Fateful Days

OMG o.O *goggles at all the kind and supportive reviews* ..I don't know what to say...THANK YOU!!! Honestly, I'm totally overwhelmed by your opinions of my humble work. I never thought I would get such reactions...especially not from authors that I personally like to read from. I think it has something to do with this being the first fic I posted on a site like adultfanfiction. I already posted two fics (both Yu Gi Oh) on the German yaoi-fanfiction page yaoi.de and on the yahoo-group little dragon. Both of them can be found under my nic yaoilovergirl...just for those of you who would like take a look ^_^ I must admit though, I abandoned both stories because I lost the motivation to continue them. I didn't get any responses for the fic on little dragon and then there came the one and only fandom - Naruto! Nah, just joking. I like so many anime/manga-series that I often have phases where I read nothing else and then suddenly there is a new fandom that I get sucked in and all bets are off ^_^

Now, first for my reviewers:

Tyra - hehe...you will get your 'action' (in both senses of the word -_~)...to be exact, you will get one part in this chappie...have fun. And I will do this as you suggested with the Shika x Neji and the raping part ^^

Secretsex92 - thank you for your support, I really appreciate it since this is my first serious fic which I intend to finish

HumanInfiltrator - perfect?!...PERFECT?!...o.O I think this is a praise that I am not worthy off...not now, at least..but I'll do my very best to earn me such a praise from you sometime in the future ^_^

pen_name - I hoped you'd like the outfit. I can soooo see him it ^^ If I could draw I'd give it a try...but I cannot, so...yeah no pic of Neji in a Chinese outfit -_-

Yersi Fanel - Woohoo, another prominent author!! Thank you for your review..it made my heart flutter and my will to finally finish one of my stories that much stronger!

TheSirens - Well, here ya go! But be prepared, it's not a nice chappie ^_^But I hope you will stay with me through it more gory details and keep on reading (and reviewing ^^)...and yes, it's the ebst pairing in the WHOLE WORLD!!

Alright, I'm finished with my ranting...on to the third part!

Beware - gore, bloodshed and violence ahead


Third Day - still morning:


'Mendo...ohhh..kuse' was Shikas last coherend thought. Then everything around him seemed to become distant. The blood rushing through his veins became a dull roar in his ears and his eyes closed as if on auto-pilot. His heart skipped a beat when he felt a questioning tongue gently yet firmly trace the contour of his lips, begging for entrance. Not able to suppress the slight noise of want deeply in his throat, Shika complied. Parting his lips just enough to let Nejis tongue pass into the hot cavern of his mouth where he met it with his own, engaging the older shinobi in a sensual dance of pure desire.

Neji was in heaven.

Damn, he thought, where did Shikamaru learn to kiss like that?

Then his last thinking brain-cells took a flying leap out of the window and he was purely reacting. No thoughts, just instincts and the otherwordly feeling of Nara Shikamaru pressed tightly against his own body. Their hearts beating wildly in their chests and the blood rushing south, hardening their members. A moan wormed his way out of his mouth and into that of the young genius, making him shudder against him. Neji felt like he owned the fucking world and at the same time like he wanted to kneel down and weep because how humbled he felt. This was not a mere slaking of their lust. It was deeper. Much deeper. Like their souls were meeting in this one kiss. Like their hearts stumbled to find that one perfect rhythm in which they could beat together. Neji felt a slight panic rising in him at his out of control feelings. He had to stop, had to clear his mind of the haze, had to get a grip on reality again.

Slowly leaning backwards, away from Shikamaru, Neji ended the kiss.

Both of them were breathing hard and fast.

Their eyes burning with unchecked desire.

Their skin flushed from arousal.

Their hearts still racing.

And their cocks straining against the confines of their pants.

It took Neji everything he had not to jump the younger man and finish what they had started.

Fighting for control over his urges, Neji saw Shikamaru open his now swollen lips to say something and started to intercept him.

But before either of them could utter a single word, they were interrupted by a scream of pure terror that rose up from the street outside of their hotel room.

With a look of quiet understanding, an unspoken vow of 'we will talk about this later' they went downstairs and out into the street. A crowd had gathered around the entrance to one of the many alleys that branched off of the main street. Going closer, looking just as curious as everybody else and not like two shinobis on a mission, trying to gather information, they saw something lying on the ground. Something that once had been a human being. Now it was nothing more than a mangled mass of bloody and torn flesh and spilled intestines. Both shinobis had seen enough death to not be fazed much by the sight but even they had to admit that it was quite gruesome. Most of the bystanders were not as tough and the sound of somebody being violently ill could be heard. Flies were gathering around the body, adding to the grotesque picture.

Shikamaru was already in 'info-gathering-mode' as most of the rookie nine had dubbed it. Listening for anything that may give the killer away. A careless word spoken too loudly. A face not drawn into a mask of horror but joy or satisfaction. A weapon, carefully concealed behind a coat.
Anything. Everything.
A warm hand on his arm drew his attation to his partner. Neji had his face averted from the sight in front of them. Acting like he couldn't stand it anymore but Shikamaru knew better. Leaning down a bit as if he was consoling the longhaired beauty he was acting his part of the 'concerned boyfriend'.

"What's up? Did you see something?"

"Over there. In the shadows by that rusty pipe. Is that I what I think it is?"

Shikamaru looked and saw immediately what Neji was talking about.

A part of the body. Wrapped in what seemed like a silk ribbon. Looking like a horrible version of a christmas gift. The member of the poor lad lying dead in the alley.

Shikamaru put his arm around Nejis waist and tugged him firmly yet gently away from the crowd. Taking a quick look around he spotted a small bar and pulled his 'boyfriend' in that direction. Entering the dimly lit main room, he went straight for one of the more secluded booths in the background. After ordering two sake from the waitress that scurried from table to table, Shikamaru adressed Neji in a low tone.

"Well, what do you think?"

"Hm, from what I could see I'd say that our mysterious killer added another victim to the list. The body was clearly a man and the little 'gift' seems to be a kind of calling card, albeit a rather morbid one. I didn't detect anyone suspicious in the crowd. But that doesn't necessarily mean he wasn't there. I bet he watched from somewhere safe. To him it's one big show and he is the main actor, waiting for the climax. He puts his kills on a stage and waits for a reaction from his audience."

"Yep, that's what I gathered too. But there is still something that irks me. I just can’t tell what that is. It’s like we’re missing a piece of the whole puzzle. A vital information."
Neji watched the young genius, trying to find out if what the other was saying was something to be taking into consideration or if it was just a dead end. Finally he asked:
“Do you really think it’s important or is this just something, that this genius-brain of yours cooked up?” He made his tone light to show Shikamaru that the last part of his question wasn’t some kind of verbal attack.

Shikamaru let that sink in for a moment.
“No, I don’t think so, Neji. Call it what you want but this uneasy feeling is the same as the one I had when we went to retrieve Sasuke all those years back. And since then I don’t take it lightly anymore.”

In the meantime the waitress reappeared with their sake and left again.

The young genius poured them two cups while Neji was still absorbing Shikamarus words.

The minutes ticked by and still Neji hadn't said a word, just slowly sipped his sake. Shikamaru didn't worry though. He knew that the Hyuuga prodigy wasn't one for big talks. He calculated everything in his mind and only said something when it was important. That was the first thing that appealed to Shikamaru, way back when they were both still chunins. But the more the young Nara observed the Byakkugan user the more he got caught in the complexity of Neji. His strong and proud demeanor. His fighting abilities and strong will. The desire to change his fate. The amazing loyalty to his friends. And last but not least his appereance. That long, shining hair cascading around his shoulders. These strange yet totally alluring eyes that got a pale shade of lavender when aroused. Long, slender but powerful legs. Elegant and at the same time deadly hands. And a voice Shikamaru would love to hear screaming and moaning his name in ecstasy. Everything mixed together made him irresistable. And as it turned out Neji wasn't as cool and unreachable as he always seemed. On the contrary. He was as hot as hell.

Shikamaru shifted slightly in his seat when flashes of the shared kiss flickered through his mind.

'Hmmm, he tastes like a mixture of spices and dark chocolat...tche, I cannot believe I just thought that. Mendokuse.' He was so absorbed in his thoughts that he didn't see the person who entered in that moment the bar. He also didn't see the look said personn sent in Nejis direction. If he had he would have instantly known who was responsible for the murders. It was a look of pure hatred combined with a terrifying coldness and madness that had everybody shying back in a reaction born of pure instinct. It was af if you stared into the eyes of a wild animal that was immersed in bloodlust. But neither Neji nor Shikamaru noticed something. Both too deeply absorbed in their own thoughts. It was a mistake one of them would soon regret.


- TBC -

Yes I know, another short chapter. I fear you'll get a lot of them from me, since I just don't seem to be able to concentrate on writing in English for a longer periot of time. And this time I have another problem - my computer suddenly tells me that he doesn't have an IP or network adresse connection....I have no clue whatsoever what to do...yesterday I couldn't get online the whole day and today it's still not working properly. And since I don't know when I will be online next time you will get this short chapter now and I' ll hopefully have the problem solved ASAP!

Hope to see/read from you soon! Oh, and I almost forgot. My email adresse is suddenly hidden on adulfanfiction.net so I give it to you now...just in case someone wants to contact me ^^. It's yaoilovergirl@hotmail.de You can mail me in English or German ^_^