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Unworthy Of Admittance
Chapter One
Unworthy Of Admittance
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto, or related characters.
Description: AU; An 18 year old Sasuke tries desperately to follow his brother Itachi into the Akatsuki Gang. Probably one of the most secretive and well thought out organizations around. And when they finally invite him to get initiated in, he realizes it was all just a cruel joke to torment him.
However, after getting beat up by the gang, and Itachi threatens his life should Sasuke return to their apartment things start taking a turn for the worst. Taken in by Sakura and Naruto for the time, Sasuke tries to cope with everything as it comes. Including his constant hatred towards the brother he vowed revenge upon.
Orochimaru develops a certain taste for the younger Uchiha and complications rise as Sasuke tries to deal with an obsessive snake man. A blossoming relationship with Naruto and many more troublesome events that are turning his entire life into a living hell of gangs and survival of the fittest. / Yaoi, rape, M/M, M/M/M, M/F, Lemon, Lime, BDSM, incest, angst and perhaps more to come.
Pairings: Pairings will more then likely change through out the story so I'm not setting any in stone right now. Read and find out for yourself.
Authors Note: I think this one should most likely end up being a VERY long fan fiction on my standards, because I have so many ideas I want to work into this it isn't even funny. Regardless, I really do hope you enjoy. Take a note, this is happening in modern times, but ninja powers, skills, ect. Do still exist. However, a lot of things are VERY different to some of the settings in the series so PLEASE do not bother me about improper facts. Odds are, I know they are wrong and changed things for the sake of the fan fiction.
Read and Reveiw!
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Sasuke's head was slightly fuzzy from the smell of the fumes that floated about the dimly lit bar. His eyes half closed and his chin resting in his hand as he waited patiently for those members of Akatsuki to arrive. It had been a long and hellish journey to gain their acceptance, but he had made it this far. He starred, mesmerized at a scented candle that sat on his table before him. The flickering flames had captured his attention as he waited. Sasuke ignored all the other dark figures that walked past him, just as they ignored him.
Surely he would be able to do anything they were to give him for initiation. All he wanted to do was follow Itachi. Not out of fondness, out of hatred. He wanted to learn his secrets so that perhaps in the end he might finally kill the bastard and exact his revenge. If it was not enough to bastard had killed their parents and any other living relatives of the family, he had gotten away with it too. Itachi had left no evidence. None save Sasuke, who at the time had been to young to testify against him. And now a retrial was not something Sasuke wanted. He wanted to exact his revenge. His thought train was growing darker and darker, as he progressed to thinking of the many different ways he might attempt to exact such a revenge upon his brother.
"So I see you arrived," the deep, hissing voice of Orochimaru came from behind Sasuke. His eyes snapped open completely and he tried to keep his calm exterior but failed miserably, for he had already jumped in paranoid fright. He cursed himself for his lack of paying attention and cursed the heavy fumes for dulling his senses.
"Of course I did," Sasuke replied coolly, trying to regain his dignity even as he felt Orochimaru's arms wrap about his neck embarrassingly. Itachi had appeared in front of him. Looking down upon his little brother in a slightly amused way. Sasukes eyes followed behind to Kisame. A giant shark man with more brawn then brains. Slowly they moved to Kabuto, who had a knowing smirk upon his face. So it seemed everyone had shown up for Sasukes little initiation. This in itself was fishy, normally it was just Orochimaru, and Sasuke knew it. Something was up.
"Cute, little Sasuke kun. Did you honestly show up here expecting to be let into Akatsuki. We accept only the best as you know. I simply wanted to let you know that perhaps you should just forget about us... Move on, Sasuke kun," Orochimaru hissed into Sasukes ear. His breath warm on the back of the younger Uchiha's neck. Sasuke was so tense under the snake mans grasp. Sasuke felt his face grow hot with anger, but he knew he was no match for Orochimaru, the closest one he matched here was Kabuto. "Now get out of my sight. And my bar you useless brat." It was a well known fact that, as fond of Sasuke, Orochimaru was he would never allow someone in his organization he did not hold up to his expectations. As tempting as this was.
Sasuke was about to bark out a snarled remark, despite knowing it was wiser when Itachi cut him off and spoke first instead. "I don't think letting him off so easily would be such a good idea."
All eyes moved to Itachi, Orochimaru's fingers had knocked off Sasukes top hat. It was now sitting on the table as the snake mans fingers played in Sasukes raven hair. It was all Sasuke could do not to swat him away. And he could not help but be disgusted by the sudden jealous twinkle in Kabutos' eyes. In his mind, everything must be some sort of test. It was a bluff. They just wanted a reaction out of him. After all those years of training and trying to prove himself there was no way he could be let down and not allowed access into the gang. "Why is that, Itachi kun?" Orochimaru asked after a prolonged silence to which the older brother seemed not to offer his information.
"If you do not remember correctly. He knows a lot. What if the police get him?" Itachi let the thought hang in the air, trailing off softly. His sharingan eyes looked down at his brother. "I doubt the little moron would be able to keep his mouth shut..."
Orochimaru recoiled from Sasuke with a soft hiss, like he had just been severely burned. Starring at Sasuke like he was some sort of horrible insect all of the sudden. "Correct. I suppose so. Hmm... " Orochimaru replied to him thoughtfully. Suddenly composed once more. Sasuke was feeling steadily worse, his gut was beginning to flutter and he had the feeling that perhaps he should be leaving about then.
"Perhaps, Orochimaru sama... We should teach him a lesson of what might lay in store should he so much as whisper a word of us?" Kabuto suggested, pushing the big round glasses up his nose. A glimmer of hope in his dark eyes at the thought of beating Sasuke into oblivion.
The whole room seemed to have gone quite. Conversations had gotten softer and the music had stopped. For they had not been making any efforts to disguise their own exchange. Everyone knew that they belonged to Akatsuki, and everyone know the so did the bar itself. It was frequently visited by members of the organization, but rarely did something exciting happen out in the open like this.
Orochimaru seemed to take a liking to this idea.
"Excellent. I leave it up to you three then, to decide what punishment he should receive," Orochimaru replied. And then he sauntered off with the wave of his hand, giving permission for them all to do as they wished to the young Uchiha.
Sasuke knew what was coming and he was on his feet like a shot and heading towards the door. Itachi caught the collar of Sasukes shirt however, gagging him on the rough tug that send the younger Uchiha reeling backwards into a table. Kisame was on him in seconds, the shark man wanted his taste of the Uchiha blood he had so craved for so long. Claws digging deep into Sasuke's flesh, puncturing wholes right through his fancy pinstripe suit.
"Sasuke... Don't you ever forget the lesson you're about to learn. Don't fuck with me," Itachi growled into his brothers ear. Sasuke leveled his leg and booted Kisame in the gut, sending the unsuspecting shark man backwards and Sasuke managed to gain his feet. He whirrled on Itachi just in time to get punched in the face. It split his forehead open, blood gushed forth from the wound into one of his eyes. He had to close it as it was immediately blinded. Sasuke once again tried to flee. Three on one odds with some of the most dangerous people around were excruciatingly bad odds for him. He wanted to at least get himself an advantage. But Kisame once again found himself tackled Sasuke. Bareing him to the floor. Kabuto eagerly took that chance to give Sasuke a shot in the ribs. Sasuke grunted in pain as he hit the floor with a thud beneath 200 pounds of muscle that was the shark man.
He heard Itachi's cool laugh. "See little brother. You'll never make it into Akatsuki. So you should just keep running."
Itachi's words were like fuel. Sasuke drove one hand upwards, and managed to clip Kisames jaw and send the shark mans head up, snapping his neck back but really only succeeding in pissing him off more. As Kisame grappled to restrain him Kabuto stomped on Sasukes face, shattering his nose. Sasuke screamed in pain. Kisame ripped into Sasukes arms and body with nail and knife. The younger boy was battered to near oblivion before he managed to extract himself again from beneath the shark man.
Sasuke faced Kabuto, punching the platinum haired man square in the face by some miracle luck in his aim. Kabuto staggered backwards grabbing his face and shards of shattered glass fell to the floor from broken glasses. Sasuke's fist now also had glass imbedded painful in the knuckles. Kisame caught Sasuke from behind and bent his arm behind him to a point of nearly breaking. Anyone who had been in line of the battle had immediately retreated away to a several foot radius around the combatants and did their best to try not to stare.
"Stop," Itachi said, after several moments of watching Kisame and Kabuto beat the hell out of Sasuke. He could see his younger counterpart was barely conscious by this point and to much more might put him in a condition to critical and fragile to prove the point. He did not want Sasuke to forget why this was happening. The moronic boy needed to learn to keep his nose away from Akatsuki.
Kabuto stopped wailing on Sasuke, who slumped down in Kisames restraining grasp, his chest heaved and blood dripped to the floor. It was nearly pooling beneath him. Itachi wondered carelessly if perhaps he had ended up waiting to long in the end anyways.
Regardless he strode over to Sasuke and cupped his brothers chin in his hands, tilting his head up so Sasuke was forced to look into the crimson sharingan eyes the younger had failed use this fight. Itachi's other hand caressed Sasuke's left cheek gentley, as though he held a fragile doll in his hands. One that might break.
"Don't you forget, little brother... And don't you dare come back to the apartment. Or next time you might not be so lucky. Because I don't think I'll let you live," Itachi purred at his nearly unconscious brother. Sasuke frowned and focused on Itachi. Spat in his face defiantly. Disgusted and insulted Itachi brought his knee up into Sasukes belly so hard he finally lost consciousness. Kisame dropped the limp body to the ground the moment he was lost.
"Throw him outside somewhere... And Kabuto stop whining over your fucking nose. And you can get knew glasses so don't even start with me," Itachi snapped as his eyes darted over to the platinum haired man who seemed to be horribly upset with his knew broken nose. He seemed about to retort but Itachi glared at him and immediately he shut his mouth and slunk off to see a doctor. It was obvious who was in charge now. Kisame hoisted Sasuke back into the air like a rag doll, licking the blood from his lips to taste Sasukes sweet blood. Itachi had calmed again, wiped the spit from his face and watched in satisfaction as Kisame tossed Sasuke outside onto the sidewalk.
Kisame and Itachi left, and everyone forced themselves to go back to pretending nothing had happened and that it was a completely normal day. One of the waitresses walked over to the mess that had been created to clean up the blood and rearrange the chairs and table back to their original spots. The music started up again, and the atmosphere returned to the dark, angsty atmosphere that it originally had been.
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Well that was chapter one. I'm not really, completely satisfied with it at all. But it seems to be what I came up with for the time so. I'm going with it. Cause I am sick of rewriting things a billion times like I did with Team Work Skills, Survival Training.
This was just an introductory to things and how I'm going to try to get them to work. Somewhat OOC but I'm working to fix that as we speak. I'm trying something VERY new for me in writing this. So bare with me people.
Hit me with your reviews. I am dieing to improve on this one. The idea in my mind will surely be grateful to your assistance.
Unworthy Of Admittance
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto, or related characters.
Description: AU; An 18 year old Sasuke tries desperately to follow his brother Itachi into the Akatsuki Gang. Probably one of the most secretive and well thought out organizations around. And when they finally invite him to get initiated in, he realizes it was all just a cruel joke to torment him.
However, after getting beat up by the gang, and Itachi threatens his life should Sasuke return to their apartment things start taking a turn for the worst. Taken in by Sakura and Naruto for the time, Sasuke tries to cope with everything as it comes. Including his constant hatred towards the brother he vowed revenge upon.
Orochimaru develops a certain taste for the younger Uchiha and complications rise as Sasuke tries to deal with an obsessive snake man. A blossoming relationship with Naruto and many more troublesome events that are turning his entire life into a living hell of gangs and survival of the fittest. / Yaoi, rape, M/M, M/M/M, M/F, Lemon, Lime, BDSM, incest, angst and perhaps more to come.
Pairings: Pairings will more then likely change through out the story so I'm not setting any in stone right now. Read and find out for yourself.
Authors Note: I think this one should most likely end up being a VERY long fan fiction on my standards, because I have so many ideas I want to work into this it isn't even funny. Regardless, I really do hope you enjoy. Take a note, this is happening in modern times, but ninja powers, skills, ect. Do still exist. However, a lot of things are VERY different to some of the settings in the series so PLEASE do not bother me about improper facts. Odds are, I know they are wrong and changed things for the sake of the fan fiction.
Read and Reveiw!
__________________________________________________________
Sasuke's head was slightly fuzzy from the smell of the fumes that floated about the dimly lit bar. His eyes half closed and his chin resting in his hand as he waited patiently for those members of Akatsuki to arrive. It had been a long and hellish journey to gain their acceptance, but he had made it this far. He starred, mesmerized at a scented candle that sat on his table before him. The flickering flames had captured his attention as he waited. Sasuke ignored all the other dark figures that walked past him, just as they ignored him.
Surely he would be able to do anything they were to give him for initiation. All he wanted to do was follow Itachi. Not out of fondness, out of hatred. He wanted to learn his secrets so that perhaps in the end he might finally kill the bastard and exact his revenge. If it was not enough to bastard had killed their parents and any other living relatives of the family, he had gotten away with it too. Itachi had left no evidence. None save Sasuke, who at the time had been to young to testify against him. And now a retrial was not something Sasuke wanted. He wanted to exact his revenge. His thought train was growing darker and darker, as he progressed to thinking of the many different ways he might attempt to exact such a revenge upon his brother.
"So I see you arrived," the deep, hissing voice of Orochimaru came from behind Sasuke. His eyes snapped open completely and he tried to keep his calm exterior but failed miserably, for he had already jumped in paranoid fright. He cursed himself for his lack of paying attention and cursed the heavy fumes for dulling his senses.
"Of course I did," Sasuke replied coolly, trying to regain his dignity even as he felt Orochimaru's arms wrap about his neck embarrassingly. Itachi had appeared in front of him. Looking down upon his little brother in a slightly amused way. Sasukes eyes followed behind to Kisame. A giant shark man with more brawn then brains. Slowly they moved to Kabuto, who had a knowing smirk upon his face. So it seemed everyone had shown up for Sasukes little initiation. This in itself was fishy, normally it was just Orochimaru, and Sasuke knew it. Something was up.
"Cute, little Sasuke kun. Did you honestly show up here expecting to be let into Akatsuki. We accept only the best as you know. I simply wanted to let you know that perhaps you should just forget about us... Move on, Sasuke kun," Orochimaru hissed into Sasukes ear. His breath warm on the back of the younger Uchiha's neck. Sasuke was so tense under the snake mans grasp. Sasuke felt his face grow hot with anger, but he knew he was no match for Orochimaru, the closest one he matched here was Kabuto. "Now get out of my sight. And my bar you useless brat." It was a well known fact that, as fond of Sasuke, Orochimaru was he would never allow someone in his organization he did not hold up to his expectations. As tempting as this was.
Sasuke was about to bark out a snarled remark, despite knowing it was wiser when Itachi cut him off and spoke first instead. "I don't think letting him off so easily would be such a good idea."
All eyes moved to Itachi, Orochimaru's fingers had knocked off Sasukes top hat. It was now sitting on the table as the snake mans fingers played in Sasukes raven hair. It was all Sasuke could do not to swat him away. And he could not help but be disgusted by the sudden jealous twinkle in Kabutos' eyes. In his mind, everything must be some sort of test. It was a bluff. They just wanted a reaction out of him. After all those years of training and trying to prove himself there was no way he could be let down and not allowed access into the gang. "Why is that, Itachi kun?" Orochimaru asked after a prolonged silence to which the older brother seemed not to offer his information.
"If you do not remember correctly. He knows a lot. What if the police get him?" Itachi let the thought hang in the air, trailing off softly. His sharingan eyes looked down at his brother. "I doubt the little moron would be able to keep his mouth shut..."
Orochimaru recoiled from Sasuke with a soft hiss, like he had just been severely burned. Starring at Sasuke like he was some sort of horrible insect all of the sudden. "Correct. I suppose so. Hmm... " Orochimaru replied to him thoughtfully. Suddenly composed once more. Sasuke was feeling steadily worse, his gut was beginning to flutter and he had the feeling that perhaps he should be leaving about then.
"Perhaps, Orochimaru sama... We should teach him a lesson of what might lay in store should he so much as whisper a word of us?" Kabuto suggested, pushing the big round glasses up his nose. A glimmer of hope in his dark eyes at the thought of beating Sasuke into oblivion.
The whole room seemed to have gone quite. Conversations had gotten softer and the music had stopped. For they had not been making any efforts to disguise their own exchange. Everyone knew that they belonged to Akatsuki, and everyone know the so did the bar itself. It was frequently visited by members of the organization, but rarely did something exciting happen out in the open like this.
Orochimaru seemed to take a liking to this idea.
"Excellent. I leave it up to you three then, to decide what punishment he should receive," Orochimaru replied. And then he sauntered off with the wave of his hand, giving permission for them all to do as they wished to the young Uchiha.
Sasuke knew what was coming and he was on his feet like a shot and heading towards the door. Itachi caught the collar of Sasukes shirt however, gagging him on the rough tug that send the younger Uchiha reeling backwards into a table. Kisame was on him in seconds, the shark man wanted his taste of the Uchiha blood he had so craved for so long. Claws digging deep into Sasuke's flesh, puncturing wholes right through his fancy pinstripe suit.
"Sasuke... Don't you ever forget the lesson you're about to learn. Don't fuck with me," Itachi growled into his brothers ear. Sasuke leveled his leg and booted Kisame in the gut, sending the unsuspecting shark man backwards and Sasuke managed to gain his feet. He whirrled on Itachi just in time to get punched in the face. It split his forehead open, blood gushed forth from the wound into one of his eyes. He had to close it as it was immediately blinded. Sasuke once again tried to flee. Three on one odds with some of the most dangerous people around were excruciatingly bad odds for him. He wanted to at least get himself an advantage. But Kisame once again found himself tackled Sasuke. Bareing him to the floor. Kabuto eagerly took that chance to give Sasuke a shot in the ribs. Sasuke grunted in pain as he hit the floor with a thud beneath 200 pounds of muscle that was the shark man.
He heard Itachi's cool laugh. "See little brother. You'll never make it into Akatsuki. So you should just keep running."
Itachi's words were like fuel. Sasuke drove one hand upwards, and managed to clip Kisames jaw and send the shark mans head up, snapping his neck back but really only succeeding in pissing him off more. As Kisame grappled to restrain him Kabuto stomped on Sasukes face, shattering his nose. Sasuke screamed in pain. Kisame ripped into Sasukes arms and body with nail and knife. The younger boy was battered to near oblivion before he managed to extract himself again from beneath the shark man.
Sasuke faced Kabuto, punching the platinum haired man square in the face by some miracle luck in his aim. Kabuto staggered backwards grabbing his face and shards of shattered glass fell to the floor from broken glasses. Sasuke's fist now also had glass imbedded painful in the knuckles. Kisame caught Sasuke from behind and bent his arm behind him to a point of nearly breaking. Anyone who had been in line of the battle had immediately retreated away to a several foot radius around the combatants and did their best to try not to stare.
"Stop," Itachi said, after several moments of watching Kisame and Kabuto beat the hell out of Sasuke. He could see his younger counterpart was barely conscious by this point and to much more might put him in a condition to critical and fragile to prove the point. He did not want Sasuke to forget why this was happening. The moronic boy needed to learn to keep his nose away from Akatsuki.
Kabuto stopped wailing on Sasuke, who slumped down in Kisames restraining grasp, his chest heaved and blood dripped to the floor. It was nearly pooling beneath him. Itachi wondered carelessly if perhaps he had ended up waiting to long in the end anyways.
Regardless he strode over to Sasuke and cupped his brothers chin in his hands, tilting his head up so Sasuke was forced to look into the crimson sharingan eyes the younger had failed use this fight. Itachi's other hand caressed Sasuke's left cheek gentley, as though he held a fragile doll in his hands. One that might break.
"Don't you forget, little brother... And don't you dare come back to the apartment. Or next time you might not be so lucky. Because I don't think I'll let you live," Itachi purred at his nearly unconscious brother. Sasuke frowned and focused on Itachi. Spat in his face defiantly. Disgusted and insulted Itachi brought his knee up into Sasukes belly so hard he finally lost consciousness. Kisame dropped the limp body to the ground the moment he was lost.
"Throw him outside somewhere... And Kabuto stop whining over your fucking nose. And you can get knew glasses so don't even start with me," Itachi snapped as his eyes darted over to the platinum haired man who seemed to be horribly upset with his knew broken nose. He seemed about to retort but Itachi glared at him and immediately he shut his mouth and slunk off to see a doctor. It was obvious who was in charge now. Kisame hoisted Sasuke back into the air like a rag doll, licking the blood from his lips to taste Sasukes sweet blood. Itachi had calmed again, wiped the spit from his face and watched in satisfaction as Kisame tossed Sasuke outside onto the sidewalk.
Kisame and Itachi left, and everyone forced themselves to go back to pretending nothing had happened and that it was a completely normal day. One of the waitresses walked over to the mess that had been created to clean up the blood and rearrange the chairs and table back to their original spots. The music started up again, and the atmosphere returned to the dark, angsty atmosphere that it originally had been.
__________________________________
Well that was chapter one. I'm not really, completely satisfied with it at all. But it seems to be what I came up with for the time so. I'm going with it. Cause I am sick of rewriting things a billion times like I did with Team Work Skills, Survival Training.
This was just an introductory to things and how I'm going to try to get them to work. Somewhat OOC but I'm working to fix that as we speak. I'm trying something VERY new for me in writing this. So bare with me people.
Hit me with your reviews. I am dieing to improve on this one. The idea in my mind will surely be grateful to your assistance.