he didn’t look bad sleeping, but, he had some sleep to get for tomorrow. Kakashi told the boys there was a mission for tomorrow that might be very important. So, Sasuke left his stalking duties and left for his house. Today was an interesting day..
“Oyasumi, dobe.”[2]
TBC
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AHH!! It’s so stressful to watch if anyone votes or reviews. ;_; I am just so nervous about what people thought about the beginning of my story. But I will prevail!! I will not give up even if I get no reviews and if no one votes for my story for it to be a five star story. XD It all depends if I can think up more for my story and how it should develop. =/ and when it gets a little rated R or 17, ‘cuz I accidentally rated it R but it was suppose to be 17, I’m gonna lose my composure. Haha. Hope people will like my story from here on out.
Well, I did get reviews. I’M SO GRATEFULLY HAPPY!!! Thank you everyone for reviewing my first ever fanfic. =D Gives me the great feeling of knowing I can make a story up. All the reviews were nice and constructive. =)
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Some response for my reviewers:
It’s good to know my first attempt was good and people liked it to the extent that someone asked me to e-mail them when i updated.That's just, WOW! I kinda tried not to make Naruto a complete idiot in this chapter but it was hard. I’ll try more in the future. And when it does get to a “juicy part” I will lose my composure but also, I dunno when it should get to the good part, I want some development first ^^” Hope people don’t stop reading because of that!! Lot’s of people commented me on my grammar not being too bad so, thanks! My English teacher would be proud (maybe not about the part with me writing about smut, haha) Finally, I’ll try my hardest to keep the chapters coming and I hope my newest chapter is also as good or better then the first!!
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[1]Okawari- asking for seconds or in Naruto’s case, fourths, fifths and more(of ramen of course)
[2]Oyasumi- good night
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“Okawari!!!!”[1]
This was Naruto’s fourth bowl of ramen. Sasuke was hoping that he wouldn’t have to stay behind to wash the dishes for not being able to pay if Naruto ate too many bowls of ram….
“Okawari!!!!”
‘What the…?! How does Naruto stuff all that ramen down into his stomach?!’
“Hey, usuratonkachi, how many more bowls are you going to have?!” Sasuke said trying to not lose his composure.
“MANY MORE AFTER YOU CALLING ME THAT NAME!!!” shouted a furious Naruto.
“OKAWARI!!!!” Naruto said this with more vigor then the other times because of the insult said by Sasuke.
Sasuke kinda regretted calling Naruto usuratonkachi after that remark. He looked at his wallet again. He was still in the “okay” zone about letting Naruto eat ramen.
‘Well, now I can have some of my quiet time in my head again…’ Sasuke thought. He thought about what he wanted to know about Naruto. Even though Naruto was known all over Konoha, there was actually nothing known to the public about him. Sasuke started to list the things he knew about Naruto.
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Naruto liked ramen, he was loud, obnoxious, he knew where the dobe lived, Naruto was an orphan, he liked ramen……. Sasuke frowned when he couldn’t get past the ramen because that’s the only major thing he really knew about the blonde boy. Maybe the reason why he couldn’t get past the ramen was because at the moment, Naruto was ordering another bowl of ramen to Sasuke’s dismay….
The things Sasuke knew about Naruto didn’t answer why people hated him. But, how would Sasuke find out the answer to this question? ’Damn’ was all Sasuke could think of when he couldn’t solve this problem.
Well, besides wanting to know why people hated Naruto, the blonde boy just seemed amusing to Sasuke. No one really treated Sasuke the way Naruto did. People saw Sasuke as the last of the Uchiha clan, unless you counted Itachi. But he was now dead and even if he still was alive, what right minded rabid fan girl would approach him? (Even if the fan girls were already crazy.)
Not knowing made Sasuke angry that he was lacking in information. He had too much pride to not be able to know about one person in the village he has lived in for his whole life. He told himself he’d do anything to know more about the blonde boy.
“Phew! I’m full!” Naruto shouted. Sasuke was relieved that Naruto was finally finished eating the bowls of ramen. He had eaten… seven bowls of ramen! Sasuke had to make sure he had enough money on him to pay for this… damn Kakashi….
Good, he had barely enough money to pay for the meal…..
“Young man, you don’t have enough for the meal” said the ramen stand owner. “You have to pay for eight bowls of ramen.”
“What are you talking abo…..” ‘Shit, I had my own bowl of ramen too….’ Sasuke had remembered he had eaten one long ago while Naruto was eating his second bowl of ramen. Now he would have to stay to do the dishes to pay for that last bowl of ramen.
“Oji-san! Oji-san, I’ll pay for him!”
This surprised Sasuke until…
“Sasuke, you owe me for this!” Naruto said while paying for the eighth bowl of ramen. Sasuke was irritated with this. He had just paid for seven bowls, while Naruto paid for one bowl! His lip twitched. Sasuke tried to hold back on all the thoughts of hurting Naruto.
“Well, thanks for the meal, Sasuke!! Next time I’ll make sure to beat you again for another night of free meals!’ Naruto smiled. He was really happy to have a full night of free ramen.
The smile made Sasuke forget about hurting Naruto. ‘Money wasn’t of any importance anyways…’ Sasuke thought.
While leaving, Sasuke thought about knowing more about Naruto again. It just bugged him so much! Before he knew it, he was following Naruto back to his apartment without him knowing it.
“Why am I following him?” Sasuke whispered to himself while jumping through the trees and top of houses. ‘Well, since I’m following him and I have nothing else to do……. might as well..’
Sasuke watched Naruto walk into a market from a rooftop of a house.
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Naruto looked through the shelves for more cups of instant ramen. Although he had just had seven bowls of ramen, it didn’t mean he couldn’t buy some for a midnight snack for later on. “Alright!!” There were new flavors of ramen! Naruto loved to try new flavors of ramen.
‘Typical’ Sasuke thought. He ACTUALLY follows the dobe to know more about him and now he just gets to see Naruto buy new flavors of ramen…
Naruto bought some milk and other groceries and went to the register.
“Is that all…?” asked the woman sourly. “It is!” said Naruto enthusiastically. He had gotten use to all the sourness this woman gave him. Every time he went here, she would act the same. He didn’t mind anymore. He thought that if he were to become Hokage, he would have to be nicer to people around him even if they weren’t to him.
“That’ll be $18.23 brat…” said the woman at the register. She smiled sweetly to Naruto this time and it wasn’t because she had a change of heart…
“$18.23?!” Naruto was outraged. Who cares if he was mean now. That was over pricing. ‘It was supposed to be $13.23!!!’ “Why is it so expensive?!”
“Tax! Pay for it or leave without it, I don’t really care which you choose!” said the woman. She was probably enjoying this knowing he’d either starve or she’d be cheating him out of money….
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Sasuke watched outside while listening to bits of the shouts he could hear. This was what he always wondered about. Why did the villagers not like Naruto, he was like every other boy in Konoha. And… the bill was actually supposed to be $12.30…….
Sasuke watched as Naruto just paid the lady for the items purchased and left stomping all the way to his apartment.
Naruto lived in a dingy part of the town. It was still an alright area but, it could have been a little better. Naruto fumbled for his keys and unlocked the door to go inside.
Sasuke leapt onto Naruto’s neighbor’s rooftop to stare into the blonde’s apartment. Naruto’s apartment wasn’t messy like how Sasuke had imagined it. It was actually clean and tidy. ‘Maybe another change over the years?’ It wasn’t decorated at all. It was quite empty... ‘Some people did say that a person’s living quarters showed a person’s personality, but that must have been wrong since Naruto was so enthusiastic about everything.’ Sasuke thought.
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Naruto was exhausted from training today. He was satisfied about the day though. He had beaten Sasuke in a match, gotten a free meal of ramen, AND Sasuke owed him another free meal for him paying for Sasuke’s bowl of ramen. ‘Today was a good day.’ Naruto thought. ‘If more days like these occurred, I’d be even happier about life ahead. Maybe I should tell Sakura about this tomorrow!’
Naruto still held a small spot in his heart for the pink haired girl, though not as strongly in his younger teen years. Maybe a sisterly kinda spot in his heart since he had never had another family member to fill this spot. She was more like a friend now. She had calmed down about being mean to him whenever he was around and his crush on her had died down as well.
---------------Flashback (I hate ‘em)------------------------
Naruto and Sakura talked to each other whenever they had breaks during training. She’d ask him about how he was going to become Hokage one day. This surprised Naruto that she had asked. He didn’t really expect that from her because she didn’t seem too interested in his goals. He guessed they were now friends and smiled widely at this.
“I’ll make everyone acknowledge me!!’ Naruto shouted. That was the only plan he could think of.
Sakura was interested on how the boy could be so enthusiastic about his goals. They seemed impossible for him. Not that he wasn’t strong, she knew he was going to become stronger but everyone in the village hated him except for a select few. Did he have some secret way to push himself to these goals? She was curious.
“Is that all? Do you do anything to push yourself to these goals? Like talk to yourself about them? Write it down in a dia-“
“DIARIES ARE FOR GIRLS!!” Naruto exclaimed. Like hell he would ever be caught writing in a diary. Diaries were for girl secrets, girl thoughts, and girl crushes.
“Fine fine, do you write in a JOURNAL? Shout your goals out to yourself at nights? Anything?”
“Nope! I don’t need to do any of those silly things because I know I will become Hokage without having to do that stuff.” Naruto smiled.
“Well you should try doing some of that sometimes, I think it’d help you even more in your goals!” Sakura said. She genuinely meant it. She had found being friends with the blonde boy was like having a little brother.
--------------End of Flashback (Finally!!)--------
Naruto thought back at these thoughts. He should maybe get a little more serious about becoming Hokage. Maybe tonight he should try one of the things she listed out and if it worked, he’d maybe do one of the other things she had listed. They weren’t so bad to do if he thought about it… just a bit embarrassing. He was alone though, so… ‘What the hey!’ Naruto thought.
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Sasuke watched as the blonde boy walked around in his apartment. Naruto headed for his room and started taking off his clothing and was left with only his black shirt and boxers. It was nothing new to Sasuke after today but, he couldn’t help but blush. ‘Bathrooms are made for a reason, dobe.’ Sasuke said in his head directing it towards the blonde boy. Sasuke just couldn’t stop from making insults, though, most were just to joke, tease, and provoke Naruto for the hell of it.
Sasuke saw Naruto grab for a towel and headed towards another room. ‘Guess that’s his bathroom.’
Sasuke had never really been inside Naruto’s apartment before. Just into the living room or just his doorway was as far as Sasuke had gotten to. ’Maybe I should go inside into Naruto’s apartment for once, I could get to know more about him if we got to sit down and be civil towards each other…..’
Sasuke was now unconsciously staring into Naruto’s bathroom. ‘How’d that happen..?!’ Sasuke was surprised with where he was staring now. ‘Apartments and houses were made for a reason Sasuke, for privacy!’ Sasuke shouted to himself in his head. ‘Whatever, Naruto’s a boy like you are, Sasuke!’ That’s right, Naruto was a boy….so staring wasn’t really anything to worry about, he had the same things Naruto had, so whatever…..
Naruto started taking off his articles of clothing for his shower. ‘Why can’t you keep your clothes on for your shower..?’ Sasuke thought, though his eyes were following the small blonde boy’s movements. They seemed graceful to Sasuke…
“Damn it, why do I always have to have trouble with my clothing!!” shouted Naruto while tumbling around in the bathroom. Guess that’s what you call graceful…
Sasuke stared intently at Naruto taking off his clothes, one by one (which made two, so now Naruto was naked. XD) Sasuke compared many things from him and the blonde boy. His pride and rivalry didn’t stop at just strength.
Sasuke was better built then Naruto but, not to the extremes of being bulky. They both had lean bodies but, if someone were to compare the two, they’d agree Sasuke had a more mature body then Naruto. This made Sasuke smirk that he had beat the blonde boy.
Next, Naruto’s skin color was a bit more tanned compared to Sasuke’s. But it matched Naruto well. Sasuke had tried to maybe not look so pale, even though it looked alright on him, but he could never get a slight tan. He’d never tell anyone he had failed in such a petty little thing though….
Now, for the last part that was important to every man…… Sasuke started to stare downwards hesitantly to compare the last important part of a boy’s body….. *drip drip drip*
‘Hmmm?’ Sasuke felt something warm drip onto his hand. Sasuke panicked and reached his face to feel he had a bloody nose. ‘What the hell?! Where’d this come from?!’ Guess The Great Sasuke was ignorant about some things too, or chose to ignore the reasons… At least the warm liquid wasn’t from somewhere else.
Sasuke cleaned his nose with some of the clothe he had in his back pouch for emergency injuries. ‘Well, it was a hot day today.’ Sasuke thought. But, he had beaten Naruto, again, in the manhood department… but not by too much.
By this time, Naruto was done with his shower and was dressed again for bed. As Naruto sat down on his bed, he wondered what he would do from the list of things Sakura had mentioned before. He didn’t want to do anything too girly so he decided on…
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Sasuke was outside now, wondering again why he was here. He was acting too strange today that he noticed this long ago. What was he doing? He had watched the blonde boy go shopping for groceries, take off his clothing, Sasuke compared each boy’s body, and now he was staring at the blonde boy sit on his bed to get ready for bed...
‘What was this called?’ Sasuke thought. He pondered about this until he reached the conclusion that he was, sadly, a stalker….
“FIRST GOAL: I HAVE TO GET STRONGER!!! SECOND GOAL: GET EVERYONE IN KONOHA TO ACKKOWLEDGE ME!! THIRD: RAMEN!!! FOURTH: GET THAT BASTARD SASUKE TO ACKNOWLEDGE ME!!! AND LASTLY, BECOME HOKAGE!!!!”
Sasuke smirked at this then the smirk turned into Sasuke laughing. He couldn’t hold in his amusement at the blonde dobe shouting out his goals, and he was one of the goals too! Guess being Naruto’s stalker wasn’t such a bad thing today. He just had to chuckle again…
Naruto shivered in his bed. ‘What was that? That was eerie, I have this odd feeling...’
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Sasuke decided to leave after seeing Naruto sleeping. He had thought about staying to look at the dobe sleep since he didn’t look bad sleeping, but, he had some sleep to get for tomorrow. Kakashi told the boys there was a mission for tomorrow that might be very important. So, Sasuke left his stalking duties and left for his house. Today was an interesting day..
“Oyasumi, dobe.”[2]
TBC
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AHH!! It’s so stressful to watch if anyone votes or reviews. ;_; I am just so nervous about what people thought about the beginning of my story. But I will prevail!! I will not give up even if I get no reviews and if no one votes for my story for it to be a five star story. XD It all depends if I can think up more for my story and how it should develop. =/ and when it gets a little rated R or 17, ‘cuz I accidentally rated it R but it was suppose to be 17, I’m gonna lose my composure. Haha. Hope people will like my story from here on out.
Well, I did get reviews. I’M SO GRATEFULLY HAPPY!!! Thank you everyone for reviewing my first ever fanfic. =D Gives me the great feeling of knowing I can make a story up. All the reviews were nice and constructive. =)
My nice nice reviewers list (thank you so much!!):
Rosemary
lo
akuma_river
tallest purple
kashshaptu
hogo-chan
Jenny Rosbäck
Gitona
Some response for my reviewers:
It’s good to know my first attempt was good and people liked it to the extent that someone asked me to e-mail them when i updated.That's just, WOW! I kinda tried not to make Naruto a complete idiot in this chapter but it was hard. I’ll try more in the future. And when it does get to a “juicy part” I will lose my composure but also, I dunno when it should get to the good part, I want some development first ^^” Hope people don’t stop reading because of that!! Lot’s of people commented me on my grammar not being too bad so, thanks! My English teacher would be proud (maybe not about the part with me writing about smut, haha) Finally, I’ll try my hardest to keep the chapters coming and I hope my newest chapter is also as good or better then the first!!
http://www.hochuuami.com/oekaki/pictures/26.png just a picture I drew. Has nothing to do with Naruto.