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Do Over
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Naruto › Yaoi - Male/Male
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Naruto › Yaoi - Male/Male
Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
17
Views:
1,105
Reviews:
82
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I do not own Naruto, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
Chapter 2
Wow! I recieved 10 reviews. It made me really happy to know that the first chapter of my first fanfiction ever posted was recieved so well. I only hope you enjoy the second chapter as much. So without further ado the Second Chapter.
Disclamer: I don't own Naruto that honor is held by Masashi Kishimoto, I'm just a fanfiction writer doing this for fun
Do Over-Chapter 2
Gaara couldn't help smiling around the peppermint candy stick he had been sucking on as he watched in amusement as his blonde boyfriend started doing a little victory dance. "Naruto...? What are you doing?" They had both just exited the Assembly Hall and were on their way to their first class.
Naruto paused in mid-step. "Can't you tell?" he asked as he grinned widely. "No Orochimaru, the Snake Bastard, this year!" he whooped in excitement. The blonde had learned along with Gaara during the Opening Ceremony that Orochimaru, the Science teacher that everyone at the school hated, wouldn't be returning to school this year due to a prior commitment. It was something apparently the Snake couldn't get out of so therefore he was resigning his teaching position. The rumor to the contrary however was that the Snake Bastard had finally gone too far in his perverted ways with a student and was getting sacked because of it, and the school in an effort at trying to maintain their reputation had demanded Orochimaru resign immediately.
Gaara rolled his eyes at the remark, "You just don't want that bastard groping you again."
Naruto shuddered at the remembered caresses he'd experienced from 'The Snake.' "Eww.... Don't remind me... I had to switch classes because of him."
Gaara chuckled, "And you’re complaining...." Naruto frowned at the remark and turned to stomp off, pissed at Gaara's comment. Sighing in defeat, Gaara grabbed Naruto's upper arm before he could leave and pulled him into his arms. "Hey..." he kissed Naruto gently on the nose, "I was just joking." When the blonde still refused to face him Gaara took matters into his own hands and grabbed Naruto's chin to force his boyfriend to look at him. "Look...I'm sorry. I know how much you hated that Bastard. Remember I hated him too...or did you forget a certain someone getting a week’s suspension because he punched said Snake Bastard out when he was caught groping that certain someone's boyfriend's fine ass?" Gaara chuckled at the red flush that infused Naruto's cheeks at the memory.
"You’re right..." Naruto chucked and leaned up to kiss his boyfriend's lips gently. "Orochimaru is a bastard and..." he winked at Gaara, "you...my delectable knight in shining armor...deserve a reward for your efforts." Leaning in, he kissed Gaara's lips more forcibly this time causing the taller boy to groan in desire as he wrapped his arms around the blonde and kissed him back. Neither noticed the growling visage of a enraged Sasuke as he noticed the two kissing again.
"Aren't they cute?" Sasuke turned at the voice ready to punch whoever it was for their unwanted comment, only to notice that instead of Shikamaru he was confronted this time by his old best friend. Kankurou ignored the Uchiha's glare in favor of watching his brother, Gaara, making out with the almost too cute he could be a girl, Naruto. "So...I heard from Shikamaru...that you had returned," Kankurou sneered, "but never realized you had the balls to..." He turned his frowning eyes on the brunette, "So why exactly...DID you return?"
Sasuke brows rose mockingly at the remarks, "That should be obvious..."
Kankurou snorted in disbelief, "Fuck the dramatics..." He poked Sasuke in the chest to emphasis his words. "You know as well as I do... that if you had really cared about Naruto... you wouldn't have left him." Sasuke had the foresight to know when he was wrong but refused to show it in front of Kankurou.
"Why should you care anyway, Kankurou?" Sasuke shrugged, "This has nothing to do with you." He felt he had pointed out the obvious only to see Kankurou smile sarcastically at the remark.
"Oh, that's where your wrong Uchiha. My brother," he pointed out Gaara to emphasis his own point, "is his boyfriend. And for once he's actually acting normal instead of the psychotic mess he can be." He pushed at Sasuke causing the brunette to growl in anger. "So YOU...aren't going to fuck it up!"
Sasuke's eyes narrowed at first but then widened in realization, "Wait! Did you say brother?" He turned in shock to look at Gaara, "I thought you said he was in Military School?"
Kankurou shrugged his shoulders, "He was..., but he got kicked out when he almost beat a kid to death." He sighed, "So the only place that was willing take him now was a public school."
"Shit!" Sasuke paused to run a hand through his hair in exasperation. "Out of all the fucking schools...and he's Naruto's boyfriend..." He shook his head in surprise, "I didn't think the dobe would be stupid enough to actually go out with someone like him."
Kankurou frowned at that, "I wouldn't talk trash Uchiha. You've done worse... Besides," he smirked, "Naruto's been good for Gaara. Because of that ‘dobe,’ as you like to call him, my brother’s stopped smoking and instead sucks on peppermint sticks all day." He continued to smirk, "Fuck...it’s even been over a year since he last attacked a fellow student. He also," Kankurou leaned close to whisper this, "wakes up EVERY morning...and makes Naruto and himself a bento."
Sasuke turned to look at the redhead in surprise, now noticing that the two had stopped kissing and had starting walking again. Sasuke moved to follow after them, only to feel a restraining hand on his arm. He turned to throw off Kankurou's hand and watched as he shook his head in the negative, "Just DON’T..."
At this point Sasuke was pissed and beyond wanting to listen anymore about other people's opinions. "Listen, Suna... I still love Naruto. And, yes, we haven't spoken it three years, but I intend to make up for that..."
"And how do you plan on doing that, Uchiha? Naruto's not exactly in the forgiving mood when it comes to you. In fact..." Kankurou smirked as he crossed his arms, "he hates your guts."
Sasuke chuckled harshly as he was reminded again of his broken relationship with Naruto that had been caused by the betrayal of his once trusted friend, Kisame, "I'll start by telling him the truth Kankurou. He deserves that if nothing else..."
Kankurou frowned in confusion at Sasuke's words, "What do you mean, Uchiha?"
Sasuke sighed before telling Kankurou briefly of how his one time manager and trusted friend, Kisame, had hidden all the letters Naruto and he had sent to each other, and that it had been Kisame's idea all along to break up their relationship so that Sasuke could gain more of a fanbase being single than he would have ever gotten if he had stayed with Naruto. Kisame had gone as far as to forge a letter to Naruto, saying it was from Sasuke, telling Naruto that he wanted to break up. The Uchiha had heard none of this, he had only seen Naruto's farewell letter telling him that he agreed and that he too never wanted to see him again. It was only recently that he found all the letters Kisame had hidden, even the overdraft of the “Farewell Letter” he'd written himself in Sasuke's handwriting.
"That bastard..." Kankurou paused to calm down after hearing what Kisame had done to Sasuke and Naruto. "I understand why you'd want to try getting back together," he paused again, "but Naruto is happy now. As much as I value our past friendship Sasuke, I can't let you ruin their happiness."
"I'm not giving up." Sasuke stated firm in his resolve, "I still love him, and I mean to prove it to him."
Thats the End of Chapter Two, I realize it maybe a little short so I will try to work on the length in future chapters. As for Chapter Three it should be coming out hopefully within a week from now.
I hope you continue to review, since I would love to hear your opinions on how the story is going for you. Also thanks to LadyChimera for her Beta help, its very much appreciated. JaNe for now
Disclamer: I don't own Naruto that honor is held by Masashi Kishimoto, I'm just a fanfiction writer doing this for fun
Do Over-Chapter 2
Gaara couldn't help smiling around the peppermint candy stick he had been sucking on as he watched in amusement as his blonde boyfriend started doing a little victory dance. "Naruto...? What are you doing?" They had both just exited the Assembly Hall and were on their way to their first class.
Naruto paused in mid-step. "Can't you tell?" he asked as he grinned widely. "No Orochimaru, the Snake Bastard, this year!" he whooped in excitement. The blonde had learned along with Gaara during the Opening Ceremony that Orochimaru, the Science teacher that everyone at the school hated, wouldn't be returning to school this year due to a prior commitment. It was something apparently the Snake couldn't get out of so therefore he was resigning his teaching position. The rumor to the contrary however was that the Snake Bastard had finally gone too far in his perverted ways with a student and was getting sacked because of it, and the school in an effort at trying to maintain their reputation had demanded Orochimaru resign immediately.
Gaara rolled his eyes at the remark, "You just don't want that bastard groping you again."
Naruto shuddered at the remembered caresses he'd experienced from 'The Snake.' "Eww.... Don't remind me... I had to switch classes because of him."
Gaara chuckled, "And you’re complaining...." Naruto frowned at the remark and turned to stomp off, pissed at Gaara's comment. Sighing in defeat, Gaara grabbed Naruto's upper arm before he could leave and pulled him into his arms. "Hey..." he kissed Naruto gently on the nose, "I was just joking." When the blonde still refused to face him Gaara took matters into his own hands and grabbed Naruto's chin to force his boyfriend to look at him. "Look...I'm sorry. I know how much you hated that Bastard. Remember I hated him too...or did you forget a certain someone getting a week’s suspension because he punched said Snake Bastard out when he was caught groping that certain someone's boyfriend's fine ass?" Gaara chuckled at the red flush that infused Naruto's cheeks at the memory.
"You’re right..." Naruto chucked and leaned up to kiss his boyfriend's lips gently. "Orochimaru is a bastard and..." he winked at Gaara, "you...my delectable knight in shining armor...deserve a reward for your efforts." Leaning in, he kissed Gaara's lips more forcibly this time causing the taller boy to groan in desire as he wrapped his arms around the blonde and kissed him back. Neither noticed the growling visage of a enraged Sasuke as he noticed the two kissing again.
"Aren't they cute?" Sasuke turned at the voice ready to punch whoever it was for their unwanted comment, only to notice that instead of Shikamaru he was confronted this time by his old best friend. Kankurou ignored the Uchiha's glare in favor of watching his brother, Gaara, making out with the almost too cute he could be a girl, Naruto. "So...I heard from Shikamaru...that you had returned," Kankurou sneered, "but never realized you had the balls to..." He turned his frowning eyes on the brunette, "So why exactly...DID you return?"
Sasuke brows rose mockingly at the remarks, "That should be obvious..."
Kankurou snorted in disbelief, "Fuck the dramatics..." He poked Sasuke in the chest to emphasis his words. "You know as well as I do... that if you had really cared about Naruto... you wouldn't have left him." Sasuke had the foresight to know when he was wrong but refused to show it in front of Kankurou.
"Why should you care anyway, Kankurou?" Sasuke shrugged, "This has nothing to do with you." He felt he had pointed out the obvious only to see Kankurou smile sarcastically at the remark.
"Oh, that's where your wrong Uchiha. My brother," he pointed out Gaara to emphasis his own point, "is his boyfriend. And for once he's actually acting normal instead of the psychotic mess he can be." He pushed at Sasuke causing the brunette to growl in anger. "So YOU...aren't going to fuck it up!"
Sasuke's eyes narrowed at first but then widened in realization, "Wait! Did you say brother?" He turned in shock to look at Gaara, "I thought you said he was in Military School?"
Kankurou shrugged his shoulders, "He was..., but he got kicked out when he almost beat a kid to death." He sighed, "So the only place that was willing take him now was a public school."
"Shit!" Sasuke paused to run a hand through his hair in exasperation. "Out of all the fucking schools...and he's Naruto's boyfriend..." He shook his head in surprise, "I didn't think the dobe would be stupid enough to actually go out with someone like him."
Kankurou frowned at that, "I wouldn't talk trash Uchiha. You've done worse... Besides," he smirked, "Naruto's been good for Gaara. Because of that ‘dobe,’ as you like to call him, my brother’s stopped smoking and instead sucks on peppermint sticks all day." He continued to smirk, "Fuck...it’s even been over a year since he last attacked a fellow student. He also," Kankurou leaned close to whisper this, "wakes up EVERY morning...and makes Naruto and himself a bento."
Sasuke turned to look at the redhead in surprise, now noticing that the two had stopped kissing and had starting walking again. Sasuke moved to follow after them, only to feel a restraining hand on his arm. He turned to throw off Kankurou's hand and watched as he shook his head in the negative, "Just DON’T..."
At this point Sasuke was pissed and beyond wanting to listen anymore about other people's opinions. "Listen, Suna... I still love Naruto. And, yes, we haven't spoken it three years, but I intend to make up for that..."
"And how do you plan on doing that, Uchiha? Naruto's not exactly in the forgiving mood when it comes to you. In fact..." Kankurou smirked as he crossed his arms, "he hates your guts."
Sasuke chuckled harshly as he was reminded again of his broken relationship with Naruto that had been caused by the betrayal of his once trusted friend, Kisame, "I'll start by telling him the truth Kankurou. He deserves that if nothing else..."
Kankurou frowned in confusion at Sasuke's words, "What do you mean, Uchiha?"
Sasuke sighed before telling Kankurou briefly of how his one time manager and trusted friend, Kisame, had hidden all the letters Naruto and he had sent to each other, and that it had been Kisame's idea all along to break up their relationship so that Sasuke could gain more of a fanbase being single than he would have ever gotten if he had stayed with Naruto. Kisame had gone as far as to forge a letter to Naruto, saying it was from Sasuke, telling Naruto that he wanted to break up. The Uchiha had heard none of this, he had only seen Naruto's farewell letter telling him that he agreed and that he too never wanted to see him again. It was only recently that he found all the letters Kisame had hidden, even the overdraft of the “Farewell Letter” he'd written himself in Sasuke's handwriting.
"That bastard..." Kankurou paused to calm down after hearing what Kisame had done to Sasuke and Naruto. "I understand why you'd want to try getting back together," he paused again, "but Naruto is happy now. As much as I value our past friendship Sasuke, I can't let you ruin their happiness."
"I'm not giving up." Sasuke stated firm in his resolve, "I still love him, and I mean to prove it to him."
Thats the End of Chapter Two, I realize it maybe a little short so I will try to work on the length in future chapters. As for Chapter Three it should be coming out hopefully within a week from now.
I hope you continue to review, since I would love to hear your opinions on how the story is going for you. Also thanks to LadyChimera for her Beta help, its very much appreciated. JaNe for now