Angel's nights out

Sasu/Naru

HI! Naruto’s ramen here, I have finally decided to be part of this community of fictive stories…well to write in it at least.

I have never really posted any of my fan fiction online before so it is all so new to me.
So please be patient.

I do not own Naruto or any character in this series. Though like most of you I wish I did. U_U but we must live on.

In with ought further a due, here you are, my fiction.


Sasuke’s pov


It’s been like this for the past few days, I see him leave his home after training, dressed in something utterly different, not like him, though I have never seen him up close as he left his home after our long days of training.

You’d think he would be exhausted but he isn’t. I’ve been watching him for a few days now. I am trying to find out what is going on, I started to question this one day when I tried to go over to his home one day, but he was not there, I went to his favourite noodle house and I was told that he had not stopped by for quite some time.

He has not gone to the noodle house for some time… this was not like him, so the next day I set out to see what was going on, I started out by standing far away just t see in what direction he was going, I found out it was in town, but I didn’t know were.

All I knew at this moment was that he was dressed in all white. Ok so my eyesight is known to be great but that tells you just how far I was.

It’s been 3 days. I stay hidden behind a building looking at the door to his apartment. I can see the door open and then I see him walk out, in his white clothing again, but now that I have moved in to se him closer I see perfectly what he is dressed in.

To my surprise his hair is not a mess but rather neatly placed and spiked, he had placed barrettes in his hair and a few strategic strands of hair over his face. Wow, I mean wow, look at his face, it’s so pure his eyes seem to be even brighter then usual, it must be because of the makeup, the eye shadow he has on.

I slowly move my gaze lower at his neck, a white lace with a silver cross on it. The collar of his shirt is much lower, as I see his collarbone, and a few inches after the start of his white fitted shirt, it clings to his every curve, I can perfectly see his chest and even every one of his abs, they are just so very visible under that tight shirt he wears.

I can feel my face heating up as I keep looking at him trying to se the rest. His pants were fitting and tight as much so as his shirt, even more so, at the knees of his pants there was some white netting and from his waist to the back of his legs were two straps crossing over. Why does he look so good in this kind of clothing?

He is now moving, I can’t help but look at his walk; he’s swaying his hips from side to side like a girl would do, though it looks strangely attractive… NO…stop thinking such thing. Back to what I was doing, I notice that he is going in the same direction as he did the past two days. I decide I should follow him, I want to see what’s been going on these past few days, I want to know how long this has been going on.

So I silently make my way after him, silently sneaking and watching my friend, my rival, make his way down an alley way. Then I am stopped by a group of people, I don’t want to make much of a fuss. I don’t want Naruto to know I’m there. So I back off and keep going but in another direction to end up, hopefully, were he is going.


Naruto,s pov

I finally made it to the alley, I don’t know who was following me but I know that the guys just stepped in, now I just have to make my way to the club. The guys are in some way helping me, they don’t know my real name but they know were I go and so they help me out.

The name they know me under is “Angelus” or “Gabriel”, they know it isn’t my real name and they accept that. I gave myself this name because I was wearing white and someone did the comment that I looked like an angel. So I took that into account.

I am almost there, that’s great, I no longer need to wait in line to get in, I just walk in and the bouncer greets me wit a great big smile. “Hey Angelus” he says as I wave to him and walk down the stairs and into the room were the music started to pump. It was still early but the line was already quite long.

I walk around and find a place to site only for a little, I already see someone approach me, maybe in hopes of having me for the night, I just wave my hand at him, I’m not interested in him, I have a noticeable pattern in the people I decided to stay with for the night.

This guy was not one of them though he had one thing. If you want me to be with you, you must have raven hair, dark eyes, and be slightly cold towards me. Can you guess why, I crave for someone’s attention and I can’t get it, the one I want this attention from won’t give it to me.

The reason why is, probably because I don’t want to scare him off… After all, he does not know how I feel… he doesn’t know my orientation. I haven’t hinted at anything… but I’m to frightened to see his reaction to what I want him to know.

The guy tapes on my shoulder, why is he still there? I waved him off. I turn to look at him and tell him off. Arg… look at him so tall “hey look, I don’t wana hang with you” I say to him in my normal voice, not angry nor annoyed at him. “Well could you listen to my offer?” he asked me. “Ya, I’ll listen to your offer.” I said though I have no intention of accepting it.

“I’ll pay you double what those other’s paid you, just to have you at my side for the night, nothing more” I look at him blinking, is he serious? “Double?” I ask him, a smirk on my face “that is, just for hanging with you? Nothing more?”

The tall brunette nods “No tricks” he says as he raised his hand to both side of his head
Confirming what he meant. I’m thinking, double what I usually get paid isn’t bad at all… though if he does it others would want to… “Sorry man, I can’t accept, if they see me with you others will try” he looked at me desperately “three times” how pathetic I think.

I get up and walk up the stairs again and out, the bouncer, or rather Bear looked at me slightly questioning “taking some air “ I said as I stepped to the side a little.


Sasuke’s pov

I made it to the other side after a few more minutes of walking, how annoying it was, I could have busted those punks and made my way just as easy. I see this line up and look at it could Naruto be there?

I look from one side of the line to another, were is he? The seeing some people making their way to the front of the line I ask them “Do you know if Naruto is here?” I gues they should know him because they were directly going to the front of the line, and if I wasn’t wrong Naruto had been going for longer then I could think.

“Sorry Dude, we don’t know any Naruto” one of them clam then I could see him walking back and forth, It was him, Naruto just plainly walking back and forth looking troubled.

I looke at the guys again. If they didn’t know his name was Naruto it was cause he didn’t give his name out, a sensible thought, he wasn’t always stupid, I had to admit to that.

“Hey could you tell me what that guy’s name is, I want to talk to him, maybe he knows” I hope I didn’t fuck up…. could they guess that he was Naruto. “That’s Angelus, we call him angel,” he said to me smiling “you’re in luck”
“Huh?” I asked
“He only goes for guys with black hair and dark eyes, you should go talk to Angelus, our angel of sin” he sniggered. Sin…. did he just call him an angel of sin I walked off before I could hit one in the face, if I had to I would come back one day and fix them up really good.

I make my way over to Naruto crossing over the line I see him, his back turned to me, does he even know I’m there

I tap his shoulder “hey Angelus” I use this name he gave himself. My voice must be familiar to him because he turns around as he said my name “Sa-Sasuke!?” he looks shock to see me, I don’t blame him, after all I never really was one to follow people around.

“Oi dobe, what are you doing here?” he looks at me slightly annoyed and hurt “I’m having fun!” he said though it was there on his face, he was not having fun, not tonight at least “out here on your own, you want me to believe that?”

“Look just leave me alone, you don’t understand”
The brute at the door looked at us both as though making sure I wasn’t causing any trouble for Naruto.

My blond friend’s face was looking at the ground as though he was hurt, “Naruto…” I said lightly, my voice unlike my own.

I had the desired reaction, he looked up at me, and in his face, I can see something that looks like yearning, that or I miss read him. I took his hand lightly into my own and look at him, his eyes filed with tears, and he pulls away.

“Don’t shit around like that Sasuke, Don’t be nice to me I know you can’t stand the feeling!” I look at him in, what must be shock, I stand there frozen for a few seconds, then start to talk again “I’m not trying to fool you Na-Angelus,”

Naruto looks at me almost hurt then turns around. “ What ever, I’ll see you tomorrow” did he jus….give me the cold shoulder? After I tried so hard o be nice to him? I don’t get this guy, he as hard to read as a girl!

First chapter done!

Naruto: what’s going on…why…am I going into a gay club, and why the hell am I pushing Sasuke away?

Um well I um wanted to try something

Sasuke: you’re not going to make me like this throughout the fic are you?”

Um I’ll try not to….. ok ok pls comet everyone .plz plz I need to get better I want nice comments as much as constructive ones, don’t flame me plz.