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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its so cool and you being a girl and writing this doesn't bother me i love you writing and your good at writing these things
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December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I want MORE!! MOREMOREMORE! Cause, I love reading about Jiraiya doing gay things. XD It is very hawt. Please write more?
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October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
First of all Ihave to tell u that this fiction shocked me, really shocked me.I'm Jiraiya u k u know?So I never have an idea about his behavior like in this fiction OMG how he become so pervert with his student,Naruto.But I like ur story so please update it soon .
Maybe u can mail 2 me . I'll glad 2 talk with u.
Maybe u can mail 2 me . I'll glad 2 talk with u.
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August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ew! Jiraiya really is a super pervert.
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Write more eheheh
Rikona is a super pervert too ^_^
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Write more eheheh
Rikona is a super pervert too ^_^
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June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I *so* love this fic!!!!!!!!!!! what a good idea!!!! I once dreamed of having sex with my step-dad. and it was hot steamy sex!!! I avoided him since then and still do. I get mad at him for apperantly no reasons..... but I always feel this anger well up inside me when I see that digusting little...... Anyway, I think I understand Naruto REALLY good ^.~. I don't know how you add story's to yr favourite's here so I will just check in some days k? please update soon!
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May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am Jiraiya-sama's biggest fan and i've been waiting for something just like this in a fan fic. Reallhavehave. You set us up well in the first chapter and I'm excited to read the next chapter.
cdk
cdk
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May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY SUPER PERVERT! MUST READ MORE!!!!
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May 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is going well, fast update too... can't wait until the juicy bits :P
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May 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naruto! That was rather disturbing for him. But he better get used to it, ne? :P Can't wait to see what he's going to do, when they're gonna get sleep! *snickers*
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May 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh... this is getting better and better. I'll be dropping my reviews here, coz I prefer reading
the non-censored edition ;) (Shinka: the Cho-Hentai?).
You actually have a really good writing style, narrative but still easy to read and not boring.
Oh, and I read the flame you got on ff.net. As we can deduce from the covers of our favorite
Ero-Sennin's books, the audience are strictly heterosexual men. Right. Who knows, maybe the
lady on the front page's really a transexual. Or just a guy who likes to dress in drag XD.
And yep, I checked, it's 'chou' [pron.: 'cho']. But I don't think it's worth changing the title or anything.
The idea of having more Jiraiya/Naruto fics around is (mouth-watering) appealing, so feed the
plot bunnies!
Shin--
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