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April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome. I love how you make them fumbling, they're teenagers so naturally they wouldn't know exactly what they were doing. And Sasuke's dominance is awesome. I also like Kakashi's final thoughts. I'd enjoy seeing more of this sort, if not a sequal.
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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That ending...hahahaha....It threw me off a little but it was funny! Nice!
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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved this one shot. I especially liked the line at the end. I wish there was a sequel tho. Oh well. I liked your writing and I hope you write another Naruto fic.
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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* oooohh.. notti kakashi.. hehe love the ending. ^^ hmm i wonder if u're doing a 2nd part for naruto to continue? *winks* anyway nice job!
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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa. This was good. I'm looking forward to your future work.
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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thorough enjoyed this. Write more! :)
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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story was an alright PWP. =) if there was more of a story in it, that would be better. =D