Breaking Apart

Breaking Apart

Warnings: DARK, TWISTED FIC. RAPE. Yaoi. I am writing this a stress reliever. It is twisted and MORBID with DISTURBING IMAGES. Sorry, I do not have a beta, so this is unbetaed- read at your own risk.

Disclaimer: I don’t own Naruto. I am writing this for fun.

Chapter 8: On Yielding

I can barely suppress a shiver of arousal as I taste Naruto’s blood. Kyuubi is being true to our deal. Naruto heals almost as fast as I can lash him, but the blood remains. There must always be blood. ‘Naruto’s blood,’ I think as a shiver rips through my body. My eyes wander from Naruto’s flush face to his quivering muscles and the smeared blood decorating his torso and the top of his thighs. ‘So beautiful.’ I feel Naruto’s eyes on me, but I don’t give him the satisfaction of meeting his eyes with mine. Instead, I watch as his cock begins to rise. I take notice of every ragged breath he breathes. Waiting. Waiting for the moment to finally finish this.

The longer I gaze upon him, the more ragged his breaths becomes. I begin to touch myself. My body is so hard, I don’t think I will last very long when I eventually take Naruto, so I need to prepare him. The pleasure builds as I use my forefinger and thumb to trace the outline of my dick in my pants. Although it feels good, this is more for Naruto’s sake than my own. I am stroking his desire.

If I let myself, I can cum just from the look of him right now. Hurt, panting with pleasure and pain- shivering with desire, ‘beautiful.’ It takes everything I have to keep my resolve to finish this. His body begins to beg me to fuck him. Again, I suppress a shiver of desire.

‘He doesn’t even know how fucking beautiful he is right now,’ I think savagely to myself. ‘No one does.’ That thought gives me the will to finish his punishment. ‘No one else will ever see you this way. No one.’ I stop my hand movements and turn my gaze to meet Naruto’s eyes. His large blue eyes are narrowed to crystal slits. His eyes seemed to have lost all color, glazed as they are with desire. ‘Yessss,’ I hiss to myself. ‘This is what I want from you. Yield to me, Naruto. Want only me. No one else can make you feel like this.’

“Please,” I hear Naruto whisper with a rasp.

The sound of his voice goes straight to my erection. I felt my own eyes gloss as I try to restrain myself from jumping him. ‘Not yet,’ I think as I hold back my desire for him. Still, I want to hold this moment longer.

“Say it again,” I command softly.

I see a flash of understanding and slight hesitation cross Naruto’s face, before he yields again. “Please, Sasuke,” he rasps.

I allow my head to roll back with the pleasure Naruto’s begging brings me.

‘Again,’ I think in a haze.

“Please,” Naruto whispers as if he is in my thoughts. My body begins to quake from the victory Naruto’s plea signals. ‘Finally, dobe.’ I thought it would take longer to wring this response out of him. This is what it means to yield in a first session. When the Sub seeks to read the desires of the Dom out of his very mind, the Sub has learned his place. He exists at the whim of the Dom and his only thought should be about the desires of the Dom.

I lift my head to stare at Naruto who is waiting in anxious desire. ‘Next time it will not take us this long to get to this point, dobe. There are so many other more pleasurable lessons I want to teach you.’

“What are you begging for, Naruto?” I ask softly approaching the bed. I watch Naruto’s eyes widen as his breathing becomes more ragged. “What do you want from me?”

I stop six inches from the bed and wait. Naruto’s answer will tell me if he has truly learned this first lesson well. If he asks me to do something for his pleasure, then he has not yet yielded and the lesson will continue. But if he asks for how he can please me, then he has yielded and my demands will begin again- but differently.

I wait. I watch Naruto struggle to put in words what he wants from me.

“I don’t know,” Naruto responds and then repeats tentatively, “I don’t know.”

‘Interesting response.’

“Do you want me to touch you?” I ask running my fingers down the undersides of his left arm. Teasing one of the most sensitive parts of his body, I watch him carefully. My eyes never leave his.

Even as goose bumps raise and his body trembles, Naruto whispers in a lost tone, “I don’t know.”

“You don’t. Should I whip you again? Pain seems to give everyone some insight or another.” I ask innocently moving away from the bed holding his gaze with my eyes letting him see how much I would like to whip him some more. I expect him to jump in fright and he does not disappointment me. But he says nothing. As I raise my arm to lash him, his next question stops me.

“What do you want, Sasuke?” Naruto asks through his fear with a tint of genuine curiosity. “What do you want?”

‘He never ceases to surprise me. This is not yielding.’ I think with interest, ‘He is asking this question for his own sake, not to please me. But it is still a good sign. His true yielding to me is not far off.’

“Do you think you are in any position to ask me questions, dobe?” I ask with a raised brow as I drop the whip and begin to tug my shirt up over my head.

The look of desire that comes over his face as I remove my shirt makes liquid heat travel through my body. I quickly glance at his thick erection with a smirk as I begin to remove my pants. Soon I stand before him naked. My erection jutting out and seeping with the need for attention.

“Sa-suke,” Naruto moans with a quick breath.

His quick intake of breath brings my eyes back to his. I narrow my gaze as I take in the fear and desire on his face as he eyes trace my stomach muscles and come to rest on my cock. He’s eyes widen as he takes in the hardness of my erection.

“Are you afraid? Are you afraid of how much I want you?,” I ask idly moving toward the bed. “Good. Fear is good. But it only tells half the story” I whisper as I kneel beside the bed allowing my fingers to skim over the ripple of muscles in Naruto’s leg. “The other half is when you learn what it is like to be worshipped by your dominator. Worshiped, Naruto.”

With that, I lean down to run my tongue over the trail of blood left from a lash to his thigh. I begin to gently lap at the blood with the tip of my tongue, keeping my touch light knowing his new skin is very sensitive. My eyes roll back in my head as I savor the taste of his blood and his skin. The smell of Naruto’s arousal and the taste of his blood are overpowering. ‘It’s not enough.’ I think to myself as I move onto the bed and situate myself between Naruto’s outstretched legs. Surveying the areas that need my attention, I choose to comfort a lash mark that is dangerously close to Naruto’s cock. I remember my satisfaction in giving that mark, knowing the time would come when I would worship the skin there.

I place my arms on the bed on both sides of Naruto’s hips so I can hover over him to address the lash. As I move to lick the lash mark, I lower my face so that I am within one inch of Naruto’s cock. I hesitate over it, even though my eyes never leave my destination, so that he can feel my breath ghosting over his wet tip. I chuckle to myself as Naruto tries to arch his body so that his cock touches my face. He begins to whimper with frustration and desire.

Every whimper he gives are sounds of praise. I bask in the music they create. They are for me, only me; and I deserve them. ‘No one can make you feel this way, dobe.’

I don’t move, torturing him a bit longer with my soft breathing, before I continue upward towards the lash. When I reach it, I don’t immediately start to clean Naruto’s blood. Instead, I raise my eyes to Naruto’s face.

The startling honesty in his gaze humbles me and gives me power at the same time. I see his vulnerability, his desire, but mostly, I see his trust. ‘This is almost better than yielding. You are mine, even if you don’t know it yet.’ The metallic scent of his blood pulls at me and refuses to be ignored. My eyes never waver from his as I lower my face so that I can tongue the blood that remains from the lash. Because of the position of my head, I am forced to allow my chest to come in contact with Naruto’s cock and he quickly takes advantage of my desire to see him by arching his body against mine. I groan silently as Naruto starts grinding against me.

The taste of his blood, the feel of his cock, and the look in his eyes makes me lose focus. I become lost in Naruto. A part of me is warning me to pull back and finish the task, but I can no longer remember the task. Worshipping Naruto is all I want to do.

I break my gaze from Naruto’s and look again at the many trails of blood adorning his chest and torso. Without a thought, I go to work. Alternating between simple licks and open mouth kisses I begin to trace every lash. Leaving no lash mark unattended, I drink in Naruto’s blood and soak into my skin his every groan. By the time I reached Naruto’s shoulders, he is grinding frantically into my stomach and I can tell by the volume of his groans and the jerkiness of his thrusts that he is close to cumming.

I lifted myself completely off of him. His eyes flash open. This time they are bright blue and filled with desire and frustration.

“Not yet, Naruto,” I say calmly in the face of his angry flashing eyes. I know that I have almost pushed him too far. “I’m not ready yet.” I allow my hands to rest on his lower thighs. “What are you willing to give me to make me ready? This ass,” I say as I run a finger across his puckered hole that is in plain sight. “Your mouth?” I ask gesturing to his head, “your neck?” Upon hearing that, Naruto’s eyes widen in surprise.

I chuckle aloud this time, “You’re so naïve. Offer me any part of your body and I can turn it into an erotic experience for both of us. I have so much to teach you, Naruto. So much.”

I toy with Naruto’s opening, as I wait for his response.

“What do you want, Sasuke?” Naruto rasps out. I should be irritated at the repetition, but I have to admit to liking this game.

“What I would like would probably be best if I let you loose, but you are not ready for that yet? So I'll settle for the second best thing.” I say, as I climb over Naruto to leave the bed. I walk up to the head of the bed and settle my right knee on one-side of Naruto’s head as I swing my left leg to rest on the other side of his head. This position leaves me straddling Naruto’s neck with my cock is hanging in his face.

“Ask me what I want again, Naruto,” I say softly as I reach my left hand down to stroke myself.

“What do you wa- ” before Naruto could finish I force my erection into his mouth. Not very far. Just the head and another inch or so. Naruto opens his mouth to accommodate me, allowing the walls of his mouth to collapse around me as he moves the head of my cock so that it fits into the curve at the roof of his mouth. I place my right hand on the bed to stabilize me as I almost collapse from the pleasure.

“Ummmm…Naruto. Thasss goood,” I moan as he begins to suck softly. The danger of the position is not lost by me. If he begins to suck too hard what feels like heaven could quickly turn into hell. I begin to move myself in and out, wetting Naruto’s lips with the extra spit on my cock for a smoother glide. And though he is not deep throating me – the angle of my cock makes the very tip of my head hit the roof of his mouth in such a way my slit gets stimulated with each thrust. It is not long before I feel an orgasm building up. Some of his suction begins to border pain with pleasure. I can feel him alternating between gentle sucking and aggressive pulling. The pleasure/pain combination almost makes me cum against my will as I quickly pull out of his mouth with a pop.

I lean over him panting. ‘Damn, he gives good head,’ I think with a shudder. I open my eyes to see a faint look of smugness in his eyes. ‘A challenge, Naruto.’ I think with a smirk. I don’t even bother to lift myself from the bed as I drag my body down Naruto’s. Naruto hisses as I press against his sensitive skin. ‘A challenge it is then,’ I think determinedly as I move down so that my face is directly above Naruto’s dick.

I stare at his thick, red cock for a moment. It’s not perfectly straight like mine. In fact, it has a slight curve the right. And though he only is about 5 inches hard, significantly shorter than me, he makes up for that with girth. His cock is at least two inches in diameter. ‘Nice.’ I move my head so that my mouth can close around Naruto’s dick from the side and shift my eyes to meet his.

I raise a brow at his smoldering gaze, and can’t help but get more turned on by his attitude. I turn my attention back to his cock and close my mouth around its base. I allow my mouth to become a moist suction cup that covers two inches of his girth. The minute my mouth latched onto his cock, I heard Naruto give a hoarse shout.

‘Louder,’ I think as I open my mouth more taking in more space, while running my tongue up and down three inches my mouth is convering. I faintly hear another louder shout as he thrusts his hips upward forcing my nose further into his pubic hair.

‘My name,’ I command silently as I begin to gently gnaw on his erection through my lips and pressing more firmly into his groin.

The feel of my mouth sucking, tonguing, and gnawing on his cock makes Naruto scream, "Ahhh…Sasuke!”

I abruptly stopped my contact as I lick my lips and turn to meet Naruto’s shocked, lust-filled eyes.

“That’s not even a full blow job, Naruto.” I say smugly, “I’ll let you know when I think you’ve earned one of those.”

Feeling Naruto’s shudders of pleasure, I ask, “Whatever I want?”

I don’t wait for an answer as I reach under the bed for the lube I stored there. Coating three fingers, I begin to massage his puckered hole. I know he is close to cumming, but so I am I. ‘I won’t last very long and neither will he.’

Determined to prepare Naruto as quickly as possible, I ease one finger into his puckered whole and watch Naruto’s face. Still panting and overwrought by being pulled back from a hard orgasm, Naruto’s eyes are closed. Still, a visible wince appears at the entry of my finger. It has been a long time since Naruto has been penetrated this way. It is almost like he is a virgin. ‘He is not going to enjoy this part very much at all. But he might as well start getting used to it now.’

Too soon I add another finger, I watch Naruto’s face carefully as it twistd in reaction to the pain, still refusing to open his eyes. I also check to see if he is loosing his erection. I am not surprised to see that he is not. He is too far gone right now.

As I scissor my fingers, I lean down so that my breath hits his oversensitive cock. I watch as pleasure and the pain crosses his face. When the pleasure appears to be outweighing the pain, I add my third finger. This time Naruto moans from the pain.

Knowing I am running out of control, I quickly lube my erection and my right hand as I position myself at Naruto’s entrance. I know that Naruto is not ready to take all of me in today. ‘I won’t need much to get off today anyway’, I think to myself wryly. ‘I have waited too long for this.’

Taking Naruto’s erection in hand, I begin to stroke him slowly. I don’t attempt to penetrate him yet. ‘He’s not ready yet.’

It doesn’t take long before Naruto begins to arch into my hand moaning and gasping. I keep my touch light, knowing he is extremely sensitive at this point. As his breath becomes more ragged, I gently begin to guide the head of my dick into Naruto’s ass.

Hearing Naruto’s sharp intake of breath does not halt or slow my progression. I know that I am too far gone to care about Naruto’s entry pains. Still, I quicken my hand strokes to make Naruto take another kind of sharp breath. ‘The pleasure and the pain must be tearing through his body. The dobe doesn’t know how lucky he is right now.’

I loose all thoughts and stifle a groan as his flesh swallows the head of my cock. My ass and hips are shaking with the desire to plunge into him balls deep. And my restraint is tested when Naruto begins to arch more sharply into my hand trying to push himself over the edge. His arches cause the head of my dick to press deeply against his inner walls. I quickly push in two inches farther. ‘Ohhh…so good,’ I moan as I feel my pleasure build. I look at Naruto who seems to be lost in his own world as he strives to milk an orgasm out of my hand.

I can tell by how hard he has become in my hand he is a couple of strokes away from an orgasm.

“Look at me, Naruto,” I command as I pull back and thrust back into him. I tilt my hips so that my cock trails along Naruto’s upper wall. Naruto’s eyes fly open searching for mine as I start stimulating his prostate.

I can see the emotion and pleasure in his eyes, before my own eyes get blurry with pressure building up inside of me. ‘He’s so tight,’ I think as I clasp my left hand around the rest of my erection and start squeezing myself in time with my thrusts.

I never stop stroking Naruto as my grasp on him gets tighter and tighter. I move in and out, not allowing myself to give Naruto more than four to five inches in each thrust. My head rolls back and my back arches as I feel my pleasure begin to burn inside. The pressure is almost unbearable. Each thrust brings me closer, closer to burning up. Naruto is burning me up from the inside out.

“So good, Naruto,” I grunt out. “You're so damn good.” I accent each word with a thrust, hitting Naruto’s prostate dead on.

I hear Naruto shout his orgasm as his cum flies onto his chest and drips over my fingers. I wring every drop from him as each ejection causes the ring of muscles surrounding my cock to become tighter and tighter. The burning pleasure explodes and I let out a loud cry as I cum. Fire and pleasure throb inside me as everything falls away except Naruto’s panting breaths and his muscles milking me of my seed. Shudders overtake my body when I fall forward onto Naruto. I faintly hear him grunt as I collapse on him. But soon the soothing feeling of his hands running through my hair creates an afterglow that is so sweet I renew my determination never to give Naruto up.

Through a haze of pleasure, I smile with satisfaction. ‘It’s about time you freed yourself, dobe.’ With a yawn, I allow the sweetness of contentment to overtake me.

“Mine,” I whisper possessively

“Yours,” he whispers, yielding to me.

-TBC-

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