One Rainy Night

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msuzumaki: sorry if it seemed harsh but i'm quite a direct person... so if i'm pissed there's no way for me to disguise it as if nothing was wrong... not in my nature... XD

kinai26: really? that means I have to write when I'm pissed? probably everyone's gonna die then XD will see about more than three chapters...

A/N: ATTENTION!!! YAOI AHEAD!!! IF YOU DON'T LIKE IT THEN DON'T READ IT!!!
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The One Time

Naruto was still tossing and turning in his fever. His eyes were shut tightly, his teeth clenched. Droplets of sweat were running down his strong neck. His hands were clawing at the hard floor.

It didn't take long for the whimpers to come.

The red eyes switched from watching the cold, grey outside world to the pathetic body lying on the hard, stony ground. Only moments later the eyes noticed the drops of perspiration running down the throat of the blond.

The eyes watched every single move the body made. The fingers clawing at the floor, the head tossing and turning, sweat everywhere, and those hips! They were the most ensnaring thing there was at the panting boy. They were jerking and thrusting forward in a seductive way the eyes had never seen before.

And suddenly there was a certain gleam in those eyes that couldn't be mistaken for what it was.

The body that belonged to the eyes moved forward stealthily, not making a sound.

Suddenly Naruto turned to lay on his side, his eyes narrowed, one hand still clawing at the floor while the other was rubbing at his stomach looking as if he wanted to massage away some pain.

Immediately the body with the red eyes halted in its movements and stopped breathing altogether.

One wrong move and his intention could be lost.

But the blond didn't seem to wake so the person continued his silent sneaking.

In front of the blond the body went down onto its knees and stared at the other lustfully.

When the person was just about to touch him, the blond's eyes fluttered open.

Cerulean blue eyes looked around disorientated. When they focused on the red ones above him they widened in disbelief.

“Sas” Naruto began, but was interrupted by a hot mouth. A needy tongue was stroking the blond's bottom lip.

Naruto let out a yelp of surprise and his eyes widened in shock when the other was biting down on his lip. He opened his mouth automatically so the wanton tongue slipped through to roam freely in Naruto's cavern.

Naruto would have let out a shriek but it was muffled by the needy lips on his.

He couldn't do much to prevent Sasuke from turning him to lay down on his back again so that the red eyed teen could climb atop him.

Naruto laid one of his hands on the other's shoulder and tried to push him away but to no avail.

Without hesitation Sasuke snatched Naruto's hand away from his shoulder and held it down together with the other above the blond's head. Naruto tried to stop him but it was pointless.

The fever had weakened him too much.

The other hand of the dark-haired teen that was not occupied was opening the orange vest hastily and pulled it aside. After that he pushed up the black shirt to slide his hand along Naruto's taunt skin. It didn't escape Sasuke's notice that the skin was twitching expectantly and he couldn't help a smug smirk although it was hidden by the lips he still kissed passionately.

The Uchiha's mouth wandered away from Naruto's lips, along his jawline and down his throat with only some sucks and licks here and there to tease the sensitive skin eliciting goosebumps. Upon notice another smirk crossed Sasuke's face.

Naruto wanted to object something but at that moment the other had latched himself onto the blond's jugular.

Instead of protest a loud gasp exited the blond's mouth. Unconsciously he moved his head aside to give the brunette more room to work on, this time a moan escaping his lips.

Encouraged and obsessed with the desire to hear more of those moans Sasuke pried Naruto's legs apart to lay down between them. He was delighted by the fact that he could feel something akin to arousal between the blond's legs.

“Sasuke... Stop...” Naruto said, but didn't do anything to actually restrain the other.

Maybe it was due to the fact that Sasuke's lower body had made contact with Naruto's groin and was shooting pleasant vibes throughout his whole body.

Another moan exited the blond's lips but he was biting down on them as to not make another sound. It was just too embarrassing.

However, suddenly Naruto felt something warm and wet at his ear, licking and nibbling at it with passion.

Not wanting to show his arousal he could only bite down harder but it didn't help to hide his moan completely.

While he had been trying to ignore his obvious feelings Naruto hadn't noticed Sasuke's hand travelling downwards towards his groin.

When it reached the waistband of the blond's black trousers his eyes widened in knowing shock. He bucked and turned in hopes of getting rid of Sasuke but it was no use. The restraining hand and his weakened state were enough for him to be overpowered by the dark haired teen.

The blond noticed too late that he was wearing himself out with trying to get rid of Sasuke. He was already panting in exhaustion. Thus it was easy for Sasuke to cup Naruto's manhood.

Naruto's resolve broke away immediately. The next moan was breaking out of him like no other had before that.

The hot feeling the hand touching him evoked in him was too much to bear even though he didn't want to show how much he liked being touched by Sasuke.

But deep down inside Naruto knew that that was wrong. He couldn't like being touched by Sasuke in such a way. He would leave him and if Naruto liked being touched by him it would break his heart being left behind.

Sasuke started with soft rubs while he was again sucking hard at the boys jugular.

Finally Naruto let his eyes close, clenching them tightly, moaning out loud now, having no restraints any more.

The hot, lava like feeling coursing through his body, starting at his loins and throat were playing havoc in him. He couldn't stop himself any more from wanting Sasuke to continue.

He arched into the brunette's touch, but was disappointed when the hand on his groin and the lips on his neck suddenly disappeared.

Hazy blue eyes opened to lock with crimson ones. Only subconsciously did he notice that Sasuke was getting rid of his clothes, too caught up in the hot, red pool of desire the other's eyes were.

Once the brunette was done he lowered himself again between Naruto's legs.

Again those soft lips sought out his, his head held in place by a hand. Immediately his eyes fell shut again and he completely devoted himself to the passionate kiss.

One hand was stroking the blond's side, the other was slowly making its path down from his throat to one of the already erect nipples.

As soon as the hand reached its destination Naruto bucked and let out a wanton moan, Sasuke's lips moving down to tease the other.

As soon as the hot cavern closed around the nub Naruto threw his head back, his eyes shot open and he almost growled in lust.

Sasuke looked up to look straight into Naruto's needy eyes.

It was as if the blond's eyes were catching him because Sasuke was drawing close again to once again taste the hot pool of Naruto's mouth.

While doing that the hand that had stroked his side was moving to get under him towards the blonde's tight, muscled arse.

But before it came to rest upon it he pulled Naruto some way up the floor to be able to slide his trousers and boxers down with the other hand.

As soon as the blond's back hit the floor he moaned because of the cold stone floor, but the next moan that exited his mouth was due to the impudent hand that had slipped over his ass, groping it and getting the feel of it while Naruto was almost done for.

He knew he wouldn't last for much longer although they hadn't come to the important thing yet.

Nevertheless a slick tongue playing with his nipples let him forget about that and he was again deeply immersed in the world of pleasure.

He immediately accepted the pushing fingers on his mouth and began to suck them like his life depended on it.

It didn't take long for the fingers to retreat and disappear from Naruto's notice but only a short time after they appeared at his arse again, searching for the entrance between his cheeks. Once found one finger immediately began circling the ring of muscles and dipped in slightly.

Naruto's head shot back in pleasure, hands gripped the other's shoulder.

“Sasuke!” He moaned out loud. “Hurry!”

It was getting close for the blond and he wanted to feel the other.

Seemingly encouraged by the other the finger slipped in completely.

It hurt. A burning feeling was awakened in his ass and it didn't go away. His muscles clenched to stop any further intrusion but it didn't make the pain go away.

Naruto whimpered slightly.

A nipping feeling suddenly appeared at his hip.

Naruto managed to open his eyes some to look down.

The image he saw was almost enough for him to cum.

Sasuke's head on his hip, his tongue out licking at it only centimetres away from his dripping erection.

Oh, what would Naruto give for the brunette's mouth sucking at a more needy place! To end this! To end this torture!

But unfortunately that didn't happen.

And then the finger began moving inside of him. Naruto let his head fall back again, his eyes clenching shut tightly and a throaty moan escaping his lips.

How he wanted for this to end! But how he wanted for this to continue at the same time.

This slow torture was killing him from the inside.

If he didn't get his release soon he would explode.

And then it became almost unbearable because suddenly Naruto saw stars when Sasuke stroked over one certain sensitive spot. He didn't even know that something like this existed but the heat and desire that little stroke had ignited in him made him want to burst. To show Sasuke just how much he wanted him.

His muscles were already clenching around that one finger.

Seeing that Naruto was too far gone to notice anything Sasuke added another finger. The tight ring of muscles immediately closed around him and yet another pained whimper escaped the blond.

The brunette looked up from the hip to look into Naruto's painfully clenched features. One decision made he lowered himself again.

The pain was merciless. Who knew this could be this excruciating, even in the throes of passion. Not even that special spot seemed to work any longer!

He wanted the fingers to be out of him! He didn't care if Sasuke didn't agree with him, but it hurt!

Suddenly something wet was touching the blond's cock.

Naruto immediately forgot about the pain and moaned, arching into that delightful touch. Rapidly, the uncertain licks turned into something more demanding and he swallowed the blond's member, humming until he was writhing and whining under Sasuke and the fingers could move again without hurting the boy.

Unnoticed by Naruto Sasuke slid another finger in, moving it. Naruto couldn't do much more than moan and arch into the touch, wanting more by the second.

He was going to explode, and that soon...

But before that could truly happen the mouth and the fingers vanished.

Whimpering at the loss Naruto managed to open his eyes only to see Sasuke readying himself. He pushed the legs of the blond farther apart and put one of it over his shoulder to get better access. He tenderly stroked the inside of Naruto's thighs.

And then the brunette began to enter him.

Naruto's eyes closed immediately, clenching due to the pain of the intrusion, his muscles not letting the other's manhood in much.

However, soft nipping at his jugular and teasing his nipples let him to relax slightly so that Sasuke could bury himself deeper.

It took some time to get the blond to accept him completely but a passionate and mind blowing kiss distracted Naruto enough for him to enter fully.

He waited for the blond to adjust completely before he set a slow rhythm. Searching for the pleasure point he had found previously, he gave some experimental thrusts pulling back out slightly only to enter him again.

Where was Naruto's pleasure point?

And then the blond threw his head back, growling out in desire.

Sasuke knew at once that he had found it.

Now nothing was restraining him.

He could pound into the hot, needy body beneath him without having to worry that he would hurt him.

He quickened his pace and hit the other's spot every time, a soft layer of sweat covering them.

Naruto began growling in pleasure, his hands long since gone into Sasuke's hair and onto his shoulders, clawing at him and digging into the brunette.

While one hand was supporting Sasuke, the other was sneaking down Naruto's body towards his dick.

He took a firm hold of it, making Naruto growl and moan even louder, and began stroking it simultaneously to his hard thrusts.

Sasuke felt the tight passage around him start to clench even stronger.

He knew Naruto was not far away from his orgasm so he sped up even more.

One passionate kiss and the blond spent himself all over their stomachs and Sasuke's hand.

The muscles clenched one last, strong time, almost taking the brunette with him over the cliff of pure bliss, but Sasuke managed to hold back, thrusting even harder and deeper into Naruto, staring deep in the blue eyes, almost as if to hypnotize him.

Just a short moment before Sasuke climaxed, he fixed his eyes on Naruto's jugular, canines having extended for about two centimetres and ramming them into the blond's throat.

And just then Sasuke climaxed, shooting his seed into the panting and willing body beneath him.

His arms gave out and he would have squashed Naruto if he hadn't managed to hold himself up on his elbows, panting hard and looking straight into the blond's exhausted eyes.

He laid down on Naruto, relishing in the afterglow of sex, while the other was doing the same. Naruto was absent-mindedly stroking the nape of Sasuke's neck, just where the hair began.

It wasn't long and Naruto drifted off to sleep.

Exhausted, the blond was snoring on the floor. The fever and their activities had taken their toll on him.

Sasuke was slowly and cautiously getting himself out of the arms of the other, not wanting to wake him, and stood up to go for his discarded clothes. He was watching the blond while he was licking at the one hand that was covered with Naruto's essence. He couldn't help liking the taste of it, although most would have said it was distasteful.

Nobody was allowed to like the taste of his blond idiot.

He was slowly dressing, watching for every movement the other made, for any indication that the other would wake and would want another round, however, there was none.

Securing his purple belt, he went to the blond. He looked through the things of Naruto's backpack and finally found a blanket, then he turned back towards Naruto. His eyes roamed over his curves once again before covering the blond with the blanket. Then he stood up and went for the entrance of the cave.

He stopped at the entrance and looked back at the blond one last time, then he turned back around and vanished into the black of the night, being embraced by it and devoured.

The rain had stopped.
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So... Actually that was my first lemon where they went all the way (I think it is the...... third time anyone ever did something remotely sexually in one of my stories...I mean I have written about two or three petting scenes but that's about it...)... Hope it wasn't all too crappy...

However I DO think that it's bad because I wasn't really in the mood... Ok, in the beginning I was because this scene was what started this story but then I just wasn't in the mood (hmmmmmmmmm... let me think about it.... maybe it was because my dad was constantly nagging me about some thing or another so that he interrupted my thoughts and mood and what not...? NOOO, it certainly was NOT that... (caution, sarcasm!))

I forgot quite a lot when I wrote this... You should have seen my notes after I'd read this over once more... I almost thought: 'Oh, crap, just leave it and fuck this story...'

BTW: Did anyone notice that they don't really talk...? Is that a strange thing to do??

So as I've already said before: I could end this in one more chapter... but if you want me to continue this just tell me!!!

I hope you enjoyed it nevertheless...

R&R