Sweet, Innocent Hinata-Chan (COMPLETE!!!!!)

(A/N: Okaaaay...to Cherry Niblets, thanks for your constructive critisim, I'd LOVE to read one of your stories to see how a REAL author works and such. I don't want to read the 'second penname' stuff, I want to read the actual works you have. It may not seem like I know what I'm doing, what with 'seven or eight stories at once', but that's just how I operate. It's not like I leave the characters and plots alone and say, "Oh, hell, I'm just going to throw this in for fun and leave it be". No, when I put something in a story, I always intend on making it clear what my intentions are by the time. HOWEVER, I am not a newer author. I've been writing my own, unqiue stories for a LOOOONG time, even though I am 19. I've been published (Though, it's mostly been poems and like one or two short stories for contest) but my stories and writings and works are my life. Lol, I can't believe you actually thought I'd been seething with rage, lol. That was a little funny. I'd like to have you review my stories a little more because while it seems you're having a hard time swallowing this story, I promise by the end, I will have delivered so don't count me out just yet, lol. I appreciate the CC, as opposed to the "This story sux" or "Disgusting" or stuff like that. I may be young, but believe me, this fanfic is nothing compared to some of the things I've written in the past. I mean, I will admit this is my first fanfic and NARUTO fanfic at that. I'm surprised it got so far, but I'm glad that you have taken the time to review and such and who knows, maybe I'll see you at an anime convention one day. Sorry this story isn't all that great to you, but that doesn't mean it's overall terrible. There is room for improvement and such and like I said when I first laid down the first chapter: I know it may seem a little unsure where it's going, but I promise to deliver. It may seem like the plot is ALL over the damn place and the maturing characters seem to have an agenda all their own, but this is just how I operate my stories. Little mechanical errors, those can be improved, but I won't change my writing style. I can only hope that I improve on the deliverance of the story seeing how I plan on writing stories for a lifetime. As long as I can write, I'm set. Anyway, thanks for the review. PS: There is a difference between my story and a trainwrecked story, so I AM a little irked you said my story is trainwrecked. Trust me, hon, I would have stopped a long time ago because hey, why drag a dying story through the mud? I know when to quit. I will continue to improve myself and such, so I really hope you continue to read, if not, it's okay. I appreciate the CC nonetheless. Lol and thanks for the comment about the BDSM, those are my claim to fame, lol. What can I say? I have a very active imagination.



Now, to everyone else, thankies for the reviews, sorry about if I've confused anyone and everyone with the plot, but like I said, I promise to deliver. Here are some of the things a few people are wondering:



Q: What was the point of Hiashi bringing back Hiazshi?

A: For his chakra for an extra boost of power for him, but something else I'm not gonna disclose...



Q: Why is the lineup for the Kage Exam Gaara vs. Hinata and Temari vs. Naruto?

A: Because that's the unlikiest matchup I have ever seen and it leaves people who will be vs. who in the end (not who you'd expect)



Q: Will there be more smut?

A: Yes you perverts, yes! lol, j/k. But yes, there will be.



Q: What's so special about Gobi, Kyuubi and Byakko and how do you go about getting Gobi to resurface?

A: THIS is when paying attention to detail comes into play! Just to clarify, you need Byakko, Gobi and the five shattered peices of the Talisman of Gobi, ALONG with the Linear Ecplise, when all of the planets align together.



Q: Why the hell is it taking so long for the Eclipse to happen?

A: It happened just ONE other time in the story, if you were paying attention, (mwahahaha)



Q: Who holds pieces of the key?

A: Hinata, Naruto, Gaara, Temari and Neji (his piece given to him by Hizashi before he died)



Q: How can a little three-year-old learn such a complicated jutsu

A: He's a prodigy, but all things considered, in the world of Naruto, it's not really unheard of, plus, consider is bloodline.



Q: Are we going to see the chapter when Naruto and Hinata first started dating?

A: Yes, but it's probably going to be an end-of-story bonus chapter/



Q: Who's Matsuri?

A: Matsuri is Gaara's apprentice in the Naruto world and she's just so damn cute, I HAD to make her his wife.



Q: WHAT IS THE PENDANT AROUND HINATA'S NECK FOR?!?!?

A: Patience is a virtue, lol. But I will tell you that it's power was ALSO used just once in the story and is vital to the story



Q: Why does TenTen get pregnant so often? (lol, this one made me laugh)

A: Neji is a busy boy. You'd think he was trying to build a clan all his own.



Q: The Hanabi/Kiba pairing was cute!

A: Um...lol, thank you. I thought Hanabi and Kiba was a new, surprise pairing, for me atleast.



Q: Will there be more backstories on ShikaTema, InoCho, Neji/Ten, ect, ect?

A: YES. I make it a point to keep most characters up-to-date and such.



Q: Why did all the girls suddenly have children?

A: I sorta parodied this off of my last day of high school, senior year in 07. ALL of my best girlfriends have kids. I'm like "WTF IS THIS?! DROPPING SEASON?" lol, j/k. But I thought it was rather funny everyone started having kids so soon, but I thought Hikaru needed some friends in his age group.



Q: HOW MANY CHILDREN ARE IN THIS STORY TOTAL AND WHO DO THEY BELONG TO AND WHAT DO THEIR NAMES MEAN?!

A: Lol, ready?



Naruto/Hinata: Hikaru Uzumaki-(Male) "Light"



Sasuke/Sakura: Hikari Uchiha-(Female), Tsubasa Uchiha-(Male) "Light" and "Wings" (Twins)



Shikamaru/Temari: Tsubasa Nara-(Male) "Four-Leaf-Clover"



Kiba/Hanabi: Arashi Inazuka-(Female) "Storm"



Neji/TenTen: Sun-Ce ("Warrior" or the Chinese way of saying "Neji") (Male), Shan-Hyuu (Chinese for "Wishbringer"/"Dreamer", (Male) and Hizashi, (Unborn, but male)



Ladies and gentlemen, a grand total of EIGHT children all total and this story isn't even done if anyone was paying attention to Hinata's little talk with Shino's mom about names, lol! Anyway, anymore questions, lemme know! Thanks for all the reviews and such! And yes, I do tend to ramble in my Author's Notes, Dieste. Lol! I just laughed when I saw that...and before I start on rambling about something COMPLETELY irrelivent to this lol. LOOK FOR AN UPDATE WITHIN THE NEXT FEW HOURS!!!! Much love all, Sho-Chan)