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for Unnamable, Untamable

by SaphireMMTPX

person Jomai
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wah, I love this! How will i know if you updated, I'm nw here so i got no idea at all!!
schedule March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was simply amazing. You keep surprising the reader and making them crave more. Well, being one of those who now checks for updates on a regular basis I have only positive things to say. This is very well written and you have successfully avoided many traps that authors tend to drop in. Keep up the good work and please update soon.
person Helena Lenore
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE update!I need it!Really,I neeeed it!I love this story so much its reduced me to begging!Im that obbsessed!Though I would love for a Kakashi point of view next!Well,please update soon!Im lovin it!
person Morning Dew
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yet here I am reading all of the older stories, and most of them have only one chapter... ~hint~ Good story so far
person silverfox
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was a very good start please continue and updat soon k cant wait to read how kakshi helps naruto out and how they became lovers

UNTIL THE NEXT TIME BYE BYE!!!
person TenshiKaitou
schedule February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
goodness, you can't just end it there. hurry up and update! this is pretty good a read!
person Anon
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooooooooooohhhhhhh
i like
i hope there's more coming soon
person hogo-chan
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! that was amazing! ^_^ please update super super fast! i love the way you write!
person Lone
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw, i love it! Please update soon, i cant wait!
person Yum
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's pretty sad!!!
Is Naruto's dream a synbol of his despair, his cherch for love that drive him so far that one day it would lead him to death?
Who's this Shi? Why is he here?
And Kakashi, if he loves Naruto, as you sugest in the story, why would he run away when Naruto had kiss him? It's not like he is timid and either way he always explain himself (he always do even if it's lame), I don't think he would let Naruto without an explication. But this is my point of view and anyway I love this story!!! It's very sweet!!!
so CONTINUE!!!!^^