Hot Night in Konoha (complete)

Warnings

• Anal
  
• Angst
  
• Dom
  
• Language
  
• M/M
  
• N/C
  
• Oral
  
• Yaol
  

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Conventions

Thoughts of Sasuke and others are set in italic type (whole paragraph)

Naruto’s thoughts are set in bold-italic type (whole paragraph).

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An edgy silence between the two boys held their eyes locked, bodies motionless. Sasuke suddenly realized he was holding his breath. His loud gasp launched him into motion.

“Fuck this,” he said, more to himself than to Naruto. “I sure as hell don’t need this.” He rose from the bed and moved to the door. “It was a mistake for me to come here.”

Time slowed for both boys.

Naruto watched Sasuke move, helpless to move himself.

My heart—it’s so loud. I can’t believe he doesn’t hear it.

Each step Sasuke took required more effort than the last.

What if—no, god, no—but—what if he’s right?

His hand on the doorknob, Sasuke paused. As turned his head, Naruto reacted without thinking. He quickly crossed the room to Sasuke and put his hand out to grab Sasuke’s fingers, still tightened around the knob, but stopped short of touching him.

Sasuke froze, scrutinizing Naruto’s face from the corner of his eyes. He deliberately held his breath, afraid his voice would betray his anxiety if he spoke.

“D- don’t go,” Naruto said, his voice catching softly. “Y- you need to…st- stay.”

Sasuke drew breath to answer. As he opened his mouth, Naruto quietly, decisively took Sasuke’s face between open palms and brought their lips together.

Tongues remained where they were; only their lips touched—a simple act, yet Sasuke’s nerves lit up like a match struck hard and fast. His brain shot something hot and tingly into his bloodstream, and when it reached his heart, Sasuke jerked with the thundering pulse that slammed his ribs. With a soft gasp he pulled away from Naruto, who froze, mouth open, eyes full of anticipation and hesitation, his hands in the air where Sasuke’s face had been.

“Wha- what are you—”

Sasuke stopped.

How can I—my heart—I don’t—

“Did you li-”

Naruto swallowed.

“Was that okay?”

Sasuke’s face was unreadable to Naruto; his own thoughts and feelings too fast, too overwhelming for him to follow. When Sasuke didn’t answer, Naruto smiled gently and stepped back from Sasuke.

“Spend the night, Sasuke. I won’t do anything you don’t want to do.” Naruto paused, then said, “But something tells me—”

Sasuke’s eyes widened in fright.

“No. I—I can’t. I won’t.”

Sasuke, too, took a step backward. He looked quickly from side to side as if unsure where he was, then seemed to notice the door. He reached for the doorknob again, but this time Naruto’s hand came down firmly on his own, stopping him from opening the door. Sasuke jerked back at Naruto’s touch. His eyes flitted up to see Naruto’s face clouded with concern.

“Didn’t you hear me? I said I won’t hurt you. Please,” Naruto said, stepping toward Sasuke, “stay.”

Sasuke stood his ground, but leaned backward, away from Naruto as he approached. Naruto stopped only a step away from Sasuke, watching to see what he would do.

Each boy stood taut, hormones edging against nerves.

“I’m gonna kiss you again,” Naruto said, moving quite gently.

No, you can’t, Sasuke thought, unable to voice the words. He stood motionless as Naruto reached him.

Sasuke’s mouth was open slightly. As Naruto’s lips came close to his own, Sasuke felt his arms and legs begin to tremble from the strain of all that was happening.

He closed his eyes, waited.

But heated breath, not flesh, fell against his cheek.

Sasuke opened his eyes to see Naruto staring directly at him.

“Okay?” Naruto said.

Sasuke closed his eyes again.

Naruto took his mouth.

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How did we get on the bed?

Sasuke lay under Naruto, legs askew. Naruto straddled one of the boy’s thighs, his knees pressing against it, while his tongue continued searching Sasuke’s mouth. Sasuke’s fingers were tangled in Naruto’s warm, yellow hair, pulling his new friend down to his chest.

We were at the door. He kissed me again, and then—

heart hot hard loud
can’t breathe
can’t hold it any longer

his tongue
mine

muscles
nerves
blood
explode

Sasuke, no longer able to resist his body’s urging, had grabbed at Naruto but accidently knocked him away with his arms. Naruto misunderstood the action, but Sasuke quickly corrected his mistake by lunging forward to return the kiss. They stumbled, caught each other. Now Naruto was against the door, Sasuke pressing against him, greedy to gorge on sensations that had frightened him moments before.

Wet, awkward kisses grew forceful. Naruto pushed away from the door. Sasuke tripped backward toward the bed. Naruto followed, grabbing the boy to break his fall to the mattress.

Now Naruto assailed Sasuke with kisses, each more vigorous than the last. He moved the knee between Sasuke’s legs forward until it bumped against his crotch.

Sasuke gasped and tried to sit up but was stopped by Naruto’s firm crouch over him.

“Wha- what are you doing?”

Naruto’s eyelids lowered over a sly half-smile.

“Just…letting things progress a bit.”

“To what?”

Naruto’s eyes widened a bit.

“You don’t know?”

Sasuke fell silent, unsure, afraid.

Naruto smiled again.

“Then I guess I’ll have to show you.”

He straightened, bringing his hips forward. His hands went to Sasuke’s white shorts, fingers fumbling for the belt. Sasuke pushed Naruto’s hands away, but Naruto pressed back. With another smile his hands went to Sasuke’s groin, straining against grass-stained fabric. Naruto quickly found the zipper and slid it down. Sasuke batted at Naruto’s hands, then tried again to sit up and scoot away.

Naruto fingered Sasuke’s underwear, found his penis, and squeezed.

A gasp, a whimper.

Sasuke fell back to the bed, hips bucking softly upward.

He squeezed his eyes shut, then spoke.

“This isn’t right.” He shook his head, opened his eyes. “Stop, Naruto. We shouldn’t—”

“Shut up, Sasuke.”

Naruto groped for the edge of Sasuke’s underwear, found it, and slipped his fingers inside. Sasuke’s penis was hard, hot, the tip slick with precum. Naruto began slowly stroking, and Sasuke responded with soft groans.

“Don’t tell me you don’t like this.”

Sasuke, head thrown back, hips thrust upward, responded only with moans.

Naruto slid Sasuke’s penis out of his pants. He bent and touched his tongue to the slit, savoring the pungent taste of precum.

Sasuke squirmed.

Naruto opened his mouth wide. He lowered his head and engulfed Sasuke’s cock, his lips grazing the boy’s pubic hair.

Sasuke’s eyes flew open. He convulsed. He shouted.

“Oh, my fucking god!”

Sensations Sasuke had never imagined swept over him.

It’s not like when I touch myself. It’s so much better…

Naruto sucked him slowly, letting the head bump the back of his throat, then dragging his teeth up the shaft until only the tip was ringed by his lips. He tongued the slit, slid down the shaft, and began again.

Sasuke bunched the bedspread in tight fists, squirming, cooing.

Suddenly open air enveloped his cock as Naruto released it. He felt Naruto moving up his body to hover over him. Naruto lowered his shoulders. His tongue traced Sasuke’s upper lip, and his prey’s eyes snapped open.

Naruto smiled and pressed downward.

Sasuke willingly opened his mouth to receive Naruto’s kiss.

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They broke to breathe, Sasuke panting lightly as Naruto looked down on him.

“Good, huh?”

Sasuke hesitated.

“I—I don’t know. This isn’t right, is it?”

Naruto spoke softly, his voice low and husky: “Fuck what people say is right. What you feel is what’s right.”

Sasuke searched Naruto’s eyes. A confidence Naruto had not shown him before shone there.

Naruto lowered his hips and brushed his pants against Sasuke’s exposed cock.

Sasuke groaned.

“I’ll show you what’s right.”

Naruto pushed up with his hands, straightened over Sasuke and lowered his hips again, this time crouching over Sasuke’s knees. He undid the button at the top of his shorts and reached to the bottom of the legs to pull them down.

“Raise your knees.”

Sasuke did.

As Naruto slipped his pants off, Sasuke asked again: “What are you doing?”

“If you think me sucking you off feels good, then what comes next is gonna blow your brains through the top of your skull.”

Pants, off. Naruto put his hands firmly on Sasuke’s hips. He pressed his thumbs down on the sensitive nerves running near his hipbones, rubbing them in tiny circles.

Again Sasuke gasped.

“Turn over.”

Naruto pushed down on one hip, pulled up on the other, twisting Sasuke’s pelvis.

Sasuke let him, but began to resist halfway through the motion.

“Wait. What are you—”

“What do you think? I’m gonna fuck your brains out. And you’re gonna love every minute of it.” Naruto paused. “And stop saying ‘What are you doing?’ all the time. If you don’t know by now…”

Sasuke’s eyes grew wide with panic.

“N- no! I don’t—”

“Yes, you do,” Naruto said. “And by god, there’s no way you don’t want it, after all the signs you’ve given me today.”

Naruto pulled on Sasuke’s hips again, this time more forcefully. Sasuke turned over, but immediately arched his back, trying to get out from under Naruto. Naruto put an open hand on Sasuke’s back. With the other he grabbed the hair on the back of the boy’s head. He shoved Sasuke to the bed, then let the weight of his body fall, trapping Sasuke under him.

Sasuke panicked. He began writhing wildly.

Naruto laughed.

“Don’t struggle, Sasuke. It’ll feel good, I promise. Unless,” he said after pausing, “you fight it, of course.”

Sasuke tried to raise his head. Naruto shoved it down. With his other hand he reached to release his own pants. He slipped them to his knees, then wrestled his cock, hard and slick, from his underwear. Sasuke struggled as Naruto yanked hard on his underwear, ripping it as he exposed Sasuke’s ass. He spread Sasuke’s cheeks with one hand. With the other he held Sasuke against the bed, pushing hard in the middle of his back. He put the tip of his penis against Sasuke’s anus. Sasuke screamed.

“No! I don’t want this! Stop! Stop!”

Naruto laughed.

“Yeah, right.”

He pushed forward.

Sasuke tightened his sphincter.

Naruto slapped Sasuke’s ass.

“Relax, goddamn it!”

Again Sasuke tried to free himself. He twisted his torso, pushed up with his hands against the bed. Naruto slammed his hand against Sasuke’s back, slid it up to his head, grabbed his hair. He leaned over the boy and bit one ear.

“Don’t force it, Sasuke. Don’t make this become—”

“Become what?” Sasuke growled. “Rape? It already is.”

Suddenly Naruto’s eyes widened. He gasped, straightened up, released Sasuke, who scrambled off the bed. He stood beside it, dirty white shorts at his ankles, ripped underwear at his knees. He trembled.

Naruto stood at the end of the bed in much the same condition, hands limp at his sides. His mouth hung open; his penis bobbed in the air in sync with his pulse.

Both boys breathed heavily.

“Which is it?” Naruto said with heavy sarcasm. “First you make fun of me for being gay. Then you’re surprised when I kiss you, but suddenly you’re turned on big time. Every time I take it further, you ask me what I’m doing, but you always like it.” Naruto paused. “Well? Do you want this or not?”

Confusion swept Sasuke’s face as he listened to Naruto’s tirade. He looked down at his groin. His penis was slack. Sasuke looked up at Naruto with a pleading look on his face.

“I—I don’t know what I want.” Naruto waited. “I don’t…” Sasuke hesitated, steadied his voice, then spoke with resolve. “I don’t want anyone to know.”

Naruto nodded once.

“Of course. Neither do I—not in a place like Konoha.”

“And—I don’t want it to hurt.”

Naruto released his fists, relaxed his shoulders.

“Do you trust me?”

Sasuke stared at Naruto without moving.

Naruto took a step toward Sasuke, shuffling awkwardly. He stopped to pull his pants up and over his knees, then moved to Sasuke. He knelt in front of him and took his cock in his hand.

Sasuke jerked at the touch, but stood still.

Naruto looked up and smiled.

Without saying anything, he took Sasuke’s penis into his mouth, laving it with his tongue. His hands went to the boy’s hips, now softly moving back and forth.

Sasuke moaned.

Yeah, Naruto thought, this is gonna be one hot night.

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Author’s Note:

The story originally ended here, but the one who commissioned it asked me to take it further, so I did, creating chapter eight.

I’d be very grateful if you’d take time to let me know which ending you think is best, once you read the final chapter, which I’ll post tomorrow.

Finally, thank you, one and all, for reading and commenting.