The Price of Love
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Naruto › Yaoi - Male/Male
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Naruto › Yaoi - Male/Male
Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
23
Views:
1,351
Reviews:
7
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
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Chapter 4
Chapter 4
Boxes?
“Um, I’m Shikaku…and….”
He was forced to spin around to face the room when the poor courier’s eyes began bulging out and drool was dripping from his open mouth, and groan.
“I’m Minato”
Minato had walked to greet the courier with nothing but a towel. His whole tan six pack with nothing to hide its glory, and his stance with his arm folded and leaned to one side next to the lounge room arch could make an arrow bend let alone a straight man.
If the courier was thinking of being a homosexual, the motivation was right in front of him.
“ah ……..oh….um….” stuttered a shaking red faced youth with a certain tent in his pants.
Shikaku was wondering what was he going to do with this aggravating man. Why oh why, did he get himself such a troublemaker as a boyfriend? He has no choice, none at all. That his story and he would stick to it, so there!
His plan: effectively block the course of the problem from innocent bystander.
“Here let me sign that for you” he then proceeded to discreetly block out Minato
Success!
The courier began to function normally again, like a well oiled human being. He was all business. His tone had a slight harsh tone because he was annoyed with himself. He was straight, he was going to get married in a week…but the sight of that man…..ohhhhhhhhhhhh boyyyyyy.
“Sign here please” he muttered bristly
Ten minutes later, with a whole lot of “You idiotic prick” “Look what you did!” “Why couldn’t you just be normal for god sake!” sprinkled on top.
“Can’t you just behave please? Especially, in front of strangers?”
“Why? It won’t be fun then”
“WHY!” “FUN”
Another string of words that did not make sense followed.
As you finally figured out, Shikaku was the adult in the relationship. Minato just love seeing him riled up. To see him yelling, red and gesturing…..was oh so delicious.
That Minato’s turn on. Well, he is a bizarre man.
He swaged over to his angry lover, it would have proceeded into something more if it wasn’t for Shikaku’s frustrating curiosity for what inside the box. Of course, Minato was too but, Shikaku was too much a detective for his liking.
“Oh no, you don’t. Open your box right this minute, minister!”
So where you find them, on the grassy floor with the contents of the boxes sprawled everywhere.
“There no return address to this. The ‘to’ address was typed up, so was the letter”
“What does your letter say?”
“Let the past come to light. Your father was a great man” Minato read.
“And what about yours, shika?”
“Among here, in this tiny box, is your father’s story. I hope you find that the truth was worth all the trouble”
“I just don’t get it. Why does these people don’t just come and give it to us directly? Maybe tell us the story? What with all the clues?”
“Well, it all we got, let start eh?”
Minato reached out to take a plain white photo album with the word “Childhood”
He took a deep breath and opened the cover to his father’s earliest period of life.
The first picture was of two toddlers. One with black hair was around three, the other with shocking crop of blonde hair was about four.
Wide big smiles, laughing eyes, and arms around each other, will the blondie was hugging the slightly stiffer black haired.
Innocence, and free without the burdens of adulthood, Naruto and Shikamaru was happy as soaring birds in the sky.
And with one photo, Minato’s playfulness was washed away, leaving a dead serious man with a mission, and harden the resolve of the man next to him.
The boys in the photo had everything to live for, only to have their lives orchestrated into disaster.
_________________________________________________________________________________________
Um, could i ask people to make comments on this, is it getting slightly off the plot, is the humor working, what do you think of the characters? do you like the story or is it getting too boring?
Boxes?
“Um, I’m Shikaku…and….”
He was forced to spin around to face the room when the poor courier’s eyes began bulging out and drool was dripping from his open mouth, and groan.
“I’m Minato”
Minato had walked to greet the courier with nothing but a towel. His whole tan six pack with nothing to hide its glory, and his stance with his arm folded and leaned to one side next to the lounge room arch could make an arrow bend let alone a straight man.
If the courier was thinking of being a homosexual, the motivation was right in front of him.
“ah ……..oh….um….” stuttered a shaking red faced youth with a certain tent in his pants.
Shikaku was wondering what was he going to do with this aggravating man. Why oh why, did he get himself such a troublemaker as a boyfriend? He has no choice, none at all. That his story and he would stick to it, so there!
His plan: effectively block the course of the problem from innocent bystander.
“Here let me sign that for you” he then proceeded to discreetly block out Minato
Success!
The courier began to function normally again, like a well oiled human being. He was all business. His tone had a slight harsh tone because he was annoyed with himself. He was straight, he was going to get married in a week…but the sight of that man…..ohhhhhhhhhhhh boyyyyyy.
“Sign here please” he muttered bristly
Ten minutes later, with a whole lot of “You idiotic prick” “Look what you did!” “Why couldn’t you just be normal for god sake!” sprinkled on top.
“Can’t you just behave please? Especially, in front of strangers?”
“Why? It won’t be fun then”
“WHY!” “FUN”
Another string of words that did not make sense followed.
As you finally figured out, Shikaku was the adult in the relationship. Minato just love seeing him riled up. To see him yelling, red and gesturing…..was oh so delicious.
That Minato’s turn on. Well, he is a bizarre man.
He swaged over to his angry lover, it would have proceeded into something more if it wasn’t for Shikaku’s frustrating curiosity for what inside the box. Of course, Minato was too but, Shikaku was too much a detective for his liking.
“Oh no, you don’t. Open your box right this minute, minister!”
So where you find them, on the grassy floor with the contents of the boxes sprawled everywhere.
“There no return address to this. The ‘to’ address was typed up, so was the letter”
“What does your letter say?”
“Let the past come to light. Your father was a great man” Minato read.
“And what about yours, shika?”
“Among here, in this tiny box, is your father’s story. I hope you find that the truth was worth all the trouble”
“I just don’t get it. Why does these people don’t just come and give it to us directly? Maybe tell us the story? What with all the clues?”
“Well, it all we got, let start eh?”
Minato reached out to take a plain white photo album with the word “Childhood”
He took a deep breath and opened the cover to his father’s earliest period of life.
The first picture was of two toddlers. One with black hair was around three, the other with shocking crop of blonde hair was about four.
Wide big smiles, laughing eyes, and arms around each other, will the blondie was hugging the slightly stiffer black haired.
Innocence, and free without the burdens of adulthood, Naruto and Shikamaru was happy as soaring birds in the sky.
And with one photo, Minato’s playfulness was washed away, leaving a dead serious man with a mission, and harden the resolve of the man next to him.
The boys in the photo had everything to live for, only to have their lives orchestrated into disaster.
_________________________________________________________________________________________
Um, could i ask people to make comments on this, is it getting slightly off the plot, is the humor working, what do you think of the characters? do you like the story or is it getting too boring?