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You are now cursed. You must send this on or you will be killed. Tonight at 12:00am, by Bloody Mary. This is no joke. So don't think you can quickly get out of it and delete it now because Bloody Mary will come to you if you do not send this on. She will slit your throat and your wrists and pull your eyeballs out with a fork. And then hang your dead corpse in your bedroom cupboard or put you under your bed. What's your parents going to do when they find you dead? Won't be funny then, will it? Don't think this is a fake and it's all put on to scare you because your wrong, so very wrong. Want to hear of some of the sad, sad people who lost their lives or have been seriously hurt by this email?

CASE ONE -
Annalise [Surname Removed] :She got this email. Rubbish she thought. She deleted it. And now, Annalise dead.

CASE TWO -
Louise [Surname Removed]: She sent this to only 4 people and when she woke up in the morning her wrists had deep lacerations on each. Luckily there was no pain felt, though she is scarred for life.

CASE THREE -
Thomas [Surname Removed]: He sent this to 5 people. Big mistake. The night Thomas was lying in his bed watching T.V. The clock shows '12:01am'. The T.V misteriously flickered off and Thomas's bedroom lamp flashed on and off several times. It went pitch black, Thomas looked to the left of him and there she was, Bloody Mary standing in white rags. Blood everywhere with a knife in her hand then disappeared. The biggest fright of Thomas's life.

Warning... NEVER look in a mirror and repeat -'Bloody Mary.Bloody Mary.' Bloody Mary... I KILLED YOUR SON' Is it the end for you tonight! YOU ARE NOW CURSED

We strongly advise you to send this email on. It is seriously NO JOKE. We don't want to see another life wasted. ITS YOUR CHOICE... WANNA DIE TONIGHT? If you send this email to...

NO PEOPLE - You're going to die.

1-5 PEOPLE - You're going to either get hurt or get the biggest fright of your life.

5-15 PEOPLE - You will bring your family bad luck and someone close to you will die.

15 -25 OR MORE PEOPLE - You are safe from Bloody Mary

Very nice!!!!

Hello Author,
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OMGoodness.....

hat was HOT and SEXY and you are my HERO!
Please add another chapter! Please! I loved it!

Wow... that's just beautiful.

Oh, god! That was absolutely beautiful! You really understood the characters! I literally felt like I was reading ~their~ thoughts and emotions! The transitions were not only smooth, but elegant in its deliverance! The 'Then' and 'Now' concept wasn't overdone but clever. I just absolutely loved it! Aside from one or two sentences that needed minor tweaking, I thought it was really well written! The only thing that could have made it better was turning this into a prologue and writing a chapter story with dialogue, so we can see their 'coming of age' unfold cinematically! (**hint hint**) ;p Seriously, though, great job!

oh, this story is wonderful. ::huggles:: I luff it! the emphasis on smell and scent and the sense of a pack (or the hive, in shino's case ^^;;), which, after all, is so important to both of them, makes the story absolutely beautiful. ^---^

hot. i liked it . good stuff this paring is hot

Aww. Sweet and dirty, just how I like it.

I especially liked your particular Inuzuka dog/Aburame bug analogies. How there were parallels, one side for each boy. It was a great read.

Plus, KibaShino is one of my most favorite and underappreciated pairings.~

Beautiful.