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A Note of Discord 2: A Waltz Off-Key

By: Esotericstyle
folder Naruto › Yaoi - Male/Male › Kakashi/Sasuke
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A Note of Discord 2: A Waltz Off-Key

Naruto: A Note of Discord 2
A Waltz Off-Key.
Esoteric Style

Sasuke crawled across the rough stone cliff top. Searing pain shot through his arms with each movement. His left was almost motionless. After making a few feet of progress, Sasuke stopped to rest. He rolled onto his back, holding his arms tightly to his chest. He pulled in a few harsh, burning breaths. Sasuke was a mess, his inner thighs were painted a reddish brown as the blood dried there. He had been crawling for over an hour, and had barely made any progress. He could still see the patch of blood and cum he had left behind. His goal was the steady slant on the rear side of the cliff. It was a much longer trip back down to the ground level, but he didn’t have a chance scaling the cliff in this state. Before departing, the sound ninjas had said that someone was approaching from the forest. Sasuke could hope it was someone helpful, but couldn’t risk taking that chance. However, he was running out of energy. He was completely drained of chakra before the attack, and his reserves were being used mostly to numb the incredible pain in his arms.
Behind him, Sasuke heard the hurried footsteps of someone running up the cliff face. The chakra control necessary for such a maneuver indicated that whomever was pursuing him was strong, Chunin level, at least. Sasuke looked around for cover. There was a dead bush to his left, drying out in the sun. He rolled toward it, dragging himself into it’s shadow. Just as he escaped sight, a tall figure appeared on the edge of the cliff. It was quickly joined by two smaller shapes. Sasuke listened intently.
“Blood. I was right. There was a battle.” It was Kakashi. That was good. Sasuke opened his mouth to call out, but a second voice silenced him.
“Where is Sasuke?” Sakura. “Sasuke? Sasuke!” The pink-haired girl screamed at the bloodstained rock, begging for a reply. Sasuke did not speak. To let Kakashi see him in this condition was humiliating enough, but he would not allow Sakura to witness it. The third figure did not speak, but he didn’t have to. Sasuke knew who it was. Naruto squatted by the dried blood strewn across the rock floor. He examined it with silent curiosity, before standing to search the area.
“Are you hiding somewhere, Sasuke? Are you hurt, scaredy-cat?” Naruto’s loud, nasally voice echoed off of the towering rocks surrounding them.
“Naruto!” Kakashi scolded. “Have some sympathy. With this much blood…” Kakashi was cut off as Sakura gasped. The young teacher moved cautiously around the cliff top, carefully following the blood smears that Sasuke left behind. He observed the area, looking for signs of life. He had spotted Sasuke under the bush within seconds of clearing the ledge, but he wanted to assess the situation fully before making any movements toward the boy. Sasuke was shivering. His movement caused a tremor to race through the leaves of the bush, which caught the attention of Sakura and Naruto.
“Sasuke-kun!” Sakura screeched and dove for Sasuke. Kakashi turned to stop her, but it was too late. Her scream cut through the air.

Kakashi leapt from limb to limb, racing Sasuke’s broken body back to the village. Naruto and Sakura stayed a few paces back, unwilling to look on the damage that Zaku had caused. Sasuke was unable to hold on to Kakashi, so he had been tied onto the ninja’s back, facing behind. His head hung limply, his eyes shut tight. The fear of making contact with Naruto’s eyes was greater even than the fear of death.

The waiting room of the hospital was cold, and sterile. Kakashi felt out of place next to the white chairs, white floors, and white walls. The nurses and medical ninja walked with a confident gait, seeming to be in no particular hurry. Finally, he was approached by a young woman, barely over twenty.
“Hatake Kakashi? I’m in charge of Sasuke’s recovery.”
“Do you have news?” The medical staff member detected a shocking amount of concern in Kakashi’s voice. Truthfully, he felt responsible for the attack. Had he arrived on time, it might never have happened.
“Yes. Most of Sasuke’s wounds were superficial. He suffered a few dozen shallow lacerations across his body, but they are already mostly healed. Unfortunately, he has a fractured jaw, four broken fingers, a broken arm, and both shoulders were dislocated. We’ve set his arms, but it will be a long time before he can resume training. I’m afraid he will have to be withdrawn from the Chunin exam this year.”
“Withdrawn?”
“I have more bad news. A physical examination leads us to believe that Sasuke was raped, by at least one person.” Kakashi’s eyes widened with shock. “There was mild physical trauma, but the emotional damage seems much worse. I’ve never seen a patient like this.”
“What kind of emotional damage?” The young woman’s eyes glazed over. She bit her lip, unsure of whether to speak or to run away.
“When we were examining him, after we bathed him…”

Sasuke was near motionless as the two nurses carried him from the small washtub to his bed. He blinked, and drew breath, but nothing more.
“We’re going to perform a series of physical examinations in order to determine exactly what happened. Try to relax.” Sasuke’s limbs went limp. He obeyed because he found it impossible to argue. He didn’t know if he would ever be able to argue with anyone again. One nurse pulled out a small notepad and a pen. The second waited by the room’s door until she was joined by a medical ninja. She was tall, and thin, with light colored hair resembling Kakashi’s. She approached Sasuke and bent over his body. He felt her eyes combing his body. His skin was still wet from the bath, and the thin red slashes stood out clearly from his clean, pale, flesh. Most of the cuts had been covered by dirt or blood, and he had had no idea how numerous they were. Sasuke felt cold and exposed. He didn’t like being completely nude and uncovered in front of three girls. The nurse with the notepad was very young, and she blushed frequently as her eyes traced Sasuke’s youthful hips and smooth cock.
The medical ninja laid her hands on Sasuke’s chest. He felt the steady pulse of chakra flowing from her palms as she checked his body for internal damage. She would occasionally ramble off notes to the younger nurse, without taking her concentration away from the boy.
“No signs of internal bleeding in the torso. Bruising and lacerations appear superficial. No infection in the wounds on patient’s chest…” Her touch was cold, and scientific, yet Sasuke felt an intense warmth growing within him as her fingers swept across his skin.
“I’m moving on to the boy’s pelvis and extremities. Sasuke, let me know if you feel uncomfortable, we can try less physical techniques.” Sasuke didn’t know if he replied or not. He was vaguely aware of voicing some guttural noise, but his mind was far from his body. His thoughts kept returning to the cliff, and Zaku. Zaku’s cackling face looking down on him. Zaku, fourteen, but at least a head taller, standing over his bleeding body, and delivering the final kick. The medical ninja swept her palms across Sasuke’s chest in a great arc, pulling her chakra energy toward his right arm. Her fingers moved gently, gliding over his injuries without awakening any pain. “The right arm is broken at the elbow, two fractures. Shoulder has been reset, but still shows signs of torn muscle. Right wrist has three hairline fractures…” Sasuke’s thoughts returned again to Zaku. He swallowed. His throat was dry, he craved water. He could still taste Zaku in his mouth. He couldn’t get rid of the taste of his cock. He couldn’t forget the metallic flavor of cum and blood, nor could he forget the burning sensation it left in his throat.
Her hands had moved to his left side. “Left arm has fewer injuries. Torn muscle in shoulder, two broken fingers, strained ligaments…” Sasuke heard the young nurse’s pen scratch its way across her notepad. He feared the sound would drive him insane. His head still throbbed. The ninja’s hands swept downward. Sasuke felt her chakra draw through his body, cutting a numb coolness from his left shoulder to his navel. “Sasuke, I’m going to spread your legs a bit, I need a better view of your pelvis. Nurse, will you assist me?” The older nurse nodded, a slight blush on her cheeks, and hurried to Sasuke’s side. She tugged gently on Sasuke’s right knee, while the medical specialist pulled on his left. They spread his thighs, angling his hips upward slightly. Sasuke’s cock rolled to the side, resting against the curve of his thigh. “Thank you, nurse.” The nurse left her side, retreating to the opposite wall. The medical ninja slid her hands to either side of Sasuke’s boyhood, their outer edges resting against his inner thighs. Sasuke felt her chakra vibrating through his abdomen. “There is some internal bruising in the rear pelvic region…” Her hands moved lower, sliding gently under Sasuke’s balls. Her thumbs rested on his asshole. “There is moderate physical trauma to the anus and rear pelvis. I detect significant internal bruising in…” Heat rushed through Sasuke’s body. It seemed to originate where the medical ninja’s thumbs met his body.
When Sasuke opened his eyes, he didn’t see the medical ninja, he saw Zaku. The teen seemed to look down on him with an expression of greed and satisfaction. He blinked, and the image was gone.
“Sasuke? I’m going to perform an internal examination. Can you tell me anything that happened?” Sasuke couldn’t speak. Time seemed to double up on itself. His vision blurred. “…if it hurts too much.” Her voice echoed, repeating itself several times. She penetrated him, using her chakra to probe inside Sasuke’s ass. He felt another rush of energy. A slow-burning flame built in the base of his spine. She slid the tip of one thumb into the forgiving orifice, pressing gently along its edge. “…patient’s body is reacting…” Sasuke’s legs shook. His skin broke out in goose bumps, as a cold sweat appeared on his brow. He thought he heard the younger nurse gasping, but that was in another world. He felt his cock harden. It was a sensation he was still somewhat unfamiliar with. It throbbed desperately, piercing the air as his hips began to buck wildly. She rotated her fingers, trying to refocus her chakra. Sasuke’s breath sharpened. His movements became more deliberate. His bucking subsided to upward thrusts, his asshole tightening harshly on her thumb. The young nurse dropped her notepad. Sasuke’s eyes opened. Time slowed. He watched the pen, falling slowly enough for him to read the print painted on it’s side, as it rolled in the air. There was no sound in this world. He predicted every movement before it happened. The medical ninja tried to back away, but he fired his left arm out like a piston, holding her arm firmly in place. He watched fear begin to take hold on her face. Her lips formed familiar syllables. “Sharingan!” The medical ninja shrieked. The young nurse passed out. The older nurse sprinted into the hall, crying out about the boy with blood red eyes. Sasuke felt his body’s energy focus into a single point in the center of his pelvis, as his balls tightened against his body. He pulled her arm toward him, driving her thumb deeply into him. Her extended chakra rubbed past his prostate, and he let go.
Sasuke’s body fell limp against the bed. The orgasm ripped out of his body, sending a large stream of pearly fluid arcing onto his chest and stomach. As he blacked out, youthful cock twitching and bouncing against his thigh, he heard Zaku’s laughter in the back of his mind.


Kakashi stared at the medical specialist in silent awe. He stepped backward, collapsing into his chair.
“We think that he is suffering from PTSD, or Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder. It’s a common mental issue in rape victims. My theory is that the sensation of the physical exam triggered a flashback of the event, which resulted in his behavior. I believe the uncontrollable sharingan usage is related as well.” She moved to sit across from Kakashi, her hands folded between her legs. “We have a few options as far as treatment, but the final call will be up to you, since you are the closest thing Sasuke has to a parent.” The statement triggered another twinge of guilt.
“Can I see him?”
“Normally, I wouldn’t recommend it; but, you may be the only one that can get through to him.” Kakashi stood and let the specialist lead him to Sasuke’s room. Like every other room in the hospital, it was bright white. Every wall, the floor, the curtains, even the bed sheets. Sasuke’s pale skin faded into the fabric until he was almost unnoticeable. He was given away, however, by his jet black hair, tangled beyond recognition, and piercing red eyes, staring unblinking into the wall opposite him. Kakashi felt a darkness in the boy that scared him.

The boy was in the hospital for the next three weeks, never speaking, moving only when necessary. He was treated for his injuries, but the staff otherwise avoided him. It was winter when he left the facility. The Chunin exams were over; they had passed without incident. Sasuke stood in the center of the abandoned arena, the snow up to his knees, his body rigid against the bursts of wind that would gust down into the cavernous structure. It howled like an animal, kicking up clouds of glistening snow, before disappearing, leaving him in silence.
Kakashi sat in the stands, waiting for the boy to notice him. He had followed Sasuke out here every day since he had left the hospital, but had stayed out of sight until this morning. Several hours passed, and Sasuke moved only to stay on top of the gathering snow. Finally, the boy began to trek across the field. He entered a cold hallway. The snow penetrated even in here, not relenting until Sasuke finally pulled his foot free of the cold substance and onto the first of a dozen flights of concrete stairs. Kakashi stared at the examination field and waited for the boy, even as his footprints vanished in the wind.
The upper deck of the exam stadium was relatively warm, and was mostly protected from the biting wind. Sasuke stood by Kakashi. The Jounin gestured toward an empty seat, but Sasuke made no move to take it.
“I know you probably blame me for missing the exam.” Kakashi spoke to the floor. He was ashamed to look at the boy, ashamed and frightened. Kakashi knew the statement was true, but he was still surprised when Sasuke replied.
“I do.” A moment of tense silence passed.
“Tell me what happened.”
“Don’t patronize me, you read the report, you know what happened.” Kakashi stood.
“Sasuke, I…” Sasuke fell against him. Kakashi was stunned. The boy was crying. He clung desperately to Kakashi’s vest, his face buried in it’s rough fabric. Kakashi raised his arms, folding them around the curve of Sasuke’s back. His right hand slid down until it rested on the upper curve of Sasuke’s ass. Sasuke smiled, and held his body closer to Kakashi’s, bending one knee slightly in a coquettish pose that forced most of his body in contact with Kakashi’s. The teacher recoiled from the contact, firmly pulling Sasuke away. The boy stopped crying immediately.
“You owe me this, Kakashi-sensei.” Sasuke stared up at Kakashi. “You let him take me, let him… ruin me.” Sasuke was trembling, and when his eyes next met Kakashi’s, they blazed red. “Kakashi-sensei, why did it feel good when he was inside me?” Kakashi was silent, in shock. “Why did the cunt in the hospital make me cum with her thumb in my asshole? Kakashi-Sensei?” His voice was loud and shaky, it was filled with rage and pain. Kakashi stood silently, hoping Sasuke would regain control on his own. When he next looked up at Sasuke’s face, he was crying. “Tell me why this happened when you held me.” Sasuke opened the fly on his shorts, revealing a young, but presentable erection. Kakashi’s guard fell.
“Sasuke…” Kakashi stepped toward Sasuke, tucking the boy’s hard-on back into his shorts, and pulling the zipper upward. “Come with me. I’ll show you what it’s supposed to be like.”

Sasuke followed Kakashi to his quarters. Once they had entered, Sasuke waited patiently by the door. Kakashi headed toward the kitchen, discarding his Jounin vest on a table on his way. He opened the door of a fridge that had seen many previous occupants. After shuffling through it’s contents for a while, Kakashi emerged with a bottle of sake. He set ceramic bottle on the counter, and began to rummage through some overhead cabinets. Sasuke watched as he removed two small cups. Kakashi pulled the cork from the bottle, and tipped it, pouring clear liquid into each cup.
“You realize I’m a minor, right?” Sasuke asked.
“Oh really?” Kakashi replied, dripping with sarcasm. “I hadn’t noticed.” He shoved the cork back into the bottle, and returned it to the fridge. “We’re going to be doing a lot of things that are more forbidden than underage drinking, Sasuke.”
“Kakashi-sensei.” Sasuke blushed, though he was unaware of it. Kakashi gestured for Sasuke to join him, and the young teen obeyed. He took one of the cups, they toasted each other, and drank.
Kakashi went into the bedroom first. Sasuke was surprised by the burning sensation the sake made, from his throat to his stomach. The alcohol left a fire in his abdomen. Sasuke stood, and followed Kakashi. The Jounin had already removed most of his clothing by the time Sasuke entered. He turned to face the boy as he stepped out of his pants.
“Strip, Sasuke.” Kakashi’s order was cold, but not angry. Sasuke did as he was told. He pulled off his forehead protector, letting it fall to the carpet. His shirt was next. Sasuke’s chest was smooth, but cut. He unbuttoned his shorts, and pulled the zipper down. He stepped out of the fabric as it fell. Through his white underwear, Sasuke’s cock was clearly outlined. Kakashi watched as the fabric grew tighter around Sasuke’s boyhood. When Sasuke finally pulled the garment down, his cock sprung upward with resounding joy. “Why are you so hard already, Sasuke?”
“It’s…from you looking at me like that. From you looking at it.”
“Do you want me to show you what to do with it?” Sasuke nodded. “Join me on the bed.” Sasuke nodded again, and crawled onto the soft mattress. Kakashi finished removing his clothes. His body was lanky and lean, and his sizeable cock stood straight out like a branch on a great tree. He slid gracefully onto the bed, and sat beside Sasuke. “Watch me, and when you feel comfortable, do what I do.” Kakashi wrapped his hand around his erection, sighing with pleasure at the familiar grip. He pumped his fist gently, as he leaned his head back against the headboard. He tried not to rush it. It would do no good to finish too quickly. After a few moments, he cracked one eye, and glanced down to see Sasuke’s smaller hands on his own cock. Sasuke cupped his balls and lower shaft in one hand, stroking the top half of his cock with the other. He is a fast learner, Kakashi thought. Kakashi was pleased to see that Sasuke’s eyes were glued on his cock. The boy watched in amazement as Kakashi’s hands worked.
“Kakashi-sensei…” Sasuke spoke breathily, “Something’s happening.”
“Oh?” Kakashi turned his head to get a better look. Sasuke’s cock was wet with precum, so much so that it was dripping from Sasuke’s lithe fingers.
“It feels weird.” His hands were trembling, but they kept moving. Kakashi watched the boy’s hips begin to gyrate. Sasuke slid farther down the bed, his face flushed, and his breath ragged.
“Just keep going, Sasuke.” Kakashi was curious. He licked his pinky, and ran it across the head of Sasuke’s cock, gathering a droplet of slick precum. The boy shivered at the sensitive touch. Kakashi placed the finger at the opening of Sasuke’s asshole, and pressed it gently into the orifice. Sasuke’s breaths turned into loud gasps.
“Kakashi-sensei! What…What are you doing?” Sasuke’s body twisted and shook, and his words faded into guttural moans. Kakashi slid his finger entirely into Sasuke’s ass, marveling at it’s tightness. Sasuke’s hips flopped, raising completely from the bed. Sasuke’s back arched, and his teeth clenched. A fine sweat broke out across his young body. As every muscle in his body tensed, he squeezed his fist and came, firing the liquid in a steep arc through the air. His body fell, and his hips pumped several more times, sending large drops of cum raining upon Sasuke, Kakashi, and the bed. Sasuke panted loudly, desperately trying to catch his breath. He lay in shock, his hands clenched like claws just over his hips, while his cock spasmed wildly. Kakashi reached up, grabbing the perky cock, and milked the last of Sasuke’s orgasm from him. The heat slowly passed, and Sasuke regained control of his lower body.
Kakashi leaned back against the headboard, waiting for Sasuke to rest. At his age, the boy probably would not need much. He wasn’t disappointed. Within minutes, Sasuke’s dick was hard again.
“Was that what it’s supposed to feel like, Kakashi-sensei?”
“That’s part of it, yes. When you’re alone, that’s what it feels like. That’s not what Zaku did to you though.”
“I want you inside me, Kakashi-sensei. I want to feel you in me.”
“Are you sure you want that, Sasuke?” He nodded. Kakashi slid closer to the center of the bed. He directed Sasuke into a kneeling position. “Now crawl over me, until you’re kneeling over my cock.”
“This is different than when Zaku did it to me.”
“I want you to be able to see everything better.” The answer satisfied him. Sasuke crawled over Kakashi’s waist, adjusting until his firm ass was positioned over Kakashi’s erection. Kakashi gathered saliva in his mouth, and used his hand to spread it on the shaft of his cock, and Sasuke’s tender asshole. The boy’s cheeks flushed at the touch. Kakashi held the base of his cock, to stabilize it. “Now, lower yourself down onto me.” Sasuke drew in a deep breath and began to lower himself. The head of Kakashi’s cock met his entrance, and slowly pushed into it. “Go as slowly as you need to, Sasuke.”
“I’m OK. It…It doesn’t hurt that badly.” Sasuke kept his eyes firmly closed, his teeth clamped down on his bottom lip, as he slid inch by inch onto Kakashi’s manhood. When five inches were inside him, Sasuke stopped. He inhaled and exhaled a few shallow breaths. “It feels really good right here, Kakashi-sensei.” Sasuke squirmed a bit, nudging Kakashi’s cock back and forth against the most sensitive area inside of him.
“Remember that spot, try to hit it as you move.”
“Move?”
“Move up and down on my shaft. When you get to the top, slide back down, and let it fill you.” Sasuke blushed.
“It already feels like all of you is inside me.” He opened his eyes and glanced embarrassed at Kakashi. “But I’ll try to take more of you, if you want me to.” He slid down a little farther, bending his back to accommodate Kakashi’s girth. Once he had reached the bottom, Sasuke slid back up, more quickly, forcing Kakashi to draw in a deep gasp. It’s no good, he thought, If he keeps this up, I won’t last more than a few thrusts. Sasuke leaned forward, placing his hands on Kakashi’s muscular chest. His face was only about a foot away from Kakashi’s. The Jounin could see the small drops of sweat forming on Sasuke’s round cheeks. The boy slid down again, angling the fall so that the length of Kakashi’s cock slid across his A-spot.
Sasuke tightened his ass as he rose back up, unconsciously following the subtle signs in Kakashi’s body to determine what felt best for him. He increased his speed, rising and falling with near-expert precision.
“I can feel every inch of you, Kakashi-sensei. Does my asshole feel good to you?”
“It’s incredible, Sasuke.”
“Are you going to cum if we keep going?”
“Yeah.”
“Will you do it inside me?”
“What?”
“I want to feel you cum inside of me. I want to feel what it’s like to make you cum.” Kakashi nodded. He reached up, holding Sasuke’s hips with both hands. The boy’s skin was hot, as if he were suffering from a burning fever. Kakashi was at his limit. He tensed his body and pushed his pelvis forward, causing Sasuke’s movements to become more forceful. He thrust upward as Sasuke fell, sending his cock deep into the boy’s ass.
“Sasuke, I’m going to cum!” Sasuke nodded, and tightened his hole in response. Kakashi’s fingers dug into Sasuke’s skin, clutching him firmly.
“Cum in me, Kakashi-sensei, please, please cum inside me.” Sasuke’s words were chopped and breathy. Kakashi looked up into Sasuke’s face as he came, and saw that Sasuke was looking down into his. Kakashi’s movements stopped, and his body became rigid for a moment as Sasuke felt the hot liquid rapidly filling his tight space. As Sasuke began to move his ass again, already noticing the hot sensation rushing toward his cock from every part of his body, he felt Kakashi’s cock spasming inside him, filling him with cum.
Sasuke moved back to a straight kneeling position, bouncing rapidly on Kakashi’s still-rigid cock. Every breath came out as a sharp moan, as every nerve in his body exploded with heat. He watched as the sensation of being penetrated brought him into his second orgasm. His hips twitched, and his muscles tightened again. A stream of white fluid expelled across Kakashi’s stomach, resting in the curves of his abs. He rolled forward, letting Kakashi slide out of him, and lay on Kakashi’s body. They breathed in unison, resting against each other.