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What Hurts the Most

By: xoxoPepperspice
folder Naruto › Yaoi - Male/Male
Rating: Adult ++
Chapters: 2
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Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
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Prologue

A/N: Please understand that this is my first fan fiction ever. So please be kind. I love people who correct my mistakes. English is NOT my first language; I’m natively French…even so, I still speak English quite fluently, but please feel free to correct grammar/spelling/and the use of Japanese words. xD *chuckles* Anywho, this fic is really kinda dark, but it does get better! I promise!

Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto or any of Kishimoto-sensei’s characters…if I did… lots of mansex would probably plague the series… >.>;;
Pairings: SasuNaru[mainly], HakuNaru, Maybe a little GaaNaru on the side.
Summary: [Ugh! I suck at summaries!] Sasuke breaks Naruto’s heart, and Naruto’s friends are left to pick up the pieces… how will they react when Sasuke tries to get his precious Naru-koi back?

What Hurts the Most;
Prologue:

”You’re just an easy lay, Naruto. Don’t flatter yourself by claiming to be my boyfriend. You wouldn’t want to offend me, would you? Dobe,” Sasuke sneered at the pathetic blonde haired beauty of a boy, “You mean nothing to me, or anyone else in this school. Do us a favor and rot in hell, bakemono!”

The simple reminder of what his beloved had said to him fueled the small blonde teen into driving the simple kitchen knife into the vein on his arm. He sniffled in what he was sure his Sasuke-kun would call pathetic, his eyes watering not from the pain in his wrist, but rather, the pain in his heart. ‘He never loved me!!’ his inner self cried, as he tore his wrist to shreds, trying to block out his aching heart by hurting himself.

It hurt so goddamned much!

Ignoring the pool of blood at his feet, Naruto sank to floor, letting the darkness creep into his mind to blot out his vision. The last thought that flew through his mind before he was consumed by a space so frighteningly dark, was simply ’Sasuke-kun…will you miss me?’ He blacked out, the last thing he heard were panicked screams of his name, someone pleading for him to old on a little longer.

In the darkness, his mind suddenly replayed the heartbreaking events of the last three weeks, torturing the already broken blond.


Yeah… I almost cried while writing this. I have the first chapter typed up and ready to go. I want to know if I should continue this first… so please, review! For every 10 reviews I get, I’ll post a new chapter.
Feel free to correct crappy spelling and what-not. Thankyou so much!
With Love,
Xoxo-Pepperspice

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