fallen

here ya go. a big thanks again to TinkerKitty for dealing with my crappy gammer amonge those thing's and fixing them and editing it. so thank you.

sony_kit 2008-08-18 id # 3000143021
Hi! this story has a lot of potential. i like your attention to details, very vivid. the plot is also novel, so it adds a lot to the very cute characters. although this is au, sasuke and naruto are not totally off their original characters. hoping to read more! :)


thank you. im glad you like it.i'm trying my hardest not to make them to. occ.

Halskr 2008-08-19 id # 3000143126
It is interesting so far. I am looking forward to reading more of this and seeing how the plot develops. Thanks for writing and sharing this.

your welcome. thanks for reading it.

cold 2008-08-19 id # 3000143153
i actually like this fic! i honestly didn't think i would like the plot
but i do! Yay! I really like it so do great on the next chapter(s) ok?
and i can't wait to find out why Naruto was banished!


heh. thanks. i hope you like the rest.

ok thank you everyone. and thank you again to tinkerkitty.

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Sasuke was sitting at his desk. He was having a hard time focusing. He glanced at the clock. It was already past one. (I wonder what he did to my house. Was it a good idea to leave him there alone?) His poor home.


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The pink haired receptionist was glaring daggers at the boy in front of her. Naruto held up the pad again, wondering if she couldn’t read. No matter how many time’s she read it, it still said the same thing.



:Hi, my name’s Naruto. I’m here for Sasuke. He left while I was in the shower.:



And at the end of it there were a few drawn hearts. “WHAAAAAT?!” the girl screeched.



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Sasuke heard the screech followed by a crashing sound. He didn’t really care, but he knew he had to go out there. He couldn’t have Sakura causing a scene on his floor. That would be an embarrassment and he would not allow that.



Sasuke opened the door to see a mop of blond hair flying towards him and braced himself for the impact. They tumbled over each other to where Naruto was straddling Sasuke’s lap. Sasuke glared at Naruto, then Sakura, though the look on her face was priceless. When he turned back to Naruto he read the pad Naruto was holding on to for dear life.



:Help that evil woman attacked me:



Sasuke lifted Naruto off him and stood up facing Sakura. “I’m taking my lunch now, don’t bother me.”



He grabbed Naruto’s wrist and dragged him to the elevator, leaving a gaping Sakura who looked like she was just slapped in the face. “What are you doing here?”



:You left without me. So what are we going to eat?:



“How did you get here?”



Naruto didn’t respond. He just leaned against the wall of the elevator. He couldn’t tell Sasuke that. He was too embarrassed to say it, so he just shrugged his shoulders.



Sasuke’s eyebrow rose. There were a lot of things Naruto didn’t want to say. Maybe he should take him to a doctor about his voice. If the blond could talk he wouldn’t be able to avoid Sasuke’s questions. So it’s settled. Tomorrow he’d have a doctor come and check out Naruto. Sasuke smirked; Naruto wouldn’t be able to avoid telling Sasuke the truth. He’d get it one way or another.



-ping-



The door opened and Naruto jumped up, grabbing Sasuke’s hand as he lead him out of the building. He saw a little stand that said ‘ramen’ and he wanted to try it, since Sasuke didn’t say what he wanted.



Sasuke was staring at their connected hands, not paying attention to the stares of his employees. Not to mention the look from his older brother.



Naruto was happily leading the way to the stand he saw, finally stopping in front of it. Naruto pointed to the sign. He turned his head to Sasuke, who gave him a disgusted look.



“You want to eat here, of all places.”



Naruto nodded his head, as he dragged Sasuke to sit down. Once they were in their seats Naruto finally let go of Sasuke’s hand.



“May I help you?” the young lady who approached them smiled sweetly at Naruto.



Naruto nodded again, and pointed at a picture of miso ramen.



“Tch. Two miso ramen.” Sasuke glared at the young lady who was staring at Naruto. She smiled at Naruto before she hurried off.



Sasuke was looking down at his hand. Why did holding Naruto’s hand feel so good? It felt natural. It scared Sasuke that he allowed the blond so close to him. He could almost feel his breath. Wait. What?



Naruto was inches from Sasuke’s cheek, trying to get Sasuke to look at him.



Sasuke turned his head and their lips connected in an accidental kiss. Sasuke’s eyes widened and Naruto blushed. They both pulled away quickly, turning their heads away from each other.



Naruto was blind to most human ways but he defiantly knew what that was. That was his first kiss in 19 years. He had only been kissed by his older brother and that was on the cheek.



Sasuke’s first thought was his lips tasted sweet. Then it dawned on him what happened. He turned his head back to Naruto, but all of Sasuke’s thoughts were lost when he saw the blonde’s blushing face. Sasuke was resisting the urge to grab Naruto’s chin and find out if the inside of his mouth tasted that sweet. Crap, he had to leave and now. He pulled money from his wallet and put it on the counter.



Naruto nodded his head, still too embarrassed to look at Sasuke.



“Good. I’m going back to work. When you’re don head straight home.”



Naruto turned to protest, but Sasuke was already gone. He looked sadly at Sasuke’s seat. (Did I do something wrong?)