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for Gang Bang

by DreamBean

person blisblop
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I must admit to being utterly unable to come to terms with Sakura.She wants them to be good honest and true about their feelings and intentions towards her yet she is being payed to destroy them.Hy-po-crite!She is scum.
person Itachi\'s Wench NOT LOGGED IN
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG~ Awesome update I only waited forever for it. PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! MORE LEMONY GOODNESS TOO! You did good in my opinion!

~Love ya!

Itachi's Wench
person Zendura
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Story. I need more though, PLEASE!!!!
person shai
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sigh. Was just reading again, bored, praying for updates. So, I'm serious here. This story is like my obsession. I've reveiwed what like five times, three one after the other. You're on my recomended reading list, I just love this story! Man, I'm like a guy: lusting after this story and wailing, "Please put out!!"
person Caskas_Lyrik
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
**bows** Awesome Chapter...I didn't think your lemon scene was bad. I thought it was rather good...but you are right...practice makes perfect. Hope you update soon, can't wait for the next chapter! =D
person Chelsey
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAAAAAA!! This is so good! I can't wait for the next installment, I hope it takes less time. Update soon. BTW the sex scene was amazing! I loved it *fans heself* wish I had those two with me. I'd be in heaven!

-Chelsey- AKA:HisBeautiful
person empyreal
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you updated. Excellent as always. Love poor Sasuke's miscommuncation issues, and how cocky, yet cute, Naruto is. Look forward to more
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You updated!

I really, really like this fic. The character somehow seem very natural in this setting, which is wierd because I usually hate AUs. And the lemon scene was good, don't beat yourself up on it. Pairings with more that two people are quite difficult to write.

*heart*
person lainofthewired
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, nice addition. And finally. About the love scene, it seemed a bit rushed at the end, but otherwise good. Great stuff ^^
person Redsliver
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...Wow. I really, really, really like Sakura, Naruto and the other gang members that had so little of the spotlight. Something seemed off about Sasuke though... Ino as a non-rival is a little... unsettling is definitely the wrong word.
Keep it coming though there are far too few good het fics on this site and this is one of the best.