rate_review Reviews

the plot isn't bad but the dialogue is hard to read because it is not properly formatted. i do not intend to be hard on you but please make sure one character's words do not blend with anothers. It tends to get confusing if you do not end and begin new sentences when new characters are speaking.

ohhhhh NO!!!! no no nononononononononono!!! i read (naru X SASU!!! so i thought sasuke was uke....*pout's*...man ......i hate uke naruto and seme sasuke >.< i hate it!!!! sasuke is soooo uke! anyway *huff's and thumbs up* great fic i guess .....though i am dispointed T-T i thought sasuke was uke not stupid naruto wahhhh!!!!;---; i try to love this couple but i guess...i'll stick to itachi x sasuke XD no honestly nice fix keep it up n___n update soon yeah? maybe a little ...sasuke uke part ...ne ....ne please i'd really love that

Thank you

much Love ~
faith<3

Hi master! I love the story so far. Sasuke is such a dick. Poor Naruto. Sasuke doesn't deserve him, so give Naruto to me!

Naruto throwing up on Sasuke was classic. I coudn't stop laughing. Update again soon!

>kitty grin< mmmmmm... that is nice... so, when's the next chappie?

hey everyone (and hello slave! you knw who you are!) thank you for your comments and I promise to make the dialouge better!! >< sorries! ^^ hope you like the rest of the story! <3 soshi-chan

it's .... Sasuke ..... I'M GOING TO KICK YOUR SORRY ASS FOR THAT ONE !! HOW DARE YOU HURT NARUTO !!!

That is so sad, that Sasuke bastard how could he 'cheat' on Naruto like that. I hope you have another pairing for Naruto like Shikumaru or Gaara, Anyone but Sauske would be great

PLEASE OH PLEASE DONT LET IT BE A NEJIXSASU well anyway continue

Doing great, sexy lol

I love this story so write a lot more for it.
Usually people write dinky ass stories and leave it with like 5 chapters.
Ithink of you as a good writer and would like to see real story out of this.
Ever loyal fan
-Billy ^____________________________________________________~
Lov ya!!!!!!!!!!!