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Look At Me

By: bkdragone
folder Naruto › Het - Male/Female
Rating: Adult ++
Chapters: 10
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Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
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Swimming and Campfires

I edited the chapter a little more but im still not completly satisfied, its been extended but there was so much more i wish i had included.

xoxox mia

REMEMBER- THE ONLY WAY TO GET YOUR OPINION TO ME IS THROUGH REVIEWS.

Reviewers

Moiya Hatake- thanks so much for reviewing. you are my most faithful reviwer. i see what your saying about sasuke i'll keep that in mind. kakashi is my favorite character ever. i could drool over him all day. i have tried to lengthen my chapters.

Krickets- about a sai/sakura/kakashi threesome it would be hard to write on cannon. i could give it a try though (not in this fic)

One reviewer said (before they removed their own review i never remove reviews even if they are complete flaming because they are entitled to what they think and who am i to say they are wrong? right?)they said that i made the characters too big because they are supposed to be japenese. My argument is that they don't actually look like people from japan, ie Naruto's hair and eyes and in general the facial features of the characters. so i thought it would be ok to give them heights how i imagine them instead of traditional japenese averages. if people are really bothered by it i can take it out. but does it matter?
however on a side note you have good taste: Bleach is amazing i am Renji/rukia forever

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Sakura had been walking through the dense forest on the island for fifteen minutes when she found what she was looking for. A small stream she had seen while trying to find the boys when she first arrived. It was deep enough to wade in up to her breasts, but there were shallower bits on the rocky sides of brook that she could sit and relax in. She felt emotionally exhausted from the day and it wasn’t even over yet.

At 20 years old she hadn’t even been on a proper date yet! It was all because of them. Over the years she had been on team Kakashi she had been told numerous times how lucky she was to work with such hot man candy; most disturbingly by Hokage-sama who had said that if she had been on that team when she was young, she would have wasted no time showing them how to have fun. That mental picture had given her nightmares for weeks.

Taking off her short genin dress and laying it beside her extra shorts and bra, she heard rustling in the bushes and quick as a flash she hurled a kunai at the questionable piece of foliage. There was a noise like a cat being strangled. Getting in her defensive position she waited for the impending attack. What she got was a very startled looking chipmunk rushing out of the bush and fleeing to a tree on the other side of the clearing. Taking a deep breath she tried to stretch again like she had in her house this morning. Her muscles ached. So she took care of it the only way she could think of because she still might have to train with Kaka-sensei and she couldn't afford to waste chakra on sore muscles.

She stepped into the stream letting out a contented sigh. The cold water running down her back cooled the anger she had been feeling towards Sai, Naruto, Sasuke, and Kakashi. Taking a breath before dunking her head she enjoyed the tightening sensation on her scalp. Closing her eyes she thought back to her teammates.

She had to admit to herself that getting to look at the four of them on missions was nice. However it came with some drawbacks. Sasuke was very much annoyed by the fan girl fawning he got everyday. If she took the extra time to appreciate his ass she had a feeling he might stop taking her seriously and the friendship she had built with him would crumble, not to mention he would flip a shit and start giving her 10 feet of extra space like he had when they were little.

Naruto was madly in love with her. He had been since they were young. It wasn’t like she wasn’t attracted to him, she was. He had become quite the playboy since he had grown. He seemed to be really enjoying the freedom that came with being a very attractive single ninja. If she showed any interest in him he would no doubt want something serious and she could say honestly she wouldn’t be able to give him what he wanted. He wanted love not lust and to make him put his lifestyle on hold for her needs was not something she was comfortable with.

Sai was an emotionally retarded bastard. There was no way anything would happen there. He, like Sasuke had a rabid fan club. That they were a group of girls thoroughly devoted to him gave Sakura the chills. Not because he wasn’t sex incarnated like Sasuke because that was undeniable, but because the girls had clearly never talked to him. Anyone who had would not mindlessly follow him around. He was an asshole. Not even a cool one like Sasuke. He was an ass that had no idea how to talk to people and had to read books to figure it out. Then there was his strange little outburst earlier. What had he been doing? Was it some sort of artistic thing? Or a get to know her thing? If it had come out of his books on ‘bonds’ she would burn them. That was too confusing to think about. She’d rather think about her sexy sensei.

Regardless of whether of not he read porn in public, or rather all the time, Kakashi Hatake was extremely hot. He was Naruto’s height had more muscle then Sasuke and moved with more grace the Sai and Sasuke put together; which was saying something. Sakura would never ever openly admit how much she was attracted to her sensei. Something about the mystery of what his face actually looked like combined with his aloof I don’t care attitude made her determined to find out what made him tick. He was fascinating. He fascinated her. Everything he did, besides read Icha Icha, had a purpose. She wanted to see him, like Sasuke, go wild.

While Sakura was splayed out in the stream thinking about her teammates two of them were hiding in a bush 10 feet away arguing over what had to be done. Naruto and Sasuke had masked their chakra and staring raptly at there lovely little teammate.

“No way teme. There is nothing that is getting me away from this bush right now. Looking at Sakura is one thing but approaching her is another. She just nearly castrated me with a kunai when she wasn't even angery, and unlike you, I make good use of my dick. I wouldn’t want to lose it.” He grinned wolfishly at Sasuke. The Uchiha returned his grin with a superior smirk.

“Well deadlast regardless of what I do with my dick at least I can back up my boasting,” Sasuke said smirking again in a way that made Naruto feel like slaming his fist into his gut. “Besides, if I hadn’t of shoved you back and put my hand over your mouth that kunai would have cut off ‘little Naruto’.” Sasuke’s smirk widened.

“Theres nothing little about it, Virgin.” Naruto growled back at him. “You don’t understand why I don’t want to go out there because you’ve never seen Sakura when she gets REALLY mad. You might have seen it, but you’ve never been on the receiving end. Last time she caught me peeking at her I couldn’t breath for weeks.”

“Idiot. You would be dead if you couldn’t breath for weeks. This is so juvenile.” Sasuke grunted out. Nevertheless, he didn’t leave. He kept staring at Sakura. She was so beautiful when she wasn’t talking. Even when she was talking he still felt a pull toward her. In the last year she had backed off him a lot. She paid him the same amount of attention she paid the rest of the team. He almost found himself almost wishing she would dote upon him as she used to.

Then again, maybe not. This new sexy independent Sakura was definitely getting to him in a way no girl ever had. For once she looked like a challenge. The likes of which he hadn’t had since he slept with Kurenai, last August almost a year ago. God had it been that long since he’d been laid? It wasn’t like he lacked opportunities; he could sleep with any chuunin he wanted with the exception of maybe Hinata. And even some of the jounins. But he didn’t normally need sex like Naruto did. He didn’t need affection ever either. But he had a stong urge to have Sakura. Who was he to deny his needs?

“Hey Ice-Prick, stop brooding and come back to reality.” Naruto said close to his ear. Sasuke’s face tightened but he didn’t take his eyes off Sakura. “I have a bet. The first one to get a date from Sakura-chan with out cheating gets his dinners bought by the loser for a year. “ Sasuke smirked.

“You honestly think you can beat me?” Sasuke said looking at Naruto. “This is Sakura. You have been trying to go out with her since you were 11.” He didn’t mention that Sakura had been trying to do the same to him since that time.

“Nah. I stopped putting effort into it when we were 15,” Naruto said. “And Sakura got over you about that same time, so don’t think that just because she thought she was in love with you when she was 11, means you have the advantage because she still thinks that way. I liked her too much to keep actively going after her because she needed her space. Besides our Sakura-chan, the last time I checked had a huge thing for Neji-san.” Sasuke made a mental note the next time he saw the Hyuga he would make sure he knew what would happen to him if he so much as touched Sakura.

“Hnn.” Sasuke grunted noncommittally. He cleared his face of all emotion and stepped out of the bush pulling Naruto behind him.

“Sakura-chan” Naruto called out to the relaxing girl. Who quickly opened her eyes and glared at the shirtless boys. “Can we join you? We really are sorry. Even bastard doesn’t want you mad at him.” Naruto’s cute pout broke Sakura’s glare. Then Sasuke tripped him with his left foot. Sending him face first into the mud. Sakura giggled.

“It looks like I’m falling-“ Naruto began but didn’t finish because a stern looking Sakura cut him off.

“If you dare use one of those lame pick up lines I’ll send you away to find you own stream.” But Sakura’s stern attitude was ruined by the smile pulling over her face. “Fine, fine you can stay, but on one condition. Promise me you won’t threaten any more of the guys who want to ask me out.” Naruto and Sasuke took off their pants and sat in the stream in their boxers on either side of her. Naruto leaned back and stretched in his orange and white polka dotted boxers while Sasuke leisurely strechted his long legs and his black boxer clad torso in the water, his long hair brushing against her shoulders. Years ago being this close to Sasuke would have sent her into a puddle or cardiac arrest, now she even managed a witty comment.

"I expected the orange from you Naruto, but Sasuke where's the Uchiha crest on yours." Sakura said sarcastically refering to their boxers. Naurto laughed.

"I'm sure the teme has a second skimpier pair of underwear on with the crest on it." Naurto said slyly. "So asshole is it on the front or the back of your man thong" Sasuke made no reply except to give Naruto a dead arm.

"So are you two going to promise to stop interfering with possible dates" Sakura stated boldly gaging their responses.

“Sakura-chan! I can’t agree to that.” Naruto whined. “Some weak guy might try to take you away from us!”

“And then every time you came over to my house I’d have to deal with his presence.” Sasuke stated blandly.

“Yeah! Yeah the bastard’s right! It would ruin our….” Naruto paused gathering his thoughts. “Our…. Our…. TEAM DYNAMICS! Yeah we wouldn’t want that. Because then our missions wouldn’t go as well!!!”

“Baka! How can out team dynamics be affected by whom I date or sleep with.” Sakura said, “Besides random sex can’t hurt our team dynamics… can it Naruto?” She asked pointedly. Sasuke gave one of his rare laughs.

“Hey! This isn’t about me. It's about Sakura-chan” Naruto whined. Then he looked shocked. “Sakura-chan, you’re after random sex?” Sasuke coughed loudly and splashed water at Naruto. Sakura blushed deeply.

“Dobe.” Sasuke growled. Looking from the embarrassed girl to Naruto he could tell what the answer to the question was. If there was one thing for certain, he was not going to lose his opportunity with Sakura to some semi-goodlooking, smooth talking ninja from another village.

"But Sakura-chan you're a virgin right? I thought women didn't even like random sex." Naruto said inquisitively. "Besides if you ever want to have a good time I'm always and option. I know way more tricks then the teme." He got splashed in the eyes by an irate looking Sasuke but he ignored it.

"Deadlast, how would you know whose better? We've never had sex, unless you secretly film me." Sasuke said smirking at him in his own superior way.

"Well Ice-Bitch practice makes perfect and you don't get a lot of practice, where as I get a lot." Naruto said smugly. His smile was wiped off when he was splashed again.

"Again loser there is only one way you would know what kind of experience I have. It involves you and a camcorder." Sasuke's smirk broadened when he finshed his sentence.

"Yeah right like a anti-social bastard like you is secretly getting a lot of action." Narto said in a sarcastic tone. Sasuke splashed him from both sides.

Through out this argument Sakura's rage had been building. She had come to the stream to think and relax. 'How dare Naruto assume she was a virgin.' and him and Sasuke and their macho posing it was disgusting. She was about to beat them to a pulp when Naruto's manly scream pulled her out of her mind.

“Teme! I have water in my ears! Sakura-chan!!!!! Heal me!” Naruto said holding his ears. “I’ll get you back teme!” He hit the water with his arm sending it into Sasuke’s face.

The all-out splash war was stopped by Kakashi entering the clearing he eyed Sakura apreciatively, discreetly. He pulled them back to change clothes then to dry them off before they left the training field. Sakura hit Naruto with her wet shorts when he tried to peek on her changing. Walking back to where Sai sat starting a fire with his chakra Sakura felt strangely content.

They sat in front of the fire for hours talking about everything and everyone. Breaking up the occasional fight between the younger boys or between Sasuke and Sai. Kakashi’s mind however was on Sakura. He was thinking about how sexy she had become. He decided to put his attraction on the side for right now. He didn’t want to be the dirty old man, the nine year age difference was a little more then he felt like she was ready for.

"I have an idea! Let's get some sake!" Naruto exclaimed as if he had come up with something genius. Sakura laughed and smiled widely. Kakashi suddenly forgot what Naruto had been saying and ignored the rest. " You have to come to this time sensei! You haven't hung out with us outside of missions for so long." Naruto finshed but for some reason he didn't think Kakashi had heard him.

Something about the way she smiled when Naruto said something stupid made him feel like he wasn’t looking at a little kid no matter how innocent she looked. He had to protect her from being corrupted by Sai. Sai did not have to capacity to give her what she needed, neither did he. Regardless of the consequences he wanted to make sure she never lost that smile.
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REVIEW POLL:
Who should punch Genma (for hitting on Sakura)

a. Sai
b. Sasuke
c. Kakashi

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