Rainy day
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Naruto › Yaoi - Male/Male
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Category:
Naruto › Yaoi - Male/Male
Rating:
Adult +
Chapters:
4
Views:
983
Reviews:
9
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
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I do not own Naruto, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
The Surprise.
HALO!!!
I believe that this is another chapter to 'Rainy Day', and I am not really proud of it. As many of you noticed, and of that I am sure, I originally wanted to write something sweet and fluffy with a tinge of humour (hence the drunk and daring Kyuubi of chp.1), and I totally turned this into something totally opposite.
I really am NOT happy with this. This is turning into a useless ill-humoured sarcastic data of 1's and 0's, like nearly every one of my other fics. If you want to read something a little more 'Moi', then Please either turn your attention to another author worth your time, or check out 'Selbsmordversuch' in my profile.
If any of you people have any ideas to share or anything to criticise besides the complete turn of style and genre, then please do.
Yours truly, chi no hana.
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Chapter III: The Surprise
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Oh Neji hated it when his private time with his little cuddly Fox was interrupted! Stupid stupid stupid Kakashi and Uchiha!!! Now he was sitting in his –own- apartment, -ordered- by those two dick deprived asses to sit and wait, in his –own- apartment!!! How dare they!!! Grrr…
Okay, while we leave the hot freaky Hyuuga boy to his thoughts of revenge, we will go see the cause of all these thoughts for revenge:
“What. Are. You. Doing. Here. On. My. Private. Property?!”
“News flash, kid, -you-’re on your private property. We’re –at- the window sill.”
Oo “AND HOW DOES THAT EXPLAIN YOUR TYING ME TO THIS DAMNED CHAIR AND PUSHING ME INTO THE CLOSET AND CARRYING A HUMONGOUS TRUNK FULL OF I DUNNO WHAT SHIT??! HEY! ARE YOU LISTEING??! HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEY!!!”
Yup. That’s how it was. He now sat in the dark, dark closet, tied to a chair, view deprived of whatever was done do Naru-chan… oh the world was cruel… thank God he forgot his… no I won’t say it, he’ll hear me… (looks around) phew not here…
OUTSIDE ZEUH CLOSET AND IN THE BEDROOM!!! Dun dun duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuun…
“HEY!!! STOP!!! STOO~ HEY??!”
“Come on Naru-chan, you do want to please your seme?”
“WHO SAID HE WAS THE SEME??!”
“Your blush, your position, you duck-walk every morning (and other times…), your pained yells, you—”
“I GET IT ALREADY!!!”
“—r squeals, your talk, your attitude, your naiveness…”
“I’L SHOW YOU NAÏVE, DUCK-ASS HAIR!!!”
“Now now, be a good Dobe-chan and put this on.”
“WHA-? HUH? WHADJA MEAN-?? THAT?? HELL NO!!!”
“Hey! What’s going on out there?? It’s difficult to participate in a fight when I’m LOCKED UP IN A CLOSET!!!”
“We want him top wear something for you. Unfortunately, he refuses.”
“WHAT? WHAT IS IT??!”
“Us your Byakkugan, you destined imbecile.”
(uses byakkugan) “HOLY F---IN SHIT!!! NARUTO! PUT THAT ON!!!”
“Bu… buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuttt…”
“Naruto, sweety, please put that on? Fow meeeeeeeee? (whine)”
“Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww okay!!!”
“Yo, Pervert ass, why does he listen to that white eyed freak instead of some gorgeous, black haired, wealthy hot piece of ass like me?
“Because you got Duck-ass-hair.”
“Sensei”
“Yeah?”
“Run.”
“Okay.”
“CHIDORI!!!”
“YOU TRAITOR!!! USING MY TECHNIQUE TO KILL ME!!!”
“JUST SHUT UP AND RUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN!!!”
“AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!:”
Back to Naruto:
“Uhm… Neji-kun… can you help me with the laces…?”
“As much as I’d love to, love, I can’t get out of the closet.”
“Buuu… buuuuuuuuuuuuuuut it’s your destiny to—”
“OKAY!” (breaks out of closet) (gasp)
Well, Naruto in a French maid suite DOES look better in reality than through a closet door with Byakkugan. Whaddya know…?
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Yes, whadya know? Well, I hope I didn't disapoint many people as much as I have disapointed myself...
I believe that this is another chapter to 'Rainy Day', and I am not really proud of it. As many of you noticed, and of that I am sure, I originally wanted to write something sweet and fluffy with a tinge of humour (hence the drunk and daring Kyuubi of chp.1), and I totally turned this into something totally opposite.
I really am NOT happy with this. This is turning into a useless ill-humoured sarcastic data of 1's and 0's, like nearly every one of my other fics. If you want to read something a little more 'Moi', then Please either turn your attention to another author worth your time, or check out 'Selbsmordversuch' in my profile.
If any of you people have any ideas to share or anything to criticise besides the complete turn of style and genre, then please do.
Yours truly, chi no hana.
@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@
Chapter III: The Surprise
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Oh Neji hated it when his private time with his little cuddly Fox was interrupted! Stupid stupid stupid Kakashi and Uchiha!!! Now he was sitting in his –own- apartment, -ordered- by those two dick deprived asses to sit and wait, in his –own- apartment!!! How dare they!!! Grrr…
Okay, while we leave the hot freaky Hyuuga boy to his thoughts of revenge, we will go see the cause of all these thoughts for revenge:
“What. Are. You. Doing. Here. On. My. Private. Property?!”
“News flash, kid, -you-’re on your private property. We’re –at- the window sill.”
Oo “AND HOW DOES THAT EXPLAIN YOUR TYING ME TO THIS DAMNED CHAIR AND PUSHING ME INTO THE CLOSET AND CARRYING A HUMONGOUS TRUNK FULL OF I DUNNO WHAT SHIT??! HEY! ARE YOU LISTEING??! HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEY!!!”
Yup. That’s how it was. He now sat in the dark, dark closet, tied to a chair, view deprived of whatever was done do Naru-chan… oh the world was cruel… thank God he forgot his… no I won’t say it, he’ll hear me… (looks around) phew not here…
OUTSIDE ZEUH CLOSET AND IN THE BEDROOM!!! Dun dun duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuun…
“HEY!!! STOP!!! STOO~ HEY??!”
“Come on Naru-chan, you do want to please your seme?”
“WHO SAID HE WAS THE SEME??!”
“Your blush, your position, you duck-walk every morning (and other times…), your pained yells, you—”
“I GET IT ALREADY!!!”
“—r squeals, your talk, your attitude, your naiveness…”
“I’L SHOW YOU NAÏVE, DUCK-ASS HAIR!!!”
“Now now, be a good Dobe-chan and put this on.”
“WHA-? HUH? WHADJA MEAN-?? THAT?? HELL NO!!!”
“Hey! What’s going on out there?? It’s difficult to participate in a fight when I’m LOCKED UP IN A CLOSET!!!”
“We want him top wear something for you. Unfortunately, he refuses.”
“WHAT? WHAT IS IT??!”
“Us your Byakkugan, you destined imbecile.”
(uses byakkugan) “HOLY F---IN SHIT!!! NARUTO! PUT THAT ON!!!”
“Bu… buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuttt…”
“Naruto, sweety, please put that on? Fow meeeeeeeee? (whine)”
“Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww okay!!!”
“Yo, Pervert ass, why does he listen to that white eyed freak instead of some gorgeous, black haired, wealthy hot piece of ass like me?
“Because you got Duck-ass-hair.”
“Sensei”
“Yeah?”
“Run.”
“Okay.”
“CHIDORI!!!”
“YOU TRAITOR!!! USING MY TECHNIQUE TO KILL ME!!!”
“JUST SHUT UP AND RUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN!!!”
“AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!:”
Back to Naruto:
“Uhm… Neji-kun… can you help me with the laces…?”
“As much as I’d love to, love, I can’t get out of the closet.”
“Buuu… buuuuuuuuuuuuuuut it’s your destiny to—”
“OKAY!” (breaks out of closet) (gasp)
Well, Naruto in a French maid suite DOES look better in reality than through a closet door with Byakkugan. Whaddya know…?
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Yes, whadya know? Well, I hope I didn't disapoint many people as much as I have disapointed myself...