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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter **bows**
Awesome writing...Too bad there wasn't any Lemony Goodness in this chapter =*( But I know you will make it up in the next..YaY!
Hope your move goes well...and update soon =D
Awesome writing...Too bad there wasn't any Lemony Goodness in this chapter =*( But I know you will make it up in the next..YaY!
Hope your move goes well...and update soon =D
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May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter. =) I'm loving all the suspence in this story. The storyline is great, and the characterization is wonderful. But first: Where is the promised Lemon?! *looks pleadingly at DreamBean* Please update soon!!
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May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon update very very soon!
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May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
>_<
wow... this fic is simply amazing. not only is the plot interesting but your portrayal of *most* of the characters is excellent (it's just that Hinata... oh, well... though totally OC she rocks in this fic!). and i liked the scene involving sakura and kakashi... poor sakura, what is she getting herself into? well, it seems there are great things ahead for the young officer.... hopefully your get settled in soon enough for an update! i can't wait to see how their "talk" will turn out to be... nothing too cheesy, i hope XD
once again, great job!
wow... this fic is simply amazing. not only is the plot interesting but your portrayal of *most* of the characters is excellent (it's just that Hinata... oh, well... though totally OC she rocks in this fic!). and i liked the scene involving sakura and kakashi... poor sakura, what is she getting herself into? well, it seems there are great things ahead for the young officer.... hopefully your get settled in soon enough for an update! i can't wait to see how their "talk" will turn out to be... nothing too cheesy, i hope XD
once again, great job!
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May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is the first AU Naruto fic that I've liked. Well-written, great ideas, great characterizations. I particularly love how you portray Sasuke and Naruto - Sasuke with his conflicting emotions, Naruto with his light-hearted but deep nature. Look forward to more!
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was hyper-scared at trying this fic, but I'm glad I did *^o^* I really like it! I especially love the way you portray Naruto. Sasuke's a bit too OOC for my tastes, but that last scene with Naruto and Sakura... ::dies:: I've always been a huge NaruSaku fan anyway *laughs* I also like the way Sasuke and Naruto share a bed! Whether you slash them or not... that's just hot.
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is amazing! I have to admit, I have no idea what series this story is based on, but it's so well-written that I'm thoroughly engrossed! Your description is superb - I can picture every character and every scene really clearly. Oh, and you're such a tease! Look forward to the next chapter - good luck moving! :-)
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was skeptical when I read the summary for this fic, but I'm glad I gave it a chance. I love the relatiobship that the girls have with each other, and I must say I find myself being jealous of Sakura. I'm a little disappointed that this isn't COMPLETELy a threesome, w/ Naruto and Sasuke getting it on as well, but it's still a great fic. Can't wait for the lemons! As you can see, I'm a lil perverted. I loved the way you portrayed Kakashi too. God, I wish I could've been there kissing him! Yoiu made him sound so goddamn sexy!! The story is going great, and I can't wait to see how Sakura deals with the confict between her job and her emotions. Hopefully the updates will come sooner?
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love you so much for updating this. I also love this story. I'm so full of love ^_^
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wahhh can't wait to see what happens next!!! update soon!