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Sweet, Innocent Hinata-Chan (COMPLETE!!!!!)

By: ShouraiChan
folder Naruto › Het - Male/Female
Rating: Adult +
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The Flame Behind Those Pure Eyes

(A/N: Ooookaaaaay...time for me to respond to some of these reviews now, lol. Spartan, I will be happy to assist you in any of the stories you need help with, problem is my mac is an out of date peice of crapola, but, *hugs mac laptop* it's still good for a few things! So, I don't have MSN to say the least, but keep me posted on what you plan on doing and I'll be happy to assist, HOWEVER, I will only offer suggestions that you can either take or not take to improve certain things. I'm a firm believer in that the author should always have the last say in any writing they do, lol!) So, lemme know if you need any help, k? And as far, (a note to all my reviewers and readers) I am doing well! Yay! No more sickness for Sho-Chan! Big yay!



To Kenshin Ryuu...I oughta totally hug you because I'm sorry, while Hinata isn't protected by Gobi, you are in for a surprise, because YES! Gobi will make some form of appearance in the story, so at the risk of sounding like an announcer, stay tuned! lol



To Darkened Naruto: Lol, I'm really glad you like the story and don't worry, I'll be updating more frequently because a lot of people have been wondering who the old man is and who was actually strong enough to do Naruto up the way he was! Thank you very much and I hope to impress you more! Please enjoy!!!



To the rest of my readers, Rox, Amaya, Kureneko, Kenshin Ryuu and everyone else who reads my story, you guys are my total lifeline and reason I continue to write! Thank you very, very much!!!!!!!! You guys don't know how special you've made my very first Naruto fanfiction and much less, my very first fanfiction on here! Thank you so, so much!!!!



Yours truely, Sho-Chan~)



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The world went black for only a minute as her body collided with three great oak trees, breaking through every single one before being forcibly stopped by the strength of the fourth great oak.



"HINATA-CHAN!" TenTen nearly screamed.



TenTen witnessed the amazing blast of chakra and she quickly turned her head, looking at the source from whence it came. Tsunade, Konohagakure's fifth Hokage, or, Godaime, if you will, was simply standing there, filing her nails, looking as if she hadn't broken a sweat, granted, they'd been battling for almost half an hour. Sakura was doing all she could to stop herself from running to Hinata's side, but Kurenai's hand on her shoulder restrained her thus further.



"GET UP, HINATA-CHAN!" Sakura's frantic voice yelled.



Hinata's eyes opened and she groaned a little more, grabbing her ribs. How many had Tsunade broken? Three? Four? Whatever the number, Hinata knew she was in so much pain, it was almost unbearable. Sakura released a sharp breath when she saw Hinata stand, nevermind how the girl was dressed. A battle being held at night, Hinata dressed in all black, however, with her tight, sports bra and biker-shorts, it left a lot of her pretty skin exposed. Sakura watched her biker-gloved hands wrap around her stomach as she fully brought herself to her feet. She limped towards Tsunade who had sent her flying backwards with just a snap of her finger. Sakura had never seen anything like it in her life. Hinata stood only twenty feet away from Tsunade. Just what was she trying to prove, was everyone else's thoughts. Tsunade looked up at Hinata with a smirk.



"Well, you're still standing. That accounts for SOMETHING, I suppose."



Before Hinata could even blink, she watched in fear as Tsunade threw her file towards her. Like a blade of light, it went straight through her arm and imbedded itself in a nearby tree.



"EYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA....!!!!!!!!!!!"



The blood curdling scream even caught the attention of villagers walking around more towards the city. Hinata fell to her knees, grabbing her bleeding left arm and whimpering even worse.



"What the hell is Godaime thinking?!" Temari asked.



Hinata's head lowered and Tsunade watched as she fell to the ground. With a satisfied sigh Tsunade began walking towards her. The Hyuuga girl was covered in blood, bruises and cuts. Leaning down and grabbing a handful of her beautiful, purple hair, Hinata didn't even wince when Tsunade yanked her to her feet, despite the fact Hinata was unconscious.



"Heh...who was I kidding...?"



Tsunade's eyes widened when she saw Hinata's eyes open quickly. Kurenai watched with surprise as Hinata, as quick as lightning, jammed a chakra-charged fist deep into Tsunade's stomach, sending her flying backwards.



"DID YOU SEE THAT?!?" Sakura smiled widely.



"Unbelievable...She was so quick, I didn't even see her move...!" Kurenai smirked.



Temari could only chuckle a little bit as she watched Tsunade pick herself up. She shook off the attack as if it were nothing, but that look on the Godaime's face said that she was royally pissed off.



"Forgive me, Shioriko..." she muttered.



Tsunade charged at Hinata who managed to create half of her Protection of the Trigram Sixty-Four Palms. Wild streaks of blue chakra charged at Tsunade, trying very hard to parry of Tsunade's ever-overwhelming chakra. Hinata gasped when Tsunade broke through her defense and grabbed her left arm, the same that had been pierced by the metal file. Tsunade smirked and whispered,



"No offense, Hinata..."



With just a minor squeeze, Hinata could feel a pain in her arm so strong, she was almost postive that Tsunade had shattered her entire arm, shoulder, wrist, fingers and all.



"TSUNADE, STOP IT!" Kurenai screamed.



Before Temari could step in, they all watched with horror as Tsunade pushed Hinata backwards with such a force...Hinata's entire arm, from the elbow down, tore from her body. Hinata's eyes widened as she felt her body go into complete shock.



"HINATA!!!!" Sakura shrieked.



*Am...am I gonna die...? My arm...*



Hinata fell to the ground, her blue eyes, completely soulless. It wasn't until consciousness pulled her from reality that she felt her body get very light, then...cold.



"TSUNADE, ARE YOU FUCKING CRAZY?!?!" Kurenai screamed.



No one dared to approach Tsunade as she stood over Hinata's moving body, watching as a pool of blood quickly surrounded the young girl's body. Tsunade looked at the arm in her hand then smirked before sending chakra through it and exploding it into nothing more than tiny chunks of flesh.



"What a waste..."



Tsunade turned and began walking towards the group consisting of Temari, Sakura, Kurenai and TenTen. It wasn't until she noticed the horrified look on Sakura's, or, for that matter, everyone's face that matter, that they weren't staring at her...They were staring behind her. Tsunade turned around, her eyes wide with pure fear as Hinata effortlessly picked herself up and stood there, with an eerie, dark-pink aura surrounding her body. The light disappeared, revealing Hinata's head lowered, her bangs shadowing her eyes. When her head snapped up, her blue eyes lost in a pure, white light, everyone soon became fearful. She threw her head backwards and let out a blood-curdling scream that almost sounded like a roar. The ground began to shake and the moon, once covered by clouds, revealed itself. The wind picked up and everyone could only stare in awe and fear as they pieces of Hinata's severed arm began glowing a dull, pink color. TenTen covered her mouth in disgust as the pieces of flesh slowly began merging with one another, levitating and slowly reattaching itself to Hinata's body, muscle by muscle, flesh by flesh. Sakura covered her own mouth, however, dashed to a nearby bush, overcome with nausea.



"How...sick...." she rasped.



Hinata's body wobbled back and forth with a white light violently spiraling around her body with such force, the ground beneath her began to crumble and levitate. Sakura weakly looked up at Hinata and for a moment...she relieved when Naruto or Sasuke would transform...



"Hinata...!" she barely whispered.



TenTen kneeled down, steadying her friend, watching the horror that was taking place. With seconds...Hinata's left arm had fully regenerated itself. She opened and closed her fists, then looked at her left hand before looking at Tsunade who could only watch in fear. She knew this would happen...but not to such an intensity.



"Her...her aura...look at it...!" Tsunade gasped.



Sure enough, the white aura that surrounded her body, just like Kyuubi's orange aura surrounded Naruto's, was more bright and vibrant than anything. They watched as the aura began shifting shape around Hinata's, the emergence of two, pointed ears coming first, followed by a long, tail coming from the spine of the white light. Hinata's own, physical body underwent changes as well. Her dainty fingernails turned to pure, white claws and her beautiful blue eyes, once lost in a white light, turned pure white, accompanied by two, cat-like pupils of a dangerously mysterious golden color. With her breathing harsh and heavy, it was easy to see Hinata herself had sprouted two, sharp fangs where her normal human canines would be. Hinata turned her head upwards and screamed, however, her voice sounded like a mixture of her own, along with a ferocious roar.



"Wh...what IS that?" TenTen asked, taking a step-backwards.



Watching from a nearby tree, Jiraiya's voice could be heard chuckling,



"Well, well, gotta hand it to Tsunade for summoning Byakko out of Hinata."



The girls watched as the sage jumped down from his hiding space in front of them.



"Jiraiya?!" Tsunade gasped.



He stood up and dusted himself off and looked at the group of women behind him. Business before pleasure, he told himself.



"Just as I told you, Tsunade, body regeneration is apart of Byakko's special powers."



"B...Byakko?! You CAN'T mean...!" TenTen yelled.



Jiraiya looked at Hinata who simply stood there like a tigress waiting to pounce. Always one to notice details, he smirked a little realizing the majority of Hinata's clothing was slowly ripping away from her.



"Yep, the White Tiger guardian of the North."



"White tiger...?"



Sakura slowly put together what soon became a mind-blowing realization, she couldn't stop herself from yelling,



"Koishubi...! That's Hinata's pet! There's no way...!"



Jiraiya looked over his shoulder with a small smirk.



"Better believe it, girlie. Looks like Byakko found himself a new host."



"But Byakko's the guardian of the NORTH! Even I know that, so what the hell would it want with Hinata?!" Temari asked.



Before she got an answer, Hinata sprang, running on all fours towards the group. Extending her arm with her claws glowing, Jiraiya chuckled maniacally.



"Wanna see something cool?!"



Jiraiya met Hinata dead in in the middle, grabbing Hinata's extended wrist, staring at her directly in the eye.



"Good kitty..." he smirked.



With just yet another small squeeze, he simply broke Hinata's wrist, leaping over her in the process and watching her body go skidding to the feet of the women who jumped backwards.



"Hinata...!" Sakura began.



"DON'T!"



Tsunade couldn't have moved faster as Hinata jumped up, charging at Sakura. When Tsunade's top was all but shredded by Hinata;s sharp claws, Hinata skidded to a stop on all fours and smirked.



"Hey....none taken."



Tsunade's glared a little, remembering herself saying "No offense" to Hinata before setting her off into the form she had now. Tsunade covered her half-bare chest, which also contained three, perfectly executed claw marks. When Hinata turned around as if there was something behind her, she barely missed taking Jiraiya's head off with her claws. Jiraiya couldn't have been more grateful for his agility, otherwise he was certain he'd be breathing through five holes in his neck. Hinata did a graceful backflip, landing on one knee, glaring at Jiraiya.



"Hey, Hinataaaaa...." he teased.



Hinata's aura's ears pirked up a little and Jiraiya suddenly yelled, pointing,



"HEY IS THAT NARUTO?!"



"HUH?!"



Hinata's head snapped around and everyone else watched as Jiraiya charged at Hinata so quickly not even Hinata realized he was there until she felt put two fingers into her forehead.



"Lights out, kitty." He said with a grin.



Tsunade and crew watched as Hinata's eyes closed before she fell forward, obviously unconscious. Jiraiya scooped her up into her arms, noticing the aura quickly dissapating before it was eventually no more. Hinata's physical features returned to normal as he carried her over to the group of concerned kunoichi. Kurenai kneeled down, looking at Hinata who looked as if she were sleeping. Her wounds, including the ones inflicted by Tsunade, were completely gone as well. Tsunade sighed a little bit, scratching her head.



"Well, atleast we know who we're sending to get the rest of the Yonnin."



"WHAT?!" Sakura raged.



Tsunade put her hands over her chest and instantly healed her scratches. The girls looked at one another confusedly before TenTen quickly said,



"But...but that's a job for the fifth shinobi who completes the Gonnin!"



Kurenai, Jiraiya and Tsunade all looked at one another when Jiraiya smirked a little.



"You're LOOKING at the fifth Gonnin."



All eyes turned to the sleeping Hinata in disbelief.



"But...the Gonnin are chosen in order of rank!" Sakura argued.



"Exactly, but in this case, it's lowest rank to highest. Think about it: Neji, Shikamaru, Sasuke, Naruto...and finally, the strongest shinobi in your generation,"



Tsunade looked at Hinata, kissing her forehead softly.



"Hinata."



The girls refused to believe it: Hinata Hyuuga was the strongest ninja in all of Konoha?! It almost didn't seem possible. As they all began walking back to town, Tsunade sighed a little as she stared up at the moon as she led the group back home.



"Girls, I want you to know something...Hinata was meant to be a Gonnin since birth. I understand that she may seem weak, but she is far from it. We have also chosen Hinata for the mission because of the main fact that Hinata isn't originally from Konoha."



TenTen stopped, causing the rest of the group to stop.



"Then...where is she from?"



"Yukigakure. The same place the remaining Gonnin are. You all already know the story of how Hinata's mother fell in love with Naruto's father, right?"



While it was news to Temari and Sakura, TenTen was already aware of it. Everyone stopped just outside of Konoha's gates to rest. Jiraiya still held Hinata as she slept, while Kurenai, Tsunade and the other kunoichi sat down to rest for a moment as well. Tsunade, as if looking very lost in thought, continued on with her story.



"Well, what you don't know...is that Hinata's mother wasn't originally a Hyuuga."



"Yeah, we know, her last name is different." Sakura said, trying to comprehend all the new information.



Tsunade sighed a little bit and nodded.



"Very acute, Sakura. Yes, Shioriko Natsuyuki migrated from Yukigakure when Hinata was born, returning to Konoha."



"But, why did she even leave Yukigure?" Temari asked, resting her head against her enormous fan.



Tsunade looked at Jiraiya who chuckled a little as he gently stroke Hinata's soft, purple hair.



"It was because Shioriko-San hadn't completed her duties in Yukigakure."



"Her duties as what?"



"Yondaime. Shioriko Natsuyuki was the first female Hokage of Yukigakure and the fourth Hokage of the village."



Everyone went silent with shock.



"H...Hinata's mother was a Hokage?" Sakura barely managed.



Once again, everyone's attention turned to the sleeping girl in Jiraiya's arms. There was so much about Hinata they didn't know...yet, they had a feeling that Hinata didn't know about it either. TenTen herself was even more curious about her future cousin-in-law...From what she knew, Naruto's father and Hinata's mother were in love with one another, but...she knew nothing about Hinata's original heritage, her land of her birth or even her mother. The fact that the most powerful guardian of the north, Byakko, was housed in her body, was cause for alarm as well. How could Hinata house so much power and not know of it's origins, much less of the power within her own body? Jiraiya could only chuckle once more.



"Man, if Naruto and Hinata are this damn scary, I can't WAIT to see their kid!"



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(A/N: The next chapters that are coming up are apart of what I call the "Yukigakure Chronicals: The Snow-Covered Past". I almost made it into a completely separate story, so....yeah, lol. The story's original title will stick, so I just see this as like an extension of the story. You know, how like authors stop the story with one book then write a totally different one...?



OKAY SO SUE ME, I'M TOTALLY RAMBLING! lol, I was played for a sucker last night when I decided to babysit my sister's kid because she wanted to go see some rap concert or whatever (My sister's 15, I'm 19 if that isn't f'ed up, I don't know what is), so I'm running on little sleep, lol. Anyway, the kids are total hellraisers and seriously made me consider whenever I get married/have kids, I am gonna have a separate room for my writing that way, I can say, "DON'T BOTHER MOMMY JUST BECAUSE YOU SHOVED A LOAF OF BREAD INTO THE DVD PLAYER...ask daddy to fix it!"



Lol, yes, my nephew decided to stick a piece of rye bread into my dvd player last night. Thank GOD I didn't get blueray, lol. Oh, pps: I recently got hooked on the Guitar Hero games...(I'm a total gamer, lol! Love em even though I should be doing homework...Damn college, lol) and well, ever seen someone smash a guitar on the ground? Know that saying Monkey-See-Money-Do?



RIP: My beautiful white, wireless guitar who perished at the hands my 8yr old niece. Goddamn, Party Like a Rockstar video, lol. Anyway, that's enough from me! I'll be updating within the next twenty-four hours! For now, enjoy!!!



In the meantime, I remain your hentai-writing, child-watching, video-game-playing-when-she-should-be-doing-her-homework-and-studying-for-her-huge-English-mid-term-while-also-multi-tasking-and-eating-teeth-rottening-goodies-and-watching-her-rats (Captain and Coke, yes, an obvious pun on the drink Captain Morgan and Coke)-spin-in-their-wheel, I remain yours truely,



Sho-Chan!)
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