buraindo koigokoro. {blind love}
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Naruto › Yaoi - Male/Male
Rating:
Adult +
Chapters:
7
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1,075
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12
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chapt. 3
hello. well heres the next chapter.
Jade Rose 2008-10-01 id # 3000149064
Interesting premise. I can't wait for more.
thank you. ^^
demona 2008-10-02 id # 3000149145
So far i likey. cant wait for more.
thanks.
ItaNarulover 2008-10-02 id # 3000149148
seems to be a quite interesting fic.
keep up with the good work, and we'll se how interesting it'll become! ;p
good luck with the writing.'
take care. hugs
thank you.im having fun with it. i needed a brake from fallen. cause im not good with writing smut.
Lane 2008-10-02 id # 3000149168
I like this story. It's really promissing. And you're writting style is good too.
Keep it up!
I want to see the next chapter!
XD LANE
hehe, thank you.
just to let everyone know yes there's a good reason why i wrote this chapter the way i did.
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Kyuubi, rolled over, Both males were panting. Itachi wrapped his arm’s around the red head.
“Well what can, We do?”
“HN.”
‘God.”
“I know I am.” itachi smirked, As kyuubi glared.
“What are we going to do about, them?”
“Just stay out of it.”
“How can you say that?”
“It’s easy.”
Kyuubi hit itachi.
“Fine ill talk to sasuke, You happy now?”
“Yes.” kyuubi, leaned up and kissed itachi.
..........................................
Naruto, made through the day. He hadn’t seen sasuke. {What the hell the bastard actually had his classes changed.}
“What the hell did I do?”
Naruto’s eyes widened. “Sasuke.”
Their eye’s meet, And naruto turned and hightailed it.
“What’s his deal?” the pink haired girl asked sasuke.
“Leave me alone.”
“But sasuke.”
Sasuke yanked his arm free from the girl’s grasp, And walked away.
“I can’t believe that.”
I thought sasuke hated her, Naruto finally stopped running, and started walking.
....
after awhile he looked up, and saw smoke.
“What the?”
Naruto started walking toward’s the burning building.
..........................................
Another wall collapsed on fire. How did naruto, get him self into this? Oh that’s right.
/ flash back/
“The fire department isn’t here yet.”
“My daughter, she’s still in there.” The woman was crying as some men held her back.
Naruto looked up at the burning building, There’s a kid in there?
“No choice I guess.”
“Hey kid wait, What do you think your doing?”
“It’s dangerous.”
Naruto ignored them and disappeared in the smoke.
He saved the little girl. But then she started crying that her kitten was still in there.
So not thinking and not wanting to see the girl cry. Naruto went back in.
/ end flashback/
Naruto lifted the kitten to his face.
“This is your fault.”
“Meow.”
“Well this definitely tops the list of stupid shit I’ve done. How do you spouse we get out of here?”
Naruto looked behind him, But it was collapsed. He coughed again.
“Shit. I don’t plan on dying here.”
[ Crashing sound.]
The floor gave way. Naruto, wrapped the kitten in his arm’s and braced him self for impact.
Naruto hit the floor underneath the second story. He covered him self the best he could as the rest came down.
;coughing;
He pushed what he could off of him. His looked at his leg covered in blood.
“Meow.”
Naruto looked at the kitten.
“I'm sure one day we will look back on this and laugh.”
;coughing;
“If I die, i’ll come back and haunt that bastard sasuke.”
Naruto pulled the kitten closer, As everything started to fade into black.”Sasuke.”
......................
/ and yes i can see naruto, going back into a burning building for a kitten. maybe its just me./
Jade Rose 2008-10-01 id # 3000149064
Interesting premise. I can't wait for more.
thank you. ^^
demona 2008-10-02 id # 3000149145
So far i likey. cant wait for more.
thanks.
ItaNarulover 2008-10-02 id # 3000149148
seems to be a quite interesting fic.
keep up with the good work, and we'll se how interesting it'll become! ;p
good luck with the writing.'
take care. hugs
thank you.im having fun with it. i needed a brake from fallen. cause im not good with writing smut.
Lane 2008-10-02 id # 3000149168
I like this story. It's really promissing. And you're writting style is good too.
Keep it up!
I want to see the next chapter!
XD LANE
hehe, thank you.
just to let everyone know yes there's a good reason why i wrote this chapter the way i did.
........................................................
Kyuubi, rolled over, Both males were panting. Itachi wrapped his arm’s around the red head.
“Well what can, We do?”
“HN.”
‘God.”
“I know I am.” itachi smirked, As kyuubi glared.
“What are we going to do about, them?”
“Just stay out of it.”
“How can you say that?”
“It’s easy.”
Kyuubi hit itachi.
“Fine ill talk to sasuke, You happy now?”
“Yes.” kyuubi, leaned up and kissed itachi.
..........................................
Naruto, made through the day. He hadn’t seen sasuke. {What the hell the bastard actually had his classes changed.}
“What the hell did I do?”
Naruto’s eyes widened. “Sasuke.”
Their eye’s meet, And naruto turned and hightailed it.
“What’s his deal?” the pink haired girl asked sasuke.
“Leave me alone.”
“But sasuke.”
Sasuke yanked his arm free from the girl’s grasp, And walked away.
“I can’t believe that.”
I thought sasuke hated her, Naruto finally stopped running, and started walking.
....
after awhile he looked up, and saw smoke.
“What the?”
Naruto started walking toward’s the burning building.
..........................................
Another wall collapsed on fire. How did naruto, get him self into this? Oh that’s right.
/ flash back/
“The fire department isn’t here yet.”
“My daughter, she’s still in there.” The woman was crying as some men held her back.
Naruto looked up at the burning building, There’s a kid in there?
“No choice I guess.”
“Hey kid wait, What do you think your doing?”
“It’s dangerous.”
Naruto ignored them and disappeared in the smoke.
He saved the little girl. But then she started crying that her kitten was still in there.
So not thinking and not wanting to see the girl cry. Naruto went back in.
/ end flashback/
Naruto lifted the kitten to his face.
“This is your fault.”
“Meow.”
“Well this definitely tops the list of stupid shit I’ve done. How do you spouse we get out of here?”
Naruto looked behind him, But it was collapsed. He coughed again.
“Shit. I don’t plan on dying here.”
[ Crashing sound.]
The floor gave way. Naruto, wrapped the kitten in his arm’s and braced him self for impact.
Naruto hit the floor underneath the second story. He covered him self the best he could as the rest came down.
;coughing;
He pushed what he could off of him. His looked at his leg covered in blood.
“Meow.”
Naruto looked at the kitten.
“I'm sure one day we will look back on this and laugh.”
;coughing;
“If I die, i’ll come back and haunt that bastard sasuke.”
Naruto pulled the kitten closer, As everything started to fade into black.”Sasuke.”
......................
/ and yes i can see naruto, going back into a burning building for a kitten. maybe its just me./