hells bells

***Hey guys this is my first story and ever first time posting n e of my fanfics on here I hopr you like and sorry bout the punctuation but I really do suck at it! pls feel free to leave comments ( constructive criticism only pls!) well... here goes


My name is Desdemona "mona" Otsuka Iam an 18 year old jounin ninja, I dont know who my parents are or if they hated or loved me, where I was born, or what village I come from,and all my friends have ended up dead. I am alone and always will be, the reason for my ostracism is that well..I am not normal in the whole sense of the word, I have something living inside of me and she is very strong(I call "it" a "she" is because everytime I come within 5ft of a guy I feel the raging need to procreate) I also have rages where I black out and when come too there is nothing but carnage around me and I never remember what happend but dead men dont tell tales do they?? My looks couldnt be called normal either I have long black waist length hair,porcelain pale skin ( no matter how much I tan), and slanted gray/purple eyes. I travel from village to village on staying there for as long as I need to and then I leave making no aquaintances of friends, My only companion is a little black cat I picked up along the way I named her "shika" and it was shika who got us thrown out of the last village we were to come into contact with before we reached the desert because she decided to claw the inn keppers wife for no reason
-Mona- *yelling* Now what are we supposed to do?? that was our last chance to eat,sleep in a good bed, and take a warm bath and now we cant do any of those things because you screwed it up! How many times do I have to tell you that you cant be doing this all the time to every person we meet. no matter how funny it is..
-Shika- *meow*
-Mona- I'm sorry sweety I didnt mean to yell at you but it could be days even months before we reach the next village.
Mona walked through the desert for three days surviving barely on small amounts of water from the cactus plants and small rodents..Just when she though she was about to die a village appeared before her. At first she thought it was a mirage til she walked a few more feet and a voice cried out at her she pulled her mask up instinctively more to keep her identity a sceret than from desert dust.
-Guard-Stop! state your name and business here?!
-Mona- I am a travler by the name of mona and I have come to seek shelter in your village;.
-Guard- Is there anyone else with you??
-Mona- no there is no one else besides my pet cat
-Guard- you may enter but you will be watched!
A huge set of wooden dorrs opened before her before she could enter the village, when she did she admired how the sun bleached houses contrasted very well with the sand,also she noticed that there was a wall that looked to be 10-15ft high and at least 6ft thick so you knew the were well protected. Just the 8 hinobi guards surronded her each with their kunai out and pointing directly at her
-Guard- sorry about this ma'am but this is a precaution that we have to take. you cznt be to careful these days
-Mona- *shrugs* Ya do what you gotta do. so what is the name of this place any way??
-Guard-*proudly* Hidden Village of the Sands
-Mona- * thinking* you got the hidden part right *outloud* where are you taking me??
-Guard- To the kazekage only he can grant you permission to stay here
-Mona- well lead on!
As they walked through the village most of the villagers stopped what they were doing to stare openly at her, I guess you could suppose she was dressed kind of foreign to them, Her out fit consisted of a black dress with a white dragon twisting around her torso and stopping just above he knees, her hair was in two pigtails, and a kunai pouch was strapped to her thigh , a blood red mask covered her face, and thick lines of kohl surrounded her eyes. After mich oohing and ahhing the finnaley reached the housing quarters of the kazekage and from what she could see there were several windows, when the reached the entrance two shinobi guards were standing there guarding the entrance. They nodded to the shinobi around her and moved aside to let them pass. They had to climb a long flight of stairs to reach the kazekages office and when they did the were two more guards standing outside the door.
-Guard#1- you need to remove all the weapons you have on your person before entering.
-Mona- will I get them back??
-Guard #2- when we are able to prove you are not a threat.
-Mona-*shrugging* Have it your way
Mona pulled her kunai out of it pouch on her thigh and other various weapons she had hidden conspicuously on her person, whe she was finnaly finished the guards looked alittle nervous and scared
-Guard#1- Is that all the weapons you have on your person?? How in the hell did you fit 23 blades on such a small body?/
-Mona-*winking* A girl doesnt tell all her secrets1 oh! and by the way can you keep an eye on shika for me??
-Guard#2- Why would we watch a puny cat??
-Mona- Be careful shika is easily offended and she can be very violent and scratches people for no reson *whispering* a habit she just picked up *outloud* and I cant have her attacking the kazekage on our first meeting! *smiling* behave yourself now shika I'll be out in a few minutes
***hey kids gotta cut this short I'll post more where I left off..tell me what ya'll think so far!