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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice, why don't you continue?
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April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! Please update it soon!!!^_^
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April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hay not bad! it's an intersting idea!! the only gripe i have is the spelling errors, but otherwise it's pretty good! A unique pairing....and the nosebleed part....hahahaha! *makes me chuckle* d(^-^)b
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April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the story and the pairing. It's interesting, but the wrong use of English is extremely distracting. Why there should be no problems if you run this text through a spell check, it's the fact that you have "wood" when it looks like you mean "would", or "reeding" when it seems like it should be "reading", and more that prevents me from actually enjoying the fic itself.
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April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Y'know...that was a pretty intersting start, but PLEASE run it through spell-check or something....the grammar mistakes I can handle, the pselling was just...plain distracting. Or find an editor...it's a good story, just correct the spelling mistakes ~^-^~
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April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I meant "spelling", my keyboard was messed up =P