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Do Over

By: KitsuneFun
folder Naruto › Yaoi - Male/Male
Rating: Adult ++
Chapters: 17
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Chapter 6

Thanks again to all my reviewers for their support and comments. I appreciate all great feedback you've given to me about my story. I hope you enjoy this weeks chapter which includes an appearance by the Sasuke fan girls Sakura and Ino. So without further ado here's Chapter 6

Disclamer: I don't own Naruto that honor is held by Masashi Kishimoto, I'm just a fanfiction writer doing this for fun

DO Over Chapter 6

Sasuke's eyes opened to view the ceiling of the Nurse’s Office in confusion. 'Why am I in bed?' he asked himself. It was then that various scattered memories were brought quickly to mind of the sight, he remembered, that had greeted him as he entered the communal boy’s showers earlier. He remembered stopping in shock and lust at the vision that was presented to him--of water slicking down golden-white hair before trailing tantalizingly down tan shoulders then flowing down the back, only slowing down slightly over a firm, well shaped and bare backside to then continue trailing over long, shapely, and athletically-slender thighs. But instead of remaining still the body before him, that belonged to his ex-boyfriend, started to dance under the spray of the shower and sing off-key to the song “I'm Too Sexy” into his container of shampoo that represented Naruto's makeshift mike. A nosebleed threatened and common sense went out the window as Sasuke stared opened mouthed at the delectable body before him as it begin to sway and undulate to the lyrics that reminded him of a music video he'd seen replayed once on the “Best of the ‘80's” on VH1. Licking his suddenly dry lips unconsciously at the sight of Naruto's private dance, Sasuke, in that moment, thanked whoever was watching over him for such a sight.

The blonde heard the sound of feet approaching, and, thinking it was Gaara, he asked the approaching figure over his shoulder, "Hey, Smexy-man...?" he throws a soaped-up washcloth over his shoulder at the supposed redhead, "Wash my back for me. I can’t seem to reach it." He laughed at the, "Hn" he heard behind him.

Sasuke paused to eye the washcloth like a foreign object as he glanced between it, the smooth tan flesh of Naruto’s back, and back again with a suddenly dry mouth. 'Is this some newly discovered form of temptation?' he wondered. Now common sense at this point would have told him that the blonde wasn't really asking him to wash his back--that it was really Gaara he was asking for. But since common sense had left on a vacation for Las Vegas ever since he first spotted the wet and naked blonde, it suddenly didn't seem, to Sasuke at least, like such a bad idea to fulfill the sexy blonde’s every request. Discarding his own towel, he quickly moved towards Naruto's side before the shorter boy could change his mind or tell who it was he had accidentally asked. Slowly tracing the lines and curves of the blonde’s back with the wet and sudsy washcloth, Sasuke thought bemusedly how, even though time seemed to change people and despite a couple more inches that the two of them had grown, they were still relatively the same. Eyeing the firm slope of Naruto's behind in thought, he debated whether or not he dared to wash that area. Caving into his own, more base nature, Sasuke moved his hand slowly in the direction of that delightfully shaped behind in order to do just that when he suddenly heard the distant sound of cracking knuckles and sensed the presence of an angry aura coming from behind him.

A calm yet deliberate voice broke through his lust-clouded thoughts to ask, "What the hell are you doing?"

Both Sasuke and Naruto turned their heads at the sound of that voice. For Sasuke, it was to wonder why the hell his rival had to interrupt his enjoyment. But Naruto, who had been busy enjoying the ministrations of his very thoughtful boyfriend, wondered as he turned around why the redhead suddenly sounded so far away and why he'd stopped the movements of his hand, only to stare with shock-filled eyes when he found out that it hadn't been Gaara at all but, "Sasuke?!! Wha...?!" Sasuke smirked raising a raven-colored brow in amusement to answer the redhead’s question, "Do you really have to ask?" It apparently wasn't the smartest thing to say to a very jealous and possessive boyfriend who had just spotted his boyfriend being molested in front of his eyes as Gaara continued to glare death in the Uchiha's direction. Sasuke had heard a shocked gasp from behind and turned to give the blonde his leering appreciation of the musical performance and following backwash, only to stop in his tracks at the unencumbered vision of Naruto's naked front as remaining droplets of water clung for dear life while some still trailed down the tan body emphasizing the hollows and curves before the Uchiha's eyes.

Sasuke had wished the remembered visions had ended with that of Naruto's desirable body, but they didn't end there as he was suddenly yanked back around by an infuriated Gaara. The sight of Gaara's fist connecting harshly with the Uchiha's chin was unfortunately the last thing Sasuke remembered clearly before he blacked out and woke up later laying in the Nurse’s bed sporting a bruised and sore chin and neck.

Sasuke never would have thought that Gaara, being the smaller of the two of them in not only height but weight as well, could deliver such a strong punch, but then he was reminded of Kankurou's words about his brother having been in a military academy at one point and even the rumors that the redhead had also been in a gang. If the way Gaara dressed was any indication, then Sasuke would have doubted the rumors since the redhead’s choice in clothing fairly screamed 'Goth,' but the punch reminded him again harshly that it was a definite possibility he couldn't afford to rule out. It was also something Sasuke would have to keep in mind when facing the redhead in the future, since Sasuke, being an Uchiha, wasn't one to back down from any challenge, especially when he knew instinctively that he could fight and win with his martial arts against street brawling any day.

He heard a polite cough alerting him to another presence in the room other than the nurse. Sitting in the a plastic blue, molded chair smoking his trademark cigarette was none other than the PE teacher, Asuma. He took out his cigarette temporarily to speak since he now had the raven-haired boy’s attention. "You know...you got guts, Uchiha..." the PE teacher stated emphasizing his words with the pointing of his cigarette at Sasuke, "Even strait guys know better than to get near Naruto... Especially in the locker room."

Sasuke frowned at the comment, "And I should care WHY...?"

Asuma snorted, "If you know what's good for you, you would," he paused to take a drag of his cigarette, "Naruto is Gaara's boyfriend, and Gaara doesn't share," he stated matter of factly, as though having made his point at the mention of the redhead.

"I don't care..." Sasuke fairly growled in anger as he sat up and moved his hands through his hair in frustration. It felt like everyone he'd met at this school lately had a say in Naruto and Gaara's relationship and were all of the opinion that Sasuke didn't belong in the equation, and it was starting to piss him off since they had no say in how he should feel and should just stay the fuck out of it.

Asuma eyed the reactions of the brunette boy in thought as he continued smoking his cigarette slowly. "You like him, huh?" The question was asked softly, and at first the older man thought Sasuke hadn't heard him til the boy turned torture-filled eyes on him. 'Wow!' Asuma thought, 'He's got it BAD.'

The young boy nodded his head as though emphasizing the teacher’s thoughts. "Yes, I do." Sasuke smiled, leaning his head on his arms as he sat on the bed with raised knees, "I love him..." The last was overshadowed by the shouting of " Sasuke-kun!!!" by the Uchiha's and ironically, though they didn't know it, BlackCurse's resident fangirls Sakura and Ino.

Sakura had made it first to the bed, showing superhuman powers by out-shoving and racing Ino to Sasuke's side. At first the pink-haired girl stared with dramatic tear-filled eyes upon the bed-bound Uchiha but noticing the Uchiha eyeing her critically began to smile brightly as though she didn't want Sasuke to see her upset.

Sasuke, who was used to the most diabolical of stalkers, wasn't fazed by the falseness of the act and only glared in her direction as if to say, 'Get lost!’

Sakura, being the diligent and unfazed fan-girl that she was though, only pretended that she hadn't seen that look as she continued fawning over Sasuke. "As class president," she stated over-dramatically, "it is my duty," to which Inner-Sakura roars her agreement, "to make sure a fellow student like yourself feels comfortable."

Ino nodded her agreement as she smiled at Sasuke before winking as though the raven-haired boy would ever be interested.

Sasuke shuddered at the look only to notice in horror that Sakura, seizing the opportunity, had begun to lean closer over him trying to act seductive but failing miserably as she purred, "Shall I kiss it and make it better, Sasuke-kun?" He began to feel sick to his stomach as those lips advanced on him to fulfill a very unwanted promise. Unable to handle a vision of the antithesis of what he wanted, the Uchiha turn a little green and ran from the room to hurl into the nearest toilet.

Sakura watched Sasuke run away in confusion while twirling a few strands of pink hair around her finger, "Was it something I said...?"

Ino shrugged while smirking in the pink-haired girl’s direction, "Whatever... You won’t beat me for his affection, Forehead Girl."

Sakura and Inner-Sakura twitch as one as they both raised a clenched fist in Ino's direction, "Bring it on, Ino-pig!"

They were interrupted from their usual argument by a highly amused Asuma, who had watched the whole thing while continuing to smoke his cigarette as he waited for his turn to finish the conversation he had started with the Uchiha. But finding that it may be a while due to the interference of the girls, he decided to direct them back to class instead to give the boy some space. "Come on, girls..." he smiled diplomatically, "Let’s get back to class and let Sasuke rest, ok?"

The girls growled a little in each others direction but with the appearance of a teacher knew that it was a subject better left to a time after school. "Of course, Sensei..." they said in unison before leaving with the teacher following close behind.

Asuma sighed as he followed the hyperactive girls to make sure they made it to their next class in one piece. 'You owe me, Uchiha...’Asuma thought as he nodded once meaningfully in Sasuke’s direction as the teen returned from the bathroom. The brunette nodded back as though understanding the teacher’s unspoken demand.

It was after the three had left and Sasuke had gotten back into bed to lay down as his stomach settled again that he was visited by a most unexpected visitor. "Naruto?" He rose again into a sitting position in surprise. For once the blonde actually seemed nervous in the Uchiha's presence, 'Not that he would complain', Sasuke thought as he waited to see or hear what Naruto would do.

The blonde stood as close as he dared to the bed before looking Sasuke in the eye, "Look... I'm not going to say what Gaara did was wrong, since I've often felt and HAVE punched you in the past myself. In fact," he glared, "I should do it anyways for that stunt you pulled in the showers! But," he paused debating the reasoning behind his next words, "Gaara and I didn't realize you'd go down that easily... You could have seriously been hurt." His eyes darkened for a second, and if Sasuke hadn't been looking at Naruto at that moment he would have missed it. Naruto quickly turned back towards him with a smile as though the look had never happened, "Who would have thought the Great Sasuke, black belt extraodinare of the Uchiha clan, would go down like that!" He laughed a little at Sasuke's, “Hn!” in response to that remark. "Ok, Gaara's not here to say it...since he's at work and all, but..." he stared at Sasuke seriously this time, "while he's not sorry for what he did in the showers, he does want all the hostility and the misunderstandings to stop. ...So he wants me to ask you to come with me to the SandPiper restaurant tonight."

Sasuke eyed the blonde suspiciously at first, "Is he planning to do something worse to me later?"
Naruto sighed in frustration. Why had Gaara chosen NOW to resolve things with Sasuke? "Look, I'd prefer you weren't there, but it’s what Gaara wants," he shrugged.

"And does he always get what he wants...?" Sasuke asked almost too quietly as he watched Naruto's face for his reaction to the question.

The blonde eyed Sasuke in annoyance, "Do you want to go or not...Teme?" He was tired of Sasuke's games.

The Uchiha was starting to feel considerably better with each word the blonde uttered in his presence. "So..." he smirked, "I guess that means it's a date! Huh, Dobe?"

Naruto flushed at the comment before shouting, "Tsch! It's not a date, you bastard! Gaara wouldn't leave it at just kicking your ass if it was, " he flicked Sasuke on the forehead, "So be grateful, Teme. I'll pick you up at 6:00pm...so you better be ready." He started to walk away.

Sasuke smirked again at the unconscious show of affection from the blonde as he rubbed his forehead, "Sure... A date it is...Ursuratonkatchi."

Naruto twitched at hearing Sasuke's pet name for him and turned back around to glare at the now seductively grinning Sasuke, but before he could comment his ex-boyfriend interrupted again.

"By the way..." he winked in Naruto's direction as he pointedly eyed the blonde’s body slowly from head to toe and back again, "I loved the performance in the shower. We’ll have to do it again sometime..." He ended it with a final, more deliberate wink.

Naruto sputtered turning a bright red, "NOT in this lifetime, you BASTARD!!!" He turned on his heel and raced out the door hearing Sasuke's mocking laugh following him.


Well, thats it for Chapter 6, next weeks chapter should be coming hopefully by next week. As always I hope you continue to review since I look forward to seeing your comments and opinions on my story.
Also Many Thanks again to LadyChimera for her Beta help, its very much appreciated. JaNe for now
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