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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a great read! You did a wonderful job of explaining and using their respective oddities to make the pairing work, and it was *hot*, too. This is the first Shino lemon I've read; not because the idea squicks me so much as I'm afraid I'll be traumatized by what some random fangirl might do with his bugs during a lemon. ^_^; But you were on a rec list of someones whose fics I liked, so I figured you were safe.
Thanks for the fic!
Thanks for the fic!
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I believe I've read this before, but I forgot to review. This is a really cool fic. I really like how you write the boys. And you wrote a good uke!Kiba. XD I also liked all the references to Kiba's pack and Shino's kikachuu. Overall, this is an awesome fic. I'll have to go look at your other fics! ^.^
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have no idea how I missed this.
Wow, thank you. My favorite boys done so well by you! Just yea... *happy sigh* There needs to be more kibashino in the world, but only if it's good.
It takes talent to put Kiba on the bottom and not make him a whiny uke. Thanks!
Meagn
Wow, thank you. My favorite boys done so well by you! Just yea... *happy sigh* There needs to be more kibashino in the world, but only if it's good.
It takes talent to put Kiba on the bottom and not make him a whiny uke. Thanks!
Meagn
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August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story. Kiba's no doubt my favorite character. Great smut... ^_~ Nice new pairing... I'd love to see more like these along the way. You're a great writer. Keep it up!
~~Teh Chibi Ferret God
~~Teh Chibi Ferret God
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July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing story. I really enjoyed the before, then, and now parts and how you delved into the personality and minds of the characters and the way they were similar yet different at the same time. Great work!
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May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
cool little thing....unusual pairing, the first time i´ve seen it actually...
but i liked the way it´s written almost as if there was an invisible teller
and in the from they like to use in fairytails...at least it seemed so to me.
i also liked the idea of kiba being bottom ^_^
but it fits very well actually!
but i liked the way it´s written almost as if there was an invisible teller
and in the from they like to use in fairytails...at least it seemed so to me.
i also liked the idea of kiba being bottom ^_^
but it fits very well actually!
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April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, what a cool fic!^-^ i caught no unintentional mistakes and your way of detached writing it really cool bse wse we are like a spectator able to read the heart of both the characters. it's really way cool how you had shino and kiba as a couple because i haven't read much fanfiction with shino yet and i think he's an interesting character to talk about too. it 'd be really cool if you write more fiction with this pairing, great job pensha-san^_____^
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you know i love this but it doesn't hurt to say it again... XD love you, love this pairing, love your writinD alD
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi Pesha ^^
Yeah, I'm the first who read this *g* and I have to say: I really really like it ^_________^d
I never thought of Shino and Kiba being that similar - but your explanation does its best and so... well, dunno what to say it's just:
GREAT JOB!! ^^ and Keep on Writing b^_^d
Yeah, I'm the first who read this *g* and I have to say: I really really like it ^_________^d
I never thought of Shino and Kiba being that similar - but your explanation does its best and so... well, dunno what to say it's just:
GREAT JOB!! ^^ and Keep on Writing b^_^d
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY! A KIBA SHINO FIC! Love the couple! Love love love!!! Okay.... ^_^; Great story. It was well written story wise. Some of the grammar confused me, but it was still enjoyable. Thanks!