Naruto: the way of the demon

First off thank you for the review and it is constructive. I am aware that MY GRAMMAR, CAPITALIZATION,AND PUNCTUATION SKILLS, ASWELL AS SOME SPELLING are shit beyond beleif

Im now going to be posing a slightly edited version of chapter 9 and shortly after all of 10, 11, and my  newly finished 12.

Also as I stated Bare with me i wont be able to edit the chapters I have till i fix them in the text files so that I can just put them in a lot faster, not to mention I'm making a rather large chapter 12 if you don't like large amounts of text that has only use as a descriptor you can skip that part. Though notice the note that I put Before it

on to chapter 9!

------------------Chapter 9: Naruto and Hinata I night to them selfs or is it theirs?

Kit did you hear that you got your self a mate I ...*Grunt of pain* I am proud of you.

"Wow I never thought you would say that. Ever."

"N-naruto? M-may I come in?"

Of course you can he loves you.

"H-hera?"

Yes I can speak to you like he can speak to the Kyubii.

"ohh."

"Its unlocked come on in."

She opened the door to reveal herslef to her love and there he was and all his almost naked glory wearing only his boxers he looked up stunned at the sight he saw. Hinata was wearing Nothing but a Cream colored lace bra and a matching pair of lace panites.

Kit must have took her a lot of guts to do that she does look beautiful you must know whats on her mind... I would hope.

Hinata honny dont pass out this is your chance. Hes stunned make your move.

Hinata made her way to the one she loved then stoped at his bed, she didnt know what to do next and frankly neither did he.

KISS HER/HIM! Both demons said to the ones carring them

They both leaned forward for a kiss but hinata sliped and fell on Naruto her head right next to the now pitched tent.

Kit you might want to look down at were she is.

Naruto Looked down and to his shock she was right next to his member

Hinata realizing were she was got up and sat next to the person she loved "N-naruto I...I dont think im ready yet... Can we cuddle for awhile?"

Hinata dear thats sweet of you for holding out. I think I might get to know the kyubii a bit better.

Ohh ho ho, whats this? you want to get to know me? The fox gave a sensual growl

Of course if the couple is going to be in love why dont we ... get to know each other. Hera said with a purr.

The two chunin looked at eachother with "WHAT THE FUCK CAN'T YOU TWO WAIT" faces then both yelled "QUIT IT YOU TWO!"

Fine Kit guess it will have to wait till your asleep.

The two lovers cuddled and carresed not to mention some steamy kisses. till they tired enough to sleep.

The Fox and Hera waited a good about half an hour for them to be in to a deep sleep till they began talking

You dont remember do you Kyubii?

Remember what?

*Sigh* Dont you remember seeing me while you were on your rampage in the leaf?

Did I now?

Yes you sort of hit me with your tail when I refused to move.... Thats why im like this now.

-Flash Back-

"I Refuse to let you go any further DEMON! My faimly and the village are too important to me"

"You and what army?"

"Multi Shadow Clone Jutsu!"

"Ohh... that's it? You do know that I see you the real you"

Pormptly he swiped a tail at her direction geting rid of around 20 shadow clones in the prosess then sending her flying though a wall.

-Flashback End-

Ohh yea I remember now... Sorry I was just pissed that the Leaf was thinking of geting their hands on a Jinchuriki so I decided to attack and wipe out the Leaf. Little did I know Minato wanted me to be sealed in his son. I'm sorry for hurting you rage can do a lot of things to anyone.

You dont say? Besides im not going to forgive you that easy

Then how about we meet at Demaru's ramen in the underworld?

That place has been out of bussness for years, wait how could you go there? Arn't you sealed in side of Naruto?

Ohh I am but I can make a special clone of my self that is able to go to the Underworld and then have part of my spirt attached to said clone. Thats how I every one in the Underworld found out I was sealed inside of a child... so were do you want to meet?

How about Orochimaru's Barbeque and Grill?

The hell? Orochimaru has a barbaque and grill?

He is on tight probation and his chakra is sealed for the remainder of his afterlife. Ohh sorry I though I should tell you that its the best restront in Dreu City. They also have the best sushi for miles.

Dreu city good times, good times.

I have heard of your Pranks in Dreu and I must admit they still hate you.

Good to know. So how about we meet up in two days at the gates of Dreu City.

Deal.

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i do hope you like this one.