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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hurry up and write the next chapter.
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What an amazing story. I love it.
I feel so much for these characters.
You're a great writer. I can't wait for
the next update. Thanks for the
great read. ^^
I feel so much for these characters.
You're a great writer. I can't wait for
the next update. Thanks for the
great read. ^^
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow..wat a story....need u to update this ASAP AND PLZ email me bout it...i wanna read it..damn ur good with those two guys..now ur makin me feel less selfish of puttin those two guys together instead of wishin sakura b wit on of them!! T__T
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
come on please update soon! i love this story. i want to see what happens to sakura in spiral. please update soon!
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As far as I can tell, I don't like AU much. But I love how you're writing this, no extreme character OOCness or extreme character randomness. Hinata might've been off at first, better now, no problem on it. The plot line doesn't give me a headache, not the same goes for most AUs. Well written and not aggravating to read, but do spell check sometimes, I can see some unintentinal grammatical errors.^^
Anyway, I hope to see more of this fic soon. *thumbs up* ^_^
Anyway, I hope to see more of this fic soon. *thumbs up* ^_^
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
http://img435.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gbsakura0zh.png
i love your story very muchly. here is a sakura fanart for it. hurrah for my favorite naruto OT3!! XD
i love your story very muchly. here is a sakura fanart for it. hurrah for my favorite naruto OT3!! XD
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaagh!!!! Tears of joy... Yesyesyes!!! Okasy anyway more more more!
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You updated again! I love this fic, in fact its the only AU I like, although you need a beta reader.
Specifically, I love the clothes you gave Naruto, a suit and orange sneakers is definitely his style. I really like how you write Hinata and how you defined the Hyuuga's in this fic.
Keep writing, this is excellent.
Specifically, I love the clothes you gave Naruto, a suit and orange sneakers is definitely his style. I really like how you write Hinata and how you defined the Hyuuga's in this fic.
Keep writing, this is excellent.
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh. goodness me. I read this whole thing in one night and I'm addicted. Please please PLEASE update whenever you get the chance. It's an AMAZING FIC and the suspense is really killing me.
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!!!! Simply Awesome! welcome back..it has been so long since you last updated..but since you are back brings a tear to my eye at what a great chapter you have created! Please update soon! I can't wait for the next chapter...hmmm hopefully something happens to Sakura next chapter..would like to see Naruto and Sasuke worked up ;)..until next time ........