Breath
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Naruto › Yaoi - Male/Male
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Adult +
Chapters:
2
Views:
985
Reviews:
4
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Currently Reading:
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Chapter 2
Dear god, its been ages since I last posted anything!!!!!!!!!!
My life has been so busy of late that i'm coming home and just going to bed, i'm that tired! I've got a new job that eats up all my time so i've not really had much time to write or even draw!!! ~cries~
On a high point i'm off to Tokyo on the 23/11/07 aka this friday!!!! so i've got what...16? hours to kill in the plane so i'm going to try and write down a couple of chapters, not just for this, but my other stories as well!
To those wonderful people who reviewed the last chapter ~Ilene, Shizuka, lonelylulaby and spoon~ I can only say thank you!
I'm not too happy with this chapter, i just sat down last night a wrote what was going around in my head so it is a total rough draft... i don't think its been spellchecked or anything either...
So please, please, please tell me what you liked/diliked about this chpter so i can fix it!!!
Comments, criticism and such are very, very welcome and appreciated!
~~~~~
Torches circled the walls, the flames soft and ominous. Most of the light came off the statue in the centre of the room which the Akatsuki were crowded around. The dead-looking grey stone was covered in shifting shadows that almost made it look like it was breathing.
A pained gasp finally escaped the blond jinchuuriki, but it was hours after the ceremony had begun. For almost three days he had remained silent were other, supposedly stronger containers had broken down and begged for mercy or had gone insane.
Several sets of eyes swung towards the battered figure bound and chained on the stone alter before the monstrous statue. The fox’s own kunai nailed him to the stone, the strong metal impaled the blond through his wrists and the soft backs of his heels. The skin had healed around the metal and the blood present was the only indicator that it had been done recently, it was still a fresh ruby red.
It had been Itachi who had impaled the loud-moth blond. He had smiled while he slowly pushed the sharp blades though the struggling boy.
The air of the enclosed cave was heavy with chakra. The remaining Akatsuki could feel it pulsing around them, as steady as a heartbeat, but much more ominous…
It almost felt like the mountain they were hidden in was alive.
Blood coloured eyes glittered like demonic jewels in the grey light, a tiny smile curled the edges of thin lips as Uchiha Itachi watched the Fûin Jutsu: Genryû Kyû Fûjin do its work.
For years he had been trying to capture the youth who now lay on the altar before him. For years the blond, dead last had outsmarted the elder supposed prodigy. There had been so many almost captures, but in the end the brat had always managed to somehow get away. The title of Number-One Most Surprising Ninja in Konoha suited him.
When Itachi had finally learned of the blond’s lineage, it had all begun to make some sense to the kin-slayer. The only child of the Yondaime, Namikaze Minato and Uzumaki Kushina.
The resemblance now made sense to the dark haired man who had often wondered why the idiotic village could not see past the demon guise they had given the boy.
In the end, all it had taken for the kitsune to come running into their trap was the false information leaked to one of the pervert sannin’s informants about his foolish ototo.
He could not have expected that Sasuke would actually be in the small border village, or that he would think it a good idea to take the blond as bait to lure in Itachi.
What had happened in that small hotel room after Pein and Itachi walked in on Sasuke and Naruto would likely remain vivid in their memories for years to come.
~~~~~
Hours had past since the beast had risen, eight of the nine eyes on the blindfold glowed, this was something that had never happened before but they paid it no attention.
None of them really knew what would happen when they collected the nine. The statue was merely a means to capture and hold them until the group had finalised a way to truly control the demons strength.
Beneath them the ground suddenly lurched and several of the members stumbled. The bit in the statues mouth fell to the floor and shattered, the crash echoed through the room as the earth once again shook beneath their feet.
No ghostly dragons emerged from the monsters mouth; there was nothing but darkness within that gaping maw.
Panicked muttering broke the heavy silence as they felt the felt the demonic chakra beginning to seep out of the stone and curl around the prone body on the stone alter like a nest of snakes.
“Is it meant to be doing that?” the soft voice of Konan rang out as the demonic chakra began to solidify around the blond boy.
Looking over towards their auburn haired leader, Itachi saw a small frown marring Pein’s face, “This has never…”
Whatever he had been about died on his lips as the blond jinchuuriki’s eyes flew open and he let out an ear splitting shriek.
All at once the demonic chakra that had been seeping from the statue pulsed and as the blond’s body arched in pain, it slammed into him.
There was a moment of pure fear as Itachi watched this, then the aftershock hit him and the others. The last thing he saw before he the darkness fully engulfed him was the younger blond’s body ripping free of the restraints and a pair of slit vermilion eyes staring back at him.
~~~~~
The great Kyuubi no Kitsune lay against the bars of the cage that had held it prisoner for nineteen long years. Red eyes watched in a mixture of sorrow and pure rage as the world built around it broke into scrap metal and rubble.
Destruction was something the great beast had always enjoyed especially if it was the cause, but this… this was something else.
This was the end.
Slowly, the fox began to struggle to its feet. There was nothing it could do and it knew it, but that had never before stopped the demon from trying. That was one of the many things that it had noticed that it shared with its prison.
Taking a step back the fox twisted with all its power and crashed its nine long tails into the bars; they did not even shudder.
Again and again it slammed the tails that had once been able to crumble mountains and create tsunami’s into the bars and still noting happened.
Pausing for a moment, the fox rotated its long ears. There at the very edge of its senses it could hear the soft fall of footsteps that could only belong to one person.
Pulling back the ancient fox began to body slam the bars, it knew why the brat was coming and did not want to except that there was no way out of this other then what it knew the boy would propose.
~~~~~
Thank you for reading, please review!!!
My life has been so busy of late that i'm coming home and just going to bed, i'm that tired! I've got a new job that eats up all my time so i've not really had much time to write or even draw!!! ~cries~
On a high point i'm off to Tokyo on the 23/11/07 aka this friday!!!! so i've got what...16? hours to kill in the plane so i'm going to try and write down a couple of chapters, not just for this, but my other stories as well!
To those wonderful people who reviewed the last chapter ~Ilene, Shizuka, lonelylulaby and spoon~ I can only say thank you!
I'm not too happy with this chapter, i just sat down last night a wrote what was going around in my head so it is a total rough draft... i don't think its been spellchecked or anything either...
So please, please, please tell me what you liked/diliked about this chpter so i can fix it!!!
Comments, criticism and such are very, very welcome and appreciated!
~~~~~
Torches circled the walls, the flames soft and ominous. Most of the light came off the statue in the centre of the room which the Akatsuki were crowded around. The dead-looking grey stone was covered in shifting shadows that almost made it look like it was breathing.
A pained gasp finally escaped the blond jinchuuriki, but it was hours after the ceremony had begun. For almost three days he had remained silent were other, supposedly stronger containers had broken down and begged for mercy or had gone insane.
Several sets of eyes swung towards the battered figure bound and chained on the stone alter before the monstrous statue. The fox’s own kunai nailed him to the stone, the strong metal impaled the blond through his wrists and the soft backs of his heels. The skin had healed around the metal and the blood present was the only indicator that it had been done recently, it was still a fresh ruby red.
It had been Itachi who had impaled the loud-moth blond. He had smiled while he slowly pushed the sharp blades though the struggling boy.
The air of the enclosed cave was heavy with chakra. The remaining Akatsuki could feel it pulsing around them, as steady as a heartbeat, but much more ominous…
It almost felt like the mountain they were hidden in was alive.
Blood coloured eyes glittered like demonic jewels in the grey light, a tiny smile curled the edges of thin lips as Uchiha Itachi watched the Fûin Jutsu: Genryû Kyû Fûjin do its work.
For years he had been trying to capture the youth who now lay on the altar before him. For years the blond, dead last had outsmarted the elder supposed prodigy. There had been so many almost captures, but in the end the brat had always managed to somehow get away. The title of Number-One Most Surprising Ninja in Konoha suited him.
When Itachi had finally learned of the blond’s lineage, it had all begun to make some sense to the kin-slayer. The only child of the Yondaime, Namikaze Minato and Uzumaki Kushina.
The resemblance now made sense to the dark haired man who had often wondered why the idiotic village could not see past the demon guise they had given the boy.
In the end, all it had taken for the kitsune to come running into their trap was the false information leaked to one of the pervert sannin’s informants about his foolish ototo.
He could not have expected that Sasuke would actually be in the small border village, or that he would think it a good idea to take the blond as bait to lure in Itachi.
What had happened in that small hotel room after Pein and Itachi walked in on Sasuke and Naruto would likely remain vivid in their memories for years to come.
~~~~~
Hours had past since the beast had risen, eight of the nine eyes on the blindfold glowed, this was something that had never happened before but they paid it no attention.
None of them really knew what would happen when they collected the nine. The statue was merely a means to capture and hold them until the group had finalised a way to truly control the demons strength.
Beneath them the ground suddenly lurched and several of the members stumbled. The bit in the statues mouth fell to the floor and shattered, the crash echoed through the room as the earth once again shook beneath their feet.
No ghostly dragons emerged from the monsters mouth; there was nothing but darkness within that gaping maw.
Panicked muttering broke the heavy silence as they felt the felt the demonic chakra beginning to seep out of the stone and curl around the prone body on the stone alter like a nest of snakes.
“Is it meant to be doing that?” the soft voice of Konan rang out as the demonic chakra began to solidify around the blond boy.
Looking over towards their auburn haired leader, Itachi saw a small frown marring Pein’s face, “This has never…”
Whatever he had been about died on his lips as the blond jinchuuriki’s eyes flew open and he let out an ear splitting shriek.
All at once the demonic chakra that had been seeping from the statue pulsed and as the blond’s body arched in pain, it slammed into him.
There was a moment of pure fear as Itachi watched this, then the aftershock hit him and the others. The last thing he saw before he the darkness fully engulfed him was the younger blond’s body ripping free of the restraints and a pair of slit vermilion eyes staring back at him.
~~~~~
The great Kyuubi no Kitsune lay against the bars of the cage that had held it prisoner for nineteen long years. Red eyes watched in a mixture of sorrow and pure rage as the world built around it broke into scrap metal and rubble.
Destruction was something the great beast had always enjoyed especially if it was the cause, but this… this was something else.
This was the end.
Slowly, the fox began to struggle to its feet. There was nothing it could do and it knew it, but that had never before stopped the demon from trying. That was one of the many things that it had noticed that it shared with its prison.
Taking a step back the fox twisted with all its power and crashed its nine long tails into the bars; they did not even shudder.
Again and again it slammed the tails that had once been able to crumble mountains and create tsunami’s into the bars and still noting happened.
Pausing for a moment, the fox rotated its long ears. There at the very edge of its senses it could hear the soft fall of footsteps that could only belong to one person.
Pulling back the ancient fox began to body slam the bars, it knew why the brat was coming and did not want to except that there was no way out of this other then what it knew the boy would propose.
~~~~~
Thank you for reading, please review!!!