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July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Story (although it kinda moved a little too fast). Good plot too. I think you should end it with the last chapter though, because there would be nothing left to continue the story with since every problem has been solved (or ended I should say). Problems: Neji and Sasuke- Neji rapes Sasuke and Sasuke runs to Naruto, Shikamaru and Naruto- They stay friends, and Sasuke and Naruto- oblivously in the end they get together.*end of resolution summary* Although it would be possible to continue this story, I would suggest you end it, leave it as is. Anywho, great story again!
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July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woaaaah..... XD XD XD sasuke's really fast. I doubt he hold that lust for long now..... XD XD XD sexxxxxy~
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The story had passion and kink that was done well but certain things seemed more ...sketchy,meybe the unevenness is wrting fan fics a bit at a time .It seemed to be written by different people.All in all however it had its own charm and voice,I would keep it to read again.I loved cruel Neji.Awesome.The first bits between Sasuke and Naruto were attractive.Thanks and more stories please.How about aNeji /Sasuke one wheree you take the moves you used here and expand on them???If not Ok,but you had a real tension going there.
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey all! It's lil ol' me again...sorry for not updating enough, but I am working on it so don't you worry ^^
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May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice story! Neji should rot in hell. SasaNaru forever!
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this fic looks like a mexican soap opera... and is tooooooooooooooooooooooo OOC........
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwww. omg its shoo sweet!!!!!!!!!. i think it'll b a really great ending if it ended there. but then u can have a sequel about a few yrs later or something like that. lol. i dont know. XP.hehe
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YEAH! they got together. pls do at least an epilogue. it was kinda strange twists and turns but it was a cute story.
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, so cute! I think you should keep going, there's too much unresolved with every one. But that's just my opnion
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep going of corse!!!
What the hell!
Stop!
NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
NEVER STOP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
heh whoopsy got a little load made mom yell at me. <_>
More please.
What the hell!
Stop!
NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
NEVER STOP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
heh whoopsy got a little load made mom yell at me. <_>
More please.