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AN: for clarification purposes: Naruto's apartment is really small. He doesn't really spend much time in it-what with missions and all... The 'living room' held his couch, his bed, a small nightstand and the 'kitchen table'.


so here goes my attempt at a PWP...this was also my first ever yaoi fic...i feel so proud...

They sat in a very compromising position on the blonde's lumpy couch, their arousals rubbing enticingly against each other, the movie they were watching forgotten as something much more interesting came up. Who would have thought that his lover got turned on by watching Kenichi Matsuyama play L and eat ice cream? His tongue licked he shell of his lover's ear, making him moan, forgetting all about the sexy way L licked his spoon, he himself wanting to lick something else, though not as sweet and much hotter. Warm breath caressed the sensitive skin of the other's ear, making the raven stifle a moan.

That was his spot. He continued to lave at it but soon grew too impatient and wanted nothing more than to feel his lover inside him.

Enough foreplay- Naruto thought.

With his mouth still close to his lover's ear, he whispered,

"I want to feel you move inside me again."

This time Sasuke whimpered.

Naruto got up from where he sat astride Sasuke's lap and went to the nightstand next to the bed. After a few seconds of searching he triumphantly held up the tube of lubricant.

"Hurry up, Naruto." Sasuke growled. He was past ready; so hard it ached. He wanted to fuck Naruto's brains out-if the dobe had any.

Sasuke couldn't take it anymore. He got off the couch and in a few quick strides had Naruto pinned against the table. Sasuke held a wriggling Naruto down with one hand- Naruto wasn't even trying- as he snatched the lube away from the blonde.

"Hurry up, Sasuke." Naruto said wiggling his ass temptingly in front of the Sharingan user.

"Stop moving." Sasuke said, letting go of him to apply a thick coat of lube over his member. He slowly inserted a lube-drenched finger into Naruto's tight entrance, coaxing the muscles to loosen and relax. After a few minutes of testing Naruto's muscle elasticity, he had Naruto cursing him.

"Sasuke if you dont shove your -" Naruto began but his next profanity was cut off as Sasuke spread him wide and entered him in one quick, fluid thrust to the hilt, his balls slapping against the blonde's skin.

"Oh fuck." Naruto gasped and screamed at the rough treatment, but he loved it all the same. Sasuke massaged his lower back in apology before continuing.

Sasuke pulled out slowly, thrusting in with equal deliberation. Naruto jerked back onto his erection just as Sasuke sank in. Naruto liked it fast- apparently today was no different.

Sasuke pulled out almost to the tip and drove in hard to the hilt, jarring Naruto and making the table creak. Sasuke groaned and was answered by Naruto's moan. Sasuke pulled out and plunged in harder, faster. Naruto wanted more still and asked for it, quite loudly.

"Harder….oh….Sa…Sa…suke."

Sasuke let go of any thought letting his body thrust into Naruto relentlessly, reaching for his climax. The table creaked, groaned and shifted under the wild movements of the two lovers, banging against the wall. Sasuke's arm circled the blonde's waist, reaching down where he grabbed Naruto's erection pumping in time to his thrust.

Naruto's body wound tight, his eyes screwed shut, he shivered violently as he climaxed hard against the table. Sasuke soon followed to ecstasy, his hips jerking forward a few more times, milking him of his release until he was drained of his energy and collapsed on top of Naruto. Sasuke was trying to bask in his afterglow, however, Naruto decided to take that moment to begin complaining.

"Sasuke, the table is jutting my ribs and you're not a feather you know, you're fucking heavy. I'm tired, and I'm sticky and I'm starting to get cold and-"

In one quick fluid motion, Sasuke got off Naruto, spun the blonde around and silenced him with a kiss.

"Shut up. You complain too much."

"What?" Naruto shrilled, snatching his arm from Sasuke's grip. So much for post sex bliss.

But as he began to walk away, Sasuke grabbed his arm again and spun him, using the surprise to his advantage and kissing the blonde again.

"I love you." Sasuke said as he broke the kiss.

It took Naruto a few seconds before the words registered and he found his voice.

"I love you too." Was his dazed reply.

Sasuke took Naruto by the hand and led him to the bathroom to get clean. A few minutes later a moan could be heard over the sound of the shower.

sooo...considering this was my first yaoi fic ever (and a PWP at that) how'd i do?

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