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for Gang Bang

by DreamBean

person GBW
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jesus....for the love of God, if you stop this fic now, I will hunt you down and eat your insides. This fic is so damn good...good-God....
person Anon
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I usually don't like stories with sakura in them, but i'm finding myself already addicted to this story. Keep it up!
person rinrin
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yo! i love your story..ahhhh damnit dreambean..you make naruto and sasuke so fucked hot and drool worthy..please oh pretty please continue..
person Monkey Lady
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is a sweet story! I'm really enjoying it. Write more! Oh and by the way, the cliffie in chapter 3 was just diabolical. :)
person kivrin
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
~\(^.^)/~
yay!
person Tsuki Ame
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE, WHY HAVEN'T YOU UPDATED, I DEMAND AN UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *begs* I will crawl on me knees and kiss your feet, but you must update! I love this story, have fallen head over heels for it, finally, FINALLY, a nicely, well-done (so far) NARUTO GANG FIC, now WHY HAVEN'T YOU UPDATED?!?!?!?!!? you MUST update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I will pry one from you! pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease..... *sobs* I NEEDS an update, I NEED IT!!!! *will hold breath until she gets an update*
person ectweak2004
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow... this started out really good! I can't wait for the rest of it to come out. My only complaint is spelling, but I'm assuming that you don't have a Beta do you? I do Beta reads for another author on an IY fic she's doing, and if you want me to, I'll do it for yours too. ^ That's my email up there, contact me if you're taking the offer.

-Tweak
person kai
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
naruto and sasuke to the rescue!?! great update!! update soon!!!
person Vermaxen
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::sigh::

Team 7 threesome is one of my favorites, though I don't think I've seen it in more than a couple fics. . . I think they all deserve to be that close with one another. And the premise is pretty fun too.

Just delightful.
person Anvil
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's so weird how Hinata's so OOC and
so In Character... haha, cool.