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for It's Not Personal

by Majenta

person charmpit
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Priceless.
person Rosebud
schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I loved it!
person Mempy
schedule January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Still love this story. I was an anonymous poster from a few days ago. Just wanted to let you know that I look forward to the day you post more of your work.
person Mempy
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap! Ahhhh! This is the ONLY good, believable, totally realistic Naruto/Sasuke smutfic I've read tonight! I nearly orgasmed just reading it! Coolest. Fic. Ever. I love everything about it, so amazing. The description - 'the sweat still collected along the dip in his spine' - and the realistic axioms - 'everyone needed sex,' 'when boys fucked, it never lasted long.' I loved the sweating, the heavy-breathing, the.... fucking! God, I wanted that so bad! I love this fic! AAAAAH! :)

Ho-ly. Crap. You've gotta make the best rp partner. Just, GUH!

*runs off to see if you have more*
person Eye of Aurora (too lazy to signin)
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So hot! I love your fanfics. Raw and dangerous and completely sexy. I love your work...you write well and I like the way you keep everybody in character (as much as they can be ^^). I am not sure if the title of this fic or Kakashi's ponderings at the end at all relfect your person opinion on sex, but I completely agree. Love is extremely personal, but sex.

Not at all. I'm with you on that one 100% ^_^ Great job. Keep it up.
person The Yaoi Fairie
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great!!!
I like how you didn't make the boys have sex like experienced experts, the way some stories do. It read really well, and their actions... fit. I loved it.
Brilliant method of using "Sasuke" "Naruto" for headings to tell whos perspective it was from, because when I read the heading "Kakashi" I laughed harder than I have in a while.
person KuraResa
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like your fic. Eventhough you ended it I wonder if you would continue. It would be interesting to see what would happen next.
person Demon
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! that is all i can say is WOW!
person MeLaiya
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man that was seriously hot. Keep up the good work.
person Billy
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You should make more chapters.
You know Naruto wants a relation ship Sauke just wants a toy Kakashi wants every one happy.
Mabe it will take Kakashi to do a brutal sex/rape to knock the sence into Sasuke.
So that Sasuke knows just how much it hurts to feel alone and untrully cared for.
Naruto slowly forgives but is afraid of being hurt AGAIN.
Sasuke needing his lover calmly tries to get back the brocken trust when inside he's screaming fore help and a place to hide and cry.
Iruka glad with Sasuke's choice in finally loving Naruto but pissed at Kakashi for his deminstation of "used toys".
Kakashi feeling like a tutor sinc he to had to step down to urges to get his lover who was weaker scared and afraid "Iruka", just wants to help Sasuke but what kind of relationship between them does he need for a one- on one help traing.
What kind of traing is Kakashi's help how far is Sasuke going to go for love and when will Iruka try to help Naruto but is it realy help How will Naruto cope with love and hate torwards one person.
Loyal fan girl -Billy
Yes I am a girl I just love the name I use instead of my real one.
Every one calls me Billy even my teachers.
heh ^____________~