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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man ;_; That was well written, and made me cry XD I have never found any fics with Kotetsu or Izumo in them, so thank you for writing this ^_^ But damn, that was sickening, but good XD LOL Loved the blood thing too LOL Please write more!
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February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so, like, eh... you intend to finish this, right? A bit curious, what happens next. Also, I've recently taken a liking to Izumo and Kotetsu and this is the only story about them I've found so far.
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January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful beautiful. Excellent detail-if a little gruesome. As a cat lover, I dont exactly agree with the lesson, but meh the sensei was a fucked up individual. I would like to hear more about the lessons he gave them. Runs closely with some of the tourture that my Nocturna females enjoy.
Much look forward to writing with you and sharing notes. Ill get back to you with ideas on chapter 3
Asyen
Much look forward to writing with you and sharing notes. Ill get back to you with ideas on chapter 3
Asyen
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January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. You're a very talented writer.
Keep it up
Keep it up
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December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG...that was so good..but so EVIL!! i hate animal CRUELTY!! how could you ARASHI?? but i guess that's what makes a great writer...that was awesome...but so mean :( sniff sniff...tearjerker
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December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More please! Good choice of place to tell a story - it's certainly not horribly over done like so many other parts of the Naruto fandom. I can certainly see Orochimaru doing something like that to his students. If you are looking for another story after you finish this one (after much much more stuff obviouslu :) ) then I would be interested in seeing what you can think of for Orochimaru teaching Kabuto - given the more stealthy nature of that situation it would have to be very different (but still twisted of course) But anyway - this is great so far....
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November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome piece. I look forward to more of it. I myself have been working on an AnkoxOrochimaru project for quite some time, but I truly love this story. You captured the characters very well, and I can't wait for the next part!
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November 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm not really sure what to say about this story, other than the fact that I like it and I'm looking forward to the rest.
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November 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
man....that fanfic is great!!! the storyline is great!!! its got alot of description of the 'blood'!!!! its just the cat killing is quite 'evil'
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November 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. I like kittens though, but that doesn't change the fact of this story being really exciting to read. You have a good and describing language which makes your fanfic even better. Keep up the good work and remember to tell me when the next chapter is out ^^ ....