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Adult ++
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10
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The Mission
This is a short chapter. It's a little angsty. but nessesary. because like i said with the need for plot. The next chapter is going to be very fluffy and much happier. plus competive naruto.vs.sasuke-ness for our favorite pink prude who has no idea what she has. Also some Kaka+ Saku and Sai trying to figure out what the hell is going on in his brain..... poor emotional retard.
xoxoxox Mia
ok ive gotten alot of people telling me that im hold my story for review ransom!!!!!! ah! im sorry if it came off that way!!!! that was never what i wanted to do. it was a suggestion, just so i could get a gage on whether or not people wanted to have a long fluffy chapter. because as lemon drops said my last chapter was extremely rushed. so if you dont want to review, im not going to sit and pout and not update. just the opposite ill update quickly but it wont be as long... oh and the entire gemna/bartender inceident is going to be handled next chapter when Sakura wakes up.
Lemon Drops-I really like that you have given me a list of things to improve on. it didn't seem harsh it was accurate. i'm not offended im thankful. and im fixing this chapter so that it's not crap
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It was late at night or early in the morning depending on how you looked at it. Naruto didn’t care what time it was. It was irrelevant. All that mattered to him was Sakura waking up. In the time since he had come back to the Uchiha compound with her closes he hadn’t left her side once. After they had tested the drug for all known compounds that make up common rape drugs and poisons and the results were all negative Kakashi preformed a toxin release jutsu that had no effect. Tsunade intercepted Sai breaking into the hospital for Sakura’s medical file and scrolls on poisons. After effectively beating and lecturing him she finally allowed him to speak up. After she heard what had happened to her aprentice she came running to the Uchiha Compound.
Naruto tapped his foot impacientely waiting for the Hokage to finsh her long analysis. Tsunade spoke to Sai, Naruto, Sasuke, and Kakashi.
“I believe that Sakura has digested a rare, and complex to make, drug called Nullusvolo Erosfatalis. It is disturbing to think that there is anyone out there still capable of producing such a drug, because of the ingredients, chakra required and chakra control required. Nullusvolo Erosfatalis is an item punishable by death for producing in all governed areas. It would take 10 days of complete concentration for me to make such a drug. If the rumors are true, the person behind the kidnappings has been concocting it in 2 days a feat that is unheard of.”
“ Recently there has been several kidnappings of girls between the ages of 16-22 that match her case exactly. Nullusvolo Erosfatalis is a drug that makes the makes the female victim affected highly sensitive to pleasure and pain. Also, if the administer inputs his chakra into the substance they gain complete control of there victim. All verbal commands given by the administer will be followed unquestionably because his chakra roots itself in the victim’s brain, and is used as a taproot to control the descision making process when activated. It is also a powerful aphrodisiac. We believe they are using the girls for a highend prostitution establishment located outside the fire country.” Tsunade turned to look at the faces of the men of team seven. They were staring at her as if she had grown another head.
“Recently the adopted daughter of a Daimyo from the wind country has been captured while here on a cultural retreat with her family. They are offering us double payment for an S-class mission if you succeed and a war if we fail. If we decline the mission they will take us to war no matter our good relations with the Kazekage. I’m giving you this mission because the chakra in her brain allows the people who did this to her to track Sakura. So when they come for her, you must be ready to follow them so you can retrieve the daughter and kill the leaders.” Tsunade sighed “We’ll talk more about the mission when Sakura wakes up.” Tsunade hadn’t even taken a step yet when the expected reaction took place.
“WHAT? After all Sakura-chan has been through you want to send her on a mission.” Naruto screamed. “Baa-chan this is to dangerous. If the drug is already in her mind then they can do what ever they want with her if they find her. Sakura-chan is one of the strongest kunoichi but how can she get through this if she can’t control herself?” Naruto threw himself on top of the sleeping Sakura dramatically. “I won’t let her.”
“Dobe get off she can’t breath.” Sasuke stated coolly.
“How can you be so calm? Baa-chan just told us that Sakura’s brain has been drugged and that she’s going to force Sakura to go with some sick rapists that she won’t be able to fight off.” Naruto yelled. “That’s not fair to her. To put this on her shoulders. They’re giving her a choice of her own suffering or the death of thousands through war. You know what she’ll choose. Don’t you care what happens to her? If Sakura accepts this mission she won't live through it. Anyone at the power level that this person will easily be able to kill her with out another thought when he undertands she was the bait. ”
Sasuke didn’t answer. He stared at the resting pink haired woman. He knew Sakura would agree to this for the good of the country. She was a female ninja, they often were put in this position; where giving your body to the enemy is necessary for the success of the mission. This was Sakura though. He didn’t like thinking about her having sex with anyone, forced or otherwise unless it was him. He was trying his best not to look at all affected because he wasn’t ready to deal with what he was thinking right now.
“It’s for the good of Kohona.” Sasuke stated simply. He didn’t dodge the punch that connected with his face, because Sasuke knew he had deserved it. Sai just sat in silence. He wasn’t sure what he thought.
While the younger boys were lost in the morning’s issues, the Hokage slipped out of the inner Uchiha Compound. She didn’t need to feel worse about the decision then she already did. She was very close to Sakura, but it was necessary for the good of the village. If they didn’t get the whereabouts of the base soon then it was likely they never would get to the Daimyo’s daughter before she was permanently harmed. It saddened her immensly that Sakura was their only link and that probability said the apprentice she was so fond of was going to die. The Hokage had hope though, hope that rested in the one person who was known to defy what was expected. She would tell no one to give up on Sakura Haruno just yet, because one could never be sure what impossible was when around Uzumaki Naruto. Deep in thought Tsunade walked down the dark street that had once been the Uchiha’s barrier from the common people.
“Don’t ask this of her.” Tsunade violently turned around in her stance ready for battle. In the time she had been Hokage she had let her guard down. After sensing who it was she relaxed.
“There is no other option Kakashi. You know that.” Tsunade told him. As much faith as she had in Sakura's ability to survive and Naruto's miracles, she could not give the Copy Nin hope only to have it snatched away. “Who ever is making this drug must be S-class or higher on par or above Uchiha Itachi. They could wreak havoc on Kohona the council decided that immediate action is required to avoid another full frontal ninja war. This goes beyond anything the suffering of one girl could amount to. I don’t feel good saying that, but I have to do what’s best for the whole not myself.” Another figure came on to the dark street.
“She’s a virgin.” Sasuke said quietly. “She’ll agree to this because she’ll put other people’s safety before her own life and sanity. She'll do it to prove herself, and if we get her back she’ll never be the same.” Kakashi recognized the suppressed emotion in his student’s face. Sasuke was upset, more upset then he had ever seen him about anything other then his brother. Hearing this information Kakashi was shocked and then he saddened even more. This could really ruin Sakura mentally and that was only on the condition that she survived. She had always had problems with her lack of chakra and muscle core power. Having this happen to her could crush her will and that spark that made her who she was. For all the strength and wisdom she possessed, if she was ordered to do something by these people she would not have the ability to fight back, and he didn’t like to think about what those orders would be.
“Can’t we send a more experienced girl?” Kakashi question and no one asked him to clarify what he meant. “Anko would bare through an experience like that with out as much pain and… emotional attachment.”
“Kakashi… she has taken the drug. She is the only sure link we have we can’t ignore it and they would not sense the drug in anyone else's mind and know it was a set up. If we wait too long the Poison Mixer might come for her himself and even I might not be able to protect her. That would be much worse. She and the other girls would be lost forever. Not to mention the countless others that would be lost in a war and in the wrath of this poison mixer. This discussion is over. The mission begins a week from whenever Sakura first wakes up.” Tsunade finished her lecture shortly. As she walked away the two angry mean couldn’t see the tear roll down her face.
Kakashi and Sasuke walked back to the house in silence. As they neared the house Sasuke abruptly stopped, and Kakashi turned around to look him in the eyes.
“Don’t tell him.” He grunted and then continued walking into the house. Kakashi assumed in Sasuke speak that meant roughly ‘Kakashi-san please do not tell my best friend Naruto who is already worried about our teammate Sakura that I said anything and that I care for Sakura or people at all, but over all don’t tell him I am worried.’ Kakashi didn’t even want to think about what Naruto’s reactions to the little mission prepare time Sakura had been given.
When he reentered the room, the three boys didn’t even look up. Naruto because he was asleep with Sakura curled up against him, her petite body pressed against his chest and arm draped protectively over her. Sai was sketching furiously looking both passionate and confused. Sasuke’s long hair was out of its customary ponytail he sat in a chair across the room. His bangs blocked his dark eyes from view he seemed to be deep in thought. All Team Kakashi could do was wait for the female member of the team to regain consciousness.
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xoxoxox Mia
ok ive gotten alot of people telling me that im hold my story for review ransom!!!!!! ah! im sorry if it came off that way!!!! that was never what i wanted to do. it was a suggestion, just so i could get a gage on whether or not people wanted to have a long fluffy chapter. because as lemon drops said my last chapter was extremely rushed. so if you dont want to review, im not going to sit and pout and not update. just the opposite ill update quickly but it wont be as long... oh and the entire gemna/bartender inceident is going to be handled next chapter when Sakura wakes up.
Lemon Drops-I really like that you have given me a list of things to improve on. it didn't seem harsh it was accurate. i'm not offended im thankful. and im fixing this chapter so that it's not crap
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It was late at night or early in the morning depending on how you looked at it. Naruto didn’t care what time it was. It was irrelevant. All that mattered to him was Sakura waking up. In the time since he had come back to the Uchiha compound with her closes he hadn’t left her side once. After they had tested the drug for all known compounds that make up common rape drugs and poisons and the results were all negative Kakashi preformed a toxin release jutsu that had no effect. Tsunade intercepted Sai breaking into the hospital for Sakura’s medical file and scrolls on poisons. After effectively beating and lecturing him she finally allowed him to speak up. After she heard what had happened to her aprentice she came running to the Uchiha Compound.
Naruto tapped his foot impacientely waiting for the Hokage to finsh her long analysis. Tsunade spoke to Sai, Naruto, Sasuke, and Kakashi.
“I believe that Sakura has digested a rare, and complex to make, drug called Nullusvolo Erosfatalis. It is disturbing to think that there is anyone out there still capable of producing such a drug, because of the ingredients, chakra required and chakra control required. Nullusvolo Erosfatalis is an item punishable by death for producing in all governed areas. It would take 10 days of complete concentration for me to make such a drug. If the rumors are true, the person behind the kidnappings has been concocting it in 2 days a feat that is unheard of.”
“ Recently there has been several kidnappings of girls between the ages of 16-22 that match her case exactly. Nullusvolo Erosfatalis is a drug that makes the makes the female victim affected highly sensitive to pleasure and pain. Also, if the administer inputs his chakra into the substance they gain complete control of there victim. All verbal commands given by the administer will be followed unquestionably because his chakra roots itself in the victim’s brain, and is used as a taproot to control the descision making process when activated. It is also a powerful aphrodisiac. We believe they are using the girls for a highend prostitution establishment located outside the fire country.” Tsunade turned to look at the faces of the men of team seven. They were staring at her as if she had grown another head.
“Recently the adopted daughter of a Daimyo from the wind country has been captured while here on a cultural retreat with her family. They are offering us double payment for an S-class mission if you succeed and a war if we fail. If we decline the mission they will take us to war no matter our good relations with the Kazekage. I’m giving you this mission because the chakra in her brain allows the people who did this to her to track Sakura. So when they come for her, you must be ready to follow them so you can retrieve the daughter and kill the leaders.” Tsunade sighed “We’ll talk more about the mission when Sakura wakes up.” Tsunade hadn’t even taken a step yet when the expected reaction took place.
“WHAT? After all Sakura-chan has been through you want to send her on a mission.” Naruto screamed. “Baa-chan this is to dangerous. If the drug is already in her mind then they can do what ever they want with her if they find her. Sakura-chan is one of the strongest kunoichi but how can she get through this if she can’t control herself?” Naruto threw himself on top of the sleeping Sakura dramatically. “I won’t let her.”
“Dobe get off she can’t breath.” Sasuke stated coolly.
“How can you be so calm? Baa-chan just told us that Sakura’s brain has been drugged and that she’s going to force Sakura to go with some sick rapists that she won’t be able to fight off.” Naruto yelled. “That’s not fair to her. To put this on her shoulders. They’re giving her a choice of her own suffering or the death of thousands through war. You know what she’ll choose. Don’t you care what happens to her? If Sakura accepts this mission she won't live through it. Anyone at the power level that this person will easily be able to kill her with out another thought when he undertands she was the bait. ”
Sasuke didn’t answer. He stared at the resting pink haired woman. He knew Sakura would agree to this for the good of the country. She was a female ninja, they often were put in this position; where giving your body to the enemy is necessary for the success of the mission. This was Sakura though. He didn’t like thinking about her having sex with anyone, forced or otherwise unless it was him. He was trying his best not to look at all affected because he wasn’t ready to deal with what he was thinking right now.
“It’s for the good of Kohona.” Sasuke stated simply. He didn’t dodge the punch that connected with his face, because Sasuke knew he had deserved it. Sai just sat in silence. He wasn’t sure what he thought.
While the younger boys were lost in the morning’s issues, the Hokage slipped out of the inner Uchiha Compound. She didn’t need to feel worse about the decision then she already did. She was very close to Sakura, but it was necessary for the good of the village. If they didn’t get the whereabouts of the base soon then it was likely they never would get to the Daimyo’s daughter before she was permanently harmed. It saddened her immensly that Sakura was their only link and that probability said the apprentice she was so fond of was going to die. The Hokage had hope though, hope that rested in the one person who was known to defy what was expected. She would tell no one to give up on Sakura Haruno just yet, because one could never be sure what impossible was when around Uzumaki Naruto. Deep in thought Tsunade walked down the dark street that had once been the Uchiha’s barrier from the common people.
“Don’t ask this of her.” Tsunade violently turned around in her stance ready for battle. In the time she had been Hokage she had let her guard down. After sensing who it was she relaxed.
“There is no other option Kakashi. You know that.” Tsunade told him. As much faith as she had in Sakura's ability to survive and Naruto's miracles, she could not give the Copy Nin hope only to have it snatched away. “Who ever is making this drug must be S-class or higher on par or above Uchiha Itachi. They could wreak havoc on Kohona the council decided that immediate action is required to avoid another full frontal ninja war. This goes beyond anything the suffering of one girl could amount to. I don’t feel good saying that, but I have to do what’s best for the whole not myself.” Another figure came on to the dark street.
“She’s a virgin.” Sasuke said quietly. “She’ll agree to this because she’ll put other people’s safety before her own life and sanity. She'll do it to prove herself, and if we get her back she’ll never be the same.” Kakashi recognized the suppressed emotion in his student’s face. Sasuke was upset, more upset then he had ever seen him about anything other then his brother. Hearing this information Kakashi was shocked and then he saddened even more. This could really ruin Sakura mentally and that was only on the condition that she survived. She had always had problems with her lack of chakra and muscle core power. Having this happen to her could crush her will and that spark that made her who she was. For all the strength and wisdom she possessed, if she was ordered to do something by these people she would not have the ability to fight back, and he didn’t like to think about what those orders would be.
“Can’t we send a more experienced girl?” Kakashi question and no one asked him to clarify what he meant. “Anko would bare through an experience like that with out as much pain and… emotional attachment.”
“Kakashi… she has taken the drug. She is the only sure link we have we can’t ignore it and they would not sense the drug in anyone else's mind and know it was a set up. If we wait too long the Poison Mixer might come for her himself and even I might not be able to protect her. That would be much worse. She and the other girls would be lost forever. Not to mention the countless others that would be lost in a war and in the wrath of this poison mixer. This discussion is over. The mission begins a week from whenever Sakura first wakes up.” Tsunade finished her lecture shortly. As she walked away the two angry mean couldn’t see the tear roll down her face.
Kakashi and Sasuke walked back to the house in silence. As they neared the house Sasuke abruptly stopped, and Kakashi turned around to look him in the eyes.
“Don’t tell him.” He grunted and then continued walking into the house. Kakashi assumed in Sasuke speak that meant roughly ‘Kakashi-san please do not tell my best friend Naruto who is already worried about our teammate Sakura that I said anything and that I care for Sakura or people at all, but over all don’t tell him I am worried.’ Kakashi didn’t even want to think about what Naruto’s reactions to the little mission prepare time Sakura had been given.
When he reentered the room, the three boys didn’t even look up. Naruto because he was asleep with Sakura curled up against him, her petite body pressed against his chest and arm draped protectively over her. Sai was sketching furiously looking both passionate and confused. Sasuke’s long hair was out of its customary ponytail he sat in a chair across the room. His bangs blocked his dark eyes from view he seemed to be deep in thought. All Team Kakashi could do was wait for the female member of the team to regain consciousness.
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OK SINCE THE NEXT CHAPTER IS GOING TO BE MOSTLY GOOD STUFF NOT ESSENTIAL TO THE PLOT THERE IS GOING TO BE A SYSTEM BETWEEN THE NUMBER OF *QUALIFYING* REVIEWS AND THE LENGTH. FOR EVERY DETAILED REVIEW (EXPLAINED BELOW) IS EQUAL TO A 1/4 OF A PAGE OF NEXT CHAPTER
YOU CAN CONTROL HOW LONG THE CHAPTER IS. ON SATERDAY ILL COUNT THE NUMBER OF REVIEWS
a detailed review has to include all of the following includes
----One thiing you thought was good
_____One thing you thought was bad
_____What you thought of the chapter
_____Who you want together
each of my chapters gets 400 views so if you all review think how long that chapter would have to be???
You can thank kim for being the first of this chapter to write a qualifying review.
and Shihaya Atriedes- normally i agree with you. but this will be the only time i ask for something as petty as this because i need a set page goal for the next chapter because if i have a goal i work faster. I'm sorry!
Review
Next chapter- The Week