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Buzzing Beetle, Gentle Fist

By: Prism0467
folder Naruto › Threesomes/Moresomes
Rating: Adult +
Chapters: 4
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Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto or any of the characters. I make no money from the writing of this story.
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Buzzing Beetle, Gentle Fist Chapter 1

A/N: Okay, so I wrote this after watching Naruto Shippuuden Movie 3: Inheritors of the Will of Fire, and becoming fascinated by the way that Neji, and then Shino, eagerly devoted themselves to Shikamaru’s command during the mission. That’s hot! I imagined a celebration at the mission’s end that would involve just the three of them. Kyuubi1010 of deviantART totally prodded me, even going so far as to create fan art, and before I knew it, a fic was being created.

What you’ve got here is very quick and somewhat rudimentary, but represents Neji x Shikamaru x Shino x Kikaichu CHAKRA PORN that I am proud to have come up with in my perverted mind.

The AFF qualifiers don’t actually make the cut for this fic. Let’s see…Neji does naughty things to the kikaichu in Shino’s body with his Gentle Fist technique while Shikamaru watches, so be ready. Although this is a multi-chapter, we’ll get there quickly.


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Warning: unbeta'd; OOC

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“You know, this makes twice now that you’ve served under me”, Shikamaru volunteered.

The teams were all together again, back in the restaurant where they had celebrated Naruto’s and Sai’s recovery before this most recent mission. Their collective relief at having returned to the village alive was evident in the excited chatter that filled the room to its rafters.

Shikamaru and Neji sat together at a separate table, substantially less excited but no less relieved.

“True”, Neji confirmed. “The first time you were the chuunin and we were all genin.”

“And the mission ended in disaster,” Shikamaru supplied.

“I wouldn’t call it a disaster.”

“Well, you could hardly call it successful.”

“That depends on which aspect of the mission you were involved in”, Neji contended. “Chouji and I were brought back from the brink of death. I’d say the med-nin have grounds to argue point with you.”

Shikamaru looked at Neji. He was grateful that Neji saw the situation that way. He’d felt so guilty and sad for the failure of that mission, and for nearly losing both Neji and Chouji in the process. “I guess you’re right, especially since their success meant the two of you were alive to help make this mission a success.”

“We’ve come a long way from our genin days, Shikamaru.”

“No kidding; you’re a jounin now, for crying out loud, and the hero of the mission is technically still a genin.”

At this statement, Neji chuckled. “I can scarcely believe it myself sometimes.”

Shikamaru cast a sly glance at his table mate. “So how was I?”

Neji turned to Shikamaru then. “I beg your pardon?” he asked.

“How was I as leader this time, compared to last time?”

Neji blinked. He would never admit it, but he found the Nara’s insecurity endearing. “Why should my evaluation matter? It was Lady Hokage who placed you in charge”, he answered rationally.

“Why shouldn’t it?” Shikamaru countered. “You’re the jounin who was asked to serve under my command.”

“The success of the mission should speak for itself, don’t you think?”

“Not necessarily. I allowed Naruto to go against her orders and prevent Kakashi from making his sacrifice.”

“You made a command decision during a critical moment, Shikamaru, and as a result, we were able to rescue Kakashi and save the village. It was no less than Lady Hokage would have expected of the mission leader.”

Shikamaru watched Neji for a long moment. “You still haven’t answered my question”, he informed the long-haired man.

Neji found himself silently cursing the focus and tenacity that made Shikamaru the leader he had become and steeled himself to answer. “Well, if you must know, that you dared to allow strategy to take a back seat to instinct during this mission was something I never thought I’d see you do. Naruto was your wild card, and you played him expertly.

You demonstrated to me that your skill as a leader has only improved.”

Shikamaru was very pleased with the answer. “And you’d do it again?” he asked, needing to hear more.

Neji met his eyes. “Serve under you?” he asked.

The question, and all it implied, lingered in the air between them before he answered.

“Yes, Shikamaru. Anytime.”

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“Am I interrupting?” a voice above them asked.

Neji and Shikamaru tore their gazes away from each other to find Shino standing in front of their table.

Shikamaru sat up from his slouching position in the chair. “Not at all”, he responded, gesturing with a casual wave of his hand. “Take a seat.”

The Nara was having mixed feelings about being interrupted. On one hand, he had become fond of Neji’s words of praise and wanted to hear more. On the other hand, the moment had quickly become awkward.

Shino sat down at the table, looking pointedly at both his table mates before focusing on their mission’s leader. “I want to thank you, Shikamaru”, he announced, dragging the shadow-master from his thoughts.

“For what?” Shikamaru asked.

“Years ago when Sasuke defected from our village, five of you deployed on a mission to bring him back. It was most unfortunate that I was not available to participate in that mission. I have felt some…regret over this.”

There was a short pause before Shino continued. “When Naruto and Sakura defied the Hokage’s order and struck out on their own to bring Kakashi back, I was happy to be called upon to participate in the mission to return them to the village and, perhaps, redeem myself for my previous failure.”

Whoa. Shikamaru had heard, but truly…he had no idea that Shino felt so strongly about not having been part of the mission to bring Sasuke back to the village all those years ago.

“It has been my honor to serve under you, Shikamaru.”

Shikamaru was stunned. He wanted reassurance, and was suddenly getting it in spades. “The honor to serve as your leader is mine, Shino. I appreciate your willingness to answer the call.”

Shino’s bugs were so agitated, their vibration could be felt on the table. Both Neji and Shikamaru watched Shino with raised brows as the vibration grew more intense with every second.

Slowly, the bug master turned his head to focus on the Byakugan wielder sitting to his right.

Neji returned his obvious stare. Five seconds later, the Hyuuga activated his Byakugan, sending the kikaichu into frenzy.

What the hell? Shikamaru thought, furrowing his brows.

He watched in silent confusion as the two men stared each other down. His eyes narrowed when he spotted the corner of Shino’s mouth twitch into a smirk.

“Am I missing something?” the Nara asked, looking back and forth between the two men. It had become awkward again, this time in a way that Shikamaru could not readily define.

Neji stood up first, slowly, followed by Shino. Both men turned to look at Shikamaru. “You’ll need to come with us now”, Shino responded cryptically.

“Where?” Shikamaru asked, looking at the two men. “Why?”

“You’ll see”, Neji answered calmly, his Byakugan still activated.

Shikamaru stood motionless as each man walked over to him and gently took hold of an arm. Then Shino raised his free hand to his chest, making a rapid series of hand signs, and teleported them away.

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A/N: Fan art is here: http://kyuubi1010.deviantart.com/art/SotD-NejiShinoShika-Update-164513195. Have a look, and while you're there, please leave a note for the artist!
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