怪物 Body bag
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Naruto › Yaoi - Male/Male
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Naruto › Yaoi - Male/Male
Rating:
Adult +
Chapters:
6
Views:
1,085
Reviews:
20
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
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I do not own Naruto, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
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Title: 怪物 Body Bag
Author’s Note: I have finally remembered my AFF.net account and password. I keep thinking my username is gauze304 when it is not! Hahah. I have already updated up to chapter 4 on FF.net, so the next chapter will be post here soon too. Thank you everybody for the support so far. It means a lot to me! =D
Lore>> Naruto may be a little OOC here but what my intention is to protray him as someone clumsy and stupid - a loudmouth shouting his mouth off at inappropriate moments. As for why he kept panicking, I am taking into consideration the environment he grew up in. Remember this is set in Alternate Universe and the characters are not ninjas. If I did not remember wrongly, even in the beginning in the anime, Naruto wasn't so cool when he first met a missing nin Zabuza. He only grew stronger after various experiences he went through.
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“Don’t scream.” The stranger spoke softly, urgency lacing his low baritone voice. Approaching slowly, he threw his hands out to show their emptiness and his lack of harmful intention. Taken aback by the other’s sudden change in demeanor, Naruto peered at him in suspicion, bright blue eyes narrowing with intense curiosity similar to that of the jaybird. His fear jabbered at him from within, but he stuffed it deeper into the back of his mind until he was able to face this loony with as much calm as he could muster under the fucked up circumstances.
“Why shouldn’t I?” the blond challenged, raising his chin in defiance.
“Shhh…” the redhead made a wild gesture for silence as he crept closer, teal greens darting to look at the exit nervously before returning to him. He looked as though he was expecting something big and bad to charge through the door and gobbles him up any moment now.
“Don’t come any closer…” Naruto warned under his breath, the stranger’s urgency bringing him to whisper in absurd low tones too. Retreating a few steps, he darted behind the operating table to place some much needed distance between the two of them. “I have come to get you out of here!” the redhead exclaimed, raising his non-existing eyebrows to show his exasperation at Naruto’s stupidity. “What??” this time round, it was the blue-eyed youth who gaped at the said man in disbelief. “Save me from who? Yourself? You are the one who got me here!” “No I didn’t. That was my little bro, Gaara…” the redhead gave a lopsided grin, as though expecting the one liner to explain the whole situation. “Ya…right. You must think that I am retarded enough to fall for that old look-alike joke.” The blond rolled his eyes, only to receive a serious look. “Shit, you mean for real?”
Kankuro nodded solemnly, his smile twisting down into an apologetic frown. “I am real sorry, man. Getting you into this weird shit…But I swear Gaara isn’t that bad.” The man’s sincere expression almost made Naruto believed him but he still held onto his misgivings and remained behind the safety of the cold metal table.
A sudden heavy thud from above rocked the naked fluorescent lamp, spinning the basement into a wild dance of yellow strobes whilst flaky dust crumbled from the ceiling onto the two of them. Both of them switched bewildered glances to the area which the sound has came from, dulled as it was by the layers of wall. “What’s that?” Naruto muttered his question out loud only to get hushed up by Kankuro again. “Not so loud…I’ll go check it out now. Don’t do anything stupid, stay low. I’ll try to think of ways to get you out.” With that said, the other man climbed up the stairs, careful not to make any noise on the creaky boards and went out of the door.
For a long moment, Naruto listened attentively to the shuffling and muffled low drones coming from the first level, trying hard to make sense of the sounds. The snippets of low talking voices which the blond hung onto soon escalated to furious yelling. Naruto yelped in surprise when yet another loud crash rattled the ceiling. The lamp rattled in its bare frame, and burnt out in a soft frizzle, shrouding the basement into darkness again. Recovering from his minor shock, the blond listened with abated breath to what seemed like a scuffle. After forever, the noises finally subsided and there was the ominous pregnant silence that never failed to befall after bad happenings, suffocating the air with its cold suspense.
Fearing the worse for Kankuro, Naruto crept closer to the door, straining to hear for any indication to which the older brother was still alive and breathing. He was almost near the door, at the foot of the stairs when the door swung open unexpectedly. He swore his heart has skipped a beat at that exact moment.
Standing at the doorway was a figure shadowed by the piercing bright light coming from outside. Naruto almost wanted to call out Kankuro’s name but hesitated when the other just stood unmoving at the top. He could not see the person’s face. Then the man shifted slightly so that a glimmer of light hit his face at the angle which revealed only the eyes – cold and dead greens - staring harshly down at Naruto, threatening to swallow him up with the insanity that lurked behind them.
“Gaara…”
TBC
Author’s Note: I have finally remembered my AFF.net account and password. I keep thinking my username is gauze304 when it is not! Hahah. I have already updated up to chapter 4 on FF.net, so the next chapter will be post here soon too. Thank you everybody for the support so far. It means a lot to me! =D
Lore>> Naruto may be a little OOC here but what my intention is to protray him as someone clumsy and stupid - a loudmouth shouting his mouth off at inappropriate moments. As for why he kept panicking, I am taking into consideration the environment he grew up in. Remember this is set in Alternate Universe and the characters are not ninjas. If I did not remember wrongly, even in the beginning in the anime, Naruto wasn't so cool when he first met a missing nin Zabuza. He only grew stronger after various experiences he went through.
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“Don’t scream.” The stranger spoke softly, urgency lacing his low baritone voice. Approaching slowly, he threw his hands out to show their emptiness and his lack of harmful intention. Taken aback by the other’s sudden change in demeanor, Naruto peered at him in suspicion, bright blue eyes narrowing with intense curiosity similar to that of the jaybird. His fear jabbered at him from within, but he stuffed it deeper into the back of his mind until he was able to face this loony with as much calm as he could muster under the fucked up circumstances.
“Why shouldn’t I?” the blond challenged, raising his chin in defiance.
“Shhh…” the redhead made a wild gesture for silence as he crept closer, teal greens darting to look at the exit nervously before returning to him. He looked as though he was expecting something big and bad to charge through the door and gobbles him up any moment now.
“Don’t come any closer…” Naruto warned under his breath, the stranger’s urgency bringing him to whisper in absurd low tones too. Retreating a few steps, he darted behind the operating table to place some much needed distance between the two of them. “I have come to get you out of here!” the redhead exclaimed, raising his non-existing eyebrows to show his exasperation at Naruto’s stupidity. “What??” this time round, it was the blue-eyed youth who gaped at the said man in disbelief. “Save me from who? Yourself? You are the one who got me here!” “No I didn’t. That was my little bro, Gaara…” the redhead gave a lopsided grin, as though expecting the one liner to explain the whole situation. “Ya…right. You must think that I am retarded enough to fall for that old look-alike joke.” The blond rolled his eyes, only to receive a serious look. “Shit, you mean for real?”
Kankuro nodded solemnly, his smile twisting down into an apologetic frown. “I am real sorry, man. Getting you into this weird shit…But I swear Gaara isn’t that bad.” The man’s sincere expression almost made Naruto believed him but he still held onto his misgivings and remained behind the safety of the cold metal table.
A sudden heavy thud from above rocked the naked fluorescent lamp, spinning the basement into a wild dance of yellow strobes whilst flaky dust crumbled from the ceiling onto the two of them. Both of them switched bewildered glances to the area which the sound has came from, dulled as it was by the layers of wall. “What’s that?” Naruto muttered his question out loud only to get hushed up by Kankuro again. “Not so loud…I’ll go check it out now. Don’t do anything stupid, stay low. I’ll try to think of ways to get you out.” With that said, the other man climbed up the stairs, careful not to make any noise on the creaky boards and went out of the door.
For a long moment, Naruto listened attentively to the shuffling and muffled low drones coming from the first level, trying hard to make sense of the sounds. The snippets of low talking voices which the blond hung onto soon escalated to furious yelling. Naruto yelped in surprise when yet another loud crash rattled the ceiling. The lamp rattled in its bare frame, and burnt out in a soft frizzle, shrouding the basement into darkness again. Recovering from his minor shock, the blond listened with abated breath to what seemed like a scuffle. After forever, the noises finally subsided and there was the ominous pregnant silence that never failed to befall after bad happenings, suffocating the air with its cold suspense.
Fearing the worse for Kankuro, Naruto crept closer to the door, straining to hear for any indication to which the older brother was still alive and breathing. He was almost near the door, at the foot of the stairs when the door swung open unexpectedly. He swore his heart has skipped a beat at that exact moment.
Standing at the doorway was a figure shadowed by the piercing bright light coming from outside. Naruto almost wanted to call out Kankuro’s name but hesitated when the other just stood unmoving at the top. He could not see the person’s face. Then the man shifted slightly so that a glimmer of light hit his face at the angle which revealed only the eyes – cold and dead greens - staring harshly down at Naruto, threatening to swallow him up with the insanity that lurked behind them.
“Gaara…”
TBC