The Trees Swayed In The Wind
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Category:
Naruto AU/AR › General
Rating:
Adult +
Chapters:
3
Views:
1,017
Reviews:
7
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
Disclaimer:
I do not own Naruto, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
The Shine In My Life
A/N: *bleh* This DID NOT turn out how I wanted it, but it’ll have to be suffice for now, because I’m still brainstorming! Then, maybe I’ll rewrite it, and now, to the important part, I NEED A BETA, I have bad grammar, bad phrases, and bad plot bunnies! So, I need someone w/ experience, vast knowledge above the 20 year-old mine! If you don’t, then it wouldn’t MAKE SENSE! More information will be enclosed through e-mail; e-mail me at asian101prideatyahoodotcom
Disclaimer: I don’t own Naruto, however Kishimoto-san does!
Title: ‘The Day My Eyes Returned’
Author: xthousandtears
Rating: PG … nothing crazy/freaky (yet)
Word count: 447
Pairing: Sasu/Naru
Spoiler warning: You'll have to be up-to-date to episode 135, but otherwise, none, really. I just took Mr. Kishimoto’s plot &implied Sasu/Naru and added accordingly sans my recipe of SasuNaru Fluffness! additional angst.
Summary: Naruto looks out his window for comfort, but only found taunting past memories that bring back hidden demons.
I swore that I’d never love again. Because they weren’t Sasuke. No, never my Sasuke, and that hurt.
NEVER his Sasuke.
Never HIS Sasuke.
Never his SASUKE.
I couldn’t because I could. Because my true love was lost that day. Lost but still lingering painfully between painfully forlorn loneliness and desperate half-hearted anger.
And when that day Sasuke came back, I was having a moment of weakness—something I rarely allow myself. Rarely because crying is a weakness, it's going against everything I've ever known of the Shinobi-Know-Hows and The Code of the Shinobi.
Surely the only reason was to let out a healthy steam of pent-up emotions, a much needed thing for such a shinobi, it’s just so it wouldn’t affect any of his missions, yes.
So that day I left Sasuke. I left without uttering a single word to my lover. Lover… Was that even correct? Had we been lovers? We shared feelings yeah. Though so do normal comrades. But hadn’t we shared more? More, of those beyond friendship, of those cliché ‘sparks and sparkles.’ But maybe it’s just a wronged assumption, because apparently they weren’t enough.
You don’t have to look far to see he is still mourning the loss of a loved one, said loved one Uchiha Sasuke.
So that day I left Sasuke, left our new beginning, letting it viciously crumple at our ‘tree.’ So that day I didn’t look up. Because the day Sasuke left, I had stared back into lonely, sad, pained blue eyes in the mirror again. Those were the eyes I used to try desperately stare into oblivion when I was a child. A child lost in a world without proper love of friends & family.
So when Iruka acknowledged me, I finally lost the edge to the sad eyes-the edge yes, but not completely. But slowly and surely as I gained friends, recognition, and love. But it was only Sasuke that really brought out the shine in my eyes. Everyone noticed, but none decided to comment when they saw Sasuke and I attached to the hip. Those were our nostalgic days, happy and blissfully ignorant of the pending days 'till the battle at The Valley of The End.
But really, he just couldn’t bear it anymore if he let the ‘beginning’ grow, because surely it’d hurt less the less time and feelings were involved, right?
So that day, since that day, my eyes lost their gleam. The shine that even Sasuke aknowledged. That day I didn’t glance at Sasuke because I knew my resolve would crumple and I would forget everything I’d gone through to get it back, ALL of it back, again.
I can’t let Sasuke know that I’ve lost the gleam, to know that I’m just as lonely as before, and I can’t allow that because I love you... Sasuke.
What was life before Sasuke? Not much.
TBC
Thank you guys for reading this piece of shi---------- shittake mushrooms! P Thank you all for the support & reviews! I want to say I appreciate you guys and I will continue to do my best!
Reviews!:
Saki: Interesting fic but it's alittle too short.
xthousandtears: Thank ya! I try to make it interesting too! ^_^ And yes, it's a little short in the first few chapters because some parts just don't fit that well all worked up into one chapter. So, please bear w/ me for a little bit. =P
Agacissko: ya!! me wants mememmeeee!!!! :D its gonna be great fic! dont U dare drop it :P
xthousandtears: I'm honored to receive such adoration for a newbie (well the writting part, that is, but no, not in the world of fanfiction). Thank you for your positive feedback, I will continue this fic!!!! XDXDXD
adri: please continue!!!
xthousandtears: Yes!! I did! muahahaha evil plot muffins! *coffs* Thank you for your support! =)
x-posted: cross posted like crazy! R&R if you likey!
Disclaimer: I don’t own Naruto, however Kishimoto-san does!
Title: ‘The Day My Eyes Returned’
Author: xthousandtears
Rating: PG … nothing crazy/freaky (yet)
Word count: 447
Pairing: Sasu/Naru
Spoiler warning: You'll have to be up-to-date to episode 135, but otherwise, none, really. I just took Mr. Kishimoto’s plot &implied Sasu/Naru and added accordingly sans my recipe of SasuNaru Fluffness! additional angst.
Summary: Naruto looks out his window for comfort, but only found taunting past memories that bring back hidden demons.
I swore that I’d never love again. Because they weren’t Sasuke. No, never my Sasuke, and that hurt.
NEVER his Sasuke.
Never HIS Sasuke.
Never his SASUKE.
I couldn’t because I could. Because my true love was lost that day. Lost but still lingering painfully between painfully forlorn loneliness and desperate half-hearted anger.
And when that day Sasuke came back, I was having a moment of weakness—something I rarely allow myself. Rarely because crying is a weakness, it's going against everything I've ever known of the Shinobi-Know-Hows and The Code of the Shinobi.
Surely the only reason was to let out a healthy steam of pent-up emotions, a much needed thing for such a shinobi, it’s just so it wouldn’t affect any of his missions, yes.
So that day I left Sasuke. I left without uttering a single word to my lover. Lover… Was that even correct? Had we been lovers? We shared feelings yeah. Though so do normal comrades. But hadn’t we shared more? More, of those beyond friendship, of those cliché ‘sparks and sparkles.’ But maybe it’s just a wronged assumption, because apparently they weren’t enough.
You don’t have to look far to see he is still mourning the loss of a loved one, said loved one Uchiha Sasuke.
So that day I left Sasuke, left our new beginning, letting it viciously crumple at our ‘tree.’ So that day I didn’t look up. Because the day Sasuke left, I had stared back into lonely, sad, pained blue eyes in the mirror again. Those were the eyes I used to try desperately stare into oblivion when I was a child. A child lost in a world without proper love of friends & family.
So when Iruka acknowledged me, I finally lost the edge to the sad eyes-the edge yes, but not completely. But slowly and surely as I gained friends, recognition, and love. But it was only Sasuke that really brought out the shine in my eyes. Everyone noticed, but none decided to comment when they saw Sasuke and I attached to the hip. Those were our nostalgic days, happy and blissfully ignorant of the pending days 'till the battle at The Valley of The End.
But really, he just couldn’t bear it anymore if he let the ‘beginning’ grow, because surely it’d hurt less the less time and feelings were involved, right?
So that day, since that day, my eyes lost their gleam. The shine that even Sasuke aknowledged. That day I didn’t glance at Sasuke because I knew my resolve would crumple and I would forget everything I’d gone through to get it back, ALL of it back, again.
I can’t let Sasuke know that I’ve lost the gleam, to know that I’m just as lonely as before, and I can’t allow that because I love you... Sasuke.
What was life before Sasuke? Not much.
TBC
Thank you guys for reading this piece of shi---------- shittake mushrooms! P Thank you all for the support & reviews! I want to say I appreciate you guys and I will continue to do my best!
Reviews!:
Saki: Interesting fic but it's alittle too short.
xthousandtears: Thank ya! I try to make it interesting too! ^_^ And yes, it's a little short in the first few chapters because some parts just don't fit that well all worked up into one chapter. So, please bear w/ me for a little bit. =P
Agacissko: ya!! me wants mememmeeee!!!! :D its gonna be great fic! dont U dare drop it :P
xthousandtears: I'm honored to receive such adoration for a newbie (well the writting part, that is, but no, not in the world of fanfiction). Thank you for your positive feedback, I will continue this fic!!!! XDXDXD
adri: please continue!!!
xthousandtears: Yes!! I did! muahahaha evil plot muffins! *coffs* Thank you for your support! =)
x-posted: cross posted like crazy! R&R if you likey!