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by choujinsan

person kataru
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmmph..... sasuke look like a stray dog having found meat on the road...... @_@
person kataru
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sasuke fell instantly into a GAY!!!!!! *hoorrrrrrro* XD
person blisblop
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It is a nice hot start.Your adjectives are unusual,I really find them beautiful.
person Demon
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wahhhh ='( i love your fic so you have to write more when you get home!!!
person silverlook
schedule November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
gr8 story^^ are you going to make more chapters 0.0?
(make them longer to :3 )
person Naruto's Pet
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This fanfiction is really good. you need to add more to every chapter if you can though. it'll make people enjoy it more. Oh one more thing I like how you put in this fiction Sasukes agressiveness towards wanting Naruto
person Naruto's Pet
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This fanfiction is really good. you need to add more to every chapter if you can though. it'll make people enjoy it more. Oh one more thing I like how you put in this fiction Sasukes agressiveness towards wanting Naruto
schedule October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that's actually a really kool story! I love it sao much! I hope this becomes a N-17 or Sasuke and Naruto get morew action at school! Or you can do both! I love fics that has secret love! Your story is kool with a k!(that's realy good) Update soon!\^o^/
person ebichu
schedule September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*melts into a small puddle* aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah so sweet!!!!!this fic is so cute and everything!
i'm so glad i'm reading it and most glad you wrote more!!!!!

you're doing a wonderful job!!! really waiting for the next chapter!!!!keep on writing! wanna read more emotional sasuke!

sakura, you're a biiiiiiiiiiiiiiitch!lolja!

aurelie
person itai
schedule September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hi, i started to read the story but there is too much japanese and it kills it at least in my opinion it would be nice if you either wrote in japanese or in english dont mix it so much e a e a little here or there but i think its too much.....