Journery to Find Mr. Right

Disclaimer: I don’t own Naruto or any characters of Naruto. This story takes place in an AU.


Chapter 4


Friday finally came as Tenten was driving Naruto to the optometrist for his laser eye surgery. It took her an hour to get him out of the house because Naruto was scared to death of surgeries. In Naruto’s life he had gotten two surgeries. The first one was when he was twelve years old and he thought he had appendicitis. His parents rushed him to the hospital and he was put under a series of tests for ten hours. After hours of Kat scans, sonograms, blood tests, and IVs the doctor’s told Naruto that he had a slight inflammation in his lower bowel. He couldn’t believe what he was hearing. He went through hours upon hours of tests just to find out his tummy hurt! After he left his cousin had started saying that he had a poop tube problem. The second time Naruto needed surgery was when he was sixteen years old and was at a party. He had gotten very drunk and was at the point where he could be taken advantage of to the highest point. The next morning Naruto woke up with a terrible stomachache. Later he and his friend took him to get an X-ray. The doctor found a beer bottle inside of his stomach. Apparently Naruto managed to swallow it and it sunk so low down his intestines the only way to remove it was through his… rectum. After the surgery Naruto had to be bandaged around his pelvic region and it looked like he wore a mummified diaper. From these past experiences anyone could tell that person would not want anymore surgeries to tell about. Unfortunately if you asked your friend to take off work to baby-sit your blind ass after surgery there was no way you were going to weasel out of that surgery.


While the two were driving to the clinic Tenten was trying to keep her cool but unfortunately Naruto was really testing her patience. Since the time between her having to drag him into the car and the ride there it’s been more than a little annoying for her.
“You can’t make me you can’t make me!” shouted Naruto while gnawing on the tape that Tenten wrapped around his hands.

“Will you please stop fussing you fucking baby! You’re the one that asked me to baby-sit your dumbass. I’m beginning to think Hinata totally bsed about that stupid meeting. What the hell is this client’s name anyway?” asked Tenten in a very aggravated tone.

“I don’t remember. I think she said it was Seamore Hoochies,” said Naruto in a completely clueless tone. When they got to the clinic Tenten was buzzed in and the receptionist witnessed Tenten dragging Naruto in by the legs with him screaming bloody murder. She threw him on in one of the chairs in the waiting room. “Has anyone ever told you that you’re freakishly strong!” shouted Naruto slumping in her chair. “Appointment for Naruto Uzumaki,” said Tenten to the freaked out receptionist. After holding down Naruto for 25 minutes the doctor called him in and Tenten once again dragged him into the office. After a while the doctor and Tenten somehow got Naruto on the chair and the surgery began.


Tenten walked back into the waiting room knowing the worst was over. She pulled out her cell phone and dialed Hinata ready to bitch to her ‘til the sun went down. The phone began to rang and Hinata picked up.
“Hey Tenten what’s up?” asked Hinata after swallowing her Lo Mein.

“Seamore Hoochies!” shouted Tenten loud enough for every person in the clinic to hear her.

“Shit he told you?” asked Hinata choking on her food.

“Oh hell yeah he told me. Bitch it’d go time! Do you know what the hell I had to go through with this asswipe!?” yelled Tenten into the phone falling into one of the chairs.

“Hey calm down! I’m sorry I know how that man is with surgeries so I had to make an excuse not to go. I never wanted for you to get into this situation, but what was I suppose to do after you agreed? I’ll make it up to I promise. Umm how about I let you threesome with Naruto and me if your date goes bad. We are always open to new things,” giggled Hinata taking another mouthful of the noodles.

“Please no man cries when a doctor shines a light in his eyes and eww I don’t want to threesome with you and Naruto. You have to do a lot better than that if you want to make it up to me,” said Tenten calming down a bit.

“Hmm well how about I take you on a 100% makeover all day tomorrow before your date so you can blow him away. I still wouldn’t count out the threesome,” said Hinata.

“The makeover sounds fine!” said Tenten before hanging up the phone.


It had been another few hours before Naruto’s surgery was finished and in the mean time Tenten was bored out of her bind. Tenten prayed for someone to call because she was about to loose her mind watching the boring documentary being played in the living room. “C’mon god gimme anyone here. I just need someone to talk to until the baby comes out of surgery,” said Tenten with her cell phone between her hands and she was on her knees staring at the ceiling until the phone rang. Tenten was so delighted that she didn’t even check who was calling.
“Hello?” asked Tenten in a somewhat chipper tone.

“Hey it’s me,” said the voice as Tenten was soon regretting her vague prayer.

“Sasuke please stop calling me!” said Tenten angrily.

“Please Tenten I have to talk to you,” pleaded Sasuke.

“We have nothing to talk about,” said Tenten in a cool composed manner.

“Please Tenten I really miss you. I think we have great chemistry and I want to see you again. You took that night all wrong let me explain. What really happened was—,” said Sasuke before Tenten closed her phone. She didn’t want to hear anything he had to say and sure anything that came out of his mouth was a lie. Sasuke tried calling four more times after that but Tenten just ignored it trying to get some sleep. After 45 minutes the doctor told Tenten that Naruto was ready to go home. “Well how do I look?” asked Naruto wearing enormous black glasses to protect his eyes. “You look like Val Kilmer from that fruity tooty movie where he played a blind guy,” said Tenten trying to hold back a visible laugh. After guiding Naruto to the car they spent the whole car ride arguing about Naruto’s fear of surgeries being blown out of proportion. After half an hour of arguing they finally got to Tenten’s house and she guided him to the door. As they entered the house Tenten guided Naruto to the couch until her phone rang. She let go of Naruto to get to her phone causing him to trip over himself.
“Hello?” asked Tenten not noticing Naruto on the floor.

“Hey Tenten. I was just wondering if the surgery was done yet and how Naruto was doing,” asked Hinata.

“Yeah the surgery is over and we just got home. Naruto is just being a dumbass just lying down on the floor right after the surgery. You’d think he’d know better,” said Tenten glancing over to the man.
Naruto pretended to ignore that comment and said, “Tell Hinata I feel just fine.”

“He says he’s fine. Alright then I’ll talk to you later. Bye hun,” said Tenten before closing her phone. Tenten helped Naruto up and helped him to the couch. For a few hours everything went well. Naruto didn’t ask for much and for everything he did ask Tenten was more than happy to do. Tenten was watching TV on the couch with Naruto while he was pretty much just listening to it until he spoke.
“Tenten you seem kinda quiet. Is everything alright?” asked Naruto with a concerned tone in his voice.

“It’s nothing really,” lied Tenten.

“Seriously Tenten you are a horrible liar. C’mon spill,” said Naruto.

“Sasuke called me today,” said Tenten in a low tone.

“Oh my god what did he say?” gasped Naruto.

“Just some crap about how the stuff that happened that night was a mistake and that he needed to explain and how I misunderstood. I just got so sick of it so I hung up. He tried to call a few more times but I didn’t pick up,” said Tenten with growing sadness in her voice.

“You really miss him don’t you?” asked Naruto rubbing Tenten’s shoulder.

“A little bit. I just can’t forget about the good things that happened along with the bad ones. We just sparked. It wasn’t the fact that he had money or that he took me to a fancy restaurant it was how he planned out the evening that caught me. At first you would think he’s a pro at that stuff but after observing him the whole night I noticed it in his eyes. It was the first time he ever chose to make that kind of date and he chose me even though we haven’t met before. If what happened after didn’t happen I could swear I was in love with him,” said Tenten wiping away a tear from her eye.

“Tenten I promise that me and Hinata and everyone else are going to help you find that same feeling with another guy no matter how many different guys we have to go through,” said Naruto with a reassuring smile.

“Thanks Naruto I really appreciate it. You know this is the first time I think we ever had a civilized conversation,” said Tenten before putting her head on his shoulder.

After a few hours Hinata came home and helped Tenten take care of Naruto. Naruto took off his glasses after a while and said he never had better vision than he did now. The three enjoyed diner together and all fell asleep on the couch watching a movie. In the morning Hinata took Tenten to the makeover she promised and brought along Naruto to carry the shopping bags. After a day of makeovers and shopping the three came home and decided to get ready for the double date. Naruto was completely wiped out from carrying shopping bags from store to store and fell asleep putting on his pants. After an hour the girls were putting the finishing touches on their outfits. Hinata was fixing her hair while Tenten was putting on lip-gloss. Hinata found Naruto in the living room and smacked him on the back of his head to wake him up. The three were finally ready for Shikamaru to come and pick them up.
“What do you think he’s gonna be like?” asked Tenten.

“Hopefully not a dud like the other ones,” said Naruto not noticing the two girls glaring at him.

“I’m sure he’s gonna be fine,” said Hinata before the doorbell rang. Hinata answered it and there stood a somewhat tall man that had a good clean look to him but had a somewhat bored expression on his face.
“Oh hey you must be Shikamaru. I’m Hinata nice to meet you,” said Hinata flashing the man a friendly smile.

“Hey I’m Shikamaru. I guess I’m here to pick up Tenten,” said Shikamaru in a monotone.

Tenten walked over to the man and smiled. “Nice to meet you,” said Tenten smiling.

“Yeah back at you,” said Shikamaru with the same expression on his face.

“Umm shall we get going?” said Naruto walking towards the door.


The four got into Shikamaru’s car and drove to the diner they were going to eat at. During the whole ride the three tried to start conversation with the man but the only thing that came out of him were grunts and occasional short sentences. He never once turned over to them or asked them anything so everyone decided to keep silent. When they got to the diner the four ordered and tried to start conversation.
“So Shikamaru what kind of stuff do you do at work?” asked Hinata taking a sip of her drink.
“I monitor my division’s spreadsheets,” said Shikamaru slumping in his chair.

“Do you like your job?” asked Tenten trying to get this guy to smile at least once.

“I guess,” was all Shikamaru said remaining in the same position.

Out of frustration Naruto blurted, “Shikamaru is there a reason why you looked bored because I think all of us want you to enjoy yourself.”

“I’ve basically been like this since I became sober two years ago,” said Shikamaru.

“I think this guy needs some serious liquor to crack a smile,” thought Hinata to herself as she angrily stared at the uncaring man.


The three were so fed up with Shikamaru that they all said that they needed to get home right away due to their own made up reasons whether it was Hinata’s burning roast or Tenten leaving the iron on or Naruto saying he needed to pray. The three got home looking like they spent eternity sitting in one place. “Another dud,” was all Tenten could say before slumping onto the couch. “Don’t worry honey we can always get you another date but tonight we are going to have fun,” said Hinata before leaning in and placing a kiss on Tenten’s lips. Tenten was in shock as her best friend and roommate was kissing her and penetrating her lips with her tongue. Hinata lifted Tenten off the couch and resumed kissing her while Naruto began to kiss and nip Tenten’s neck. After the shock of it all Tenten began to get into the threesome and started moaning from the nips that Naruto was giving her. Hinata began to undress Tenten and started kissing her body with each article of clothing she removed. Tenten was loving the pleasure she was receiving as Hinata was pleasuring her from the front and Naruto was pleasuring her from the back. When they were all naked Hinata began to eat out Tenten as Tenten began to suck on Naruto’s hard shaft. Tenten was moaning from the pleasure she was receiving from Hinata and Naruto was receiving pleasure from Tenten as Tenten moaned and increased the pleasure she was giving Naruto. Hinata then sat on Tenten’s face so Tenten could eat her out and began to suck on Naruto’s dick. Tenten never had sex with a girl before but when she started eating Hinata out she really got into it and began to work her like a pro. After a few minutes of eating out Hinata’s cunt she moved from under her and began to join her in pleasuring Naruto. Naruto was in ecstasy as he was receiving the double pleasure from the girls. The two took turns and switched back and forth between the man’s balls and dick. After what seemed like hours out switching positions with each other between the three Naruto placed Tenten on her back and positioned his dick with her wet cunt and Hinata sat on Tenten’s face so Tenten could eat her out again. Naruto started to thrust into Tenten as she began to slide her tongue into Hinata’s pussy. All three were moaning loudly as each was enjoying their own source of pleasure. Hinata was pinching her nipple as she moaned from the vibrations of Tenten’s moans on her sensitive cunt. Naruto sped up his thrusting as he had both hands on Tenten’s breasts and leaned in and began to kiss Hinata passionately while thrusting into Tenten. After hours of pleasure all three were close to climaxing. Naruto started the chain as he sped up his thrusts and with one final thrust came inside the condom. Tenten and Hinata both came right after Naruto and they all collapsed onto the bed.


In the morning all three were in a good mood after trying something new. Hinata commented on Tenten’s skill especially since this was her first time with a girl. Suddenly there was a knock on the door. Since Naruto and Hinata were cuddling and kissing Tenten placed it upon herself to answer the door. When she opened it her eyes widened as she saw a figure that she did not want to see. “We need to talk,” said the man at the door.

Okay all that was Chapter 4. Sorry it took a while to update but I did it. I hope you guys liked it and be sure to comment whether it’s good or bad. More soon